Dragon_spirit	Posted: Oct 3 2008, 04:30 PM
I am a cheater Group: Members Posts: 1436 Member No.: 504365 Joined: 17-May 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	That's quite an interesting story ^_^ I was so drawn into every moment. Is this as far as the story goes? Thanks for sharing it with us :)

Deverve	Posted: Oct 4 2008, 05:38 AM
Veteran Group: VIP Members Posts: 1060 Member No.: 729726 Joined: 13-July 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	Great begining keep it up ^_^

Deverve	Posted: Oct 5 2008, 12:13 AM
Veteran Group: VIP Members Posts: 1060 Member No.: 729726 Joined: 13-July 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	bump

Xvemon	Posted: Oct 6 2008, 07:10 AM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 196 Member No.: 583711 Joined: 23-October 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	bump bumpity bump bump wheres the next chapter ^_^ any ways keep up the great work and i hope to read more soon :lol:

beastboy6969	Posted: Oct 6 2008, 08:06 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 9 Member No.: 144231 Joined: 8-August 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	great start to a very interesting story, to bad there wont be any more. guess i will have to leave it to my imagination :-p

DarkMessiah1981	Posted: Oct 6 2008, 11:10 AM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 249 Member No.: 732937 Joined: 20-July 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	Wow!! Great Story. :w00t: Please Keep it up. :please: :please: :please: Dark

siroe	Posted: Oct 6 2008, 07:41 PM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 219 Member No.: 667509 Joined: 17-March 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	bump bump hump bump. plz continue! test: can u find the secrete rhyme word i said in the bumps?

mermixusa	Posted: Oct 7 2008, 05:12 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 4 Member No.: 326712 Joined: 7-August 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	One word. Epic.

beastly man42	Posted: Oct 7 2008, 11:53 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 4 Member No.: 736834 Joined: 27-July 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	holy fucking shit!! eather you write the next chapter or I may die right hear and now. Holy Fucking shit!! Hott!! [SIZE=14][SIZE=14] :devil2: :devil2:

dragonic49	Posted: Oct 8 2008, 04:23 PM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 224 Member No.: 436626 Joined: 9-February 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Wow... Very nice. Very nice indeed. I look forward to reading more of this wonderful story. Please, keep up the good work!! Dragonic

Deverve	Posted: Oct 10 2008, 12:15 AM
Veteran Group: VIP Members Posts: 1060 Member No.: 729726 Joined: 13-July 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	BUMP's here -_-

siroe	Posted: Oct 13 2008, 04:42 PM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 219 Member No.: 667509 Joined: 17-March 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	PPPPLLLLLZZZZZZ continue! i havent read anything this frigin great in a long time!!!

siroe	Posted: Oct 14 2008, 08:29 PM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 219 Member No.: 667509 Joined: 17-March 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	pppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Deverve	Posted: Oct 15 2008, 06:09 AM
Veteran Group: VIP Members Posts: 1060 Member No.: 729726 Joined: 13-July 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	gogo next part :lol: :lol: :lol:

magnet man	Posted: Oct 16 2008, 07:10 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 2 Member No.: 782336 Joined: 15-October 08 Rate Member: 109876543210	thiis is good wish there was more