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| Sverie |
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 29 Member No.: 356188 Joined: 2-October 06
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plot prelude:
Susan, a secretary for a rich new york entrapeneur was hired by her boss to investigate and find the perfect gift for a newly hired ambitious executive who just sealed a multi billion dollar merger. the wife of this mr derrick hutching had found young susan snooping around her husbands affairs.. at the country club.. she spotted him during a dinner date.. and she even saw her snooping around the grounds of their private mansion. Mrs hutchings was a bit of a paranoid person with a mean and vindictive side. she doesn't like to be played the fool and she likes to keep what's hers. susan, a somewhat naive yet humble, sweet, loyal and dedicated worker was just trying to do her just with exceptional thoroughness, understanding that her boss, the essentric Kent Bradshaw would want explicit and personal details of the utmost intimacy. poor unsuspecting susan was not prepared for the expected the vanguard of theresa hutchings's jealous nature. Susan had dropped by the hutching's country estate early in the afternoon, having been admitted through the gate by the doorman whom had received word of her arrival. Such business was not questioned due to it being a direct request from the office of Mr Bradshaw himself. The grounds were relatively unoccupied, Mr and Mrs hutching were only recently married with no kids and they lived a lone with minimal servants. This allowed for Susan to investigate some of the intimate surroundings relatively unnoticed. currently she was perusing the content of a small enclosed greenhouse that was connected to the main building. Epimediums. It seems Mr hutchings was an avid collecter of these rare asian hybrid pereniels. gentians. this was perhaps something of interest and susan took note of all she saw. That was not the only person taking note of surrounding. It seems the Mrs had noticed her sniffing around, pawing here and there. It seemed apparent that this young lady was intruding upon her private home. "well excuse me. what exactly are you doing here" susan startled and a bit off guard replied with a somewhat off balanced reply. "nothing.. um. eh.. I was here to drop off a report for you husband. It's very important that he get's it." "report? didn't i see you at mavericks last thruday? and weren't you also at the club earlier that day?.." "club.. oh well yes.. i was tending on some business matters for mr bradshaw. yeah i think i did see you there." "buisness matters? oh really? well what kind of buisness matters would those be?" "well, honestly, it's confidential." "confidential?" "yes" "..and at maverick's when you enquired with the chief on what my husband and his wife had ordered.. this was confidential too?" susan feeling a bit defeated was somewhat up against a wall at this point.. dissapointed in her uncandid investigations she replied.. "i'm sorry be intruding.. but if i can just drop off these documents.. i'll be on my way." "oh yes.. the documents.. why you came here.." susan gleaned a pleasant smile.. and exposed the folder she had in her carry all for which she did have a reason to be there. "of course" theresa replied. "it's of the utmost importance and we couldn't trust this information to go over the wire." susan indicated. "right" "well here you are.. if you can please make sure your husband recieves these.. i'll be on my way." "you're not in a hurry are you?" "oh yes.. busy busy. as you know.. we're preparing for the bristex merger and we've a lot of running around to do.." "i bet you do.." "yes. well nice to meet you.. it's theresa right?" "yes.. and it's nice to meet you.. ." "susan, susan weirding" to be cotinued. :mellow: :mellow: |
| Fenray |
Posted: Jan 22 2007, 10:16 AM
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Hardcore Group: Banned Posts: 457 Member No.: 415346 Joined: 9-January 07
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Why did you stop? I hate that. You got a good story and flow going then you quit. Why must you make us wait? Good so far! Keep it up :beer:
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| Fenray |
Posted: Jan 22 2007, 10:16 AM
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Hardcore Group: Banned Posts: 457 Member No.: 415346 Joined: 9-January 07
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Why did you stop? I hate that. You got a good story and flow going then you quit. Why must you make us wait? Good so far! Keep it up :beer:
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