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Parting Gifts, a human/horse fantasy story| mach |
Posted: May 16 2007, 05:21 PM
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This story about Violet and Ben is soo beautiful ...altho a fantasy, it does show what kind of feeling a man can have for his beloved mare ...i'm honestly deeply touched by it , especialy the second part...i wish it would have ended more happily...but somethimes we don't get only happy endings right?
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| shtongyong |
Posted: Jul 23 2007, 05:16 AM
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Newbie  Group: Members Posts: 29 Member No.: 542881 Joined: 20-July 07
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too good to read much.
next time wish. |
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| linjelena |
Posted: Jul 23 2007, 02:31 PM
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Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 182 Member No.: 451303 Joined: 2-March 07
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Very intense and emotional story.Although not with a happy ending, but nothing is perfect.Superb for the first time.If you continue like this i see a successful writer.Again, great work.
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| unic0rn69 |
Posted: Aug 24 2008, 11:41 PM
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Veteran Group: Members Posts: 1515 Member No.: 121729 Joined: 18-June 05
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your writing skills are very good , but the endings really could be a little more detailed , perhapps after your character got out of the hospital he could have at least gone to visit violet ..... but all in all a very good job
Unic0rn69 |
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