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| preggofan |
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 16 Member No.: 90024 Joined: 4-March 05
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Great story, you must continue it. We must find out what Sue, Melissa and Fierce get up to together.
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| ukbiker |
Posted: Apr 11 2005, 12:25 AM
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Beginner ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 97 Member No.: 31594 Joined: 27-June 04
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excelent story, i wish i had been the one to catch you sleeping like that, i would love to hear if the three of you got up to more, please do write more of the tale, as im sure there is more to tell.
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| Mar |
Posted: Apr 11 2005, 11:06 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 10 Member No.: 97779 Joined: 1-April 05
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Yes, you must keep going with it... now your leaving us beg for more.
Great Story so far. i can't wait to see more. |
| Cetacean |
Posted: Apr 11 2005, 03:07 PM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1043 Member No.: 42454 Joined: 19-August 04
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It's not about myself - the story is (perhaps sadly) completely fictional. Thanks anyway though :) |
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| ukbiker |
Posted: Apr 11 2005, 03:26 PM
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Beginner ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 97 Member No.: 31594 Joined: 27-June 04
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even as a fiction story, it has inspired so many to write back, and they are all asking for the next instalment, so you really must put pen to paper (so to speak) and do the follow up, we are all awaiting with batted breath.
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| Cetacean |
Posted: Apr 11 2005, 09:41 PM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1043 Member No.: 42454 Joined: 19-August 04
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I'm glad people like it :) I think the response to this story is the best I've had so far. |
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| sweetfreedom |
Posted: Apr 12 2005, 05:17 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 31 Member No.: 94770 Joined: 21-March 05
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Your story is very nicely constructed and it flows wonderfully. Very nicely done! It was a fun ride, to go with the flow if your tale. Keep it up!
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| sapien |
Posted: Apr 12 2005, 07:24 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 5 Member No.: 97155 Joined: 30-March 05
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:beer: Nothing short of best-seller novelist quality... To not write more, when you feel inspired, would be a crime! Well done...
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| Cetacean |
Posted: Apr 12 2005, 07:08 PM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1043 Member No.: 42454 Joined: 19-August 04
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:wub: I don't think I'm quite on that level though ;) |
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| seaniepardy |
Posted: Apr 14 2005, 02:51 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1 Member No.: 101059 Joined: 12-April 05
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You have to wright another story...Have you ever done anything witha k9?
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| AZGuy |
Posted: Apr 14 2005, 03:36 PM
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 132 Member No.: 8010 Joined: 11-March 04
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I like it alot, but could make the actual sex a little more graphic and in depth. But that might just be me. but overall the first two parts of the story are great!!!
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| Cetacean |
Posted: Apr 14 2005, 09:50 PM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1043 Member No.: 42454 Joined: 19-August 04
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No :( In my current living situation, I can't keep a dog either and wouldn't have the time to take care of him/her. I could make the sex a bit more detailed for the next part if you'd like :) Both women will be getting in on the action in that part, so... |
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| doglovernoob |
Posted: Apr 15 2005, 07:12 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 29 Member No.: 85953 Joined: 15-February 05
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wow great stories, can't wait for the next one
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| Cetacean |
Posted: Apr 15 2005, 07:24 PM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1043 Member No.: 42454 Joined: 19-August 04
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Thanks ^_^ |
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| auric2231 |
Posted: May 21 2005, 09:08 AM
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Beginner ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 50 Member No.: 38314 Joined: 1-August 04
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WOW! This is one of the best stoties I've ever read.Tanks,more,please.
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