In the last weeks I have read a couple of storys here on BF, that i think it´s time wright my owne down here.

Its my first story in English Language, and btw. my english skills are not so good, :(
so please don´t look so detailt on the grammar.:please:

so here´s the first Chapter

Chapter one:
the beginning



It was cold outside, it was mid of December and the Land lies under a thick layer of Snow.
Sevarez a young man of 20 years, was in his Room on the Academy of Battle magic´s, at the Kingdom of Salbarot. His size was about 5 and a half food, he has short brown Hair and deep blue Eyes like Ice.

He was sitting on a chair on his Desk, the Candles and Torches on the Wall of his small chamber makes enough light to read one of that thick Books that his Master gives him for learning the higher basics of spell creation.

With lower results he thoughts, Sevarez was a bad Mage, and he knew this. Ok, he can create a small Fireball or a Light spell, but when he try to make any catchier spell he fail t every time.

He looks around in his chamber, and his eyes fixes his Longsword that was on the storage Rack beside the Wooden Door that leaves the corridor where the Bedrooms of the Students were.

Well, in armed battle techniques he´s got no problems, he was always one of the best Students. Equal if with the Sword, Bow or the Staff!
It was rare, that he loose a Fight at the training Grounds!

Even when he went´s back to the Book, he hear screams from the yard beneath his Window. In this moment Berol another Student opened the Door to Sevarez room and fall to the Floor.

He cried in Panic, “Sevares run, they Killing everyone, they came trough the gate. Nobody can stop them”.

Sevares Jumps up from his Chair and run to the Window in his chamber, what he saw was horrible, a group of man in Black Robes where Fighting against his Student friends and the Mage´s.

Some of the Mage´s and many of the Students where Dead or lie on the ground and squirm in Pain, One of the Attackers raise his Hand against one of my Teachers in front of him, he could see that Flames spew out of the Fingertips of this black dressed man, immediately the whole Body of the Teacher burst into Flames. The burning Corpse fall onto the ground. In this moment Sevarez knew that he did not have a chance to fight against this monsters without loosing his Life.

“hey Berol do you know what they want here, or why they want kill us?” Sevarez said to Barol.

Sevarez turned around with pure fear in his Eyes, as Berol jump´t to his Feet and said “I don´t know what they want or where they are. What ever I hope I see you again.”

with this Words Berol run left site trough the corridor and then downstairs in the hall.

In the next moment Sevarez hear a blood-curdling scream from the hall and a sinister laughter. And he knew his Friend where already dead.

Sevarez takes his Sword and cloak and move in to the room adverse his own, opened the window and jump´t to the ground that about 6 feet beneath him.
He run as fast that he could to the back wall of the estate and climb´t over the wall.

He hear a Demonic voice behind him. “STOP don´t try to escape .”

Sevarez turn´t his head and saw that one of this Black dressed Bastards where about 100 feed behind him, and tried to kill Ararez.

The Academy was build on a small Mountain and Avarez run as fast that he could along the acclivity, than he felt a massively pain in his Back, as a magic dart from that Demonic Creature behind him hit his Body.

He fall over and rolled down the acclivity.
After five or six hundred feed a rock stoped his fall, pain flooded trough his complete body,
blood leaked out of his mouth then his view wends black and he gets conciousness.

After a while he heard a clear Female voice next to him, “Tiara he is alive, help me to bring him bat to the Cave.”

than Servares could fell that anyone starts to pull him down the hill,
but he was not in the condition to say a word or open an eye.

he gets conciousness again.

After hours Sevarez woke up again, he felt bad and there was a pain like every bone in his body where broken.

Another time he heard that crystal clear Voice like an Angle, “Tiara come over he wake up,” he opened his Eyes and noticed that he was in a large cave, the Sun shines trough the Entrance and he was bedded on a bed of foliage and twigs and his Wounds where covered with herbal substances.

He turned his head in the direction of that wonderful Voice, but there wasn´t an Angle or something like this, there was a large White wolf lying next to him and another stand in the right corner of the Cave.

Sevarez Freaked out and tried to stand up, in this moment this Large Wolfe next to him jumpt of and Shouted out in her Crystal clear, Angle like Voice. “CALM DOWN, we won´t hurt you, OK, so Calm down.”

like a Thunder the pain from his wounds running trough his body and he collapsed trough the ground again.

“w-where are you, w-what a-are you and and why you can speak to me?” Sevarez asked spluttering.

The other Wolfe on the corner of the Cave, also a Female, came over to the place where Sevarez lie and sit down in front of him,

than she said in a light deeper voice. “I am Tiara and this is my friend Lil.” she turned her muzzle in the direction of the second Wolfe.

