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| happyshazzie |
Posted: Feb 17 2007, 03:57 PM
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I hope you enjoy my story. It is my first attempt at writing here, so please be kind. let me know if you enjoy it. I am also open to suggestions on ways to make it better. I loved writing it and hope it makes you as horny reading as I felt writing it.
shazzie She shook her hair free of the rain that had been falling so hard and stepped into the light and warmth of the pet shop, grateful that she had made it in time. The man behind the counter was busy completing a transaction for an older lady who kept adding to the order for her new puppy. The way she kept spying and buying for the wriggling ball of fluff under her arm, it was bound to be one of the most spoiled dogs in the already wealthy suburb of particulary spoilt dogs. He glanced up at her and smiled, signaling he would be with her as soon as he could. Suzie took the opportunity to wander around the shop, surreptitously checking out the shop owner.He was a shortish man, yet powerfully built, with a braod chest and smiling sensual mouth. She poked her fingers into the puppy cage and smiled as they pounced on her fingers, chewing and growling. She bent her face and inhaled the delicious scent of puppy breath. She laughed as they tumbled over one another and collapsed in a heap. She could feel Tony, the shop owner watching her. They had been flirting for a few weeks, nothing terribly serious, but a pleasant play between consenting adults. She walked past him and bent low to look at something, giving him a full view of her very firm big breasts. Knowing he was looking made her nipples harden and if she squeezed her thighs a little she could feel her clit a little firmer than before. She smiled as she looked up and watched Tony shift a little uncomfortably and turned his attention back to the older woman. Suzie knew it was getting very close to closing time and wondered what she would do for dinner after she had made her purchases and was heading for home. She wandered further back into the store and Tony's large german shepherd padded from his basket and sniffed at her , all the while wagging his large hairy tail. She laughed as his tail swept three jars of fish food and a hamster wheelclattering onto the floor. The bell over the door jangled and she looked up to see the older lady leaving and a big heavy set, yet attractive, woman enter. Tony greeted her with a kiss on her cheek and she watched as his hand reached into the small of her back. Suzie sensed familiarity between them and felt a little disappointed that she probably would not get to continue her flirtation. She wandered back towards the counter and smiled as Tony introduced her to Julia. Suzie smiled and put her dry food onto the bench and added a dried chew bone. Julia began talking to Suzie as Tony rang up her products. Julia commented on Suzie's fantastic boots and then told her how great she looked in the red low cut top. She said how well red suited her and suzie took the compliment with good grace and made idle chatter. Tony asked for $12.95 and tendered her change. He asked her what she had planned for the evening and suzie replied that she was going to go back out into the rain, grab a takeaway and head for home. Julia said that it was far to wet a night to dash back out again and urged her to stay for a drink with them. Suzie still felt the longings of lust and wondered where this was going to lead. She agreed and watched as Tony switched the closed sign on and locked the door. The main lights were turned off in the store and just the security lighting stayed on. Tony put his hand into the small of suzie's back this time and manouvered her down to the back of the store and beyond into a small area that held a table and a couple of old chairs. Julia was pouring red wine into three small jam jar type glasses, nothing fancy here. She handed out the wine and they all three clinked glasses. The conversation turned to idle chatter of the days events and suzie was beginning to think it was time for her to make a gracious exit when Julie reached over and kissed her full on the mouth. Suzie was a little taken aback but relaxed and then returned the kiss with a mixture of curoisity and extreme arousal. She could feel Tony's hand reaching into the front of Julias shirt. She pulled back to watch and then Tony kissed her and whispered for her to stay. He reached behind her and ran his fingers down along her spine. Her nipples immediately hardened as she wathced Julia stepped out of her skirt and stood in her panties and unbuttoned shirt. Her large breasts matched the rest of her ample body and she stood much taller than Suzie. Suzie watched, fascinated as she pulled her shirt from her shoulders and Tony unclasped her bra and let her breasts fall free. Suzie gasped with lust and crossed her arms and her tops hem and lifted her hands to remove her own red top. She unzipped her skirt and let it fall to the floor, a black puddle at her feet. She stood then in her red lace bra, red lacy g-string and her knee high black boots. Her stay up black stockings completed the erotic picture and Tony gave an audible moan. He began ripping at his