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| litlwillie |
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:clapping: As always Alice another excellent story. I always look for your posts because they are so great. Thanks and keep up the good work!:clapping:
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| alicealice |
Posted: Dec 16 2006, 07:15 AM
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Thank you Kind Readers for your comments. I am encouraged to continue writing.
I’ll have to get everyone up to date on Maria and Josie since they now have dogs and boy friends. From the video’s I don’t think that the boys know what the girls do with their dogs. Thank you again Alice. |
| dilligaff5 |
Posted: Dec 16 2006, 05:12 PM
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Good story, thanks for sharing with us. Would be neat to read about the girls adventures with their own dogs. Maybe they will include their boyfriends.
Again, thanks for sharing with us. Dilligaff5 |
| usagold40 |
Posted: Dec 16 2006, 07:19 PM
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Great story Alice if i could vote i would give you a 10 for 10 keep up the good work nice format |
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| jkoesler |
Posted: Dec 17 2006, 03:51 AM
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:dance: :dance: I may be fourced to this wheel chair, but Alice, you get my vote 10 by 10. thanks. things donot work on me very well but my mind is another story. thanks and thanks. Keep up the good work. I have read a few of yoyr stories and i love your way of thinking. to me there is nothing moor pleasing to my eyes than a woman in exicys or however it it is spelled , but if she passes out from joy!! GOOD!!!! :inlove: :beer: :whistling: :dance: :clapping: :dance: :clapping: :diablo:
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| feeling_man |
Posted: Dec 17 2006, 05:27 AM
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Beautifully and sensitively written Alice, and the sexual details are very nice too, but perhaps a bit too brief. You might try adding some very feeling, emotional language........perhpas more descriptions of characters feeling states, especially prior, during and after the sexual experiences they have. I'll email you an example of what I mean.
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| funtime515 |
Posted: Dec 17 2006, 06:25 AM
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You write the most interesting stories. This is another very good one. Thanks for sharing your experiences with us. You get another 10 for this one
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| Horror's formula |
Posted: Dec 17 2006, 09:45 AM
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Yet another masterpiece.
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| alicealice |
Posted: Jan 9 2007, 12:46 AM
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Thank you Kind Readers for your comments.
I hope that I can fill your imagination with the experiences that I can share so that you can enjoy them. This is my reward as a writer. I’ll never make the big bucks writing stories like these but having readers who appreciate my work is worth a lot. Happy New Year Alice |
| knottyandNICE |
Posted: Feb 12 2007, 02:02 PM
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Alice,
Do Maria and Josie still watch your dogs when you leave for a few days here and there? ^_^ |
| alicealice |
Posted: Feb 12 2007, 11:53 PM
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knotty and NICE ....
Yes, Maria and Josie still watch our house including Captain and Buddy. They have concluded that our dogs are too stupid to want sex. They house sit the Peterson’s too and still have fun with their dogs. High tech makes small cameras with WiFi or Blue Tooth so easy to hide in a house. Make sure that you encrypt and control all of your cameras. Maria and Josie are not only naughty but have unknowing opened the Peterson’s inner secrets and their own secrets to us. But they are honest, work hard, do not steal, and do not lie. They are just naughty and we protect ourselves. Maria and Josie have further adventures that will be shared soon. Alice |
| K9Watts |
Posted: Feb 16 2007, 06:01 PM
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Alice,
Please write more of Maria and Josie. These naughty ladies sound like fun. K9 |
| blumaxiii |
Posted: Feb 22 2007, 09:22 PM
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Great story look forward to more adventures
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| Chaniffa |
Posted: Feb 22 2007, 09:56 PM
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:inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Absolutley great story. Thanks for sharing. With Love Chaniffa |
| sweetgent55 |
Posted: Feb 23 2007, 01:56 AM
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Wonderful story Alice. I like all of your stories. I also enjoyed (and learned from) your explanation of the alpha and omega male.
Thank you. |
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