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Rion| lonesomwolf |
Posted: Nov 17 2009, 12:36 PM
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Hardcore  Group: Members Posts: 588 Member No.: 472341 Joined: 30-March 07
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I do like where this story is going but your chapters are far to short, you need to expand and explain more. I don't want to come across badly, just offering some constructive criticism.
10 for you efforts thus far Lonesomwolf |
 
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| Safiera |
Posted: Nov 22 2009, 02:25 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 22 Member No.: 934306 Joined: 20-October 09
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hi everyone just asking agin for suggestions where i should go from here. over the next 3 days i will be on alot. so once i have somewhere to go with this, i will continue!
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| iwont |
Posted: Nov 22 2009, 10:11 AM
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Full time poster Group: Members Posts: 2293 Member No.: 76816 Joined: 9-January 05
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Thanks for your story. |
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| Safiera |
Posted: Nov 26 2009, 02:11 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 22 Member No.: 934306 Joined: 20-October 09
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so should i continue?
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