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| unic0rn69 |
Posted: Jul 29 2009, 08:32 AM
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ya know i just might add a meerkat they are slender and can fit into places that other creatures might not be able to after all the engines are getting some serious work done and just might need someone small enough to do the work that others can't.. that will be in chapter 5 , 4 is about to come out.....
dragon i think i agree with you , I'm having a hard enough time creating names for the characters much less creating names for all the species... well the next chapter is done , I'm going to let my friend(s) Proof it for me before i post it she/ they will be reading it in about 6 hrs so i will post it in about 7-8 hours , so far i am very pleased with the change in my work and hope that everyone else will be too. I have made some huge changes in my style... see everyone in about 7-8 hours Unic0rn69 |
| unic0rn69 |
Posted: Jul 29 2009, 05:30 PM
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Ok everyone here is chapter 4 I hope you enjoy reading it as much as i have enjoyed writing it.
As we are walking down the hall to Valesz's room, I noticed that everyone was looking at us with something of a astonished look upon their faces, then I realized that in our haste to depart the party that we forgot to put out clothes back on. Oh well we are almost there now any way, its just about 30 meters ahead. Valesz says “ did you notice the way that Jalad kept looking at you Paul? I think he likes you.”. Well I think that I would rather hive him like me than hate me he seems very aggressive and definitely very powerful. I find that a bit intimidating. But then again there are those that are just big teddy bears. Katherine ask” what is a teddy bear? Well a teddy bear is a small stuffed animal that is considered to be a toy, they are not real animals but soft cuddly toys. Katherine quickly responds then maybe Jalad wants to be your teddy bear... tee he he he . Oh sure you make jokes about him but I think he wants it the other way around he wants me to be his teddy bear . As the door opens, Valesz Says in her firm yet soft voice “Enough about Jalad for now. We are here.”. As we enter the room I can't help but notice it is as luxurious and as beautiful as the office was. With another transparent aluminum window not quite as large as the one in the office this one is about 2 meters wide and about 3 meters in height. Looking out the window I realize what star cluster's I'm looking at and point to a star almost dead center of the window. And ask Valesz isn't that your home there? She replies yes, actually it is you will get to see it in person in a few weeks. We are carrying cargo back home. Then she walks over to a cabinet and ask “What would you like to drink?” I reply if you have any Equine whiskey that would be nice, but only a small glass, that stuff is pretty stiff. Then I point to another star in the lower right hand corner of the window and that star there, isn't that your home Katherine? She responds “yes, you seem to know quite a bit about the stars”. Well when I was younger I use to sit under a tree at night and study the stars, wondering just how many supported life and if I would ever get to visit any of them, and now here I am beginning a new voyage to see many wonderful worlds. Yet here I am in a room with two wonderful females wondering what adventures might happen tonight. Valesz hands me the drink and I gaze at her for a moment and notice that the color in her face is slightly different (she is actually blushing). Then I turn to look at Katherine she is slightly flush herself. Then both of them look at me and at the same time say “thank you”. Katherine looks towards Valesz and says “I think that you made a fine choice selecting Paul for a crew member , not like some of the other humans I have met.” Valesz responds “ I agree , we know that he handles other species well now I think its time we see if he can handle multiple species at the same time”. Then they each take an arm and we are heading for a door, I can only assume that it is Valesz's bedroom , the door opens , and reveals a large room with lots of exotic plants of all shapes and sizes and a bed in the middle of the room, what I would have to call a double king size bed it is about 3 meters in length and about 4 meters width, then Valesz releases my arm walks over to a control panel and presses a button then over speakers all around the room I can hear something that sounds like a rain forest but the sounds are a bit different , the creatures in the background are not the same although the sound of rain is very prominent and the sounds are quite relaxing. Then Valesz presses another button on the console and the lights dim , I hear a faint rumble sounds like thunder in the distance, then a small flash of light and another rumble this one sounds closer, I look up at the ceiling and it looks like clouds rolling by , there are holographic emitters in the ceiling giving the appearance of a storm coming in. Then the two females crawl up onto the bed leaving just enough space between them for me to fit. Valesz pats the bed in a gesture as to say come here. Just then another flash of light lights up the room I can't help but notice how the light dances across her beautifully blue colored scales, and how it shows off the wonderful curves of her beautiful body. Just as I begin to crawl up onto the bed another flash of light this time I'm looking at Katherine and how the flashes of light sparkle in her big beautiful eyes with that innocent look about her, I'm starting to think that she may not be as innocent as she looks but I adore her just the same. Just then I realize I am starting to have feelings for these two beautiful creatures. Am I falling in love with them? Or is it just an infatuation. But now is not the time to be thinking of such things right now they both want me and I had better give them what they want or I may lose both of them..... Just as I'm crawling up onto the bed they both grab me and pull me up and then they begin kissing my face and start working their way down Katherine stops at my chest and begins licking, and sucking franticly on my nipples while Valesz continues on down she quickly wraps her tongue around my now rock hard cock, just as I look down at the both of them another flash of light brightens the room and they are both looking up at me. Katherine with her big dark