This is my first story. I've been a part of this awesome forum for years now and I think it's time I gave back to the community. Sorry if it starts off a bit too slow. Comments and criticism are welcome. Enjoy.

The Equus, Part 1

The only light in the dungeon room was from a slit in the rock high above. Kaiden could see the full moon lurking high above, it's light taunting him as he stood crudely shackled, naked in the middle of the room. He snorted and shook his head, his white mane fluttering at the disturbance. His arms were already beginning to go numb from being pulled so high up. He had somehow managed not to give into despair but he could still feel it slowly gnawing at his mind.
Clang!!
The loud sound of the metal door's lock being opened snapped him back to reality. His well-defined, muscled body tensed as he prepared himself for what was to come.
'Today was the day, wasn't it?' he thought to himself. 'I knew that even in this hell a month wasn't going to last too long'
The heavy metal door swung open and two large humans walked in, their weapons' laser sights trained on his head, just so he knew to behave. He assumed they were large for humans; compared to him their 6 foot height barely reached his stomach. Were his rear hooves not shackled too he would have no problem with giving them a fatal kick.
Kaiden's ears suddenly twitched forward as he heard heavy, booted footsteps coming from the hall outside. His heart sped up and he begin to nervously shuffle his rear legs; his obsidian hooves making clicking noises against the stone floor. Suddenly the shadow appeared in the doorway. Kaiden squinted, his blue eyes gleaming with moonlight, as he tried to see who his tormentor was going to be.
"Vice Admiral Kaiden Eqoinus," the shadow said, slowly walking forward, his arms behind his back. "It is an honor to finally meet you in person, sir".
Kaiden knew that voice.
"I'm sure you have been eagerly awaiting this moment, Vice Admiral. I certainly know I have." The man's voice was bristling with a dark eagerness. "The opportunity to work on a high-ranking officer such as yourself is very rare, but for you to also be a member of one of the High Houses is almost unheard of."
Kaiden's eyes widened almost imperceptibly as he suddenly recognized the voice.
"You are The Interrogator, are you not?" His human speech was exceptionally fluent for an Equus.
"Come now, Vice Admiral, such titles are merely propaganda. I have never and would never refer to myself as such. Nor would my…friends." The man had moved almost completely into the moonlight, revealing a massive human dressed in a very conservative black cassock. His face was still shrouded in darkness.
"No, my name is Slicus. Felix Slicus, and let me just say again," he stepped forward, the moonlight striking his face illuminating his wicked and decidedly evil smile "how much of a pleasure it will be to…work on you".
Kaiden couldn't help it, even with decades of training, his enormous body shuddered involuntarily. He had heard stories about this human from soldiers who had been liberated from human war prisons. The stories of techniques too invasive for him to even contemplate, and here he was about to undergo this torture. His thought was interrupted by the sting of a needle in his thigh. He looked down in time to see Slicus fully depress the plunger before the paralytic took effect. Without having to test it, he could just sense that he was no longer able to move anything below his neck.
"Lights!" Slicus barked, and instantly the dark room was flooded with the most unnatural white light.
Kaiden clenched his eyes shut in pain and waited for them to adjust. He could hear some kind of mechanical whirring underneath him. He finally opened his eyes and saw a large metallic, cylindrical tube ascending from the floor and stopping about a foot beneath his rear. He was beginning to feel fear now, for the first time in many years. He looked up at Slicus.
"Your species" Slicus said, that demonic grin widening on his face "has the most interesting way of storing information. Your brains function almost the same as ours but you have a redundant memory system. You are actually able to store memories in newly created genetic material. Not only able, I've learned, but in fact obliged to. You cannot help it, it's like a compulsive disorder."
He stepped uncomfortably close to Kaiden, his gaze traveling slowly down from Equus' face. "In my time as an interrogator, some very interesting and dare I say, fun procedures have been developed to get at that information."
Kaiden watched with widened eyes as Slicus reached out his hand and gently cupped the horse's basketball-sized testicles.
"Get…your…hands…off…me!" Kaiden managed to say. Speaking without conscious control of one's diaphragm was incredibly difficult.
"Now, now, my little pony" he said, squeezing ever so tightly. "A few years ago the only way to get what we wanted was to…" he made scissor gestures with his fingers, "but now we have a more reliable method."
He turned his head slightly and nodded to the two guards. They immediately moved forward, their weapon sights not wavering in the slightest. One of them moved to the site where he remained motionless while the other moved around behind the 15-foot high Equus. Kaiden craned his neck to see what the other mad was doing when he suddenly felt his tail being picked up and moved out of the way. Slicus then moved around behind him, tracing his hand from Kaiden's sac, up his huge sheath, around his side and over his enormous rump before coming to a stop between the Equus' deep cheeks, his fingers gently thrumming the dark puckered hole there.
"Shall we begin…?"