Than she looked back to Sevarez with her ice blue eyes, and said.
“how you already ascertained, we are not like normal Wolfe´s, we are different, you must know, that from time to time a wolf is born by a normal Wolfe mother that is different. It is a magic creature like Unicorns or Dragons, and we are one of them. And that is the point why we can spoke to you.”

“OK, OK, I think I understand what you say to me.” Sevarez answered.

“That's fine, ok, Tiara and me will go out to catch some Food, and you should try to get some sleep by the time, we will be back as soon as possible.” Lil said to me.

The two Wolf's started to go out and I Closed my Eyes and fall into a deep sleep.




To be Continued...



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ok and here is Chapter 2

I hope you all enjoy it, it gets hot now!



Chapter 2: A new Way.


At the next morning I woke up and fell much better, I don´t know why but I don´t feel any Pain from my Wounds.

Lil lie next to me, with the Head towards my feed, I was alone with her in the Cave. I opened my Eyes to look at this gorgeous Creatures, her pure White Fur looks like fresh-fallen Snow with a shimmer like Diamonds, this awesome sight runs a shiver trough my Body.

And I think to myself. “what´s going on with me?”

I put my Hand on Lil and began to stoke her Back. Her fur feels like Silk and I can feel the warmness of her Body on my hand. In this moment she opened her wonderful blue Eyes and looked at me over her Shoulder.
“Mhh that´s nice.” She said in this lovely Angle like Voice.

Than she raised her Tail a little bit and turned it to the left site.

I lie there totally congealed and stared on her rear end.

“you like what you see?” She asked me.

I looked ashamed in her Eyes and starts to splutter.
“oh, S-Sorry I-I won´t not, I.”

“shh, its OK,” she said, raised up to her feet and lay down atop of me.

Than she starts to lick my Face with her tongue over and over again, that sends pure pleasure trough my Body and my erection starts to grown.

I roll her over to her Back and starts to kiss her Muzzle, than down her chest to her belly.
She moans and her body begun to shiver. My hands run down her chest
as my mouth sucks her nipples.
My head wandered downwards between her Hind legs and I begun to smell the flavour of her cunt.
It was sweet and musky, she spread her Hind legs to get me full access to her private area.

My Tongue explored her outer region as her juices begun to flowing.
I tasted her juice with the tip of my tongue and my mind explode, this was the best taste in my whole live.
I piling my tongue deep inside her hole and starts to eat her out.
Her entire body begun to tremble and her breath go faster and faster.
Her hips pressed against my head and she starts to yell.
I inserted a Finger in her Love hole and send her over the edge.
Her Orgasm send a flood of Juice out of her body and I tried my best to soak it all up.
The taste was overwhelming, I wait a couple of seconds before I swallow it down.

I raised my Head and take a look at her. She lay there with heavy breathing her Eyes where closed and in this moment, I know, I was fall in love with her.

She opened up her Eyes and said in a whispering voice. “Sevarez, come on and take me!”

so I put out my Shoes, shirt and pants so I crouch over her and lay down on top of her Body.
My Rock hard Member finds her wet hot opening, The heat of my Dick spreads her lips and I with light thrusts of my hips my full length slide in to her body.

We both starts to moan and waves of pure pleasure runs trough our Body's, the feeling was unbelievable,
her tight pussy was so hot and wet.

I Lowered my head an to her open muzzle and we started to kiss.
Our tongues explored the mouth of the other as I speed up the thrusts oh my hips to (f***) her harder and faster.

Her vaginal muscles contracted and her hips pressed upwards every time I thrust in her.

After about 15 minutes I feel her orgasm build up again she starts to yell again, like a flood her juices runs out of her all over my member and balls and down my legs.

That feeling sends me over the Edge with a last powerful Thrust I Shoot out my cum in her and her Vaginal muscles milked my cock for every little drip of Semen that I had.

That was to much for me and I collapsed over her, we bot lay there gasping and absolute satisfied.

I catch my breath and whispered in her Ear. “Lil I Love you!”

she licked my Face unable to say a Word and we both fall into a deep slumber, with my member still in her Body.




To be Continued....

This post has been edited by DarkMessiah1981 on Oct 8 2008, 05:25 PM

:devil2: :wub: Pretty good so far. I like it, and where it is going up til now. Do continue..