glistening eyes and Valesz with her bright golden eyes, each with a light smile on their faces. Without saying a word they continue they continue to satisfy their appetites , at that point all I could do was to lay there and enjoy what they were doing to me. Valesz began teasing my cock by engulfing it completely in her mouth and then gently running her fore teeth over the base of my shaft, just then Katherine sits up and then straddles my chest positioning her sweet pussy right in front of my face, I smiled knowing what she wanted me to do. I oblige her and begin teasing her pussy with my tongue. I would go as deep into her as I could then I would flick my tongue on her clitoris making her moan in pleasure. Then Valesz puts her chin on Katherine's shoulder and says “ there's no way I'm letting you have all the fun” and just as Katherine begins to moan again I feel Valesz impale herself on my shaft. I moan in pleasure myself , the feel of Valesz working herself up and down on my cock and the sweet taste of Katherine on my tongue , such a feeling of euphoria washes over me and I completely relax for a moment, but only a moment then I realize that Katherine has leaned back a bit and the two girls are making out on top of me with Valesz reaching around Katherine playing with her nipples , now hard and poking out of her soft white underbelly fur. I ask Katherine if she would like to turn around to make it even more enjoyable. And she does so with the most graceful of movements. Although she is now directly over my face I can tell that they are both enjoying the new position Valesz is now riding my cock harder than ever, and Katherine is swaying her hips franticly over my face, while I bury my tongue deep into her very hot and wet pussy. I work a hand free from under Katherine and I begin to trace circles around her tail hole I lick a finger to get it well lubed and gently slide it into her sphincter. She tenses up for a second then realizes that she is enjoying the new feelings of this intrusion to her body. Just as I feel Katherine building to her orgasm I feel Valesz squeezing down on my cock they both cum at the same time covering me in their sweet juices , I swallow every drop that Katherine has to offer. Then I feel Valesz remove herself from my shaft and Katherine quickly moves in cleaning my still fully erect cock with her delicate licking almost sending my over the edge, but I think it's to soon, and I regain my composure and relax a bit. Now that she has me completely clean, she stops licking me for a moment and gently climbs off of me. Valesz doesn't waste any time and she is now sitting on top of my chest she leans back slightly and gently dips a couple of her fingers into wet pussy, just enough to get them nice and wet , she looks at me with a grin and says “You want to taste me now don't you?” I respond of course you know I do. She extends her clawed hands towards my face and I quickly begin licking and sucking on her fingers “ ummmm how sweet, I want to taste more. ” I reach behind her and gently pull her closer so that I could taste more of her sweet nectar and give her as much pleasure as I possibly can. Just as I began licking Valesz's clit I felt Katherine sliding down the length of my shaft much slower than Valesz had previously done before. They were both moaning with pleasure enjoying my body as much as I was enjoying theirs. I continued licking Valesz's sweet pussy, but to my surprise she swung her tail around in front of her and gently pushed me away with it (I had no idea that she had that kind of control over her tail she could use it as easily as I would use a finger) she dipped her tail into herself and got it very wet, then pulled it away swiftly, she reached down grabbed me and pulled me back to her. I just smiled and continued licking her not realizing what she had planned she had curled her tail around Katherine and just as I drove my tongue deep into her again she thrust her tail into my virgin hole, (if I were to guess she was in me about 10 cm although it felt like 20 I had never experienced pain and pleasure at the same time.) After a few minutes the pain subsided and I was able to more enjoy the sensations that she was giving me, Just then I felt Katherine building to climax again. I drove my tongue in deeper into Valesz than I ever had before she threw her head back screamed in pleasure and thrust her tail even deeper into me, she found my prostrate gland and I couldn't help but to explode deep into Katherine as I felt both females squeezing down on my throbbing cock and tongue harder than either of them had before. Everyone collapsed and fell into a pile of sweaty flesh after a few minutes Valesz and Katherine laid down on each side of me and we all snuggled up and just before I fell unconscious I muttered , “I love you, both of you” but they were both already asleep. So I didn't think on it any further and drifted off to sleep myself. The next morning Katherine woke me buy kissing me , I open my eyes and with a smile said “ good morning “ she replied “good morning we have a little surprise for you before you go to work on the engines” Breakfast is ready for you , we did some research this morning and found a traditional Earth breakfast. I hope you don't mind that I knew that you had earth food in your room and I went to get some. I said “ no I don't mind” so I got out of bed and went to the other room where Valesz was I said “good morning” she responded, good morning and gave me a kiss. They had prepared bacon , eggs and hash browns, with a small glass of orange juice. I think to myself this is a perfect morning.