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Well for some reason some of you liked my first story ^_^ , here's my next one as you will which has a sci fi theme(because I'm a fan). If it's to long sorry to the mods but if I post it as a file I'm not sure everyone out there has word. Again let me know my mistakes. I'm a big boy and can take criticism and last thanks goes to alicealice who introduced me to paragraphs ;). Hope you enjoy.
Adam and Eva Eva Fuentes was reflecting that she had been at this top-secret research facility in the desert for six months now as she stared at the almost demure creature before her. It wasn’t even a year since she accomplished her degree in behavioral science that Dr. Burk offered her this position in a groundbreaking research project. Dr. Burk is a world-renowned geneticist who introduced her to Adam shortly after she arrived here from Texas. At first she was in awe that Adam even existed. Never in her wildest dreams had she thought it possible that a human canine hybrid could be created much less one so intelligent but capable of communication only through sign language. Eva looked at Adam before her and couldn’t help but stare at his well toned body with short white and brown hairs covering his body, she looked up towards his face as her center of thought returned to her and she looked onto his grey-blue eyes. Adams facial structure weren’t unpleasant as she started at him and observed how his ears weren’t very canine at all being that they were rounded off, though his nose did look more canine but not protruding as much from the face. Adam motioned his hands to her and said, “ Is there something wrong?” at which Eva responded, “ No, I’m sorry I was just thinking of other matters”. “Why don’t’ we stop here for today” Eva signed to him. “Ok” Adam signed back. Eva got up and walked out of the lab and headed for her quarters passing by one of the other labs where she observed two scientists walking out. “ Well it’s stable for now but we need to run more tests to see what could have caused it become so unbalanced.” the taller of the two said. “ Absolutely, if an explosion where to occur it would destroy the whole facility and everyone around It.” the other commented and turned around to see her walking behind them. “ Well hello Ms. Fuentes” he said. “And how is Fido today?” he smirked. “ Adam is doing very well thank you for asking, and in all actuality he could probably teach you a thing or two.” Eva said and turned down another hallway and over heard one of the two say, “ I’m sure he could show me how to clean my own genitals with my tongue.” and heard them laughing down the hallway. Eva’s face burned at the comment she heard. Ever since she got here Adam and her have been the butt of jokes from members of projects. Dr. Burk assured her on more then one occasion that her work with Adam was essential with the project’s success and to ignore any comments made towards their project, but still she couldn’t help feel anger towards them and their idiotic comments. After having a small dinner and watching some television Eva decided to shower before bed. The steam hitting her body was so relieving as she lathered her breasts. Eva felt a little tingle between her legs as her fingers rubbed over her nipples. Dedicating all her time to finish college didn’t make Eva very social and times when she had sexual urges she started to regret that decision. She knew she wasn’t repulsive because she was asked out on several occasions and was once told by a girl friend she overheard some guys say she had an awesome J Lo booty going on, which she thought was immature but took as a compliment. Eva was comfortable with her body even though she was rather short at five foot one and perhaps a little on the pudgy side. Her long hair was black with a hint of brown and she had a light mocha tint skin color, which was common of people of Hispanic ethnicity. Her breasts are c-cups and her areolas are rather large comparable to a half dollar with nipples proportionate to them. As she finished drying off she went to her bed and got comfortable under the comforter and snuggled into it. Eva always slept nude because she loved the feeling the sheets had on her body and on more then one occasion found her self awaked in the middle of the night wanting to masturbate. While she lacked a social life her sexual appetite was always quenched by her little collection of toys. As she started to doze off she started to dream that she was in a beautiful grass field and as she walked along a dirt road she noticed a hill with a giant lush tree and someone standing under it. As she got to the top of the hill she found she was alone when she felt two hands reach around from behind her and cup her breasts and though she was surprised she felt safe and let the hands pull down her strapless dress and feel her breasts and then gently play with her nipples. Eva wasn’t in a deep sleep yet but in the back of her mind she knew must be really aroused because the dream she was having right now felt so real. Eva then felt hot breath on the back of her neck and what felt like a tongue lick the back of her right ear. It felt so good to her and then she felt like she was being kissed on the back of her neck all the while one hand still playing with one of her breasts and the other hand move down and started to rub her clitoris and play with the folds of her labia. Eva was suddenly awakened and heard a faceless voice yelling at her.” Wake up! You need to go to the emergency shelter now!” the voice said. This was loud and clear and Eva leapt out of bed and looked around and still saw no one. “ Go now! Before it’s to late” she heard