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you still there horsey?

*sigh* still waiting for another instalment :zzz: :zzz: :zzz:

This post has been edited by lonewolfssong on Mar 25 2009, 01:12 AM

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Unic0rn69

still waiting for the next chapter



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:zzz: :zzz: :zzz: *falls over* Huh!? no new chapter yet.. :blink: :zzz: :zzz: :zzz:

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This post has been edited by lonewolfssong on Mar 31 2009, 01:05 AM

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bump.. hope your still goin to work on the story horsey

I know this has been a long time in coming, I hope it doesn't disappoint! Here are the next few chapters, and several more are in the works.

Hope you enjoy!

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Chapter 4
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A sudden warm, wet, moist sensation moving up my cheek woke me from my slumber.

“Good morning my dear” I said, smiling as I opened my eyes to see Adara lovingly lapping at my face as she lay next to me.

“Can I get you something for breakfast?” Adara asked, continuing to lick.

“Mmm… just a little more of what I had last night, please.” I said, raising my head and opening my mouth to let her tongue occasionally poke inside. After a few minutes of licking, kissing, and tongue-wrestling, I let my head come to rest on my pillow again. Adara laid her head on my chest, and I let my fingers wander through her mane as I gently stroked her.

“They’re going to have to invent a new word for how happy I am right now” I said, continuing to caress my lover, here eyes beginning to close as she nickered with pleasure.

“Hmm.. the bed is nice and dry. How did you manage to change the sheets without waking me up?” I asked.

“Very carefully” Adara said, eliciting a gasp from me as her tongue unexpectedly glanced over my left nipple.

“Whoa…” I said, suddenly overcome with intense feelings of familiarity.

“Something the matter my darling?” Adara asked.

“Oh.. nothing.. I just had a really strong feeling of deja-vu all of a sudden.” I said, shaking it off.

“Hmm.. Well maybe I can do something to take your mind off it.” Adara replied, licking my chest and stomach, slowly working her way down to my crotch, making me start to get hard.

I closed my eyes and started to moan. “Oh babe… that feels so good… mmm….”

Just as I was really getting into it she stopped suddenly.

“Well, I think I’m going to go outside and graze for a little while.“ The playful palomino mare said as she jumped out of bed and trotted out of the bedroom.

“You tease!” I yelled at her as she exited the bedroom.

“Oh shut up, you know you love it when I tease you!” She yelled back to me as she trotted out the front door. I laughed and laid my head back down on the pillow.

“Ain’t THAT the truth!” I thought to myself with a smile as I closed my eyes, drifting back off to sleep.

When I awoke about an hour later, I was somewhat startled to see Saphira standing there.

“Adara, someone seems to have left me a pretty little paint mare by my bed. Can I have her for breakfast?” I yelled, winking at Saphira.

“I’d like that,” she said, nuzzling my cheek, “but I think Joran might get a little jealous. I just wanted to see how you and Adara were enjoying your first day as a married couple.”

“So far, so good.” I said, kissing the sweet paint mare on the cheek. “I hope you’ll stick around for a while.”

“I would, but I need to get back home soon. Joran and I have plans this morning” She replied in dismay.

I grabbed both sides of her muzzle and planted a kiss on her nose. “Well get your pretty butt back here and bring that sexy stud of yours with you sometime soon alright babe? Me and Adara miss you two.”

“I’ll try… see you later.” Saphira said as she made her way out of the house, passing Adara who playfully nipped at her rear end as she walked by, eliciting giggles from both mares.

“What happened to the three of us?” I asked Adara as she climbed back into the jumbo sized bed with me to cuddle.

“Marriage.” Adara said. “I think Saphira kind of had a thing for you a while ago that she’s never been able to fully let go of, even after marrying Joran. Our wedding must have been hard on her, seeing you pledge your undying love and loyalty to me.”

“But she must know that we still love her, right?” I asked. “I mean, just because you and I are married that doesn’t mean I don’t care about her… I mean… we.”

“Something you’re not telling me, HUSBAND?” Adara asked scornfully.

“Why Adara, I never pegged you for the jealous type. You know you’re my number one mare, sweetie.” I said, kissing her on the nose and gently brushing her forelock over her ear with my finger as she lay next to me.