( I have finally lost my virginity twice to the same beautiful female dragoness and now this thoughtfulness of a “home cooked meal”) I sit down to the table Valesz has a plate with a raw steak and Katherine has a bowl of salad in front of her. Valesz says “I think that you will enjoy working with Zipper today” I respond I think I will too. Valesz “we should have the ship ready for departure in 2 more days.” Katherine mentions to Valesz just a reminder we have an interview with the equines this morning, Valesz responds “ yes and I know exactly where to put them if they qualify, they would be perfect in the cargo hold, they are very strong and can work for hours at a time.” and then she takes another bite of her steak. I had never seen a dragon eat before, I now know what Katherine meant by “she is now use to it.”, to see those sharp teeth easily shred a piece of meat and then I think just how much control she has, to have not even scratched me with those razor sharp teeth. After we are all done with our breakfast all of us decide to take a shower before we begin the day. Valesz leads the way with Katherine and I right behind her. I watch as she swings her tail from sided to side as she walks towards the shower so flowing and rhythmic almost hypnotic. We quickly arrive at the shower Valesz ask how hot do you like the water I respond about 30 to 35 c Katherine says “oh good a nice hot shower.” Valesz says its 0530 we needed to hurry if you are going to make it to the ship by 0600. so we all hop in the shower Valesz is first under the hot water , I can't help but notice how the water glistens against her silvery blue scales I find the view very intoxicating, with the thoughts of last night running through my head I begin to get excited … but there's no time for that now I try to ignore my thoughts and try to think about working on the engines finally my problem begins to subside but not without notice both of the females had seen me gazing at Valesz and giggled a bit Katherine says “Fond memories of last night.” I respond yes , I can't help it it was incredible not something I will ever forget. Then Valesz steps out of the shower and grabs a towel and begins to dry herself , she says that she is going to get ready for the interview, And walks out of the room. Then Katherine steps under the shower soaking her fur completely, I look upon her noticing how well curved her body is the light brown fur now wet it a bit darker shade her nipples now poking out of their fur cover not because they are hard but the fur is laying tightly against her slender body, reveling her curves even more, Valesz says in the distance “ better hurry up we don't want to be late.” so then Katherine steps out of the shower and I quickly begin to scrub myself off just as I step out of the shower Katherine hands me a towel, and exclaims its going take me an hour to get my fur right again... but it was worth every second and she grins at me. Then says that when she went to get the food she also grabbed some clothes for me as well they are on the bed. I hadn't even noticed them there when I got up. I finished drying off and went back to the bedroom to get dressed, Valesz was there already dressed and heading for the main room, this time her dress was opaque but still clung tightly to her body. I noticed the clock said 0550 I had 10 minutes to get to the ship. I quickly got dressed, and headed for the main room where Valesz and Katherine were waiting for me. I swallowed the last of my orange juice and wrapped my arms around them both and gave each a goodbye kiss and headed for the door, and just as the door closed behind me I heard them both say “ We love you too” the next chapter is already underway but it might be a few days before I can post it, please be patient its coming. Unic0rn69 |
| AN_AFRO |
Posted: Jul 30 2009, 09:03 PM
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I loved every word of it. You are simply amazing. 10 for you again.
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| neandernitz |
Posted: Jul 30 2009, 09:37 PM
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Don't have time to read this now; don't dare print it out 'cause someone might find it (Not a boatload of privacy here).
Looks damn promising tho'-- want to tag it so I can find it repeatedly later. Thanks ahead of time--- :w00t: |
| durkha247 |
Posted: Jul 30 2009, 11:56 PM
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Great story and love the sci-fi element, also can understand finding names for all the characters as I have the same problem, definately a story to keep watching out for, can't wait to see where you go with it
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| unic0rn69 |
Posted: Jul 31 2009, 04:42 AM
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well I'm just putting the finishing touches to CH 5. It will be out VERY soon :)
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| neandernitz |
Posted: Jul 31 2009, 04:59 AM
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Thanks! 10
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| unic0rn69 |
Posted: Jul 31 2009, 05:19 AM
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ok everyone i hope you enjoy reading this :)
Just as I arrive at the dock I see Talzon standing by the port, Talzon greets me “Hello Paul, glad to see you could make it on time. ” I respond “ Hello Talzon, permission to come aboard?” Talzon “Permission granted , welcome to the Kameer, she isn't a luxury cruse ship but she gets around.” Paul you must have made quite an impression on Valesz, in the years that I have known her she has never invited any male to her quarters. I have only been in her quarters to give her reports on the ship or something of that nature. Well all we did was talk about the stars and places and about me before I headed out into space, we had a few drinks and passed out. Paul I'm going to take you to Adelind she will give you a tour of the ship before you begin work. I need you to know the ship and most of her crew I would hate for something to happen and you only know your way from here to the engines. As we begin to enter the ship the hallways of the ship are a bit larger than I would expect on a dragon ship. The walls are polished Titanium while the floors are covered by a dense carpet. The ceilings themselves appear to glow giving the light needed to see. Talzon says “ Adelind is just around this corner. Just as we make the corner a door opens , revealing a spectacular green female dragon. She looks to be about early 20's in age. Her green scales glisten with a similar silvery color that Valesz displays except hers is green , much brighter colorization than Zipper. Adelind says “Hello you must be Paul.” I respond “Yes I am. And you must be Adelind, nice to meet you.” she extends her her hand out to me and I gently kiss the back of her hand. Adelind says “ I'm going to show you around the ship and introduce you to some of the crew, and make you feel as comfortable as possible.” Talzon says “with that I have duties to attend to so I'll take my leave of you now, don't forget to stop by the engine room today Paul.” I respond to Talzon “I'm sure that I will make it to the engines” then I reply to Adelind. “Very well where should we start.” Well since you are now on the ship if you wish you may remove your clothing, you