Saturday Afternoon, Peter, Ann and Bubbles - Chapter 4
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Saturday Afternoon, Peter, Ann and Bubbles - Chapter 4| Oldsaltblock |
Posted: Dec 20 2006, 01:10 AM
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Supreme Being  Group: Members Posts: 3285 Member No.: 380990 Joined: 17-November 06
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Wow, some great writing. It is hard to think that this is all a fictional story, it sounds like the characters are so full of life.
You sure do wind a great tale. I read one, then went to the beginning and then read from the start to the finish. Very much enjoyable. Thank you, so let's see, since there are 4 parts, that must mean that I should give you a big 40 for the great story and the 4 chapters. However, I don't think that I can vote yet, so, in theory, I am giving you a high one. Again, great story. |
  
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| litlwillie |
Posted: Jan 2 2007, 10:36 AM
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Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 689 Member No.: 352344 Joined: 25-September 06
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Arcnay, just finished parts 3 & 4 of Peter, Bubbles & Ann. This is a really hot story with great imagination. Sure hope you will continue it.
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| old1 |
Posted: Jun 24 2007, 03:37 AM
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Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 465 Member No.: 523675 Joined: 15-June 07
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what an ending for these four chapters,especially the addition of the "peeping toms" and the ending left an opening for the addition of another chapter .
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| ErrantShade |
Posted: Jun 24 2007, 05:24 PM
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Newbie Group: Validating Posts: 49 Member No.: 502658 Joined: 14-May 07
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:blush: am looking forward to the next instalment even if i do feel like an inteloper |
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| Damo |
Posted: Jan 13 2008, 03:51 AM
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Supreme Being Group: Members Posts: 4249 Member No.: 490293 Joined: 26-April 07
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That was very hawt buddy love your work ^_^
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