“Whatever.” Adara sighed, seeing right through me. “I knew you cared about Saphira, but I didn’t know you still had… those… feelings for her. I thought I finally had you all to myself, but I guess a piece of your heart will always be hers, too.”

“I hope that doesn’t bother you my love, I can’t help it. You and Saphira are both very special to me. I miss the nights we’d all three cuddle up together and sleep. Having a pretty mare on each side of me made bed time so heavenly. I just want a piece of that back, I hate how we’ve grown apart.” I replied, starting to tear up.

“Don’t worry husband, I understand.” Adara said, nuzzling me. “You don’t have to explain yourself. Saphira and I were very close too, even before I met you. I didn’t mean to make you feel bad.”

“Let’s stay in today. I just want to lay here with you, it soothes my soul.” I said to her, putting one arm around her and hiding my face in the side of her neck.

“Fine by me.” She replied, closing her eyes and nickering.

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Chapter 5
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I wandered through the empty house. The house that had once been my home was now but an empty shell. Most of my possessions were still there along with Adara’s.

This house hadn’t seen an occupant in a very long time, as evidenced by the dilapidated exterior and cracked walls on the inside that were lightly tinged with mold. The musty atmosphere made the house smell even older.

I wandered by an old, cracked mirror as I made my way through the house. I paused for a moment to regard myself in the mirror.

“The years haven’t been kind to you, my friend.” I said quietly, seeing the shades of gray that now gave my hair a salt-and-peppered appearance and the wrinkles that had gradually worked their way into the skin of my face over time.

Something about this day was depressing, but I couldn’t quite put my finger on it. Why was I here? I surely didn’t live in this place anymore judging by its appearance. I looked down at a rose that I held in my hand.

“Ah yes.” I remembered, suddenly.

I continued through the dismal house, out into the backyard. The weeds had all but taken over the entire expansive property, nearly all 50 acres, save for one small area which was immaculately groomed. In the center of the fenced-off area was a large, elaborately engraved marble slab about a meter tall. I knelt before the marble slab and wiped away some dust that had began to accumulate on it, revealing the words that were carefully inscribed upon it.

A D A R A

BELOVED FRIEND
BELOVED WIFE
A FALLEN ANGEL THAT
HAS RETURNED HOME

REST IN PEACE

I laid the rose at the base of the marble stone and dabbed at the tears that were beginning to form in my eyes with my sleeve.

“I can’t believe it’s been twenty years since I lost you my darling. It’s been so difficult to go on without you. I’ve missed you so much.” I shivered slightly as a cool autumn breeze chilled my exposed skin. I zipped up the jacket I was wearing a bit more and threw on a scarf I had in my pocket.

As I knelt on both knees I rubbed the ground with one hand, looking down, then up. “I wish we were together again.” I said, nearly weeping. If only the Awakening had increased the life span of Equines along with giving them sentience. Adara was already middle aged for a horse when she and I met. I never imagined not being able to spend the rest of my life with her when she and I married.

“Ten years wasn’t enough…” I said, reminiscing about better times. The sky had already been darkening, and now I could hear the low rumbling of thunder in the distance as a nearly imperceptible mist of rain began to wet my face, adding to the moisture that was already trickling down my cheeks.

I returned to the house where a tall Equan stood waiting for me.

“Are you ready to return home, my friend?” The gentle, familiar voice asked.

“Yes Joran. There are too many painful memories here.” I replied to the aged equine, appearing just as worn by time as I. Streaks of grey rippled through his ebon mane, but he still had just as powerful a presence as in his youth. Time had been a bit kinder to him than me. Suddenly overcome with great grief I fell into the Equan’s arms and began sobbing. He wrapped his muscular arms around me in a warm, loving embrace.

“Shhh… shh… there, there now. She’s looking down on you right now from her eternal resting place weeping with you. You two will be reunited one day, my friend, try to take some small comfort in that.” Joran said to me, comforting me. That big oaf always had a way of warming my heart when I needed it the most, and this time was no different.

“You think so?” I said, sniffling.

