landi	Posted: Mar 3 2007, 11:09 PM
Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 516 Member No.: 328437 Joined: 10-August 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Another person had an idea for a story and I found a beginning and due to requests of running with the idea I present ABDUCTED It was a rare opportunity for the young girl to get a trip to visit the beauty of the countryside of France. She found herself lost in the marvel of the rolling hills and fresh scent of cut grass melding with the soft scarlet hues of the morning sky. Yet little did she know it was all an illusive plan as four pairs of eyes watched her meander along the dusty road. The station was far enough away that if they swooped over her now, no one would know.. not for days.. or longer if they swiped the automobile too. Yet they watched and waited.. determined to take her when things were too perfect, when all her defenses were abated. When she would be most vulnerable.. that made Ian grin broadly as his twisted mind imagined the many ways they would pervert the female by forcing her body to take what her mind couldn't perceive as moral.. warp her values and plunge her into depravity. They began to plan on the moment to steal the brunette, taking her shapely body and turning it into a place of corruption. Ian patted his pony affectionately as his mind showed vivid images of the beast cramming his huge cock into the girl's cunt, stretching it to painful screaming levels. It only took a quick flip of the thumb to set their idea into motion, then four horsemen strode down the hillside towards the unsuspecting victim. The girl, Susan was picking some of the wild aromatic flowers from the green field when the horses raced closer. She turned only seconds before a hand grabbed her waist hoisting her off the ground. Her vain attempts to keep the brute from hurting her brought only laughter as she was passed to Ian, who ripped away her shirt exposing the full swell of unrestrained breasts. His hands covered them and twisted the pink nipples cruelly as two of his companians retreived the car and drove it off towards the small farm an hour from everything. Susan was horrified that her body was being exposed but felt more humilated as her skin bristled with small goosebumps, beads of sweat dribbling along her neck and spine as Ian continued his exploration of her lush exterior. Henri rode closer to see the fine female qualties and laughed as Susan tried to hide her body from his peering eyes. Henri suggested that she have a pair of human cocks before arriving at the barn but Ian shook his head no. He had his plans and those took priority over the minor suggestions of his companions. Susan whimpered in his grip as the horse began to move faster towards the barn. Her ability to undersand what they were saying was nil but the way her capturor was holding her she knew that it was just a matter of time before they raped her, stealing her virginity and any hope of a good life. Henri received his orders to prepare a stall to wash Susan in and rode off ahead of them but Susan wasn't sure that she felt better about seeing him go or not. It was when Ian whispered in her ear in broken English that her blood began to run an icy chill. "I plan to let you breed, little one.. become a useful part of my farm.. we will wash you well after you take your piss." A snide laugh followed as he remarked about her urinating. He looked forward to watching Jacques f*** the tight cunt he held close to his body. "Please.. please just let me go.. I won't say anything I promise." Susan tried to appeal to his fear of arrest. Ian laughed again then ripped at her pants, slowly breaking the threads that held them together, making her nude by the time they reached the barn and plunged into her "new status" Clouds started to gather bringing a rainfall that made all four men smile as it would give ample troubles to a search for the girl. The rain would wash away any tracks and that was a greater plus. Ian rode into the barn just as the rain began to downpour. His grin told the others that their plans would go easily as the storm would cover any screaming Susan would do. Pierre and Rene opened the stall for Ian's steed as Susan was shoved off the saddle and landed with a thud on the hay strewn floor. Henri moved over to grab her arm receiving a sound slap which in turn gained her a hard whack to the face knocking her back to the floor. "WHORE!" Henri screamed wiping the scratches she left on his face. A spit went to her body and landed in her hair making her cry as she feared the worst was yet to come. "Throw water on the whore.. get her ready for breeding." Ian ordered. Susan screamed as two huge buckets of icy water landed on her bare skin. She was freezing now and had nowhere to escape to. The buckets dropped to the ground and the two other men approached her with straps of leather and rope.

funtime515	Posted: Mar 3 2007, 11:13 PM
Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 961 Member No.: 18795 Joined: 21-April 04 Rate Member: 109876543210	A great start I hope you can share more soon. Thanks

loverguy	Posted: Mar 4 2007, 01:05 AM
Supreme Being Group: Banned Posts: 5925 Member No.: 440604 Joined: 15-February 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Interesting story landi glad you decided to take it up. :D I hope that you carry it on. LG.

mattlobo	Posted: Mar 4 2007, 01:20 AM
Veteran Group: Members Posts: 1062 Member No.: 323189 Joined: 1-August 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	landi, sweet start. hope to see more. Thank you for taking the time to share it with us. M. Lobo B)

pag4885	Posted: Mar 4 2007, 11:38 AM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 147 Member No.: 389193 Joined: 2-December 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	What an interesting way to introduce the story. It is such a great cliff hanger! Thank you for posting.

