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| Avia316 |
Posted: Oct 6 2009, 02:08 AM
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Ok this is my first story on here and i've never written anything like this before so if it's bad just let me know and i'll stop.
I lay in my bed, my panties damp. My roommate is talking to her mom on the bed across from mine. Dorming is fun except when you’re horny. So I go to look for some porn, which does nothing but excite me more. At this point I’m dripping and whishing for more then my small fingers. Suddenly my phone vibrates. I look at it and see a new text message, the number, however, is unknown to me. The message reads “I’ve been watching you, and I can tell you are itching for some “fulfillment” I shall be there to pick you up in three minutes, do not change. Now I was in nothing but a cami and a pair of guys sweat shorts. I had no underwear and no bra on. Now I was scared by that text it mad me nervous but it also turned me on. I felt my pussy contract with excitement. Thinking about it I figured it was just a gag, I ignored the message and climbed back into bed. I was watching a kicky porno about a sex slave who had misbehaved and was being punished I was getting into it when I heard a knock on the door. My roommate started to get up to get it but I told her that I’d get it instead. I hurried over remembering the text making me drip with excitement, I knew that my panties would be soaked if I took them off now. I opened the door and an older man stood there. He was in good shape, but not perfect, no abs, but no beer gut either. He took my hand squeezing it tightly. “Come along my dear…did you tell your roommate you will not be returning this evening?” He asked as he pulled me out of the room. “I…uh…Brittney I’m going out I probably won’t be back till tomorrow” I said my heart racing with anticipation and fear of the unknown. “Have fun!” she called, and as she did he let the door close. As it latched he pushed me up against the wall… His body pressed against mine and I could feel it’s power, and I could smell this tantalizing oder, it was sweet sweat, and soap, and old spice. “Listen to me now Camden…For the next ten minutes you and I are going to walk out to my car…it is waiting out front. You will walk with me as if I were your lover…you disobey me and I will make this evening more unpleasant. I nodded, a shiver of excitement running from my neck down to my sopping wet pussy. Getting out to the car was easy, no one gave us a second glance, not when he gave my ass a light squeeze. Or when he ran his hand up under my shirt. When we got into the car…which was actually a limo he let me and slambed the door the moment he did he gave me a cold look. “You are to disrobe…NOW!” I looked at him uneasy…He looked frightening now…and as I hesitated he reached out and slapped me so hard that I saw a bright flash infront of my eyes.” Quickly I pulled off my cami and the shorts and sat next to him on the cool leather naked. “If you hesitate again it will be worse for you…understand? You are to obey my every word. Now I want you to lay down on the floor…arms and legs out at an X shape.” I nodded and quickly got to the rough carpeted floor. I was surprised when Pulled some shackled out of the side compartments that were chained to the back of the compartment, and hooked them to my wrists and ankles. Then he went and grabbed my size 36 DD breasts roughly sweezing them so hard that I gasped. Then he let his hands slid down my stomach, to my pussy. He laughed as his fingers slid across the entrence to my Vagina and across my slit making me gasp again, although this time with pleasure instead of pain. “You enjoy this don’t you you little whore??? Well lets see how you make it threw this night. Then I felt him spread my vaginal lips and his tongue flick my clit. Then his warm breath was gone and I felt something hard, flat with straight edges slide into my vagina it was cold! “Don’t move little cam…or you will cause yourself some extreme pain and will end up in the hospital.” I said stock still as I felt my vagina tense again the metal thing. Then His warm breath was back and I could feel myself relaxing…then the metal thing slide out without anything hurting. I let out a sigh of relief and as I did the man bent down again and bit my clit hard! I let out a little cry and he laughed. “Don’t want you getting to comfortable…now you just lay there silently while I make a few calls.” I laid there not sure of what I had gotten myself into but I knew there was no turning back…I was horny and I had a feeling that I might get fulfilled this evening. “That’s right I want the two danes, and the three boxers. Fine I can pick up that one boxer on my way…yeah I can train him.” Then he hung up “He it’s me…I will be arriving in an hour with a boxer, and a new toy.” He looked at me cruelly then hung up. The next fifteen minutes I felt myself tunning into my surroundings…The feel of the car on the road…the harsh fibers on my bare ass and back. The slick wet feeling between my legs. Then suddenly we stopped. “Well little Cam here is a bit of a preview of the joys of this evening.” Then his door opened and a large boxer jumped in. His body was solid muscle and he had a mean look in his eyes. Then all of a sudden I felt his cold nose on my clit. I gasped again and as I felt the dogs tough reach out and slid into my pussy I groaned. |
| ILUVDOGGIRLS |
Posted: Oct 6 2009, 08:06 AM
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Great story, Avia316!!
I like where this is heading. Don't be discouraged at all!! With the direction it's heading in, i'm sure it will prove to be a winner!!! ;) Thank you for sharing, and you have my 10!! :heart: ILUVDOGGIRLS |
| k9xtc |
Posted: Oct 6 2009, 09:24 AM
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Hardcore Group: VIP Members Posts: 703 Member No.: 905731 Joined: 3-August 09
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It is a good start. :P I like the texting piquing her interest in sex with a stranger approach, but would want to know more about her motivation besides boredom. The abusive treatment is clearly what will keep her on this path, but don't over do it. Perhaps hint at the violence through visible objects or things he said. This is a very promising start and I will return to see where you take the story. :P :P :P :devil2: :devil2:
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| iwont |
Posted: Oct 6 2009, 11:29 AM
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That is an very hot start, I wait for The limo must be very large. :whistling: |
| jimbo60 |
Posted: Oct 6 2009, 02:04 PM
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Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 1172 Member No.: 476274 Joined: 5-April 07
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The story is an interesting fantasy and easy reading. Are you at SUNY Buffalo I went to grad school at ginghampton hugs jim
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| arasl |
Posted: Oct 6 2009, 02:40 PM
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Disciple of the board Group: VIP Members Posts: 10859 Member No.: 824916 Joined: 10-January 09
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Great start, I can't wait to read more!
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| dragoneyes |
Posted: Oct 6 2009, 02:59 PM
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Very interesting beginning. I want to see where you go from here. It sounds very promising. Please continue writing. Thank You.
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| kellykline |
Posted: Oct 6 2009, 08:54 PM
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Nice start, keep it up and I await more :D
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| tomcat042 |
Posted: Oct 7 2009, 04:00 AM
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Oh I LIKE it! Well done Avia! I send you my 10 naughty girl! :P
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| rodeotexas |
Posted: Oct 7 2009, 04:36 AM
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Great Start!
Thanks for contributing! |
| boomerralph |
Posted: Oct 7 2009, 06:22 AM
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Great start, Thank you
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| mattlobo |
Posted: Oct 7 2009, 04:19 PM
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Very interesting Avia, and not bad for a first time. Your lusty tail is very interesting. The only thing that I could suggest is that you be even more discriptive than you already are. But even if you do not change a thing in the way you write I must say this... I'll be back... I want to see what happens next. Please continue.
M. Lobo B) |
| Dawgmann |
Posted: Oct 8 2009, 04:18 AM
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Great start. I think this is going to be a good one. Thank you for sharing.
DM B) |
| Chiron |
Posted: Oct 8 2009, 12:53 PM
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Great start - I look forward to reading more!
Chiron 10/10 |
| cowscrew |
Posted: Oct 8 2009, 01:46 PM
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nice sure hope you continue :rock: :rock: :rock:
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