hello everyone. this is my second story here i believe. i was just day dreaming when this popped into my head. so i decided i might as well put it up. so, here we go!


chapter 1
the broken engine

:system log #55687:::engine malfunction in engine #2. critical damage. cause of malfunction :UNKNOWN: attempting to find malfunction source. critical damage. searching for nearest federation ship that can support ship class :SEEKER:....................unable to find a federation ship that can support ship class :SEEKER:........ unknown frigate class ship on system radar. sending S O S signal now...........unknown frigate is responding. sending request to land...............sending ship and pilot data now............permission to land has been granted. maneuvering ship into position..........unknown frigate is taking ship into its hanger...........WARNING. WARNING. WARNING. explosion detected in engine #2. ship has been knocked out of position. collision with frigate eminent. WARNING. WARNING. WARNING. collision with frigate. critical damage to engine #4. unable to maneuver. frigate is launching recovery ships and repair droids. repair droids have made contact. repair droids are repairing engine's #2 and 4. recovery ships latching on to ship. recovery ships have launched maneuvering engines to bring ship into hanger.........ship has been successfully rescued and is waiting in hanger to await repairs. end of system log #55687:






i know this may not make much sense right now, but im making it as i go along. i dont even really know what happens lol. and i know this is kinda short. but im more used to short chapters and such. the next coming chapters may be longer though :) tell em what you think.

oh come on peoples! nothing here? i know it sucks right now, but i dont often get much time to write all that much. so just bear with me. thanks.

oh come on! nearly 100 views and still not even 1 reply?! this is almost embarrassing! im working on the next part now.

Well, no one really knows what to reply, you know.

yea.....figures.....well, number 2 is on the way. i just had some stuff to do.... and i found the "mare mistress. prequel or sequel?" topic. he he. if u haven't read it yet, read it now. its awesome!

chapter 2
really REALLY bad news



i woke up from the DS pod coughing. (DS meaning deep sleep) once my coughing fit was over, i looked around. nothing had changed. except the monitor. it had the words "important report. please read emediently" blinking on and off on the screen. in the zero gravity i floated over, propelling my self out of the oval shaped DS pod. when i got to the screen, it asked for the passcode. i entered it in, and the screen read ":system log #55687:::" and i read it. after a full minute of reading, i was on full panic. my heart rate was flying, i was sweating, and every normal sound i was used too made me nearly jump out of my skin. "its ok. get a hold of yourself! the ship just took some damage, and sent a S O S. everything is just fine....." just then i heard a hissing sound and nearly pulled out my gun and started blasting the place. but then i realized that it was just the gravity system coming online. wait, gravity? i looked down. i was staring at the ceiling. i looked up. and to my horror i saw the floor.....coming up to me....fast. and with a dull, sickening thud, i made brutal contact with the floor. 'great' i thought to myself 'now i just came out of a week long sleep, about to puke, had a coughing fit, nearly jumped out of my skin 10 times, and now i have a huge knot on my head!' then i got up from the floor, and decided to check up on the damage. when i got to the cockpit and saw the damage to the engines, i nearly fainted. i didn't even have a full 5000 credits running for my name! i couldn't pay a 50,000 credit repair! 'oh man' i thought 'now im not even gonna have a ship to get me to the next bounty! and i was only a days ride away too!' i then walked into my quarters and saw that everything was everywhere. my CD collection was spread everywhere, my cloths were on the floor, a few spare credits were on the bed, and...oh boy......food....not good.....it was EVERYWHERE. including a half eaten cheese burger, that just happened to land on the secret switch that just happened opened his secret cubbord that just happened to hold my secret porn stash. oh god. it was nearly empty. a few were shattered. i would definably have to clean that up before i have any more guests over. but, before i have to clean this up, im gonna take a shower. get some of this crust off of me from the DS pod. "oh great. i drooled while i was sleep" and it was true. i had a long line of dried of drool from my sleep. so i got a towel from the floor (because they were scattered too) smelled it to make sure it didn't smell like rotten cheese or anything, and went into the shower. when i turned on the hot water, it felt like sweet bliss from the freezing cold of the DS pod. i washed up really good, made sure there was no more crust on me, and got out. and then i looked in the mirror to double check. the time in the pod made me look a little.....limp. not as much muscle as before. and i was normally a pretty damn handsome guy, if i do say so myself. a nicely made upper body, with a 6 pack as well, nice shoulders, good arms, and a good looking face. from the waist down it was pretty good too. nicely shaped and formed thighs, calves and feet. good muscle. including the groin and dick. those were always good too. nice and big. good girth. and i deep, blue eyes. although most of those features are gone now. now i look like i was born yesterday. if someone blew a breath on me, i would fall over! its about time to hit the workout area. i can talk to the owners of the frigate later. they probably dont even know im awake yet.