Thanks for the post :lol:

I Work hard on the next Chapter!

hope to finished it at the Weekend :D

cool, some good hard core loving him to her :devil2: :devil2: ^_^ both holes... :P

:devil2: :devil2: :devil2: We will see :devil2: :devil2: :devil2:

Lady´s and Gentleman, her is chapter three of my Story, I hope you all enjoy it. :P

Chapter 3: A new Experience

In the late Afternoon, after a Couple of Hours in sweet dreams of Lil and Me, I rouse up
by a cold and wet touch that touched my thigh,

I looked up and to see Tiara, who was sniffing at my crotch.

She raised her head and said a little bit shirty Voice, “OH thats Great, ill go out to catch us our Dinner,
and you two had nothing better to do, as to amuse you with each other.”

Then she said with a little evil grin on her Muzzle, “oh, you WILL pay for this, but not yet, now it´s Time to Eat!”

“Had everyone said DINNER?” Lil exclaimed, before I can explain this awkwarder situation, as she rolled from the position next to me, to her waist and then get up to her feed and starts to greet Tiara with a lick at the nose and a rubbing at Tiaras snout with her muzzle.

After that Tiara said to Lil. “It seems that he is in a better Condition today!”

With a big Smile on her Face Lil answered giggly. “Oh, Yes, he “is” in a better condition yet!”

Than they get together to the entrance of the Cave to carry the dead Deer that Tiara has hunted next to the Cave.

In this Time I redressed myself and collected a couple of Stave's and Branches to build a small Fireplace under a little crack in the Roof, in attention not to smoke out the whole cave.

Than I raised my right index Finger in the direction to the Fireplace and concentrate my minds on it.
Maybe one or two seconds later a small ball of fire released my Finger and em´blazed the Fireplace.

“Well done, my little Mage.” Lil said as she came back into the Cave and saw what I have done,
then I get up, take my sword and cut out a big piece of meet from the dead Deer to roast it over the Fire.

Maybe 30 minuets later we all sit around the Fire, enjoyed the meal and talked about our back round.

I find out that Tiara and Lil had meet another about one year ago and that they both run away from there packs be course there be unlike as “normal” Wolves.

I told them my History, how I grow up in a small village, up to the Time I found out that I was in the ability to use magic and then my period of training at the Academy up to the Time as this mysteriously assholes in there black Robes has all aside myself slaughtered.

The remembering of that day, made me really sad, I lowered my head looked at the ground and
said in a lower voice, “they killing everyone without any mercy, and I was to coward to do anything others as to run away.”

in this moment Lil came over to me licked a Tear from my cheek and said in a Lovely voice to me, “Sevarez, you are not coward, there was nothing you could do in this moment, if you had to try to fight against this attackers, you where be killed too.”

I Know she was right, I was alive and I had a chance to pay them back what they did to me.

I Raised my Head and looked in her wonderful blue Eyes and my sadness was away.

I embraced her chest give her a big hug and a Kiss on her Muzzle than I Whispered in her ear, “Thank you Lil, you don´t know what your words means to me”

then we lay´d down t u cuddle a little while, about five minute´s later Tiara came over to us lick´et
my nose and whispered lovely into my Ear, “now Sevarez, it´s time to pay your arrears!”
after another lick she moved to the pill of leaves, crouched her chest down to the ground, with her rear end in my direction, turned her Tail to the side and looked with half closed eyes at me and whispered,
“Lil will not to be the only one who have fun with you this Day!”

I looked down to Lil with an uncertain mien on my face, ´cause I don´t know if she was agree with this situation.

But here mien says more than thousand words, cause on her Face was a heatedly smile and than she said,
”oh, thats could be funny.”

she gets up to her feed moved over to Tiara and lay´d down next to her.

They both stared at me with a horny blaze in there Eyes.

“OK, why not!” I think to myself as I walked over to them.

I undresses myself and get down to my knees behind Tiara.

Then I grabbed Tiaras hips with both Hands and lowered my head to her gorgeous Rear end.

My nose soak´aged the sweet and musky scent of her cunt and her butthole.
I take deep breaths and moaned loud out as the scent sends shivers and waves of pleasure's through my Body.

I licked my lips and started kiss her slit, than I rammed my tongue deep into her opening and I began to eat her out. She yelled out and her whole body began to tremble as my tongue explored her pink innermost.

In the meantime Lil crows between us and starts to lick my Member and balls.

After about five minute´s I raised my head, attracted her near to me and pushed her a little bit down that my member was in a line with her butt.

With a light force of my hips my dick entered her butthole and slid´s slowly, inch by inch, into her.

She jelled out under heavy breathing, as I speed up to thrust harder and deeper into her.

With every thrust of my hips she pushed her rear against me to get my cock deeper into her body.