Tiffany_80	Posted: Mar 5 2007, 03:17 AM
Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 725 Member No.: 340967 Joined: 3-September 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Thanks for the story.... LOVE it so far!!! looking forward to the rest

littlepet	Posted: Mar 5 2007, 03:32 AM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 134 Member No.: 302867 Joined: 24-June 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	A gerat start to what gone to be a great story. Hope to see maor to this story.

tazman99	Posted: Mar 5 2007, 04:37 PM
Supreme Being Group: Members Posts: 4454 Member No.: 267656 Joined: 19-April 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Please don't leave us hanging to long!!!!!!!!!! :devil2:

landi	Posted: Mar 6 2007, 03:21 AM
Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 516 Member No.: 328437 Joined: 10-August 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Ian turned and looked over his shoulder as the scent of urine and feces flooded the corner being swept in the small rush of water. His hands pulled the saddle from the steed as his companions started to tie Susan to some posts lifting her off the ground by a few inches. "Has she emptied herself?" Henri asked as he wound the leather strap about her arm bracing her to the post for her first equine f***. "Nope" Susan kept struglling as long as she could until both hands were tied tightly in place and her ankles slipped into a type of stirrup and cinched in tight She could feel a pair of hands rubbing something over her ass cheeks and at her cracks. She began to cry harder as she feared rape was soon to follow. her nostrils flaring and taking in the pungent stench of animals being housed in the closed building. "Perhaps Rene should open her hole, eh.. since he has those little hands." Peirre suggested. "Check her out.. make sure she is good and able to be breeding.. I want to see her belly drop from being full of horse's milk." Ian said in a voice that sounded cold and hateful. Rene chuckled as he started slopping creme over his hand and arm. Soon his hairy arm was coated in a yellow liquid that smelled like castor oil, a smell that made Susan choke and gag. Rene placed one hand on her hip as the other slowly worked at her cunt, opening her to the new life they would implant her into. Rene barely had three fingers in her when he felt the spongy barrier. "She's Virgin!" Ian turned and sneered a sinsister grin. "Is she now.. well that takes a whole new meaning.. bring my horse.. fix him up with creme.. He's about to break a brood mare." "Oh come on.. if she's virgin why not let us take it from her.. the animals can wait." Peirre had a whine in his voice as the prospect of taking a lass whose never experienced a cock.. his mind just bristled with images of the many ways to make her scream from his slab slamming into her unplowed passages. "Jacques has her first.. I said my piece.. stand off or else you'll be finding your horse clamming your ass." Ian's temper was thick and he wasn't into any tomfoolery by his cohorts. Rene went after the horse and used his excess to lube the horse's cock. It was a few moments before he brought the horse from it's stall and behind the bound woman. Jacques nostril's flared as the scent of a female was entering his sniffer. She had a strong sense of fear as well as the readiness of breeding surrounding her flanks. It was in the cold water, the essense of a mare, Susan was tainted with the mild aroma and the closeness of the horse made her more nervous activating the scent glands to expel the false breeze of heat

cohort	Posted: Mar 6 2007, 03:32 AM
S.O.B. Group: VIP Members Posts: 8196 Member No.: 165606 Joined: 25-September 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Tomfoolery? :unsure: Count me in! ;)

loverguy	Posted: Mar 6 2007, 04:58 AM
Supreme Being Group: Banned Posts: 5925 Member No.: 440604 Joined: 15-February 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Yeah me too. :rolleyes: An interesting addition landi. :D

funtime515	Posted: Mar 6 2007, 05:40 AM
Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 961 Member No.: 18795 Joined: 21-April 04 Rate Member: 109876543210	Wow how sensual, and so well written and filled with mystery, suspense and compelling one to keep reading to see what is going to happen. A 10 from me

dragoneyes	Posted: Mar 6 2007, 03:59 PM
Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 785 Member No.: 278930 Joined: 9-May 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Very good story line. It has great possibilities. I hope you continue to fulfill them. Thank You.

kira19	Posted: Mar 6 2007, 06:19 PM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 215 Member No.: 448456 Joined: 26-February 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	wonderufl story please keep it up. thank you for writing it

thedogsbytch	Posted: Mar 9 2007, 09:37 AM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 349 Member No.: 392486 Joined: 8-December 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Wooo gads!!! Please keep writing it!!!!! 10!!!!