;) very good start!!! ;)
to go along with the others, this is to help you , not to criditize your writings
but you should stay on the subject your writing about.
you left off the first part, leaving us to think there were going to be one thing happen next, then you all of sudden go to the girl, girl thing, , which is gooood!
but we want to read more about your 1st time with a dog and what all happened and what went on from there,
you never tryed to get your dog to mount you or anything?
anyways, i hope this didn't upset you, here is your 10 vote!! you will get more readers and votes, trust me!! :P :P :P :P keep on writng!!! ;) ;) ;)

This post has been edited by sefriendlyguy on Aug 18 2009, 09:18 AM

Thank you so much for your story.

I hope u find time to continue,as i believe you`ve started something
pretty good here.

Thanks :beer:

I am excited about hearing the rest of the story. I have checked back a few times to see if it was done yet. Great going, cant wait for more. Thank you :D

amazing, im new here and sofar, your 2 stories are the best iv seen, keep up the good work :) :heart: :heart: :w00t:

It would an honor to vote for tale!
Unfortunately, I'm still on probation. But this post puts me halfway home. :blush:
:beer: :beer: :beer:
Please continue as some do enjoy what has been written so far here.

This post has been edited by k9xtc on Aug 19 2009, 09:44 AM

I can vote. Use this as encourage from a friendly reader to continue you tale my dark little kitten. :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

Short and sweet. i liked it.

Please do continue! I look forward to your next installment!

I've enjoyed it very much! Thank you!

You write well and drew me into your story with vivid pictures dancing in my minds eye. I would like to suggest that you do not write a continueing story because most of the comments will be in anticipation and wanting of more. Set each night as it's own story and include the title of the next at the end if you like.
Know that you write well.
If you write for men then get to the point but if you write for women and want to share the experience, let the memories of the events dance in your mind and savor each moment, let your words linger in each feeling. Tell us how his tounge felt as he lapped at your labia. Did he lick from ass to rosebud in long luxuriouse strokes or go nuts lapping greedily at your sweet nectar?
It is not the end that we seek to know but the delight of the journey.

Starman

Thank you for your contribution. Short, consise and very arousing. Keep it up. :beer:

great story, thanks for posting

Great story. Please continue. Big 10 from me :wub: :beer: :P

please go on that is a great story so far and it is even better because it is true a big 10 vote for you
could you pease post a pic so we can see your sexy self