can pick them up here should you decide to leave the ship at anytime. She adds come into the office so you will be more comfortable. As I enter the office I see a few smaller plants arranged around the room, there are two wooden desk in the room sitting about 1.5 meters apart, its not a very big office but will accommodate 4 to 5 people comfortably. I begin to remove my shirt and she says “ here let me help you with that and Adelind begins removing my shirt for me she lays it across the back of a chair then proceeds to remove my pants, with her assistance I start becoming aroused , she slides my pants down and my erect cock springs forth, Adelind says “Well now we can't have you walking around the ship in this condition now can we” she gently pushes me back onto one of the desk then she reaches down and takes my cock into her hand and begins stroking it, then she kneels in front of me and quickly wraps her tongue around my swollen cock. Just then the door opens and Katherine walks in and says “mind if I join”. I respond “of course not you are welcome any time my dear “ is this common greeting on this ship? I ask “actually yes” Adelind says, “sex is very open here, even if you are mated with one it is still allowed if you wish it.”Katherine adds “and it doesn't matter who its with as long as both or all allow it” by the way Talzon told me I might be able to find you here. Valesz should be on the ship shortly she was almost finished with her interview with the equines , I think that they will be joining the ship as well. Oh Talzon also mentioned that Zipper would be working on the sensor array until you get there so you can take your time. I'm going to have to thank him for that. Just then Adelind takes my cock into her mouth, and begins working up and down my hard shaft, and Katherine kneels beside Adelind and they begin sharing my cock like it was a lollipop, taking turns licking and sucking on it. Then Talzon enters the room, well I see that Adelind is already teaching you about the ship rules he says with a big grin. Then Adelind says “why don't you join us.” Adelind stands up and greets Talzon with a kiss, then sits on the opposing desk I stand up and pat the desk for Katherine to sit down. We begin kissing then I start working my way down Katherine so that I am now kneeling in front of her she gracefully places her legs on top of my shoulders and I begin licking her lusciously wet pussy. Talzon does the same for Adelind, I can hear Adelind moaning in pleasure while Katherine begins grating her hips into my face. I reach up and begin teasing her now hard nipples with my fingers, she wraps her legs tightly around my head, pulling me even closer to make me drive my tongue deeper into her wet and sweet pussy. I can feel her climax building as she reaches down and takes hold of my head with her hands. I feel her pussy begin to contract almost rhythmically on my waiting tongue. As her sweet juices begin to flow from her I make to to catch every drop as it oozes out onto my tongue. Then I hear Adelind scream out in pleasure I turn to see Talzon's long snake like tongue darting in and out of Adelind as she wraps her tail around Talzon's head and forces him to bury his muzzle deep in to her extremely wet pussy. I glance down and see that Talzon has become quite hard and his cock is protruding quite nicely from its captive sheath. I can't help but think about what Valesz told me that male dragons were not quite as big as I was, he is about 14 to 15 cm where I'm about 21.6 cm in length while I was noticing Talzon's member I hadn't realized that Adelind had released Talzon from her grip, and they were now looking at me. Adelind says “ nice cock you have there come here and let me have some of that.” then Katherine say “Go on you know you want to.” Then Talzon stands up and steps over by Katherine while Adelind stands up and gives me a kiss sending her tongue half way down my throat. By this time Katherine is also standing by her desk both of the females turn at the same time and bend over the desk just as I step behind Adelind she wraps her long tail around my waist and pulls me towards her, and exclaims give it to me now. I can't stand waiting any longer. I guide myself to her wet luscious pussy, I gently slip the head in she begins to moan in pleasure, then pulls me all the way in to the hilt with her powerful tail. She is so tight I feel that I might explode right then. She screams in both pleasure and pain, as her body has never had such a large intrusion before, she relaxes and lets her body become use to this new feeling. And I relax a bit to allow my waves of pleasure to subside slightly. I lean forward and begin licking and sucking on her firm and silvery scaled breast, her nipples already hard from all of the sexual excitement. She reaches around me with her clawed hands and begins to drag her nails across my back. I take this as a sigh that she wants me to continue thrusting my cock in and out of her, and I gladly oblige her I pull back so the head of my cock is hovering just inside of her. She again drags her claws into my back this time digging in a bit just enough to draw a little blood and pulls me all the way in again with her tail and says “ don't tease me like that I want to feel your cock filling me up. I begin thrusting into her hard this time, and she moans in pleasure and says “YES, Thats what I want.” I can hear Katherine moaning loudly behind me, but I don't turn this time, I need to stay focused on the female in front of me. I continue pounding this luscious creature. Then I feel a tail probing around my butt this tail expertly finds its mark and works it's way into me. Then I realize that Adelind's tail is now teasing my nipples. It has to be Talzon that is now exploring my body his tail feels like its in about 12 cm , and its turning me on even more with each thrust. I'm still pounding hard into Adelind she releases her tail from me then I hear Talzon moan deeply almost an eerie moan, then I realize that Adelind's tail has made a new mark of its own she is now pleasing Talzon too. I can feel Adelind climax building her pussy now squeezing hard around my cock she begins to scream out in pleasure, she digs her nails into my back and Talzon thrust deeper into me, and by now my climax is at its peek and I begin to explode deep inside of this beautiful dragoness, Talzon thrust into me again and I keep pumping my hot juices into Adelind. Then I hear Katherine moan loudly again she is