Bump and Grind


Unic0rn69

back to the top with you.. ;)

Not really my type of story, but it is very well-written. I love mares, and I love mare-sex, but I don't really like this story. I honestly don't know why. But I see that you have put loads of work into this story, and that this story is one of the most popular of all those here on BF. You're also a much better authour than I'm myself. You write very clear and you bind the story together in a beautiful and simple way. As you read it's like you just follow an elegant stream, like a trip with a boat down a beautiful river a calm and sunny day.
A big 10 from me.

lol nice comment and bump

the biggest bump possible

Bump !!!


Unic0rn69

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Sorry it's been so long since I've posted an update everyone.

A little over a month ago I lost a very close friend, the mare that was my inspiration for Adara passed away very suddenly. She died right before my very eyes, all I could do was hold her and comfort her.

That hit me pretty hard and I'm only just now able to pick up the pieces and start moving on. She wasn't my mare, but I cared about her very much and she was special to me. :(

I've started work on the story again, but I don't know when I'll post the next chapter. :(

Sorry again, everyone, but I hope when I'm done it'll have been worth the wait

take all the time you want, srry for the pestering

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Chapter 3
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“Mmmm… lasagna. My favorite. Mom, I’ve missed your cooking these past five yea… err… these past few weeks.” I said, stumbling over my words as I sat down at the table for dinner.

“Are you sure you’re alright?” She asked with motherly concern, “Something about you seems… a bit off. I’m worried you might have some brain damage from your fever…”

“I’m fine mom, thanks. I’m just a little disoriented. I was out for what, two or three days, right? I’m sure a good meal will set me right as rain.” I replied reassuringly.

“So tell us about this ‘Adara,’ she must be quite a woman to have caught your eye so quickly. She’s got an interesting name, too. Where’s she from?” Dad asked, brimming with curiosity.

“Adara... well, she’s the ma… gir… wom… she’s my soulmate.” I blundered.

“When can we meet her?” Mom asked.

“Uh… well… I don’t think you’ll get the chance to meet her any time soon… you see she stays very busy at work…” I said, nervously stabbing at my lasagna.

“I see…” my mother replied, somewhat disappointed.

I quickly ate the little bit of lasagna remaining on my plate and excused myself from the table.

“Well, I think I’m going to get to bed” I said, “I’m still not feeling too well. I hope you two will stay with me again, for just one more night.”

“Of course we will, son.” Dad said with a smile, “You go on upstairs now and get some rest. We’ll talk more in the morning.”

I hurried upstairs and ran into the bathroom to take a shower. I locked the bathroom door and stripped off all my clothes, and stared at myself in the mirror, feeling nauseous all of a sudden. I ran some water in the sink and splashed it on my face, taking deep breaths to try to overcome the sick feeling I had in the pit of my stomach. I closed my eyes, and could faintly see in my mind the image of a palomino mare, and the words “I love you husband…” echoed in my mind.

“ADARA!??” I screamed, falling backwards and hitting my head a towel rack as I collapsed to the ground.

“What am I doing?” I asked myself as I sat on the bathroom floor trembling, blood seeping from a small cut on the back of my head that I sustained in the fall.

“I have to save her… I have to save the future… I’m not whole without Adara… tomorrow morning I have to start searching for those men… I can’t just sit back and do nothing.” I said to myself, the sick feeling in the pit of my stomach getting worse.

I showered quickly and went into my bedroom. I laid down on the bed, setting my alarm for 5:00 a.m.

“Better get an early start on it, I have no time to lose… I hope they haven’t killed him already… I hope I’m not too late.” I whispered to myself as I laid down and turned out the lamp on my nightstand.

As I lay asleep, I dreamed about Adara.

“My love…. How could you even consider not taking action… don’t you love me?” She asked, nearly weeping.

“I… I’m so sorry… I don’t know what came over me… I miss my family so much… but Adara I love you… I’m going to stop them, I’m going to make sure the Awakening happens, you’ll see” I replied, tears streaming down my face.

“YOU’VE BETRAYED ME!!!” a furious voice bellowed, bringing me to my knees as Adara reared up and snorted flames, the sky darkening. Lightning flashed and the wind whipped furiously, accentuating the mare’s rage.

“No… my love… please” I pleaded.

The mare reared again, striking out and knocking me to the ground hard. Blood instantly began pouring out of my mouth. I tried to speak and couldn’t, my jaw was shattered. The mare reared again, preparing for a killing blow.