again. Whether out of sheer terror or panic Eva ran for the door with all the strength her body could muster. She started to leave when she remembered she was nude and grabbed the first thing she near which was her white lab coat. After she put it on she opened and the door with trembling hands and ran for the stairs to towards the closest emergency shelter. Right as she reached the for the steel door handle she heard a deafening explosion and felt the ground shake below her feet. She pulled at the handle without realizing the door was already ajar and flew inside. As she entered she noticed a shadow in the corner and started to ask for help as she turned pulling the iron door closed, but the sudden force of the explosion, which had arrived, shoved the door close and pushed Eva back into the arms of the only other survivor. She remembered falling back onto someone and then feeling a whack on the side of her head as she fell and then all went black. Eva awoke lying down on a bunk with an ice pack on her head. She touched the ice pack putting pressure on a nice size little lump towards the back of her head and causing her to give out an “Ouch!” As she tried to sit up and was stopped gently on the shoulder “ Don’t get up yet, you took a nice hit to the head when you fell back on the floor. I was behind you when the force of the explosion pushed you back into me but was unable to catch you before you hit the floor. “That explains my headache.” Eva groaned as she lay her head back down. “Well thanks for trying to catch me. I think we would be goners if we weren’t warned over the PA system. I hope everyone else made it to an emergency shelter.” “ There is no PA system Eva.” the voice replied,” I warned you”. Despite the pain Eva got up and looked into the eyes of her savior, Adam. “ Do you need a pain reliever? We have some in the first aid kit,” he said and then all went black for the second time that night for Eva. Eva awoke looking up into Adams eyes as her head rested in his lap. “How long have you been able to talk?” she asked. “When I was young, but I choose not to let anyone know among a few other things I can do.” “I know a few tricks like telepathy, reading your thoughts, and rubbing my tummy while patting my head.” Eva looked at him like a deer caught in headlights. “ It’s a joke. Relax. “. “Oh” was all that came out of Eva. “ I’m also empathic and could sense your tension.” “So let’s talk I’m sure you have a ton of questions and I’ve got a lot of years of talking to catch up on.” Over the next several hours Eva learned that Adam was of a genius mind and capable of incredible abilities unknown to anyone until now. “ I was able to sense the fear coming out of one of the labs and when I heard their thoughts and knew what was going to happen I alerted you.” “But why did you save me and not anyone else?” Eva asked. “Well, I made a moral decision. You have always been kind to me and never looked down on me. I’m sorry the scientists that where down here were killed but they were not good people. They were greedy and hungry for power and the weapons they were creating would have devastation on the world.” And then Adam was silent for a while. “ I don’t sense that in you and if my understanding of feelings is correct I love you.” Eva could only stare in silence, which broke when she said “ That was you in my dreams wasn’t it?” “ Yes, another one of my talents is to go into your subconscious when you are asleep.” Adam muttered. “ I have been able to sense your sexuality towards me for a while now. At first I was curious about sexuality in general, but soon I came to know you and what a good person you are. I’m sorry if you are offended by my deception. I felt I couldn’t afford to have my secret revealed.” At first Eva turned red with anger but when she looked at Adam and into his sad and lonely eyes the anger left her. Eva moved forward to comfort Adam with a hug and which he flinched with uncertainly but looked into Eva’s eyes and allowed her to embrace him. It was a few minutes later when she moved away and they talked again for several hours at which she found out help was on the way but would take days. Soon she fell asleep and awoke next to Adam. Eva got up on her elbow and looked at him in his deep slumber. Her anger earlier towards him was because of her embarrassment towards her lust for Adam was out in the open. He whimpered in his sleep and her hand automatically went towards him for comfort and it rested on his chest. As his breathing calmed he continued to sleep and she lowered her head on his chest started to outline the toned muscles with her finger. She thought about his canine appearance and his thin coat of hair covering him and his face. The way he stood almost fully erect was not quite human but his facial expression and thin lips gave him humanity. As she looked over him she noticed something else erect. A pair of military boxers was all he ever wore and his bulging member was starting to protrude. She stared at the bulge and as if watching someone else’s hand her fingers roamed down his stomach towards his waist ban. Her eyes looked at his face and when he remained asleep her attention returned to her fingers at the edge of his waistband. Slowly her fingers slid under the waistband and raised it up and then down. The boxers were loose and didn’t cause him to stir when she lowered them over his genitals. She starred at his shaft and her curiosity about whether it would look more canine or human was met with surprise. It was unique in the sense that there was a thin layer of hair up to the base of his penis but the shape was what caught her attention. It was a pinkish colored shaft about