about to cum herself , then I feel Adelind's tail moving between my legs she is thrusting her tail deep into Talzon I hear him moan again with that eerie sound and Katherine collapses down onto the desk. Then I feel Talzon's tail slide out of me and hit the floor with a thud, then I hear the thud of Adelind's tail hitting the floor. I look deep into Adelind's beautiful golden eyes and say “Thank you that was wonderful.” she responds “No thank YOU, I have never had an orgasm like that before” Talzon stands up and says “There is a shower room just around the corner, we need to get cleaned up and back to business at hand.” Then I stand up and help Adelind off of the desk as she stands up she wraps her arms around my neck and gives me a nice kiss (as if to say thank you again ) I respond by wrapping my arms around her and kissing her back. After a moment we both break the kiss and head down the hall to the shower, there were eight shower heads in this room. We each stood under our own shower and quickly washed off. I was the first done , as I have very little hair and no scales to clean. Skin has at least one advantage there. I walk over to Katherine and begin helping her scrub her fur clean rubbing the soap all over her body, she says “Be careful not to get something started again.” I'm just helping you get clean I can see there are a few spots that its hard for you to reach, then I glance over towards Adelind and see that Talzon has decided to take after me and help Adelind get clean, he is gently scrubbing the scales that she cant quite reach. Then Katherine is now all lathered up she begins to rinse off she pulls her head out of the running water opens her eyes, and I give her a very passionate kiss, then say “I think I'm really going to enjoy being on this ship.” Then I turn and grab a towel and hand it to Katherine as she turns the shower off, she responds with “ Thank you , and I think that everyone will also enjoy you being on this ship as well.” just then both Talzon and Adelind both say “ We know we will”, I simply smile and say thank you. We all finish drying off and put our towels in the reclamation unit, Talzon suggest that we head for the bridge to get acquainted with the main crew. I'm heading to astrometrics to help Zipper with the sensor array it will probably take a couple of hours to get that finished. Zipper and I will meet you in the engine room then. I respond “Sounds good. Ill see you then” Katherine says”good I'm heading to the bridge myself I'll go with the two of you, I need to run some test on the communications array. Then Adelind takes my right hand in hers and Katherine takes the other and we walk down the hall, Adelind says to Katherine let's take lift pad 3 I want to stop by the galley and get something to eat” Katherine “sounds good to me, how about you Paul?” I respond “I could use a light lunch. Is there someone there that can cook my meat, I can't eat it raw like dragons do” Adelind responds “no but there is everything you need to prepare it yourself” That will do nicely. We arrive at the galley and I begin looking for a small steak but most of what I see are steaks that are far to big for me to eat, Adelind says “If you want you can take part of mine I'm not quite that hungry myself.” so I find a knife and cut about a 230 gram piece from Adelind's steak. She looks and ask “ is that all you are going to eat?” I reply no I'm going to have a salad as well she says “ I thought that humans were carnivorous like dragons. But you eat both meat and vegetables?” I reply “yes humans eat meat and vegetables and a few things in between.” (with a grin) she smiles slyly realizing what I meant. I take my meat over to the cooking area and toss it into a skillet, add a little seasoning flip it, add my seasoning to the other side and flip it one more time then flip it out on to my plate. Adelind says I thought you were going to cook it all the way like I have see another human do once before. I thought it was disgusting that he wasted that meat by cooking it until it was a brownish gray all the way through. No I like my steak very rare but I can't eat it totally raw then I walk over to the salad bar and fill a small bowl with an array of vegetables some that I don't know what they are but look delicious just the same. Katherine looks at my bowl and points to a small vegetable, and says “be careful that one is quite spicy.” So I take a little nibble from that vegetable it looks kind of like a star fruit just much smaller, and is orange in color. Its not so hot that I cant eat it. To put it on a scale of 1 to 10 I would give it a 6. Then I pop it into my mouth, Katherine looks at me astonished I can't believe you just ate that thing whole like that. I tell her that on Earth we have some peppers that make that seem quite mild, and that I found it rather delicious. Katherine says “you continue to surprise me.” I reply “good I hope that I can continue to do so” Adelind says “You humans are strange creatures, interesting but strange.” we finish our meal. Katherine says “ I think we can skip the desert this time” and smiles at me. Then we head to the lift pad once again the females take my hands. We walk another 30 meters and Adelind says here's lift pad 3, this one will take us right to the bridge, it looks like an open elevator with only hand rails around it and its circular in shape. Then we all step onto the pad and Adelind presses a button and up we go, Adelind says there are only 3 levels to the ship , we were on the third level, and the bridge is on the first level at the top of the ship. I ask what level is the engine room on, it is on the third level, at the rear of the ship although the engine room has access points on all three levels its main entry is third level. Katherine says “we are here, the bridge is right through that door, and point across the hall way. Adelind takes the lead she steps off the pad and across the hall the bridge door opens as I step towards the bridge door an alarm sounds. Adelind says “ computer intruder override” the alarm stops. Katherine tells me that its because no one without level 3 clearance and up is allowed on the bridge, but we will be fixing that in just a minute, the engine room is the same, the only 2 rooms that have voice activated computer are the bridge and the engine room, then Katherine and I enter the bridge. There are four computer stations to each side of the bridge and 2 stations in the middle and a large heads-up display in the front