“NOOO!!!!” I screamed, bolting up in my bed, covered in a cold sweat. I turned on the lamp and sat on the edge of the bed, looking down and trying to catch my breath, my heart racing.

“Bad dream?” an ominously familiar voice asked. I looked up, stunned to see one of the very men I was after standing in my bedroom holding a revolver.

“You…” I said, glaring at the man with intense loathing.

“Surprised to see me?” He asked with a sinister grin.

“Why are you here?” I asked.

“Isn’t it obvious? I’m here to kill you. I knew you would somehow try to stop us, we planned for that contingency.” He replied, raising the revolver to take aim at me.

“Just tell me one thing before you die… why would you betray your entire race for a bunch of stupid horses?” He asked.

“They aren’t just a bunch of stupid horses…” I replied as he cocked the hammer on the revolver and looked down its sight, “They’re much, much more than that. They’re this planet’s salvation. Mankind has had his chance, and he wasted it in a dazzling display of disregard for the Earth and all its creatures. The Equans are the future.” I said, looking past the man suddenly with a shocked look on my face, and yelling out “JORAN?!”

The man glanced backward to see for himself if the Equan was really standing there. In that split second I leaped forward and grabbed his arm, the revolver going off twice as we struggled for the weapon. The first shot shattered my bedroom window. The second one found a much softer target. The man stumbled backwards and muttered “Damn…” before falling to the ground clutching his stomach.

I burst out the bedroom door and down the stairs, grabbing my robe and car keys as I flew out the front door.

“Poor mom and dad… they’re going to have one hell of a time sorting things out… the last thing I need right now is to be tangled up in a police investigation though” I thought to myself as I cranked up the engine and sped out of the driveway.

I dared not go one mile above the speed limit as I drove down the highway toward the interstate. As I approached the edge of town, two sheriff’s deputies sped past me with their lights and sirens blazing, making a bee-line in the direction of my house.

I choked back the nervous lump in my throat as I entered the freeway and headed north. I passed an ambulance speeding in the opposite direction on the other side of the highway. I looked in my rearview mirror and saw the ambulance exit onto the same road I just entered the freeway from. “I hope they can do something for him… I’d hate to think I was responsible for taking a life… even if it was only in self defense” I thought.

I had no idea where I was going. I just kept driving. I drove for ten hours, stopping only to refuel my car. I was nearly entering my eleventh hour of driving when something caught my eye. A large building that I could see faintly in the distance, the only building around for several miles. I instantly slammed on the brakes as I was overcome with an inexplicable feeling.

“That was it. That’s the place where the Awakening began. I have to get there” I thought to myself.

“But how could I possibly know that?” I asked myself as I kept driving, pushed forward by an unexplainable instinct. “I never even did that much research on the Awakening.”

The sudden sound of a siren snapped me to my senses. I looked in my rearview mirror and saw flashing red and blue lights.

“Oh no…” I said to myself as I pulled my car to the side of the road.

My heart pounded in my chest as I fumbled through the glove compartment for my registration and insurance papers, jumping when I was startled by a sudden tapping on my window.

“Oh… good morning officer…” I said to the tall policeman in sunglasses. He regarded me with a puzzled look, seeing me in my robe.

“You in a hurry to get somewhere?” He asked.

“N..n..n..no, not really. Just out for a drive.” I stammered.

“I see. Well I clocked you at 79 miles per hour, and this is a 65 zone. I need to see your license, registration, and proof of insurance please.” He replied. I shoved the documents out the window for his inspection almost before he could finish his sentence.

“Sit tight for me, sir.” He said as he took the documents to his patrol car.

“Please let me get out of this…” I pleaded to whatever deities would take pity on me and save me from what I perceived to be impending incarceration.

What seemed like an eternity later, he returned. He gave me back my papers and license, and pulled out his ticket book.

“I’m citing you for speeding, 14mph over the limit. Your fine is $135.00. On the back here is your court date should you decide to contest this citation. Do you understand what I’ve told you?” He asked as he filled out the ticket.

Something about the man’s voice was eerily familiar, but I couldn’t quite put my finger on it.

“Y..ye…yes…thank you.” I stammered, signing the ticket and breathing a sigh of relief that apparently the officer was unaware that I was involved in a shooting not even 24 hours earlier.

“Drive safe now.” He said, tipping his hat and walking back to his cruiser after I returned his ticket book to him.

As the patrol car re-entered the highway, I noticed a horseshoe hanging from the rearview mirror. That was when it hit me.