This post has been edited by rajrajmarley on Nov 2 2009, 05:56 AM

Nice :) i hope there is more

Nice :) i hope there is more

Guess you're the only one that liked my beginning, Unsure. Here's part 2.

The Equus Part II

Kaiden didn't respond. He had a feeling nothing would change even if he did. He felt the fingers on his hole. He could feel the effect the faint tickle was having on him.
"I…won't…tell…you…anything!" He wheezed, using his limited breathing to speak actually made him out of breath.
"Mmm, don't worry, my friend." Slicus' voice was charged with contained eagerness. "You won't have to say anything."
Without warning Slicus slipped a finger pass the Equus' sphincter. Despite their enormous size, the horse-race had the tightest asses of any species he had encountered.
'Tight,' he reminded himself, 'Not small.'
He moved his hand in a circle, pushing the tight ring of muscle apart slightly. As he did this he spread his legs apart slightly and readied himself. He let his gaze wander up the back of the beast. A thin waist spreading out up to broad, heavily muscled shoulders. He still marveled at how the military was able to capture one of his rank. He was just lucky to have been available for this assignment. He was going to have fun.
"Here we go." he said quietly, more to himself than anyone else.
Very suddenly he rolled his hand so his fingers formed a cone, squatted slightly and shot his arm forward, sinking it elbow-deep into the horse's ass. Kaiden arched involuntarily as he threw back his head and opened his mouth in a silent scream, his eyes clenched in pain. Slicus couldn't contain a small smile as the familiar tightness and warmth engulfed his entire hand and forearm.
"That wasn't so bad, was it?" He jested, his eyes darting briefly back up to look at the horse's face.
He felt the futile attempts of the Equus' ass trying to rid itself of something that just didn't belong. He actually quite enjoyed the pulsing, rippling sensation. He paused for a few seconds to allow himself the pleasure of the sensation before continuing. He squatted just a little bit lower, straightened his arm and slowly started standing up, his arm slowly sinking deeper and deeper.
Kaiden felt the human's arm going further inside him. The pain was almost unimaginable and he could feel his insides stretching to accommodate the invader. He tried in vain to to move, to wiggle, anything to stop it from going deeper. Suddenly Slicus stopped, and Kaiden felt a huge pressure at his hole. The man's oversized biceps were trying to go in.
Despite the coolness of the room Slicus was already covered with a light sheen of sweat. Pushing his enormous arm into a hole that was tighter than virgin's was hard work, but he loved every minute of it. The sight of his arm forcing its way deeper into this proud creature's before-untouched hole was causing that wonderfully familiar growing sensation in his pants. His bicep had reached the hole and tensing his leg muscles, Slicus pushed as hard as he could. At first nothing happened, he could hear the horse grinding it's teeth in pain.
'I bet a Vice Admiral never thought he'd go through something like this' he thought smugly.
Finally he felt the horse's ass give just a little and the edge of his bicep slipped in. So much force was in his pushing that the instant his bicep slipped in Slicus literally shot up, the entire rest of his arm burying itself in the Equus.
Kaiden arched even further and he let out a scream of curses in his own tongue, sounding to humans a very loud whinny. The human was now so deep inside him, Kaiden couldn't feel where his hand was anymore. His ass and insides were both burning and in so much pain he couldn't even bring himself to open his watering eyes. Suddenly he felt a surge of pleasure pulse through his body and he shuddered violently at the sudden change in sensation.
Slicus smiled as his searching hand finally found its target. The horse's prostate was enormous, it filled his hand completely. The effect on his subject was instantaneous when he stroked it. He allowed another smile to escape.
'I am going to have fun.'

Ouch, no one likes it at all?

*Pushes aside some bushes and looks out at you from under the brim of a German heeres, with monocle... *
"Verrrrry Interesting."




And don't worry, it takes a while to get readers.

aside from the force issue I'm enjoying the story please continue..

Thank you for posting this story :)

Unic0rn69

This post has been edited by unic0rn69 on Nov 3 2009, 04:27 AM

just checking back in hoping for another chapter :)


Unic0rn69

Okay, here's part III. I'm still trying to really foresee where I'm actually going with this and lay the foundation. Hope you guys enjoy it. Sorry about the brutality, Unicorn, I promise the way the story is unfolding in my head, this is just the beginning. The entire story won't be this dark, at least I hope not. ^_^

That this man's arm was inside him no longer seemed important. The waves of pleasure Kaiden felt whenever the slightest movements were felt on his prostate were indescribably. The unimaginable pain he had felt had simply vanished leaving unimaginable pleasure. Of course he knew what the prostate was, anatomy was a requirement at the Academy and he knew of the gland's connection to the pleasure center but this was completely unexpected. Without thinking about it, as the man gently prodded inside him and another wave came over him, a slight moan escaped his throat. Despite the shame of being tied up naked and violated, he could feel his dick growing in his sheath.

