max_086	Posted: Feb 1 2006, 02:06 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 3 Member No.: 218443 Joined: 8-January 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Hey Arcnay, That's a great story, it's got me horny, lol, and really well written by the way, keep writing, u good mate. :clapping:

chafalcar	Posted: Feb 1 2006, 05:28 AM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 247 Member No.: 55603 Joined: 16-October 04 Rate Member: 109876543210	nice writting, a bit shorter than i prefer, but pretty good nonetheless.

shylark	Posted: Feb 2 2006, 08:39 AM
Supreme Being Group: Members Posts: 3248 Member No.: 177843 Joined: 23-October 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	:w00t: another great story Arcnay :clapping:

charlie99	Posted: Feb 22 2006, 07:43 PM
Veteran Group: Members Posts: 1214 Member No.: 162184 Joined: 17-September 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	nice one arc nice twist at the end too. Keep up the good work charlie99

channeldiver	Posted: Feb 24 2006, 07:46 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 23 Member No.: 136566 Joined: 24-July 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Good stuff. Thanks!

Arcnay	Posted: Mar 13 2006, 08:13 AM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 239 Member No.: 96148 Joined: 26-March 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	I should check these more often. Thanks for the comments everyone.

Beatha	Posted: Mar 13 2006, 02:41 PM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 134 Member No.: 237196 Joined: 13-February 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Very well written, Thanks for sharing, Beatha

Deepfast	Posted: Mar 14 2006, 02:24 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 1 Member No.: 248235 Joined: 10-March 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	I have no talent for writing whatsoever, but I appreciate a good well developed story....and yours was good, albeit a little short. I enjoyed....thank you. Any more?

Arcnay	Posted: Mar 17 2006, 10:35 PM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 239 Member No.: 96148 Joined: 26-March 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	More? Just check my signiature at the bottom of this post. There are a few more for you to read (all of which are longer than this one). :)

Cyndii	Posted: Mar 19 2006, 06:46 PM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 109 Member No.: 190328 Joined: 20-November 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Mmm very nice. Thanks for posting. This story felt great to me :)

zorro_1us	Posted: Mar 19 2006, 09:02 PM
Veteran Group: Members Posts: 812 Member No.: 82522 Joined: 1-February 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Nice story... sounds like fun! Thanks for the effort and for sharing! ;)

southflorida	Posted: Mar 30 2006, 01:28 PM
Beaker's Dad Group: Moderator Group Posts: 31667 Member No.: 81810 Joined: 29-January 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	thanx for your contribution - checked for underage references - moved to fantasy section ;)

PuppyMarf	Posted: Apr 3 2006, 02:49 AM
Beginner Group: Members Posts: 72 Member No.: 257772 Joined: 31-March 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	excellent, excellent story. so unique, and the ending was quite unexpected. :P loved it.

oralboy22	Posted: Apr 5 2006, 02:32 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 32 Member No.: 100407 Joined: 10-April 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Great story. Wish i were zeek! Maybe they'll make a film of it! i wish,but not holding my breath.

Hot2bfucked	Posted: Apr 7 2006, 06:18 PM
Beginner Group: Members Posts: 51 Member No.: 125364 Joined: 28-June 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	HOT!!!