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| horsehumper12 |
Posted: Oct 4 2008, 05:51 PM
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Hello everyone!!! Yes, this is the new Halo series I'm starting! Its mostly about this one Sanghelli who gets stranded on this planted with... interesting consequences. There aren't any humans, unless they are specifically introduced and if anyone wants to be in this story, please by ALL means tell me, I would be elated to have someone to write about! ;D (yes AN AFRO, you)
That aside, here comes the first story. Young Surj and some tentacles, basics first! --------------------------- With a loud shriek the misfired pod crashed onto the planets surface. Surj kicked the pod's door open and managed to catch a glimpse of his ships all warp away. He cursed, knowing he needed some way to call for help. A week had passed. Although naked, he kept himself clean by bathing in the river and drinking from it, fishing from it. But at night, he could feel his member erect, yearning for the touch of a mate. The most he could do was to simply grip it and shake. The green liquid that shot out would attract predators of a sexual kind. Already twice he had been violated by the equine like Unicrown, a horse with three horns on its head which walked on 2 legs. Surj felt his urges again. He could not contain it- but the Unicrowns! "Damn them..." He muttered. Then, he had an idea. Slowly, he waded into the chest deep slime. He had encountered these before. Animals would hide from predators in the slime. He figured it would hide his musky scent. However, as soon as he was deep enough, he felt himself get hoisted up by rubbery appendages. His limbs were being wrapped around tight. Unable to move, he slowly rose from the water, being carried by the tentacles, which twisted and turned him, scanning him. Soon, they discovered a hole inbetween his perky buttcheeks and slowly, it entered him. Surj moaned as it went deeper and deeper, and the pumping motion began. The bristles on it tickled his sensitve hole and soon, another tentacle appeared from the water. It was much thinner this time and slime seemed to be being produced from it. As it curled it way up slowly his leg, he realised it was actually an anesthetic, completely numbing the areas the tentacle touched. It soon turned out to be a good thing, since the tentacle slowly slid its way into his urethra, slime collecting at the tip f his member.He saw something being pumped inside, his member and his three testicles increasing in size. Attention however, was turned to his rear as he felt something large being forced up his behind. He saw an egg shaped object enter him. It was as large as his head. He let out a loud cry as it forced its way into him. As Surj panted, he saw another one being transported, about to enter his Urethra! He braced for the pain but instead, saw an arrow strike the tenacle, severing it before the egg could enter his genitals. By now, his privates were 4 times the size. As the tentacles retracted out of him, still leaving a single egg inside, they began to shoot slime at him, as if to taunt him one more time. Surj felt himself being dragged up onto the shore. 2 towering reptile men with primirive fatigues stood over him. "This one would make an excellent mating slave." he hissed to the other. They shackled Surj and carried him away, all 3 of them with their members erect. ---------------------------------------------------------- Well, I hope you enjoyed this! :beer: Once again, constructive critisism is welcomed! ;D |
| AN_AFRO |
Posted: Oct 5 2008, 08:00 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 405 Member No.: 197266 Joined: 5-December 05
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I love it with my whole being......And if you put me in I would just die from epicness overload:P :lol: an UBER VOTE FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Xvemon |
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 196 Member No.: 583711 Joined: 23-October 07
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yay good story keep goin and if you add me i'll probly faint from your kindness :wub:
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| AN_AFRO |
Posted: Oct 5 2008, 08:20 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 405 Member No.: 197266 Joined: 5-December 05
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Hmm......Maybe I'll write my own HALO story as well.....maybe It could be like a continuation of the ending of HALO 3......You true gamers out there know what I'm talking about.
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| Xvemon |
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 196 Member No.: 583711 Joined: 23-October 07
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oh i forgot to say this but nice service record for Halo 3 An_Afro ^.=.^
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| Dragonore |
Posted: Oct 5 2008, 08:25 PM
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Addict ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 316 Member No.: 717784 Joined: 19-June 08
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Smexy.^^
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| AN_AFRO |
Posted: Oct 5 2008, 08:29 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 405 Member No.: 197266 Joined: 5-December 05
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Meh not really....Havent played in a while but I plan on it today....And since the update they reset everyones rankings so I'm a noob again. :lol:
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| Xvemon |
Posted: Oct 5 2008, 10:02 PM
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 196 Member No.: 583711 Joined: 23-October 07
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yeah but i still n v you with that rank lol but hey i havent played in months so yeah :wub:
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| Xvemon |
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 196 Member No.: 583711 Joined: 23-October 07
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more more more more MORE!!!! lol more pleaze?? :please: and i'm starting another story as soon as i figure out the tittle :thinking: anywho this is a great story so far just read it for the third time i :wub: it keep up the great work :D :wub:
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| siroe |
Posted: Oct 6 2008, 06:09 PM
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Addict ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 219 Member No.: 667509 Joined: 17-March 08
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wootius!!!!! FINALLY! a halo story that might be good!!!!! plz continue!!!!!
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| Xvemon |
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 196 Member No.: 583711 Joined: 23-October 07
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:please: :please: :please: :please: :please: :please: :lol: :wub: continue this story its so good and 2 days is too long for no reply to our comments plz let us know about the next chapter?!!?!?!?!? :w00t:
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| AN_AFRO |
Posted: Oct 6 2008, 08:06 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 405 Member No.: 197266 Joined: 5-December 05
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Lolz I agree :lol:
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| AN_AFRO |
Posted: Oct 7 2008, 05:27 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 405 Member No.: 197266 Joined: 5-December 05
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| Xvemon |
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 196 Member No.: 583711 Joined: 23-October 07
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AN_AFRO are you cslling your self epic? lol cuz if you are thats cool ^_^
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| tagg22 |
Posted: Oct 7 2008, 11:54 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 9 Member No.: 589332 Joined: 3-November 07
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I agree, it's nice to see a good---wait, no :zipped: ---great :D story based off of halo. btw, the new book comes out next month, for those who enjoy the games and the story behind them... B)
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