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| max_086 |
Posted: Feb 1 2006, 02:06 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 3 Member No.: 218443 Joined: 8-January 06
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Hey Arcnay,
That's a great story, it's got me horny, lol, and really well written by the way, keep writing, u good mate. :clapping: |
| chafalcar |
Posted: Feb 1 2006, 05:28 AM
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Addict ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 247 Member No.: 55603 Joined: 16-October 04
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nice writting, a bit shorter than i prefer, but pretty good nonetheless.
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| shylark |
Posted: Feb 2 2006, 08:39 AM
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Supreme Being ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 3248 Member No.: 177843 Joined: 23-October 05
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:w00t: another great story Arcnay :clapping:
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| charlie99 |
Posted: Feb 22 2006, 07:43 PM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1214 Member No.: 162184 Joined: 17-September 05
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nice one arc
nice twist at the end too. Keep up the good work charlie99 |
| channeldiver |
Posted: Feb 24 2006, 07:46 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 23 Member No.: 136566 Joined: 24-July 05
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Good stuff. Thanks!
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| Arcnay |
Posted: Mar 13 2006, 08:13 AM
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Addict ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 239 Member No.: 96148 Joined: 26-March 05
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I should check these more often. Thanks for the comments everyone.
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| Beatha |
Posted: Mar 13 2006, 02:41 PM
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 134 Member No.: 237196 Joined: 13-February 06
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Very well written,
Thanks for sharing, Beatha |
| Deepfast |
Posted: Mar 14 2006, 02:24 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1 Member No.: 248235 Joined: 10-March 06
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I have no talent for writing whatsoever, but I appreciate a good well developed story....and yours was good, albeit a little short. I enjoyed....thank you. Any more?
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| Arcnay |
Posted: Mar 17 2006, 10:35 PM
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Addict ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 239 Member No.: 96148 Joined: 26-March 05
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More? Just check my signiature at the bottom of this post. There are a few more for you to read (all of which are longer than this one). :)
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| Cyndii |
Posted: Mar 19 2006, 06:46 PM
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 109 Member No.: 190328 Joined: 20-November 05
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Mmm very nice. Thanks for posting. This story felt great to me :)
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| zorro_1us |
Posted: Mar 19 2006, 09:02 PM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 812 Member No.: 82522 Joined: 1-February 05
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Nice story... sounds like fun! Thanks for the effort and for sharing! ;)
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| southflorida |
Posted: Mar 30 2006, 01:28 PM
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Beaker's Dad Group: Moderator Group Posts: 31667 Member No.: 81810 Joined: 29-January 05
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thanx for your contribution - checked for underage references - moved to fantasy section ;)
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| PuppyMarf |
Posted: Apr 3 2006, 02:49 AM
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Beginner ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 72 Member No.: 257772 Joined: 31-March 06
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excellent, excellent story.
so unique, and the ending was quite unexpected. :P loved it. |
| oralboy22 |
Posted: Apr 5 2006, 02:32 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 32 Member No.: 100407 Joined: 10-April 05
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Great story. Wish i were zeek! Maybe they'll make a film of it! i wish,but not holding my breath.
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| Hot2bfucked |
Posted: Apr 7 2006, 06:18 PM
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Beginner ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 51 Member No.: 125364 Joined: 28-June 05
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HOT!!!
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