This is gone to be my frist attemt at writing a story. If anybody would like to prof read please do .


The story start with me and my boyfriend having a fight an we break up then as I go back to my flat I Ifind all my thing on the street an paper on the door tell me I have to vecate the flat for nonpsyment of my rent that was 4day ago .

Siting on the corner feel so depress this car stop in front of me a man get out an walk up to me , an say young lady you need help? I
look up and say yes ihavenot eaten any in four days could you pleas give me some money so ican get someto eat. I will do better then i buyyou dinner . think to my self what does he want by istill say yes iwould like that. As we eat we talk . Think to my self ireall feel safe with this man
As we talk he ask me if I like to come to work for him at his home. with out thinking Isay yes .As we drive to his home he take my chine looking me in my eyes he say I see a submissive side in you.Looking suprise I say you do.? yes my dear i do. he ask me would you like to help me in an something itrying to do.
if you do you will very well taken care of for the reat of you life . looking in his deep blue eyes isay yes whst will me be doing iwould like to train you to be my pet
i say like adoggie girl.
Yes he say . an I will care for you every need in life not having any were to go I say yes with that he pull out this collor an place it around my neck. Then he tell get in the back an sit there like a good doggie but frist take off all your clothes mydear as ido as he say
s we come to astop at his home he get out an open the back door , placeing a leash on my collor he say come angel I try to start to walk he no on allfour i dorp as i'm lead into the house


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Thank you Littlepet,
It's a very good start to what seems to be a very erotic story. I can't wait to read more. Will you continue please?

I might be able to help with the translation probs. Let me know.
Rose

Thank you both. iI ust hope i can do a better job ofof tell my story. An Rose
thank you for the help. I just hope i'm not imposeing on you

This is a reposThis is gone to be my frist attemt at writing a story. If anybody would like to prof read please do .


This story begins with me and my boyfriend and I having a fight an we break up. Then as I go back to my flat I Ifind all my thing on the street and a note on the door telling me I have been evicted from the flat for nonpayment of my rent that was 4 day ago .

Sitting on the corner, I feel so depressed. I don't know what to do. A car stops in front of me a man get out an walk up to me , and says young lady you need help? I look up and say "Yes. I ihavenot eaten anything in four days could you please give me some money so I can get something to eat?" " I will do better then buyyou dinner ".I think to my self what does he want but I still say yes I would like that. As we eat we talk . I think to my self I really feel safe with this man
As we talk he asks me if I would like to come to work for him at his home. with out thinking, I say yes .As we drive to his home he takes my chin looking me in my eyes he says "I see a submissive side in you." Looking suprised I say "You do.?' "Yyes my dear i do.' he asked me would you like to help me in an something I am trying to do.
if you do you well, you will be very well taken care of for the reat of your life. Looking in his deep blue eyes I say "yes what will I be doing?" "I would like to train you to be my pet."
I say like adoggie girl?
Yes he said . and I will care for you every need in life not having any were to go I say yes with that he pull out this collar and placed it around my neck. Then he said get in the back an sit there like a good doggie but frist take off all your clothes my dear> as I do as he says we come to a stop at his home he gets out and opens the back door , placeing a leash on my collor and says come angel I try to start to walk but he says "No! on all fours. i dorp as i'm lead into the house
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This is a start to what could be a very interesting story. I guess the errors show it comes from someone that is real. Please keep it up. I think it is great that others are willing to help with the grammatical errors. You keep the story coming. Thanks I give you a ten

Sorry it taken me so long for the next part but I hope to have it finish by the weekend
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IT been three months how that I have except my new role in life. I how live in the kennel with all my Master other dog now. My training has complete rewire my mind that I now act and think like a female dog. He has give me female dog hormones that keep me in heat all the time. He has told that I have become the best breeder in his kennel. Did not know that my life would take this turn when he took me off the street after I was kick out of my apartment three months ago.
He has told me that I’m to be sold to an middle east man to be use as his pet an breeder an to entertained his friends and business man he see form time to time. He told me I brought a tide sum of One million dollar.