“I know so.” He replied, gently kissing the top of my head. “Come now, let us go visit Saphira. That should cheer you up.”


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Chapter 6
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The massive double doors to the study slowly creaked open. The sheer size of this room would cause anyone to easily mistake it for a library rather than a personal sanctum.

“Madame Praetor, sorry to disturb you, but you have visitors.” A young, dapple-grey Arabian Equan dressed in an elaborate uniform said to the seated figure, whose back was facing him.

“Thank you, Bira. You may show them in.” She replied.

“Oh it’s you two. Come in, come in, it’s so good to see you.” The black and white paint Equan mare said to her two visitors. She regarded them fondly with her dazzling blue eyes which could melt the heart of any man or beast with their beauty.

“Hello Saphira.” Joran said, embracing the smaller paint mare with a powerful hug.

Poor guy. I thought to myself. After all these years you still love her don’t you?

“Saphira… It’s been too long.” I said, hugging her with all my strength and kissing her on the cheek.

Joran and I took a seat on a large, Equan sized sofa that left my legs hanging a few inches off the ground. Saphira sat down in a large luxurious chair across from us and pressed a button on a small intercom positioned on an end table next to her.

“Bira, would you be so kind as to bring me and my guests some tea?” She said into the device, which promptly chirped back “Right away, Madame Praetor.”

We sat in silence for a few moments, none of us quite sure what to say. Saphira was fully aware of the significance of this day, but wasn’t quite sure how to go about bringing up the subject of my dearly deceased wife.

Within what seemed like moments the handsome young dapple grey stud appeared through the doors to the study and served us our tea.

“Oh, uh no sugar for me please.” I said. “Thank you.”

“Thank you very much Bira.” Saphira said as he poured her cup of tea, leaving as promptly as etiquette allowed.

I picked up my cup and looked at it somberly.

“You miss her too, don’t you Saphira?” I asked the paint mare, beginning to tear up.

“Of course I do.” She replied, hanging her head in sadness. “It’s been a long time since we lost her, but I’ll never get used to her being gone. I know these years could not have been easy for you.” She said.

“No, they haven’t.” I squeaked, choking back tears as Joran put his powerful arm around my shoulder and pulled me close to him.

“You know, she really loved you. Both of us did. I just wish it wouldn’t have torn us all apart the way it did.” Saphira said, sipping at her tea.

“Hey, remember the day at the lake?” She said, smiling. “That was such a fun day.”

I smiled and wiped a tear from my eye. “Yes, it most certainly was.”

We sat there reminiscing for hours. Laughing, crying, hugging each other and sharing fond memories of our beloved Adara. The hours flew by quickly as we kept each other company.

“Well, it’s getting late. Thanks for having us, Saphira.” I said, giving the paint mare one last hug before Joran and I made our way out. “It was good seeing you again.”

“Don’t be strangers! My door is always open for you two.” She said, embracing me. “You two should visit more often.”

As I turned to go out the door, I suddenly became very dizzy and fainted. “Are you okay?” were the last words I heard Joran worriedly saying as he caught me.

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Chapter 7
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I burst up in bed in a cold sweat, breathing heavily. I put my hand on the palomino mare that lay next to me, peacefully slumbering. “It was just a dream.” I sighed, kissing her on her neck as I snuggled myself up next to her.

“But it felt like so much more. It seemed… so real… so vivid… but it’s starting to fade. Did I just have a premonition?” I thought to myself.

Adara began nickering and snorting in her sleep, her tail swishing up and down. I could hear a familiar sound emanating from her rear end.

“Sounds like someone’s having quite a lovely dream.” I whispered, smiling as I imagined what my love might be dreaming of.

Quietly, I sat up and scooted around in the bed, laying my head down next to her rump. Sure enough her clit was winking away, and her pussy was getting wet. Just this sight turned me on. I sat up in bed, snuck my face in under her raised tail and ever so gently dipped my tongue into her vagina, causing the mare to grunt and shudder in her sleep. The bed was already becoming moist underneath her with her arousal.

I continued gently lapping at her, savoring the exquisite taste, eliciting more aroused squeaks squeals and whinnies from the sleeping mare, who I’m sure was enjoying the most pleasant wet dream she’d ever experienced.

