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| Onasi |
Posted: Nov 6 2008, 07:19 AM
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My second story
A man experiences a little more than just the wild outdoors while out camping. Feedback and critique is appreciated. Please enjoy ^_^ John sat down upon a rock jutting out from the cliffside exhausted. He'd been planning this camping trip for some time now but had'nt counted on having to travel so far before finding a suitable place to make camp. Opening up a bottle of water he surveyed the surrounding landscape, admiring the lush greenery of the Wyoming foothills. After resting a while he decided to make camp, having chosen a place against an overhanging cliff near a clear spring of fresh streamwater. By the time he'd finished the sun had already begun to set so he decided it best to bed down for the night. His slumber was interrupted several times that night by a noise he could'nt quite place, a sweet melodic tone that filled his mind with a sense of longing................ Awakening the next day after a restless nights slumber he climbed out of his tent and, after a brief inspection, decided he was in dire need of a bath. Fortunately he'd camped near the spring for just this reason and after removing his clothes waded into the cool waters. As he splashed water across his face to remove the grime caked to it his eyes caught a faint hint of movement. Fearing he'd been spotted he quickly turned towards the image to find a large wolf gazing at him from across the spring. Then as quickly as he'd spotted it the wolf turned and dashed off into the surrounding woodlands. Blinking to clear his vision he soon realized that the alluring tones which had interrupted his slumber periodically throughout the night had been the howl of a wolf. After he'd redressed he spent the remainder of the day pondering the appearance of the wolf and how its cries from the night before had filled him with a sense of passion and longing, but for what he could'nt quite place. As he lay in bed that night he found it impossible to sleep, as his mind kept drifting back to the large wolf and the emotions it had aroused within him. His head quickly snapped up as he heard a faint noise outside his tent. Opening the tents flap to peer outside his gaze was met by a pair of large glowing yellow orbs, the eyes of the wolf. He froze, not knowing whether he should try to retreat back into his shelter or stay still and wait for the wolf to make a move. Slowly, almost timidly, he raised one hand up as if to touch the creature but left it frozen inches from its muzzle. Then, just as slowly, the wolf inched forward to sniff his outstretched hand and reached out with its tongue to lick along his fingers. As the wolf licked his hand he felt a strong longing and compassion, and without truly thinking presented the inside of his shelter to the beast.Soon after he'd withdrawn the opening the wolf moved inside allowing John a thorough glimpse of its figure. He quickly noted that the wolf was female and the earthen smell that seemed to waft from her form made his head spin with a dizzying sensation. Not really caring whether or not letting a wolf into his tent had been a wise decision he yet again outstretched his arm, using it to gently stroke the wolfs grey and black coat. As he continued to stroke her he felt a feral lust take control of his emotions and his strokes began to move closer and closer to her vulva. She seemed to sense his intentions and to his delight shifted her position presenting her warm genitals for his inspection. He felt his cock grow hard as he began to massage around her open lips, then he gently inserted a finger into her waiting clit. As he felt her warm insides she squirmed in ecstasy bucking her hips against his hand. Her show of pleasure filled him with delight, but he needed more. He removed his finger laying down beside her majestic form and began to lick at her hole. He stuck his tongue into her folds tasting of her sweet juices. Once again his actions caused the she-wolf to shudder in ecstasy, her pleasure only serving to augment his own continually growing lust. Soon however even the sweetness of her taste could not sate his ever growing urges, and after he'd had enough he got to his knees removing his pants, prepared to plow into her with the full force of his passion. Seeming to sense his desires yet again she rose to a standing position, lifting her tail and exposing the fullness of her vaginals to his engorged cock. He could no longer hold back his wild lust, firmly seizing her hips he thrust himself into her. Her insides enveloped his cock, filling him with a pleasure beyond compare as her muscles contracted around his member. He continually thrusted into her wildy as she bucked against him, their movements filling each other with waves of pleasure. As they continued to mate, his balls slapping against her hips with each push, he felt nothing but absolute ecstasy. Then soon he felt his cock erupt, sending several hot sticky jets of cum deep into her insides. In return the wolf's juices flowed over his cock seeping out onto the ground below. He collapsed next to her stroking her and kissing her muzzle as he gazed lovingly into her deep golden eyes. As the night went on they lay together completely content in one anothers embrace. :heart: |
| Xvemon |
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:w00t: wow that was awesome and thats exactly how i picture mating with a wolf would be you get my ten and i hope to read more soon ^_^ :wub: :wub:
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| Namdus |
Posted: Nov 6 2008, 11:47 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 529 Member No.: 326362 Joined: 7-August 06
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What an exciting story, ty so much is it possible to continue more chapters? From a female's standpoint I felt it was hot and really turned me on. I have thought about wolves also only of course I would want the male.
Good luck |
| DarkMessiah1981 |
Posted: Nov 6 2008, 02:08 PM
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Fantastic story! i hope to read more from you in the future. :beer:
a 10 for you for this awesome work :w00t: |
| Onasi |
Posted: Nov 7 2008, 05:18 AM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1539 Member No.: 626841 Joined: 8-January 08
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I'm glad to see my writing is enjoyed ^_^
Although I was'nt planning on branching this into chapters, I have ideas for a few more works soon. This post has been edited by Onasi on Nov 7 2008, 05:19 AM |
| in2k9s |
Posted: Nov 7 2008, 11:17 AM
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Full time poster ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1611 Member No.: 234043 Joined: 6-February 06
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:D Great story!!!
Thanks for sharing!!! A BIG 10 from me.......in2k9s |
| siroe |
Posted: Nov 8 2008, 03:39 AM
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very nice. i hope you can put some chapters out soon. a ten for you :D
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| beastly man42 |
Posted: Nov 9 2008, 03:31 AM
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kool, nuff said. :devil2:
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| Onasi |
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 03:59 AM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1539 Member No.: 626841 Joined: 8-January 08
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Thank you all ^_^
Will write again whenever I can come up with any good ideas. |
| doggieman12345 |
Posted: Nov 10 2008, 12:03 PM
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10/10 ! great story!
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| mistressBumb |
Posted: Nov 21 2008, 03:35 PM
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10 from me B)
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| SinisterWolfenstein |
Posted: Nov 26 2008, 07:05 AM
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Great story I really enjoyed it.
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| Namdus |
Posted: Nov 26 2008, 01:38 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 529 Member No.: 326362 Joined: 7-August 06
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Well I read this story again, and was still turned on with it. Sure wish you would think about adding more chapters.
I gave you a 10 for this wonderful story. |
| Saint |
Posted: Nov 26 2008, 01:57 PM
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nice story! great work, thanks for sharing!
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| Swedishboy7 |
Posted: Nov 29 2008, 11:38 AM
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Disciple of the board Group: VIP Members Posts: 9444 Member No.: 536087 Joined: 7-July 07
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Awesome story!
10 :D |
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