I inserted my index finger in her pussy to double her Pleasure.

With another deep moan her juices starts to flow out of her and Lil starts to lick up every drop she can get.

The feeling of my rock hard dick in her ass my finger and Lils tongue deep into her pussy sends Tiara over the edge. She starts to scream and another flood of juice runs out of her Cunt.

The muscle contractions of her sphincter, that her Orgasm had actuate, fells amazing around my cock.

This feeling sends waves of pleasure through my body, as my own Orgasm starts to grow and my balls began to pump a mass of sperm into my shaft, with a last hard thrust of my Hips I came, my member seems to explode in her ass and I filled her up with my Seed.

This was to much for Tiara, her hind Legs started to tremble and than she collapsed to the ground.

With a slurping my Member got out of her botthole, and I lay´d down next to Tiara to catch my breath.

Lil Started to clean up Tiara and me of every little drop of our love Juices that she found.

As she was ready and we all where clean, she lay down on my other side and we all cuddled until we fall to sleep later in that Evening.



To be continued....

A nice start for a beginner. Keep the good work up and keep practising. You will for sure become a good writer if you just train a bit more and add more detail to your story.

thanks for your posts.

and swedishboy it means a lot to me that a realy good writer like you coments my story.:wub:

This post has been edited by DarkMessiah1981 on Oct 11 2008, 10:19 AM

I just told you the truth. And thank you for the compliment ^_^
Keep training and you will soon be a very good writer too. Use a dictionary if you're uncertain about how to spell a word and read other stories to learn grammar. I wish you the best of luck with your future writing!

Thanks!

and btw. Chapter 4 is under construction. :P

So, and here is Chapter 4 of My little Story :D

Chapter 4:

It was Springtime about three months after Lil and Tiara have found me.
The land begun to wake up again and the snow was gone.
The relationship between me and the Girls, has been grow deeper and deeper in the last months and I has inchoate to suppress the memories of the last night in the Academy and was happy with my Live!

Up to this Morning. I wake up from my own scream, I was bathed in sweat and under Heavy breathing.

Tiara and Lil standing above me with scared mines, “Sevares, you are alright? We are worried about you cause we can´t wake you up in the last hour.” Lil said with panic in her Voice.

“I don´t know, I think i´m be alright” I said as I slowly calmed down and starts to exclaim.
“I dreamed that I was in a Large Building its looks like a library, or something else, with many Book-shelfs filled with thousands of Books in the whole room. Then I hear a loud male voice in my head that calls my Name.
it said, “My Name is Arenom of Glenroy, Please come Back we need your help, You are the only one who can stop them!” “Whom Stop, who are you and what do you talking about” I yelled out in desperateness. “Please come to me you will find me in the countship of Indoroll.”
Than his Voice became silence and my vision goes blind, in the next moment I was standing in the middle of a Burning Village all the dwellers are dead, I looked around and was congealed in shock as I discerned that this was my home village, I had lived, before my Training starts at the Academy.

I run trough the village, up to the house of my Family, but it was also burned down.

I went down on my knees and screamed out in Pain, as I saw the burned Corpses of my Parents in front of the building the ground. Then my vision went Black again and I woke up.”

“It was just a bad Dream, and now its over” Lil said in a lovely voice as she licked my face to calm me down.

“It wasn´t just a Dream, I know this “Arenom.” Tiara Whispered with
stony-faced.

“ what do you mean about you know him? Who is heand what does he wont from me?” I Ask her, as I moved in to a little comfortably position.

Tiara came over to us sits down and starts to tell us what she knew.

“OK, it was around two weeks after i´ll run away from my Pack, I was alone in the Forest, and I was very hungry, tired and extremely sad.

It was late in the Evening as I smelled a fire in the vicinity. I´ll slowly sneaked closer and smelled the roast on the spit over the Fireplace that where on a clearance in the wood. I´ll was very hungry because I hadn´t eat anything in the last Days. I was fearful, cause I knew that many Humans hate Wolfe's.
But there where only an old man who was sitting beside the Fire with his back into my direction. He Wear a long woolen Coat, his Pants, shirt and shoes were made of brown leather and next to him lays a long wooden staff with a crystal ball on the upper end on the ground. I don´t know what to do, so I laid down behind a overthrown tree and observed him trough a chink under the Tree Trunk.
so i´ll can pilfer him a little bit food later when he goes to sleep.
Then to my surprise he thumps with his hand on the ground and said,
“don´t be afraid my friend come over, I don´t hurt you!” “He don´t means me, he cant see me, i´ll think to my self”.
But then he turned around and said again. “I´ll mean you, little wolf, come over to me the meat is enough for both of us” and with a smile under his long gray Beard. he looked directly in my direction.
I raised my head slowly over the Tree Trunk, and looked at him wit a mix of Fear and noises. He said again in a friendly voice, “come over to me, I wan´t hurt you little beauty.” than he grabbed a piece of meat and chucked it into my direction.
I´ll moved slowly around the Tree Trunk to pick up the meat, with my eyes still on him, so i´ll could run away when he tried to catch me or something else. But nothing happens, he just sit there and looked at me.