own clothes as he watched as Julia and Suzie kissed again. Suzie felt Julias bare skin against her own this time and marvelled at how different a woman felt compared to a man. Tony came up behind her, his chest against her back, and his swollen cock pressing against her firm ass cheeks. Suzie moaned and tentaivley lifted her hand to Julias breast. She had never been with a woman before, discounting the fumbling attempts of her teenage years with a high school friend. She lifted her heavy breast, noting even while aroused that her own breats were bigger and firmer. She bent her mouth and engulfed Julia's nipple, licking and sucking, all the while rolling the other nipple between her finger and thumb. She ached to be touched and licked and sucked herself. Suzie wondered what had ahppened as she felt Tony pull away from her. She turned and saw him beckon them both up the stairs to the two rooms above the shop. The stairs were littered with parphnalia relating to the pet stoor and it made for a slow journey, picking their way through spare dog food tins and other goods. When they all arrived in the main room upstairs Tony took Suzie into his arms and kissed her hard. She responded willingly, feeling his hard body against her. She then felt Julia's soft one cover hers from behind. Suzie could smell the arousal of the woman, recognizing the smell and wondering if it was her own as well that she could smell. Tony's cock was dripping precumm and he gasped as Suzie bent her head to lick its tip. She was about to suck his cock deep into her mouth when she saw Julias mouth descending with hers. They mingled mouths and cock and Suzie sucked Tonys balls into her mouth while Julia licked his swollen shiny purple knob. Julia lay back down on the carpet and Tony fell onto her and immediately plunged his finger into her ass. Suzie watched, mesmerized, and looked with longing at Julias open wet cunt. She bent her head and fingered her gaping hole, marevelling at the wetness and warmth of her, so achingly familiar yet different. Suzies own pussy was dripping and hot. Suzie bent and tasted Julia and felt her shudder in approval. This urged Suzie to do more and she stared to suck and lick at the woman. Tony was still plunging his fingers into her butt hole and he wathced with lust in his eyes. Suzie was aching to be touced as she felt, saw and heard Julia's first orgasm. She bucked against Suzies mouth and Tony pulled his finger from her and moved behing Suzie. He held her hips and Suzie felt the warmth of his tongue lapping at ther. She moaned her approval and closed her eyes to the sensations and was momentarliy confused when she opened her eys to see Julia sucking tony's cock, his head burried in her cunt and the feeling of licking still exciting her. She had no clue and turned to see the german shepherd nuzzling and grunting at her. She was immediately more turned on than she had ever been and pulled her panties even further to one side. She watched Tony watching her, his face covered in Julia's juices. Suzie sat and removed her panties, and unhoooked her bra, wanting and needing so much now. Tony was fucking Julia from behind, watching as Suzie spread her legs and beckoned for the large shaggy powerful dog to come closer. he picked up her scent again and started licking her. Suzie spread her legs wide and moaned, madly fingering her own cunt as the dogs tongue licked her puckered arse, and probed into her wet hole. She felt the first orgasm bulding in her belly and cried in release as the wave of ectasy engulfed her. Tony moved from Julia nd bent Suzie over on all fours. He entered her from behind and Suzie then looked to see Julias ample form sliding under her to lick at her. She could feel her cunt slippery with cum responding and building again. Julia's cunt lay before her and Suzie slipped her fingers inside her. She probed with two and then three and finally four fingers. Her red nails slipped in and out of Julia. Julia could atke no more and lay back and begged Tony to take her. Tony moved from Suzie and positioned himself missionary above julia dn began to f*** her. Suzie pasued, still on all fours watching, catching her breath and watching Tony's arse bobbing up and down in time to meet Julia's thrusts. Suzie could feel movement behind her and could feel the dogs hot breath against her and hoped he would resume his licking. She moved her round ass a little and called to the dog soft words of encouragement. The dog took his cue and yet did not lick her but sprung onto her back, his long tongue lolling from his mouth near suzies shoulder, his forepaws gripping her hips, pulling her back towards his cock. Suzie looked down and back and gasped shen she saw the swollen purple cock, already shooting cum as the dog humped. Momentary fear was replaced by absolute carnal pleasure as the dog filled her. She felt such pure pleasure as he thrust inside her fast. The feeling of his long hair on her heightened her sensual awareness and she began to cum. The orgasms racked her body and wave after wave of pleasure overtook her. She watched Tony fucking Julia and felt the dog's cock filling her. She could feel him trying to push his knot into her and she moved, not sure she could accomodate him. He gripped her harder