well theres chapter 2. and just thats the biggest iv typed lol. im hoping ill be able to get part 3 out soon. if u have some suggestions, just message me.

bump. sorry i haven't got another chapter up. i get lazy sometimes. also, i just got star wars battle front 2 for xbox and im currently working on getting legendary for all the weapons and stuff......soo....yea...ill work on the next chapter now.

chapter 3
a rifle, a swagar, and a very turned on human.



when i was done working out i felt much more in shape then i did before. but now i was crazy tired. i went to my quarters only to get a big slap in the face when i remembered the mess. so i decided to sleep in a chair or a on a couch. whichever was closer. i was so tired i would fall on the floor at any second. but, i found a couch, and fell on it fast asleep before i even hit it. i didn't have time to even hit the button to roll it out to turn it into a bed. i saw it, went to it, and fell on it. thats all there was time for. when i woke up about 2 hours later there was a light blinking in my face. then i realized that it was the warning screen saying there were people requesting entry. they had been waiting for 5 minutes. 'oi' i thought 'questioners. gotta hate em...' i got off the couch feeling kinda spiteful, and went to the main entry station. then i punched in the code to open the main entry portal, and then i found something kinda surprising. there was a gun barrel in my face. a LEER59 mega rifle if i wasent mistaken, also known by most users of it as the "dont touch me" rifle. and it felt cold against my forehead. and deadly. very deadly. its a kind of 6th since i have. i can tell if something is a threat or is deadly. or dead. and in this case, it was going nuts. the hairs on the back of my head were raising and i was starting to twitch. i looked beyond the gun to the wielder, which was kinda hard, considering the fact that it was kinda wide, and LONG. but i managed it, and saw the most beautiful swagar i had EVER seen. by the way, swagars or wolves, only with human intelligence, more human body (although they keep the fur and head) and humans hands and such. i had dated a few of them, but i would LOVE to get to know this girl. well, i would, if she didnt have a "dont touch me" rifle pointed right at my head. but then i started thinking straight. the shock of a LEER rifle being pointed at my head as i open a door, and then the fog that companying seeing my soon-to-be stalkie kinda puts you out of your head. then i thought, 'holy shit, this really turns me on.' unluckily, she seemed to take no to little interest in me. shes more concerned if im a threat or not. then i remembered it. i blushed. i was naked when i went into the DS pod. i came out naked. i never even looked at my closet. gettin the picture yet? im currently standing in a doorway with a LEER rifle pointed at my head, a crazy hot swagar holding it, and i was butt naked standing there. and i was getting turned on. this was really REALLY bad. "eerrr.....hello." i manage to say. ' 'eerrr.....hello'?. is that all you can manage to say you wing nut!?' i think. i slap myself in my mind for being an idiot. she looks me over, realizing there is no possible way in bloody hell that im a threat, as im butt naked with a gun at my head, and starting to get a hard on, which starts ebbing away. she looks me in the face, and then, to my extreme relief starts lowering the rifle. then i say "uhh..mind if i get some cloths on?" "go ahead" she says. oh my god, that voice. its like water with the taste of honey. and good for you! i instantly lose my spitefulness, and gain a good deal of strength back. so i head back to my quarters, with her following my every move, and head right for my closet.







i hope you guys like this chapter. would like a couple of responses from it. mabey a few ideas for it. i promise ill come up with the next chapter soon:)

bump. sorry its been awhille. but stuff comes up alot. but i will get some time either this wensday or monday.

alright, this isn't really go so well. im just going to go ahead and not write anymore on this story. if anyone feels that i should keep writing, tell me. if not, just dont answer. if i get atleast 3 good responses, i might keep writing. l8r all.

aww please keep writing i like this is fulll of surprises i like this storie plz continue ^_^

im just new here but plz keep writing your story seems really good

oh alright. ill write another chapter or 2 since u 2 were the first with good comments. they will be up in just a bit.

yay!!! ^_^