“JORAN!?” I exclaimed in a mixed state of confusion and excitement.

“Could that have been the human part of Joran? I knew I recognized that voice somewhere! That has to be more than coincidence. Fate must be trying to tell me it’s on my side.” I thought to myself.

“I hope so, at least.”

After another thirty minutes of driving, I arrived at my destination, a large mansion in the middle of nowhere, with several horses running and playing in some nearby pastures. My gut was telling me this was the place, but from its appearance I would never have guessed.

I knocked on the door, and couldn’t believe my eyes when I was greeted by yet another familiar face, though a much more devious one.

“Come on in, you’re just in time.” The man said with an evil smile, retrieving a pistol from a holster at his side and pointing it at me, gesturing for me to enter.

“I should have known you were involved with this, too. You were never interested in peace with the Equans.” I said to the man who commanded the assault on the Equan capital, or rather would in the future; the general I thought I had reasoned with.

“Not just involved, I’m responsible for this. Did you really think your little speech got to me? Did you really think I’d abandon humanity so quickly?” He said, forcing me down a long hallway. “The only thing you made me realize was that by fighting a technologically superior foe, I would be condemning humanity to swift annihilation. The peace that you were so eager to see come to fruition was merely a façade, a way for me to bide my time until I could figure out a cleaner, more efficient way to deal with this menace.”

We entered a large room where I saw a man with thick glasses tied up and unconscious, but breathing.

“At least he’s still alive” I thought to myself.

The room was filled with various instruments, computers, and chemicals, it looked like something from a sci-fi movie. One of the larger computer monitors had a display that read simply “DEPLOYMENT:” followed by a counter that was ticking down.

“I was just about to start destroying all of this junk when you arrived. You don’t know how much pleasure it’s going to give me to force you to watch.” He said, tying me up next to the other man.

He raised his pistol toward the monitor that was displaying the countdown. I tried to look away, but he forced my head up and toward the monitor.

“Now watch your precious future die you pathetic human garbage!” He said, pointing the pistol at the equipment and firing several shots. I winced as the equipment sparked, smoked, and sputtered, and the monitors went blank.

The man in glasses came to, and weakly whispered. “Thanks…”

“Why?” I asked, but was suddenly interrupted. All of the lights went out, replaced by a solid red light. The undamaged monitors powered back on and all read the same thing: “DEPLOYMENT IN ONE MINUTE.” A computerized voice announced “Tampering detected. Emergency deployment activated.”

“He was about to find the shutoff for the emergency deployment system when you arrived and distracted him…” He said before passing out.

The general flew into a rage, screaming wildly and firing his weapon at everything in sight, but to no avail, the countdown continued. The mansion was shook by what felt like several explosions as the countdown progressed.

“THIS ISN’T OVER!” The general screamed as he ran down the hallway and back out the door with fifteen seconds left in the countdown.

“I have so many unanswered questions… but I guess they’ll have to remain that way.” I spoke to the unconscious man.

“Ten… nine… eight… seven… six…”

“I’m coming home, Adara.” I thought to myself as I closed my eyes.

“five… four… three… two… one…”

I took a deep breath as a bright green light filled the room. The mansion shook violently and began to fall apart around me. The last thing I saw was a message on the monitors reading “Deployment successful” before I was overcome with an extremely odd sensation and knocked unconscious.

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When I came to, I was extremely disoriented. I had no idea where I was, or who I was. I didn’t even know my name. I looked around, and it looked like I was in a barn.

I was laying in a horse stall completely naked and had been locked in. It was a very hot midsummer afternoon and the humidity was through the roof. I looked around, all the stalls around me were empty.

Suddenly, the barn doors slid open and in came the most gorgeous palomino mare I’d ever laid eyes on. I shivered as an intense feeling of deja-vu coursed through my body, but I was sure I’d never seen this mare in my life.

“Hey there pretty girl…” I whispered to the mare…


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End of chapter 3.
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very very nice, well worth the wait!

wow now that is a twist of fate. causing whate you are trying to stop. this chapter was well warth the wate. thanks frend for coming back to the story even when you are hirting with your lose.
gunner8169

A great story once again. ;)
A big ten for you.
In a way, the ending reminds me of a story that runs the same way, loops back to start itself over once more..
Will be looking for more stories from you. :beer:

Wow What a great installment I love the turn in the Story.
Please keep up the Great work you are a Awesome Writer.


A Big 10 for you.

a big ole BUMP