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| popol |
Posted: Jul 20 2009, 12:15 AM
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well it seems there is a new plot building up i hope that you will not wait too long for our hungry mind to read another thank to you BF
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| dragoneyes |
Posted: Jul 20 2009, 04:19 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 768 Member No.: 278930 Joined: 9-May 06
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Exciting new chapters, and you just know Gina is going to get herself in more trouble. Please continue writing. Thank You.
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| calzane |
Posted: Jul 20 2009, 07:18 PM
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Supreme Being ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 5189 Member No.: 203367 Joined: 15-December 05
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:clapping: TY for the addition a10 an :please: :rock: write on :rock:
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| db7077 |
Posted: Jul 21 2009, 06:34 AM
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What could possibly go wrong with Gina's plan? Can't wait to find out. A 10 from me.
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| jimbo60 |
Posted: Jul 21 2009, 12:32 PM
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Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 1153 Member No.: 476274 Joined: 5-April 07
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what will he do to her I am ready for it have a great day jim
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| beastialityfreak |
Posted: Jul 21 2009, 04:49 PM
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CHAPTER – 18
I started with the pack of large male dogs we kept penned up in the first kennel. I stepped into the room like cage and carefully latched the door behind me. The dogs seemed more excited than usual, even for feeding time. I thought nothing of it however, setting the heavy bag of feed on the floor and proceeded to tear it open. "Hey! Look out dammit!" I shouted in protest as the gang of dogs closed in and knocked the bag over in their frenzy. Grumbling, I squatted down, trying to collect the mess into a pile before the pack spread it all over the pen. To my surprise however, they didn't pay any attention to the spilled pile of dog food on the floor. Instead, they seemed just seemed happy to see me, closing in from all sides, whining and rubbing up against me. Then I felt a furry snout slip between my legs and brush up against my crotch. His cold nose pressed into my panties and then he licked me through the thin cotton material, asshole to clit in one long swipe I yelped in surprise and lashed out with my hand, feigning the indignant outrage of a schoolgirl just felt up. The fiend quickly dodged in retreat, and I felt my honor had been satisfied. However, that situation just barely resolved, another furry muzzle probed my crotch, this time from behind. Still squatting, I swiped at him, but caught only air. Several other dogs pressed in. Giggling at this game, I sought to maintain my modesty, grabbing the hem of my mini skirt, trying to tuck it inward and cover myself from their rude advances. However, it was far too short to provide any degree of protection, so I started to stand up. Suddenly there was a tugging at my skirt. One of the dogs had latched onto the material and thrashed his head back and forth. Not yet filled out to womanly dimensions, my hips lacked sufficient swell to tightly seat that article of clothing and resist the downward force. In a half crouch, my hands shot to my waistline in an attempt to catch the slipping material. I was too late. The skirt was tugged off and finally caught, about halfway down my legs. The little mini wrapped around my knees and tangled me up like a small straight jacket. I stumbled forward, dropping to my hands and knees. The dogs followed me down, closing in. I tried to stand, but found myself trapped and snared. In moving forward, several members of the dog pack now stood firmly on the mini skirt, which pinned my knees to the floor. "Stop it!" I protested, but only half-heartedly. One of the few things that I did enjoy about my job was roughhousing around with the larger dogs. I giggled childishly and tried to push them away, but they closed right back in. My panty clad rump swayed in the air as I laughed and wriggled on the floor, trying to squirm out of the tangle of my skirt which held me pinned. With my knees wrapped tightly together, I had a poor stance for maintaining my balance. My playful thrashing about threw me off, and a gentle nudge by one of the dogs behind me was all it took to send me sprawling awkwardly to the floor of the kennel. With a playful bark and growl, the dog who had initiated my disrobing lunged for the mini skirt. Freed of my weight, it slipped the rest of the way down my legs and was tugged off my feet in a few quick jerks. Pleased with his prize, the doggy trotted off to a secluded corner of the pen and proceeded to busy himself by nuzzling the crotch area of the skirt. Meanwhile, I lay sprawled, spread-eagle on the floor as the remainder of the pack pranced around above me. Again, I felt their cold furry snouts investigate my panties. Now, I might be a naive kid, but even I managed to figure out at this point that they had taken an interest in the distinctly female odor issuing from my juicy panties. I was so dewy wet; you didn't need sophisticated canine senses to pick up the musky smell of my female pheromones. Hot girl pussy was in the air, even I could smell it. I found the scent of myself in heat very exciting, so the effect my wafting twat was having on this pack of dogs was understandable. As