seven to eight inches in length with small bumps spread over it with a tip that was shaped like a small whip with an opening at the end. She marveled at his wondrous oddity and carefully moved her body and head lower along his body to exam it more closely. Cautiously her hand petted his member and after no response she ran her fingers along his fully erect penis as if feeling for a pattern in the bumps and grooves and then her fingertips reached the top his penis. By now she was breathing a little heavy and feeling the moisture build between her legs. Her index finger touched the tip where this little half-inch appendage protruded above the opening at the end of the penis that glistened with a dot of clear liquid. It wiggled at her touch and her hand moved away. “ You don’t have to stop” Adam said. Without taking her eyes away from his penis her hand returned to his shaft grasping from the bottom and working upwards again to the tip. When she reached the tip and her finger again felt the little member at the end and it moved as if it was a separate little entity caressing her finger. Eva felt a single bead of her juices escape between her legs and roll down. Adam felt her hot breath grow closer his to penis and he sensed through her lust what she wanted to share with him. Eva’s mouth moved closer to his penis and rather then engulf it in her mouth she stuck her tongue out as if to taste and flickered at it’s hole on the end and was meet as by the appendage above it as if it were greeting her. Her tongue danced with it and it circled around her tongue exploring her taste buds. Slowly her lips came over the tip and around his penis moving half way into her mouth. Eva felt a tickle in her mouth as the small appendage lapped all round like a little tongue. Adam sighed heavily as Eva engulfed him. Eva closed her eyes and took as much of him in her mouth as she could. Adam never moved enjoying the motions of Eva as he was entered in and out from between her lips. Eva felt his chest rise and fall more rapidly followed by low moans escaping from him. “I’m going to cum” he croaked. Eva now played with him in her mouth more while slurping on him as if trying to suction out his jism. Adam groaned out loud and Eva felt her mouth flood with his seed. While swallowing his thick seed she acted as if it where an aphrodisiac and she moaned with him. As the last of Adam’s seed left him Eva slowed her attack on his penis but it never left her mouth and she rolled her tongue all around it still as if looking for a drop she missed. When she stopped she raised her head and looked at him and their eyes met. “Come here” he said and she moved up giving her full trust at his command. As she hovered above him face-to-face she expected him to try and kiss her but as he raised his head a large thick tongue came out of his stout canine like muzzle and licked around her mouth as if checking to see if any of his fluids were left over. He rolled her over and was on top of her never ceasing to lick her. After this his wide tongue licked at her neck. Eva felt her wrists pinned down while he licked under her neck and behind to her ears nipping at the lobes. Eva moaned as his tongue traveled down her neck towards her breasts. She let a heavy sigh at the first flicker of her areola and she opened her lab coat fully with her other hand as if offering herself to him. Once her other breast was exposed she felt his coarse tongue roll across the nipple and she gave her approval with a moan. Adam’s tongue was leaving no area on or around Eva’s breasts unexplored and acted as though his tongue was never there when he returned to a spot on her that he already went over. Adam’s un human hands released Eva at the wrist and he clasped her breasts together bringing them nipple to nipple and licked at them closing his muzzle towards them so he could nip at them. “Ohhhh” moaned out of Eva when she felt his teeth gently pinch her nipples with his teeth. Then with complete control he grinded gingerly on both nipples and he felt both her hands reach around over rubbed him on his back below his neck. “Ummm” was all that was heard from Eva. With both hands still holding her breasts he lowered himself. First licking below her breasts traveling down her stomach. Normally Eva was the ticklish type but she felt only pleasure and arousal as his tongue went over every area of her and her anticipation grew as he moved lower and lower to in between her legs. When she felt him go over her little patch of pubic hairs and felt on the verge of climax. As if teasing Adam licked longer there before finally deciding to continue. Eva spread her legs as wide as she could trembling with desire. When Adam finally lowered his head down his eyes looked up to see her as his tongue extended and he dragged it across her starting from her anus slowly up to along over her vaginal opening across the labia stopping on her clitoris. A small squirt jumped out at Adam as Eva had her first orgasm. “Aahhhh” escaped from Eva as she threw her back in pleasure. When Adam tasted her vaginal juices he lapped at her as if with desperate thirst. Eva’s hands moved away from Adam’s back went to where she could spread herself more for Adam’s lapping. He was now able to move in deeper and his tongue started to disappear in and out of her. “Oh Yes” Eva started to repeat getting loader as she felt another orgasm approach. “Don’t stop,” she pleaded with him and her mouth opened soundlessly as she felt her vaginal walls quake in orgasm. Adam was erect again and sounding for the first time with desperation she heard him say while she was still having her orgasm “ Please, turn over.” By now what little clothing