to my right I see Jalad and say “Hello” he responds in kind “ Hello , welcome to the bridge” Adelind takes my hand and walks me to one of the computer stations, and says “ computer create access for Mr. Paul Curtis engineer level 5, the computer responds “access created” the computer then ask “ Mr Paul Curtis Please create an access code.” I respond “ Alpha ,Gama, Omega 1011, Green” the computer responds” Mr. Paul Curtis you now have access level 5 through out the ship” just then Valesz walks onto the bridge, Jalad says” Captain on Deck.” everyone stands. I walk over to greet her and she extends her hand, I politely take her hand and gently press my lips to her smooth cool hand, remembering what Talzon said that he had never seen her invite any male to her quarters , I thought that I might need to keep full respect on the bridge, especially when it comes to Valesz. Valesz ask “Is Adelind taking care of you Mr. Curtis?” I respond yes she is doing a wonderful job. She responds “Carry on then.” Katherine says “ I need to get my test run on the communications array, I will meet you later perhaps for dinner” I respond “dinner it is then … maybe even some desert” she simply smiles and walks away. Adelind turns me towards the two consoles in the middle of the bridge this is Lakia our tactical officer and just in case you can't tell she is Roo. Hello Lakia nice to meet you, I have never met a Roo before. She respond “ likewise” ( I don't think I need to describe Lakia I'll just let you use your own imagination for her :> ) Adelind says “and this is Drake he is our helmsman” Hello Drake pleasure to meet you. Drake responds “hello and welcome aboard” ( Drake is a handsome black dragon he is about the same size as Talzon, a good physique, his scales are very shiny like mirrors all over his body) Adelind says “ we need to cover the rest of the ship” then I head for the door, with Adelind right behind me. The door closes behind us. Adelind says that on the bridge we need to maintain a very professional appearance, and it was starting to get to personal for the captain. So I decided I had better get you out of there. I can show you your quarters, then we can head for the engine room. Sounds good to me I replied. Quarters are on the second level, oh and by the way if I were you I would avoid Lakia she loves to fight and she is very good at it. I wouldn't want you to get hurt. Well then I guess I'll just have to challenge her to a match now won't I , but the engines come first.. Adelind responds “ I don't know if your crazy or stupid , or worse yet Both”. We will see , where is the rec. room? Adelind responds “its on the way to your quarters. But its more like a section there are several rooms.” Good thats what I was hoping. Adelind says” here is a lift pad that will take us close to the rec. area”. We get onto the pad and Adelind presses a button and down we go. Adelind says “on the right this is the pool room , where we play water sports. swim what ever. Here we have the physical contact room for the guys that like to get a little rough, the walls and floor are padded to help reduce injury I respond “Perfect, I was hoping you were going to say that, and do we have a doctor on board.” Adelind responds , well he is not a doctor more like a nurse.” can he fix broken bones and simple abrasions? She quickly responds “yes, but if any thing serious happens we will have to head for a station and hope that we make it in time.” I say , “thats all I need to see of the rec. area for now. Perhaps you can give me a more detailed tour later.” she responds “very well then to the quarters” she says “ we are near the center of the ship your quarters are near the engine room, room 241, I say then the room the the 4 of us were in is just about there and I point to the floor just to my left. She responds “correct your learning this ship well” I state that I have always had a good sense of direction. Then my room should be about 139.5 meters that way on the right right? Adelind says “ thats about right , have you been on a ship like this one before?” I respond “no but I know that this ship is about 300 meters long and you said that we were about mid ship, its just a little math. And I noticed that all the rooms on the right have odd numbers and the left even numbers that meant that my room had to be on the right.” Something else that I noticed was the fact that the thrusters are having a bit of a time holding position so I would guess that the ship's cargo must be an Ore , probably going to a shipyard to build more ships. She responds “ You can tell that by the movement of the ship, and yes you are correct again , her cargo is titanium and we are going to a dragon shipyard. But how could you tell that.” Its easy actually the gravitational field produced from the station is pulling on the mass of the load and the thrusters have to work harder to keep the ship in position. Every now and then I could feel the thrusters push the ship about 1-2 cm, I know its not much but I could feel it. That reminds me after I get the engines back in order I need to work on the inertial dampeners too. Adelind says “here we are your quarters” as I approach the door it opens and we enter, the quarters are only slightly smaller than my room on the station but there is no kitchen, ( I won't need one in my room anyway) I look around and walk into the adjoining room it's the bed room and it has a king size bed, ( I think to my self bed your going to get plenty of use and not for sleeping) I turn and say “it's a little sparse but that is easy to fix. I have some photo's of home that will go on these walls. And a couple of plants. This will be perfect.” Adelind says “ I'm Glad that you like it” I ask “ will I need any credits while I'm on the ship” she responds “ no not really, we have most everything you will need” Good then if it's ok tonight I will bring my things aboard. There's a few things that I will need to get, I am expecting a shipment of earth food tonight too, what perfect timing. I will be able to treat a few guest to an earth meal on occasion and have plenty of room to entertain when I have free time. All right let's go to the engine room I believe I have a lot of work to do. Adelind replies “We can use the 2nd level entry now that you have clearance.” We exit my room and head for the engine room. Its not long before we are entering the engine room, there is a lift pad in the room that we take down to the 1st level. On the way down we see Zipper and