While I reached the meat and wolfed it down in one piece, he starts to laugh and said, “ it seems you are very hungry, come over to the fire and eat with me i´ll have a long time no company at Dinner.
“hmm, it seems he is friendly, maybe I can trust him.”
I´ll Think to my self as I walked slowly on the other site of the fireplace. after I sited down he Exclaimed me, that his name is Arenom and that he is a Mage on the Way to a meeting with King Seroles of Salbarot, the sovereign of this Land and many other things of his live up to the Point where he see me behind this Tree.
Than he stopped and to my surprise he said a little bit ashamed, “where are my manners, I´ll talked the whole Time over myself and I have not even ask you about your Name.
So lets start again, my name is Arenom of Glenroy, court Mage of the countship of Indoroll and I am honoured to meet a special creature like your.” “Ohh, ehm, thanks, my name is Tiara, but what you mean about special creature, I am just a Wolfe. ” I´ll said puzzled of his words.
“Oh, Tiara” he said and continued,” you are different to a normal Wolfe in many Points, the first one is that we both talked wish each other.
The next thing is that I can feel the presence of Magic in your and there is another thing i´ll feel in your presence, I can´t exclaim it but to the right Time you´ll understand what I mean!” Than he looked deep in my Eyes and said with a giggle, “but now enough of this, come over to me and let us eat, I am hungry!”
In the fact that I´ll have no idea what to say about his words i´ll get up walked over to him and get down next to his site.

After we finished our Dinner he exclaims me more about my magical abilities and how I can used it. He showed me simple defense an healing spells, after a while of training it I was very tired and we get to sleep. Later that night i´ll woke up by a touch, i´ll lay on my site, Arenom lays next to my back and his hand stroked my chest. It was a wonderful feeling so i´ll rolled over to my back to give him more to stroke. His Hand runs slowly down to my belly, as he arrived my first nipple he stopped and starts to rubbing it with his fingertips. This send a wave of pleasure trough my body and let me shiver. After a couple of seconds his hand moved further down beside my hind legs. It was an such an amazing feeling when his Hand came nearer to my private region that i´ll starts to get wet. I´ll starts to moan as his index Finger reached my opening and starts to rub around my slit. After a couple seconds i´ll yelled out in pleasure as his finger slips slowly into my cunt and circled around my Clit, he pulled his Finger a few times in and out while he gets up and kneed down behind me. He lowered his head beside my Hind legs and start to kiss my cunt, Then he removed his finger out of me grabbed my legs pushed them downwards and stuck his tongue deep into my opening, in this moment my whole Body shook in in waves of excitation.
I´ll pressured my Hips against his Face to get his tongue deeper into me, as his tongue explored my Pink and his mouth sucked on my clit, i´ll feeled a pressure building up in my Body. I´ll start to breath heavier and all my muscles contracted, while his tongue sends me over the Edge. My Orgasm sends waves of pleasure and arousal trough my body and I´ll screemed out in ecstasy as my juices flooded out of me directly into his waiting mouth.
I was still under heavy breathing as he laid down next to me, he hugged me and starts to stroke my belly again.
A few seconds later I´ll fall into a deep sleep, but before i´ll drop off he Whispered in My Ear, “Thank you my Love we will see us again but now I must go. As I´ll woke up at the next morning he was gone and i´ll was alone again.

“And that is what I now about Arenom of Glenroy.”

As Tiara Finished her story Lil and I looked at her a little bit confused.

Than Lil said to Tiara and me in an appointing Voice,”OK, lets go to find this Guy i´ll know the Way to Indorol.




To be Continued..........

This post has been edited by DarkMessiah1981 on Oct 19 2008, 01:57 AM

A very good chapter. I like the way this story is going. Sex, magic and an interesting storyline. You still need to train more on your spelling though. Keep training and you will soon be an awesome writer!
10 from me, again.

Thanks for your comment and for your Vote!
i Know that my spelling is bad, it isn´t easy for me to find the right words in englisch but i work on it. :D

wow very nice story expect many 10s from me