I positioned myself on my knees so that my penis was level with her. I slowly pushed myself inside her as I laid across her rump. When I was all the way inside I just enjoyed the warmth and the sensation as her pussy massaged my cock with every wink of her clit. This was my favorite way to make love to her: gently, without either of us moving around a lot, letting her aroused contractions provide us both with all the stimulation we needed.

I laid there moaning, trying my best not to cum as she milked me. Finally, overcome with arousal, I began thrusting into her wildly, gripping her rear end with my arms as I pummeled her from behind, her contractions getting harder and faster as I made love to her. “I love you Adara!!!” I moaned as I pushed deep into her, burying my penis and testicles deep inside her and climaxing hard, panting and moaning with pleasure. I felt the mare shudder and contract hard around me at the same time as her climax hit her, completely soaking the bed underneath us. I laid there on her rump, softly stroking her as she slept.

“You’re so incredible.” I moaned to her. “I love you so much.”

As my arousal left I pulled out of her. I gave her pussy a few last licks to get more of that taste that I never could get enough of, then snuggled back up next to her.

As I lay there, the dream that I had earlier came back into my mind. There was just something about it that I couldn't let go. I tried not to think to much about it as I drifted back off to sleep. Adara was here with me right now, and that was all that mattered.

Right?...

great story B) thanx for posting :cool2:

Nonononononononononono...... COME BACK! You can't leave it at that! This is my absolute most favorite story of all time. I was borderline tearing up in chapter 5 and 6, and that's not a feat easily achieved. A million thanks and more.

Lonesomwolf
I can only hope that i find a love that strong one day. At least Horses and dogs appreciate nice guys.

By the way, i've just past the 100 post mark and you get my first 10 vote.

hes back!!!!!!!!! i really do hope that it wasnt a premonition but i do have a strong feeling it is :huh: . but still you have 10 more years of their lives to cover so.. be good to them B) :wub:

Thanks guys! ^_^ the next chapter should be posted by this weekend, keep an eye out for it! If anyone would like me to PM you whenever I update the story, let me know and I'll make a list.

YES PLEASE!

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Chapter 8
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Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.

"Where am I?"

Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.

I’m here with you husband, please stay with me.

Beep. Beep. Beep. Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…..

We’re losing him again, adjusting field strength.

What’s going on?"

Fight it husband, please fight it… I can’t lose you…

"Adara? I’m not going anywhere… what’s going on? It’s so dark… I can’t see anything… Can’t you hear me? Where are you? I’m getting scared…"

He’s stabilizing. He’s starting to phase back into normal space-time.

"Phasing back into normal space-time? What? Hello? Who’s there, what are you talking about?"

All at once the darkness was replaced with the image of my love standing before me, her face wrought with worry. I was laying down, in a bed. A hospital bed, it seemed. There was a team of Equan doctors surrounding me, looking bewildered, confused, and curious all at the same time.

“Uh… did I miss something?” I asked, more confused than I’d ever been.

Adara nuzzled my cheek. “I was so scared husband… I thought I was going to lose you. The doctors are trying to figure out exactly what is going on. When I woke up, you were laying next to me asleep. I kissed you on your head and laid there with you for a few minutes. Suddenly, you started… vanishing…”

“What?” I asked Adara.

“I know how it sounds,” my worried mate replied, “but it’s what happened. I tried to wake you but couldn’t. You would go back and forth, becoming nearly invisible before becoming solid again, I was so scared… I had emergency services come right away.”
“From what we can tell,” the lead doctor, an elderly haflinger Equan with a white blaze, started to explain, “you were starting to phase out of our space-time continuum. We got you in a temporal stasis field just in time.”

“How could this have happened?” I asked.

“You would have had to have been exposed to a highly concentrated source of temporal radiation. What might have been the source, we’re absolutely clueless about.” He replied.

“The dream…” I whispered to myself, thinking back.

“What? What is it my love?” Adara asked.

“Anything you could tell us might help.” The doctor said.

“Well… I had this dream… that I was twenty or thirty years in the future… I can’t be sure exactly how long it was. It all seemed so real… but once I woke up, most of the details faded.” I replied.