Slicus smiled again, it was getting harder and harder to contain himself.

"This horse has never experienced the sensation of having his prostate stimulated, getting what I want is going to be too easy".

Without stopping his assault inside, he peeked around the Equus' huge rump at his rapidly hardening tool. He couldn't help it, the contrast of the horse's ebony black dick and balls to his white coat was incredibly sexy. A prominent tent had formed by his waist, but he knew how to be professional. He nodded to the man who's gun was still trained on the horse then reached forward and began gently rubbing the enormous sheath, coaxing the snake from its shelter. The other guard had lowered his weapon and knelt under the Equus and began entering something on the console on the cylindrical object. It beeped quietly then began moving higher and closer to the horse's ass. Without stopping his assault on the horse's genitals, he looked down at the soldier controlling the rod, nodded and then with a final, gently squeeze of his hand started slowly withdrawing his arm.

Kaiden was in a bliss he had rarely encountered before. The feeling when he'd first had sex at his Academy graduation was actually competing for top prize with how he was feeling now. He heard some movement around him but he was too far in heaven to even care. He felt the man squeeze ever so slightly harder than before, eliciting another moan from him before it began to slowly pull out. For the milliseconds between the pause of the massage and the man's arm leaving Kaiden's mind was able to feel a pang of fear as he thought of the pain he would endure without the ministrations on his prostate. To his absolute amazement the feeling of something gently pulling on his insides was almost just as pleasurable and the growth of his dick doubled, it's enormous black head visible just inside his sheath.

Slicus' own dick was straining against his pants now as he stared at his arm reappearing from that dark heaven. He watched with lust as the tight ring of muscles expanded and contracted around his arm as he continued to pull out. Finally his hand was all that was left in and he gave the horse a give squeeze on the inside before completely exiting with a barely audibly pop. By now the horse's once extremely tight ass was a little more loosened out, those nowhere close to loose. He watched as it remained gaping for just a second before slowly closing back to a nice, puckered hole. Without a moment for relapse, the cylindrical rod began moving again upwards until it made contact with the rapidly tightening sphincter. Slicus heard a sharp gasp from above as the cold metal started pushing its way in. Most of his "subjects" never seemed to understand, what happened prior to this point was his way of being gentle. Had they gotten a by-the-book interrogator, that huge, cold piece of metal would've been shoved right up there with no warning or stretching or anything. Not allowing too much dawdling, he intensified his work on the horse's sheath. Despite its potency, the paralytic only lasted for 10 minutes and with an individual this powerful, it could be overcome any second. The last thing they needed was for this carrier of
oh-so-important information to come down from that sexual high.

Kaiden actually felt disappointment when the man's hand left him, he actually felt inexplicably empty. He was trying to hold onto the memory of what he had just been feeling when something way too cold touched his ass. He gasped at the sudden painful feeling and a clarity immediately filed his mind. He could feel tingling in his extremities and he realized the paralytic…

"Ooohhhh" he groaned as he experienced a new, more carnal pleasure coming from his penis,
oblivious to the rod working its way all the way back up to his prostate.

He glanced down and saw Slicus furiously pumping away at his sheath, coaxing more and more of his less and less flaccid dick out. He threw back his head as his hips started making small thrusting movements. He couldn't help it, he felt the familiar rush of blood and wonderful stretching feeling as his penis filled out his sheath and started flowing out by the foot. Just then he felt a very curious sensation. Something warm and soft and…wet was being drawn across his balls, adding heavily to his pleasure. He wanted to see what it was but at that moment the rod, now warmed to a better temperature by his tunnel, pressed into his prostate and began to very
gently vibrate. He was in heaven again.

As he busily pumped the horse's dick, Slicus couldn't help but stare at the huge globes dancing beneath. They were mesmerizing. He couldn't help it, professionalism be damned. Without stopping or even slowing his massage, he moved his face as close as possible to that beautiful sac and gently reached his tongue out and drew it across the smooth surface. Just that idea that his career-making key was waiting by the gallons not even an inch from his face was a turn-on, he didn't even have to think about this huge, powerful being being forced to submit completely to him. As he nuzzled his entire head in the horse's balls, he could feel its dick keep growing, it had already gotten thicker than his huge fingers could reach around and it's length was already at least 4 feet long, and it wasn't even hard yet. It wouldn't be too long before he got his prize.

This post has been edited by rajrajmarley on Nov 5 2009, 09:46 AM

keep the story going , enjoying it very much :)
you get a 10 from me :)



Unic0rn69

Ooooooo, That's a big horsey.

Interesting start, i'll be hanging around for the next chapters :D

Lonesomwolf

you won't be the only one lonsome lol

waiting patiently for the next chapter :)



Unic0rn69

great 2nd and 3rd chapters. I hope there is more.

Hop..... Skip...... and a BUMP!

Lonesomwolf

how about a hop... skip and a hump lol



Unic0rn69