Talzon they both meet us at the lift pad, Hello again Talzon , Zipper. They both respond “ Hello” then Talzon says glad you found your way to the engine room. I was starting to wonder if you got lost on the way.” I reply “no not lost just had a few details to work out and learn the ship like you wanted, I know where everything is I need. Except the doctor, but for now that can wait, I'm sure if I need a doctor someone will get me there. Now about these engines... I know that she needs work but how fast will she go in her current state, and what happens ? Zipper responds “ we can get up to 3xl (simply put thats 3 x the speed of light) but at that speed the ship becomes unstable and shaky. So we have been running at 2xl to keep a smooth ride.” Sounds simple enough, we have 3 days to get the ship back in shape correct ? Talzon responds “correct” good enough I'll have these engines back in top shape by tomorrow afternoon. Possibly by tonight if we can get two more workers Zipper says “ Squeaky come over here for a minute” then from around the engine core comes a meerkat. Zipper says” Paul this is Squeaky” Hello Squeaky, you don't mind squeezing into tight places do you ? Squeaky responds “ nope sure don't (squeak, squeak)” Great you'll be perfect for a job I need done later. Talzon says “ ok squeaky you can go back to what you were doing.” Squeaky replies “ sure thing (squeak, squeak)” In an instant he disappears. Well there is no doubt why he is called squeaky. (And everyone laughs.) the plasma injectors should be over here. Zipper says how the hell did you know that? It took me two weeks to learn where everything was on these engines” Talzon says “well I guess Valesz did make a good choice when she hired you, I'll find that worker for you but he or she may not know a lot about engines.” before you go, can you have Jalad come down here in about an hour, I have a heavy job and I will need his help for about 15 minutes. Talzon Replies “ you got it , but there is something you need to know he does find you fascinating” before I can reply Talzon is gone. OK Zipper back to the engines I need a quantum spanner to get these injectors back in line. Zipper replies “all I have is a micro spanner.” No wonder you can't get the injectors aligned, I'll bet they are at least 12 microns out of alignment. Can I have Squeaky for about 20 minutes or so ? Zipper replies “I guess so he isn't doing anything real important at the moment.” Thank you, Squeaky I have a job for you. In a flash Squeaky was standing in front of me “ Yes Sir” ok first thing Don't call me Sir I work just like you do, and secondly I need you to go the office by the port on the back of the chair you will find my shirt in the left pocket you will find a black chip, you will need that to get into my room on the station, Room number 354 enter and look to your left against the far wall you will see my tool chest on the pad enter code 1101 and that will release the tool chest and activate the anti-gravity unit bring the chest here please. Squeaky replies ”you got it, back in a flash” and in an instant he was gone. Damn that little guy is quick. While we are waiting for Squeaky I need to go see the doctor. Zipper “ are you hurt?” no I'm not hurt he has a measuring device that I need to borrow, do you have a laser torch? Zipper “yes I have that” good then lets go see the doctor. Zipper leads the way. So Zipper what can you tell me about Lakia? Zipper replies “avoid pissing her off at any cost, did you notice that scar on Jalad's arm yes but I didn't think anything of it well Lakia did it she almost tore his arm off with a single kick. It took the doctor 3 hours to put him back together, good thing we were at a station or he might not have that arm today.” I'm thinking about challenging her to a fight. Zipper “Are you crazy or just plain stupid” You know this is the second time that I have mentioned it and this is the second time that I was ask if I was stupid or crazy. Zipper “ OK heres the infirmary” then the door opens and we enter. Hi Doc. I'm Paul I'm the new engineer, I have a little favor to ask of you. Doc “ how can I help you today Paul, I would like to borrow an optical scanner for about 10 minutes. Doc “ is there something wrong with your eyes? “ No its the most accurate measuring device on the ship and I need to take 2 measurements. Doc”Sure thing but do you mind if I watch what you are doing?” not at all , do you have clearance for the engine room? Doc “Yes I do” alright then lets get to the engine room. On the way back to the engine room Zipper pops up and says , “ hey doc this fool wants to fight Lakia” Doc looks at me and ask “ why would you want to fight Lakia?” well its simple really her species is a warrior race , they hold respect and honor in very high regards, by challenging her to a fight she will see it as a challenge to her authority but then by fighting her she will have respect for me. And I suspect I will have quite a friendship with her. Doc , “well I can try to patch you up as best I can, but no guarantee's” just as we get back to the engine room, here comes Squeaky, with my tool chest. It's only been 10- 12 minutes. I walk over behind Squeaky and lift his tail and say “ OK where are you hiding that rocket booster I expected you to be gone at least 20 minutes. Ya know we just might get the engines back to 100% tonight. Thank you Squeaky Squeaky replies” your welcome, anything else boss” not at the moment . I take the optical scanner from the Doc and turn the sensors facing outward I walk over by the engine core and ask Zipper for the laser torch. He hands me the torch I then hold the torch in the center between the optical sensors I find dead center of the ship and score the floor in front the the engine core. Then I go to my tool chest and pull out a couple of anti-gravity pads I hand one to Doc and one to Zipper hold these on each side of the engine core at the floor leave them sticking out about 2 cm in front of the core, thats good then I take the optical scanner and find center of the engine core and make a small score on the casing. Zipper ask “ what are you doing? “ I respond , take a look at the 2 scores I just made , how far apart do you think they are? Zipper “about 7 cm maybe 8 cm.” ok then I take the scanner and the pads I place a pad by each mark and take another measurement it reads 7.2350045 cm. Now for this ION engine to preform at 100% the engine has to be aligned with the ship or the field it produces will be off , this ship is 300 m the field is off by lets just say 7cm to make the math easy by the time the field reaches the front of the ship the field is out by 2.4 m thats where your vibration is coming from. Now lets get these injectors aligned. Squeaky I have another important job for you. And here he is , right on cue squeaky I'm going to teach you how to use a Quantum spanner, I will do the first one then the rest of the injectors you get to do alright ? Squeaky “ sure thing boss” the first thing you do is make sure that that injector array is off-line before you open any in that array. Squeaky “ no problem boss” lets find out what the engine efficiency is, Computer what is the current engine efficiency? Computer replies “the engines are operating at 78%” OK now we have a base line to start it can only get better from here. I reach up and open the first plasma injector hold up the quantum spanner and show Squeaky how to adjust the injectors. Then I hand Squeaky the Quantum spanner , its your turn. Squeaky “ no problem boss I got this(squeak, squeak)” I watch as he preforms the job perfectly. Then I return to the engine core Zipper “Your not going to let Squeaky adjust the injectors are you?” why not with the quantum spanner its almost fool proof and with his speed he will be done in an hour where it would take you and I 4 hours to complete. If you would please grab 2 more anti-gravitation units out of the top box. Zipper gets the units and brings them over by the core. Then says “These are not going to pick up the engine core.” I reply “ no they will not but they will make it lighter so we can move the core, thats why I ask for Jalad to come down. Just then the door opens Jalad says “Hello Paul you needed my help?” actually yes you timing is impeccable, we just attached the anti-gravity units to the core but we need your help to slide the unit over 7.23 cm , I made marks on the floor and on the core to help align it up. We are almost ready to move the core, Zipper would you please release the mag-locks. Zipper replies “ sure thing boss(squeak squeak)” OK smart-ass. Computer what is the engine efficiency? Computer “81.2%” looks like Squeaky is doing a fine job. Now if you will engage the anti-gravity units on that side, I'll get these then I will come over there and we can move the core, the anti-gravity units begin beeping they are syncing up with each other then they all make the same tone we can push.... beep beep beep ….. BEEEEEP!! , OK push , on 3 1.. 2... 3... , the cores slides over we stop only about 1cm to go. On 3 1.. 2.. 3.. push and the core slides again . Thats it perfect now a quick measurement to make sure its setting right. I take the optical scanner and check the distance at the back of the core and check them against the measurement at the front of the core. Perfect only 3 microns off with the core. OK Zipper if you would please engage the mag-locks while I remove the anti-gravity units. I place the anti-gravity units back in my tool chest. Computer what is the engine efficiency? Computer “88.4%”, Squeaky, how are you doing back there? Squeaky “only 2 more arrays left (squeak, squeak)” then a few minutes later I hear Squeaky Say “All done... (squeak, squeak).” Computer what is the engine efficiency? The computer responds “98.7%” thats good enough for 4.5xl we can make our destination now in about 1 week and 2 days instead of the 3 weeks scheduled. Damn we are done before dinner, I already have plans for dinner but I feel that I owe all of you something for helping get these engines back in shape ahead of schedule. I reach into the top case of my tool chest and grab a credit chip it has 5 credits on it more than enough for all of you to get a nice dinner on the station, I recommend Zot's .Take it and go enjoy tonight. I still have a little work to finish here. They each say thank you and head out the door. OK now I have the engine room all to my self and I intend to keep it that way for a while... I walk over to the viso screen and call Zot's , one of the waitress's answers the screen hello this is Zot's you kill it we grill it … I say hello ,I'm sending 4 there for dinner a wolfen, 2 dragons and a meerkat, I want u to make sure they have a good time tonight I'm transferring 5 credits that should be enough shouldn't it? The waitress responds “ I will make sure they have a good time” I reply thank you and have a good night. End transmission... Computer what is the status of the inertial dampeners? The computer responds “7 of 8 dampeners are functioning within specification” OK . Computer show me a diagram of the 8 dampeners and show me the faulty dampener. The viso screen lights up with a full schematic and the faulty dampener is up by the bridge and bye the looks of the schematics I'm going to need squeaky again. It's getting late, the dampener can wait until tomorrow. I probably should go up to the bridge and report the engine condition.... well I hadn't planned on this chapter having any sex in it but it just rolled out so smooth I had to keep going, hope you enjoyed reading it. Unic0rn69 |
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Posted: Jul 31 2009, 01:44 PM
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It is getting better all the time. Please kept up the good work
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Dude your going above and beyond the call of duty with this one. I can't wait for the next chapter. Another 10 for you :rock:
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OMG Squeeky is the best. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for putting a Meerkitty in. I LOVE IT.
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Ok everyone , i can't help it i'm going to tease the hell out of every one this time
im working on ch 6 and Paul has just challenged Lakia to a match in the rec center. will she kill Paul , is it possible for Paul to win. , tune in tomorrow same dragon time , same dragon channel ..... {POW} {BAM} {CRASH} , now who can tell me where i got that from if you remember the show ??? ok yes it was a bit of a rip off but what the hey lol Unic0rn69 |
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tune in tomorrow same Bat time , same Bat channel ..... {POW} {BAM} {CRASH}
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Woo- Hoo!!!!! More Story line posts :rolleyes:
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Great story m8, keep up the good work =)
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