“I hate to say this,” the doctor told me, “but you most likely jumped through time, into a point in time in your future. Your temporal signature is extremely erratic. You would have probably jumped again if your wife hadn’t called us when she did. We might not have gotten you back.”

The prospect of that was grim. That would have meant I would have lost all of the time I spent with Adara. It would have been as though she died right then. I didn’t like the thought of that at all.

“So..” I asked, my voice quivering, “what are my options?”

“Well, the temporal stasis field is only a stop-gap measure. It’s going to take some… creative thinking to get you back into sync with the rest of us. I have the best temporal scientists in Equan society coming on the next intercity transports, they should be here within the hour,” the doctor replied reassuringly, “don’t worry ambassador, we’re going to get to the bottom of this and figure something out.” With a nod to his colleagues, the doctors filed out of the room to give me some time alone with Adara.

Adara laid her head on my chest, and a single tear squeezed out of one of her closed eyes. I put my hand on her head and softly scratched behind her ears.

“Shhh, shhh, hey now, none of that.” I whispered, gently putting my hand under her chin and lifting her muzzle to my face, kissing her on the nose.

“I thought I was going to lose you. I was so scared…” Adara said, the tears she was fighting back finally breaking free and streaming down her muzzle.
About that time, two familiar faces entered the room.

“Joran.. Saphira.. Thank you so much for coming.” Adara said, nuzzling each of them in turn as they approached my bedside.

“You still with us there buddy?” Joran asked me, putting his hand on my arm and giving me a gentle, friendly shake as he smiled at me.

“Damn straight, Joran. You think I’m gonna just let myself disappear and let you have these two pretty mares all to yourself?” I said, laughing.

Saphira nuzzled my face. “We’ve been worried about you ever since Adara contacted us. We came as soon as we could.”

A silence fell over all of us. Saphira and Adara both began tearing up. Were they saying something to each other without me knowing? Joran looked at the floor somberly.

I had had enough of all of this pity and grief.

“Joran…” I said.

“Yeah?” He asked, turning his gaze toward me. I could see tears welling up in his eyes. Oh come on, not you too Joran… time to lighten the mood a bit, it feels like a damned funeral in here.

“I have something very serious to ask you… a final request of sorts… ya know, in case worse comes to worse.” I said, feigning sadness.

“Go ahead pal.” He said, stepping closer to me. Adara and Saphira both had their eyes fixed on me, and were weeping.

“Come closer..” I whispered. Joran lowered his head to my face. “A bit closer…” I whispered again, and he lowered his head again to the point where his muzzle was almost touching my face.

“Can I suck your dick?” I asked loudly as I licked his muzzle with a smile on my face, completely catching everyone off guard.

The Equan snorted, whinnied, and stumbled backward. He pinned his ears, snorted again and glared at me as I laughed at him. “Hey man come on, that wasn’t funny” he said angrily, “this is serious.”

I looked at the two mares, who were glaring at me as well.

“Oh come on already, who freaking died? I was just trying to lighten the mood a little.” I said to the three pissed off equines that I now shared the room with. Joran looked at me as I hung my head in shame, and then at Adara and Saphira who were both still angry. Then he decided to play along.

“Think we can get those two nags out of the room long enough, big boy?” He whispered playfully, licking my cheek.

“JORAN!!!” Saphira said scornfully, pinning her ears and stomping at him in bewilderment.

Adara stepped in between me and Joran, pushing him out of the way. “That will be QUITE enough of that.” She said, snorting at Joran.

After a minute or so of silence, all of us burst into raucous laughter.

“There, you see?” I laughed. “Don’t you feel better now?” I asked, giving Adara a playful slap on the rump.

“A little.” She admitted.

“We’ll get through this.” I reassured her, smiling. “I have the three best reasons in the world to fight this thing right here in the room with me.”

Joran leaned in close to me. “So… did you really mean what you said? You really wanna do that?” He whispered to me just loud enough for Adara to hear.

“Hey now, don’t push your luck Joran…” Adara warned.

This post has been edited by horseybuttsdrivemenuts on Apr 18 2009, 02:44 AM