and pushed, his claws digging into her. She spasmed again with his brute force and was relieved when Tony pulled out of Julia and disturbed the dog from his mission. The dog growled at Tony but reluctantly dimounted Suzie. She felt a gush of watery cum dripping from her pussy and went to move only to find Tony slavsihly licking and sucking at her, draing the dog cum from her dripping cunt. She watched fascinated as her kissed Juila with a mouth full and she greedily accpeted his offerings. Suzie felt a new wave of cum wash over her and shuddered and felt her legs buckling beneath her. Julia pushed her tits into her mouth and encouraged her to suck her swollen nipples. Julia then pulled her to her and kissed her, a deep and longing kiss. Tony came to them then and put his cock to their mouths. he stroked his length as Suzie and Julia licked and mouthed him. He came in a shuddering grunt, and coated their faces in thick white ropes of cum. The dog came to them then and licked at their mouths, greedliy wanting his masters cum. Suzies tongue snaked out and joined the dogs in a final frech kiss. Tony put his hands in her hair and pulled her to him and he whispered thankyou. Julia leaned in and kissed her then too. Telling her that was the sexiest thing she had ever encountered. She had never been with the dog or known that Tony had trained him, but said she was now eager to try. Tony kissed Suzie again and told her how sexy she was. He then retrieved the glasses and they drank a small toast then to a wonderful rainy night in. |
| Anotherusersgirl |
Posted: Feb 17 2007, 04:16 PM
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Dear HappyShazzie,
That was wonderful. The surprises felt so real and erotic! You write beautifully, very enticing ... :heart: Thank You, AUG |
| Pantharas |
Posted: Feb 17 2007, 05:01 PM
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HappyShazzie, you may say this is your first attempt, but it sure didn't feel that way to me. What a delightful way to spend a rainy evening and its a very arousing read. Thank you for sharing and I hope you will write more for all of us to enjoy in the future.
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| spooledout2 |
Posted: Feb 17 2007, 05:13 PM
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:beer: great one thanks
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| happyshazzie |
Posted: Feb 17 2007, 11:19 PM
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with many thanks
AUG, Pantharas and spooledout I feel glad that you read and enjoyed. Your compliments made me smile. Thankyou. shaz |
| robroy |
Posted: Feb 17 2007, 11:58 PM
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Very Very nice story, thanks, :beer: :whistling: :inlove:
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| MNHUNTERJEFF |
Posted: Feb 18 2007, 05:53 AM
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:What a great story Thank you so much it was writen great and it make me want to go right out to the pet shop to see what might just be around the shop Jeff
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| happyshazzie |
Posted: Feb 18 2007, 12:42 PM
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thankyou jeff and robroy. Your kind words inspire me to write again. :)
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| biggirlsandbigdogs |
Posted: Feb 18 2007, 08:26 PM
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great story....keep up the good work there :nice ass:
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| neil110867 |
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thx
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| pannikin |
Posted: Feb 19 2007, 12:42 AM
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I enjoy a Good story and that was one well done 10
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| lab girl 83 |
Posted: Feb 19 2007, 01:26 AM
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That was so hot! Wonderfully written and gloriously easy to read... thank you so much for sharing it..i loved every word of it! If the wet spot in my chair is anything to go by....it thrilled me to the core!! :heart: |
| BeastMaster999 |
Posted: Feb 19 2007, 03:27 AM
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Damn hot. I hope you will have it happening to you again...and again...and again..Thanks!
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| mattlobo |
Posted: Feb 19 2007, 02:32 PM
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Shaz, great story; for your first one it it well written. Thank you for taking the time and effort to share. As to critiquing the story or its layout, the only thing that I can say is that I like to see spaces betweem the paragraphs. Hope to see more of your work and imagination. Gday mate; I would love to see Australia some day.
M. Lobo B) |
| knottyandNICE |
Posted: Feb 19 2007, 03:11 PM
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Wonderful Shazzie, simply wonderful. Please do continue.
Each time I'm in a pet store I look at the people and wonder. Not only the employees but also the customers. Do you think they may be......................you know? :blush: |
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