I lay prone, wet furry snouts pushed into my cotton-clad crotch from above and behind, probing, licking my pussy through the moistening material. Others squirmed and prodded at the taunt elastic around my thighs, seeking to sneak inside along that route. A cold nose pried between my quivering butt cheeks and pressed firmly against my puckered anus. The dog snorted with delight, and a puff of warm air caressed the opening to my rectum through my panties. I shivered in response, and felt my puckered asshole blossom open. The snouts in my crotch pressed in harder, slurping at my gooey panties, but realizing that the tastier treasure of my plump pussy mound lay concealed just beyond. Growling noises of frustration were uttered as the pack tried in vain to find a way past the persistent panty barrier and into my irresistible honey pot. Perhaps I should have taken notice of the growing sense of urgency which was whipping the dog pack into a lustful frenzy, but all that delightful licking and probing in my loins had dulled my sense of reason. Besides, I didn't really have an understanding of the situation I was creating. |
| dragoneyes |
Posted: Jul 21 2009, 05:19 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 768 Member No.: 278930 Joined: 9-May 06
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I guess she's going to be the main course in a doggy gang bang. Please continue writing. Thank You.
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| calzane |
Posted: Jul 21 2009, 06:30 PM
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:P agree :please: :rock: write on :rock: :beer: |
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| Sleuth |
Posted: Jul 23 2009, 07:59 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 2 Member No.: 266743 Joined: 17-April 06
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Your writing style and the character has really changed over the last three entries. It is a shame I saw this portion of the story on a different website years ago.
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| joebitsko |
Posted: Jul 23 2009, 08:30 PM
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Indeed... Not too much wrong with continuing someone else's story from years past but credit should be given to the original author and perhaps even an attempt to contact that author for approval to continue or take it another direction. |
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| beastialityfreak |
Posted: Jul 24 2009, 05:30 PM
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dear sleuth, i guess its also a shame for you if you dont understand what is written at the first page of the story....wish yu best of luck.. |
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| beastialityfreak |
Posted: Jul 24 2009, 05:34 PM
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dear joebitsko, as you are a new reader here so i should not blame you for that...because its a old chapter here...where you tell its stolen from some place and all that blah blah...please read the first page carefully... |
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| joebitsko |
Posted: Jul 24 2009, 10:05 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 27 Member No.: 38911 Joined: 4-August 04
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My apologies. I do not recall reading/seeing that message in red before the first chapter, either on this current thread or the original thread that was closed due to age violation. I copy each new chapter/addition of this story and all others to a text file for reading off-line at a later time. Once I began reading, I recalled this story mirrors the original by Jenna Tarp posted on a different story site back in 2005-2006, including formatting and such, but did not say anything until someone else mentioned it. Sorry for "piling on"...
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| Sleuth |
Posted: Jul 24 2009, 11:34 PM
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Oh I understood perfectly well what was written on the first page. Perhaps I'm old fashioned, but I see a large diference between paying homage to a story, as is your stated intent on the first page, and copying and pasting the story word for word and presenting it in a manner that would lead people not familiar with the story to believe it was your own work. All you have done is alter the characters' names and removed/changed the underage references. The fact that you wrote this:
before chapter 15 and then in chapter 16 started inserting another writer's work makes your intentions all the more dubious in my opinion. While I'm not the original author and have no claims to the original story your last three chapters reek of plagerism. As a fellow fan of the original story I ask that you do the right thing and credit the original author for the chapters that are not yours. I would post the original story and let everyone come to their own conclusion, but as I stated earlier it does contain underage refrences and I have no desire to lose my account. Now that I have stated the matter thoroughly I hope you have a change of heart on the matter and consider doing the right thing. |
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| jimbo60 |
Posted: Jul 25 2009, 04:44 AM
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Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 1153 Member No.: 476274 Joined: 5-April 07
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please continue I am enjoying the story. If their is no copyright you may use parts of someone elses work or the whole. If it is copied verbatum you need to acknowledge the author as a common curtesy. The story is great and deserves the re-write. Please continue jim
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