they had were lost. Eva still breathless from her second orgasm she complied and raised her buttocks in offering and laid her head onto the pillow on their single little bed. Eva gasped as she felt Adam enter her from behind and he grabbed her by the hips. Thrusting himself into her he gave a low groan and stopped for a second as if savoring the sensation of entering for the first time before continuing his in and out motions. Adam went at a constant semi slow speed which caused Eva to give a low “Mmmmm” expressing the sensational feeling shared with her new love. Adam Started to pick up the pace as he to now was moaning with her and steadily they both felt a pressure starting to build. Eva started to coo as Adam picked up his pace and hunched over and licked her back moving up towards the back of her neck. As if sensing something was going to be missed Adam asked in a gruff voice, “ Can I move on top of you?” and pulled out already knowing the answer. Eva turned on her back again and he lifted her legs and at which he pushed them back resting them over his shoulders. He entered her again but with more animalistic force as his passion built. Eva could see sweat starting to bead through his thin layer of fur and she looked into his eyes and rasped “ Don’t hold back”. Adam increased as he heard her moans of pleasure grow louder. Low growls emitted from him with every thrust as he was on verge of cumming and went into her with all that his body was capable. Eva looked at him and saw a hunter attacking his prey with every strike of his phallus. Though in the wild this would be a frightening display of raw animal power this drove Eva with more arousal. “This is another gift of mine” Adam grunted through gritted teeth and Eva felt a tickle within her vagina as the small muscle on the head of his penis snaked to her G-spot and probed into her. Eva’s chest heaved upward as she was racked with an overpowering orgasm as this small tongue explored inside her at her erotic zone. Adam gave a loud heave as his sperm shot out him into Eva at which she screamed with glee as her ending orgasm exploded back to life. After Adam was spent he fell to her side still inside her and she shifted herself as if not to let him escape her. As his member started to shrink he licked at Eva’s neck cleaning their salty sweat from her as she mumbled her love to him. “What will happen to us when we are rescued in a few days” asked with alarm “ Well, we could escape through the air vents which are undamaged” he responded. “ Why didn’t you tell me we could leave? “ she chirped. “You only asked me when we would be rescued, you didn’t ask if we had another way to leave,” he teased. Eva rolled over with her back side staring at the ceiling and said with a smile “ Lets stay down here another day before we slip away on our own” and dozed into an exhausted slumber snuggled against his warmth. |
| tumm |
Posted: Dec 5 2006, 06:06 AM
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good very very good
keep up the good work |
| Skeezix |
Posted: Dec 5 2006, 07:13 AM
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jolly_roger1800, This is a fantastic story with LOTS of terrific possibilities. Please keep it going!! Most excellent!
:rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: For sure worth more than a 10. |
| litlwillie |
Posted: Dec 5 2006, 08:41 AM
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;clapping; Thanks for the story. Looks like the beginning to a great story. Do write some more. Deffinately deserves a 10.
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| acton |
Posted: Dec 5 2006, 04:22 PM
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this has all the makings of a series. please continue.
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| gordonguy24 |
Posted: Oct 18 2007, 05:28 AM
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well done thanks
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| BeastTitan |
Posted: Oct 19 2007, 04:21 PM
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Wow that was awesome.
Great and hot... excellent story! |
| amrshl |
Posted: Oct 31 2007, 12:07 AM
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Thanks for another fabolous story. Please keep up the good work. :P
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Posted: Nov 2 2007, 02:04 AM
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:D Awesome! Please keep it up!
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| buck_dawg_bottom |
Posted: Nov 2 2007, 02:09 AM
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Jolly roger
I love your stories... they are so wonderfully textured and well crafted. Thanks! buck |
| tymtraveller |
Posted: Nov 2 2007, 10:45 AM
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this is a nice story and I hope you continue. I look forward to seing where you go with this
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| gedward |
Posted: Nov 2 2007, 05:22 PM
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good story, is there another chapter to come?
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Oh this is good!!! Hot and love the action!!!
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| amrshl |
Posted: Feb 9 2008, 02:01 AM
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Thanks. Enjoyed a lot. :P
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Posted: Feb 9 2008, 01:57 PM
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[SIZE=14][COLOR=red] I am also a SiFi fan and see all kinds of possabilitys!! Keep up the good work !! :beer:
May the force be with you!! Andy |
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