dilligaff5	Posted: Oct 14 2005, 02:13 PM
Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 737 Member No.: 85079 Joined: 12-February 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Thank you for sharing your story with us. Dilligaff5

Donkey2004	Posted: Oct 14 2005, 03:12 PM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 212 Member No.: 73905 Joined: 28-December 04 Rate Member: 109876543210	very nice got i feeling it would make a great movie although the woman would have to love it but just act like she hated it!! :D

Anipal	Posted: Oct 17 2005, 03:01 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 8 Member No.: 38947 Joined: 4-August 04 Rate Member: 109876543210	yea man the scat kind of killed it. but minus that it was an ok story

pooch player	Posted: Nov 2 2005, 03:40 AM
Disciple of the board Group: Validating Posts: 13757 Member No.: 135708 Joined: 23-July 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	i agree, it would make an awsum movie!!! is there going to be a second part to this storie?? :please:

Blood_Raven	Posted: Nov 2 2005, 10:36 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 45 Member No.: 144367 Joined: 9-August 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Very nice, although I could have done without the scat, the domination and forced parts were very very good! Hope to see more soon! :D

Parmalat	Posted: Dec 3 2005, 12:18 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 23 Member No.: 194236 Joined: 28-November 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	awesome story!! very very arousing...though i'm not into scat...but you left that to a minimum thanx!! hope you write part 2!!

southflorida	Posted: Dec 4 2005, 04:51 PM
Beaker's Dad Group: Moderator Group Posts: 31691 Member No.: 81810 Joined: 29-January 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	moved to fantasy section ;)

abcpl37	Posted: Dec 4 2005, 06:06 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 21 Member No.: 195416 Joined: 1-December 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Well written story. I agree with some of the other comments though. A little pee is ok, not into scat. Rough is great but only when enjoyed by all. Of course, these are your fantasies and I don't think you should alter them for anyone. Thanks.

Beatha	Posted: Feb 23 2006, 02:54 PM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 134 Member No.: 237196 Joined: 13-February 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	how about a sequel? Thanks, Beatha

Supersperm	Posted: Feb 24 2006, 10:05 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 24 Member No.: 217701 Joined: 6-January 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	awesome came twice reading it :P

Bekka	Posted: Feb 25 2006, 09:14 PM
Beginner Group: Members Posts: 89 Member No.: 19568 Joined: 24-April 04 Rate Member: 109876543210	Awesome story!!! Like some of the others, i could have done without the scat...but hey......to each his/her own. Besides......Fantasy is fantasy. Wish i could write lke you....keep up the awesome work! Luv Bekka

doggiefucktoy	Posted: Mar 12 2006, 06:17 AM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 331 Member No.: 226285 Joined: 22-January 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Fantastic story Julie! You're a very talented writer. Hope to read more of your work soon. :drinks:

candye	Posted: Mar 14 2006, 12:30 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 5 Member No.: 149636 Joined: 20-August 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Nice Story,,,, love to have that happen to me too Sweetie.... Candye :lol:

randy2699	Posted: Mar 14 2006, 07:04 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 29 Member No.: 244745 Joined: 2-March 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Intriguing fantasy- great set-up-let us feel each event- sensory element gets away after the snake-

hunnykunny	Posted: Apr 4 2006, 11:40 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 1 Member No.: 234824 Joined: 8-February 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	fun and exciting story. I love the vivid imagination you have :rock: