This is my first story, and my first post. It's fantasy based off of me and off my desires. If you enjoy it I'll continue the story. I hope you do. Thanks.



Shadow was living up to his name, following across the room to my armoire, then back again to my bed. Again and again. After about the 4th time I stopped, knelt down and scratched him between the ears.
"You, silly dog, need keep from under my feet!" He licked my face ignoring the playful scolding. I stopped packing for a moment and buried my face in his neck to enjoy the scent of my 2 year old black Lab. Shadow was my best friend, the first friend I'd had after moving out of my parents house in NYC and moving to Philly. I'd raised him from a puppy and there was no one I cared about nearly as much.
Until I met Paul.
"What am I going to do without you for a whole week?" I kissed Shadow and let him kiss me back for a long while before I went back to packing.
Paul was our vet. And we'd been dating for about a month and things were getting serious. Tomorrow I left to drive 2 hours out into the "boonies" to his family's farm. It would be the first time I left Shadow. I was leaving him with my brother and his girlfriend and I knew he'd be cared for. But as much as I wanted this trip to get closer with Paul, I didn't feel great about being without my loving dog. My phone rang interrupting my train of thought. Looking at the caller ID I saw that it was Paul, and I smiled as I answered.
"Hey you."
"Hey you." He replied, I could hear him smiling back. "Are you packed?"
"Almost, I'll be done way before the morning though." I looked at the suitcase on my bed and it's unfolded contents. I hated folding.
"Let's leave tonight." He said excitedly. I frowned and looked down at Shadow.
"Why? I haven't had the chance to say goodbye to Shadow, and..." I trailed off, I didn't really have any other excuse other than being nervous about the trip, and I didn't want to admit that to Paul.
"Then start now. Look I'll be by to pick you up in an hour and we can drop him off at Tom's on our way and you can give him all your kisses then. Then you can start kissing me" He added slyly. "Will you be packed by then?"
"Yeah I guess." Shadow was nuzzling my crotch while I finished shoving things in my suit case, I brushed him away and scratched under his chin as I walked back to my armoire.
"I'll see you soon," I could hear him walking outside "and, Kitty?" I smiled at the pet name.
"Yeah?"
"I'm really glad we're doing this. I'm glad I get to be the guy who takes you out of the city for once in your life." My smile grew and I adopted an incredulous tone.
"Hey! I went to summer camp!" I protested.
"A weekend by a lake just outside of the city does not count. You just wait till you see the stars." I could hear other cars and knew he was driving now.
"See you in an hour" I smiled, deciding he was probably right.
"I won’t be late." He hung up, leaving me to finish packing and saying goodbye to my Shadow. Packing took about 3 more minutes so I decided to take a shower. I showered quickly and walked back to my bedroom. Standing in front of my full length mirror I was thankful for my short black hair. I didn't think spending an hour doing your hair was something girls in the country were supposed to do. Good thing the messy look worked for me. I took a jar of body cream and worked from the bottom up. Wiggling the cream between my toes then up my long brown legs then over my hairless mound and up to my tummy and around to my round shapely ass. I was feeling nervous and the adrenaline had me all tingly. I hadn't heard Shadow pad over, but his nice cool nose was trying to push between my legs. He always liked the smell of my lotions, and being a dog, my pussy too. I enjoyed the affection of his licks but never let him really get into licking me to completion. The adrenaline coursing through me made his licks send a more powerful shiver than usual. I'd never thought of my dog as a sexual creature except when he was humping my pillows and even then only in a sort of detached way. I ran it through my head quickly and saw nothing against not stopping him till I was done moisturizing. I got a bit more cream and worked my way from belly button to nipple. When I got to my nipples I lingered there. My dark areolas wrinkled as my nipples grew harder. I pinched the big hardness of them between my fingers, Shadows tongue felt wonderful! I let my legs open a bit more and turned around. His long tongue darted between my labia deeper than any mans ever had and I moaned and leaned up against the wall. Shadow had his head cocked to the side and was making little grunty noises. I was too caught up in the growing orgasm to notice the painfully red cock slipping out of its sheath, looking back now, I know it was there. One hand cupping my breast and the other in my hair and I was cumming. Knuckles pale and head thrown back I moaned hard and came harder. Just then I heard a knock on the door.
"Catlynne?" Paul’s voice called "You OK in there?"
"Shit" I whispered "Yeah, one sec!" I added louder. I rushed in the bathroom and got a cloth to wipe my pussy and Shadows nose, grabbing my silk robe and putting it on hastily as I walked towards the door. I opened it and smiled shyly at Paul. "I'm not exactly ready yet." I let him in and he looked around puzzled "I'm packed though!" I gestured towards my suit cases he walked into my bedroom.
"Jesus Catlynne." Tom ran a hand through his dark wavy hair. "I thought....I heard you...and I thought.." He trailed off. God damn this fucking apartment and its thin fucking walls.
"You thought someone was in here? Tom," I laughed slightly nervously, hoping he didn't hear it. "I was masturbating." I said shyly. He looked at me then at Shadow. I couldn't look at shadow just now, I knew I'd give myself away. I was a shitty liar.
Toms face flushed and his bright blue eyes shined at me. "Anxious?" he asked.
"What do you.."
"You always get crazy horny when you're anxious."He interrupted. And coming towards me he added. "You should have waited." He undid the knot on my robe and pulled my hand down to grab the growing bulge under his gray slacks. “I would have helped.” He whispered before grabbing me roughly and pulling me towards him. Greedily I yanked down his pants and pulled his rock hard 9 inch cock out of his boxers stroking it and turning my head up for him to kiss me. He kissed me hard and passionately. There was no question, no thinking. He threw me down on the bed, animal lust taking over as he bit my neck. I yelped at the pain but didn’t withdraw. Shadow had already made me cum, but I wanted more, I wanted cock. I hesitated at the thought of shadow, sitting at the side of the bed watching us.
"Wait" I panted, "Shadow..." usually I closed him out of the room when we made love, he got too excited otherwise. He’d never been one to jump on the bed or anything too rowdy like that. But he’d pant loudly and hump his pillow, and it distracted me.
"Fuck it." Paul all but growled. "You're mine. Right now. I'm not waiting." His mouth was against my ear as he spoke, hot words attacking my senses making my pussy drip even more and he plunged his raging hard on deep into my cunny in one hard stroke.
I came immediately.
Paul kept riding me hard pumping away like his life was at the end of his prick. My back was arched, my ass off the bed he was pulling me onto his big pole and pushing me off fiercely. He was slamming me into the headboard with and I loved it. "Cum for me Kitty." He growled "Cum on my cock!" And I did. I came so many times I lost count. Finally after about 15 minutes of rough pounding Paul pulled out. He grabbed me behind my head and pulled my face roughly towards him. On one knee, my face inches from his throbbing hard on he stroked fast and hard. Breathlessly he rumbled in his scratchy baritone “I’m gonna cum all over your face. I opened my mouth and closed my eyes “Please” I called. “Please give it to me!” I yearned for his hot spunk in my mouth and dripping off my face. I didn’t have to wait long. He moaned and gobs of jizz splattered my face neck and tits, with a healthy helping landing in my mouth. I swallowed, licked my lips and sighed. Sated and spent I fell back on my pillow. Shadow padded over and started licking my face as it hang slightly off the bed, then moved to clean up my tits as well his tongue on my diamond cutter hard nipples felt painfully good and I almost came again. Exhausted as I was it took me a moment to react. I lay there enjoying his big rough tongue for about 30 seconds before it occurred to me to recoil. By then it was too late, he'd licked all of the cum off and I’d been breathing deeply showing how much I enjoyed it. Paul was staring open mouthed at the both of us as Shadow stopped licking and hopped up on the bed and settled in to sleep.
Paul threw his head back in laughter. "Well that's one way to clean up." he relaxed against his pillow. "Maybe we'll leave in the morning after all." he said sleepily. I heard his soft snoring as I fell asleep, happy.


To be continued.

:) a good start to a good story, hope to hear more.

Thanks BitchPuppy. I appreciate the comment.

Next installment, probably the last for today, I may add more tomorrow.



We got up early the next day. I gathered my suit case and Shadows things and Paul helped me bring it all down to the back of his truck. We drove to Tom and Stacy's and they both assured me Shadow would be "treated like the king you think he is." I gave them both big hugs and told them I'd see them in a week.
Off we went, I fell asleep before we even got out of the city. When I woke up Paul was shaking me gently.
"We're here" He spoke in a dreamy voice. I wiped the sleep out of my eyes and looked out to wear he'd brought me. It was beautiful. I'd seen the suburbs and hated it, always thought the country was just suburbs with bigger yards, but I realised this was much, much better. I looked out on the fields with the animals grazing freely or behind fences and all of the colours of the foliage and breathed deeply, shocked by the beauty. The whole night and day I'd been preoccupied with figuring out what letting Shadow make me cum made me. But now all of that was pushed aside.
"It's amazing." I said to Paul, who had parked and was bringing our bags into the beautiful colonial home.
"You haven't seen a thing yet." He beamed at me "Wait till you see Kaylib. I know you said you've never been riding before, so I thought I'd teach you." Paul was glowing, I'd never seen him so alive before, and it made me happy.
"Ok," I replied with a smile. "But if one of those things bites me or kicks me, I'm blaming"
"They're not things." He cut me off, the smile wiped off his face, all serious now. "You treat them with respect and they'll teat you with the same. They're very important to me." He added almost shyly.
"Sorry." I looked down. "I know how I feel about Shadow, I don't like when people call him an 'it' or a 'thing' either. Sorry" I added again, felling stupid. Bringing Shadow up brought me back to him licking my cunt, and I got wet all over again. I tried not to think about it anymore and looked back at Paul. He was smiling again now and looking at me strangely.
"It's fine, hey if you're not too tired we can go riding now, I've got some of my sisters old riding gear in the house, you're just about the same size." His smile turned devilish. "God I'd love to see you in full riding get. So how 'bout it?" I smiled at his excitement, enjoying it.
"Sure thing, but you have to take it slow with me, I've never even seen a real horse up close." He gave me that devilish smile once more as I followed him into the house.
"Since when do you like it slow?" He said over his shoulder. I guess never. I thought, looking forward to a day of new experiences.
An hour later I was dressed in borrowed knee high shiny black riding boots, tight fitting white pants a gray jacket and a silly little hat to top it all off. “is this really necessary?” I asked while strapping the hat under my chin.
“Of course not.” Paul’s eyes were devouring me hungrily. “But it’s damned sexy.” He added with a smile. I laughed and I laughed and reached for the brand new looking riding crop.
“I don’t think I’ll be using this on the horse,” I eyed him seductively. “But maybe later?”
“Oh good madam,” he replied in a faux English accent. “please don’t get me started. You’re not the only one I want to ride today.” He switched back to his normal smooth baritone. “Now please, let’s get going before it’s too dark for you to ride safely. Chrystal is a wonderful horse, but even she can’t keep an inexperienced rider from injuring themselves and her when neither of you can see.”
“I thought you were raving about Kaylib or something like that?” I asked, not that I minded, not having ever seen a horse one was just the same as another in my eyes.
“No, Kaylib is a bit... rough for a first time rider. He prefers to gallop. I’ll be riding him, but trust me, you’ll love Chrystal.” Paul grabbed my hand and lead me down to the stables, chatting and flirting the whole way down. He greeted the stable boy with a smile a nod and a kind word and dismissed him for the day, and that’s when I saw her.
“Is this Kaylib?” I breathed in awe. The horse was silver, not white or gray but a beautiful nearly unnatural colour, I thought, for a horse. Her mane looked like something Paris Hilton would pay thousands of dollars to get someone to do to her hair. She was beautiful.
“Not unless someone gave him an extreme makeover and a gelding since I’ve been away. No, this filly is Chrystal, you’ll be riding her today.” He walked over and grabbed a brush from the wall beside her and began to brush out her mane. “She’s beautiful right? I picked her out personally, one of the few that wasn’t bred on our grounds.” He looked so proud at that moment, he almost glowed. There was a whinny from one of the other stalls and Paul stopped brushing and walked to the other side of the stable. And there was Kaylib. Tall dark and handsome didn’t begin to describe him. I know nothing about horses, but I do know beauty when I see it. Slowly I walked towards him, still slightly frightened of the large animal before me.
“Can I touch him?” I was dream walking, not hearing Paul’s response, and not caring as I put my hand against Kaylib’s mane, just behind his ears. “You’re a beautiful boy aren’t you?” I spoke softly to him, running my hand from his ears to his rump. He was heavily muscular but lean. He looked fast in a way that red cars look fast. I was in love. Paul was watching me closely, but I didn’t mind. I took the brush and started brushing him in a way that seemed natural. Kaylib seemed to be enjoying it so I brushed a bit harder.
“I’m gonna go have a pee back at the house, then we can get started. Why don’t you hang out and get to know all the horses.” Paul was saying behinds me.
“Sure” I nodded, “don’t be too long.” I added. As he walked off I set the brush back in its holder and sat down on a stool behind me. I was speaking soothing words in an almost hypnotic state as I stroked Kaylib's belly, trying not to notice his shaft near my fingers. The more I tried not to notice the closer my fingers got. After a bit Kaylib whinnied and I came back to earth. I realised my hand was on his shaft now and his cock had extended. And holy crap was it big! Already my panties were wet with the sight of it, at least 10 inches and as thick as my arm. I had to touch it. I couldn’t help myself. I took off the little white gloves I’d borrowed and sheepishly reach for his hanging cock. In my hands the weight of it was amazing, lightly I stroked his monster prick, not even thinking of what I was doing. It was getting even bigger! I estimated about 20 inches and gasped. It was the most beautiful, sexy, arousing thing I’d ever seen, and I realised suddenly that I wanted it inside me however possible. I was shocked by the thought, but turned on as well. I kept stroking him as I looked around, no one was there. I couldn’t let Kaylib fuck me, I thought, it’d kill me! I kept stroking him, getting wetter and wetter all the time. He was humping against my hand now and I was imagining being underneath him taking as much as I could into my hot wet hole. I was never going to be able to act normally around Paul worked up like this, I thought. I needed some sort of release.
Quickly I looked around a second time and knelt down underneath Kaylib. I undid the chin strap of the ridiculous hat and scooted forward, my left hand about 6 inches down his shaft I slid my right into my panties. I was sopping wet and already near orgasm. Slow and gently I put my mouth on his erection. Licking all around the spongy head while I fingered myself was just too much. I was moaning against his giant hard on and thrusting it deeper and deeper till it hit the back of my throat. When it did I came, but I didn’t stop. I wanted to taste Kaylib’s cum and I didn’t care about anything else. A minute later and he came in my mouth like someone had turned on a hose. I swallowed and swallowed, enjoying the taste, but I couldn’t swallow fast enough. Horse semen was filling my cheeks and leaking from the sides of my mouth, dripping down my chin. Finally I stopped trying to swallow. I pulled my face away gasping. More gets of steaming hot cum came at me and in the midst of it all I heard footsteps.

I jumped up and faced the wall, trying to rid myself of any evidence. It was useless.
“Kitty.” Paul’s voice was a bit raspier than usual. I kept facing the wall hoping I could get him to leave long enough to do something about all the juices sticking to me. Kaylib’s, and my own.
“I’d have left the city a lot sooner had I know how beautiful it was here.” I said shakily, wiping my face with the borrowed gloves.
“I’d have brought you hear ages ago had I know you liked to fuck animals.”

Interesting start SD. I like your plot but the mechanics could use a bit of fine tuning. I find from experience that paragraphs of though work better than anything and it makes your story easier to read and understand. This will take practice so please continue and do not give up.

Also, when I write I try to re-read my story at least twice before submitting it. Even then I will still find places that I could have done better but they are far less than if I had done nothing.

I look forward to seeing more of your offerings and you have my ten of encouragement in the mean time. Welcome to the writers guild Babe.

M. Lobo B)

Thank you very much for the advice. I think I rushed that last one, didn't reread it at all. I'm not sure I understand what you mean about the type of paragraphs however. I'd appreciate any more advice you could give me and clarity on that issue. I've been reading your most recent story the last few hours and I'd love some critique from someone of your talent.

Again, thanks for the comment, the vote and the advice.

thanks for posting strangedesire. a hot story so far. have to agree with mattlobo on the paragraphs to make it an easier read. leaving a line space or so between the new thoughts will make the story and easier read. but that will come with the experiene of writing. read a few of the stories from some of the experienced writers to see what is meant by paragraphs of thoughts like kangaroo, alicealice,collie99 etc. am giving you a well worth 10 rate for what is written so far an please continue. :rock: :rock: :devil2:

Whatever the paragraph technicalities, this is still one of the best stories I've ever come across. I can't wait to read the next installment !!

A big, fat 10 from me.

One small installment as I may not be updating again 'til monday. Please be patient with me. I then you all for your comments, encouragment and advice. I hope the paragraphing makes this a bit easier to read.

“I’d have brought you hear ages ago had I know you liked to fuck animals.” The raspiness in his voice did nothing to distort his calmness.

“What?!” I said, turning towards him. Stupid, I thought. I was a mess, The dark wet spot on my pants was as big as one of Paul’s large hands, and my face and hair were covered with horse cum. I looked down at my feet as if it could hide the sloppy mess I was.

I didn’t know what to say. I didn’t have anything to say, I’d been caught in the act and I was ashamed, frightened and disgusted with myself.
“
Catlynne,” Paul was next to me in two large steps. “Don’t be scared baby. Yesterday, with Shadow I suspected. I heard your moans then when you let me in he was licking his raging hard on. Now today I watched you pleasure my sweet Kaylib.”
At this he looked at Kaylib and stroked his back lightly. Looking back at me he moved in the extra five inches and kissed me tenderly, ignoring the semen now drying on my
lips.

“I was hiding over there.” He pointed to a dark corner of the stable that I hadn’t noticed before. “I’m sorry to have tricked you, I just had to know what you’d do. Your reaction to Kaylib made me even more curious.”

My dark complexion turns a shade of red, burning my cheeks with the warmth. I had acted oddly in meeting Kaylib.

“I’m not angry,” He looked in my eyes as he spoke. “ I’m...Hell I’m turned on. I always dreamed of watching someone pleasure Kaylib, I had to settle for jerking him off myself, and watching him mate with Chrystal. Why are you crying Cat, baby this is a good thing. Please don’t cry, love.”

I crumpled into him sobbing. I was more confused than I’d ever been. He was turned on? I didn’t even know why I was turned on. Nothing like this had ever happened to me.

“I’m scared.” Whispered into his shirt. “I don’t know why I just did that. Yesterday, with Shadow, I’d never done that before. I didn’t fu....I mean, I just let him lick me, but...”I trailed off, not knowing how to say what I was feeling.

“It made you hot.” Paul finished for me. “Not just because of the stimulation. You love Shadow Cat, it’s not the unusual to want to make love to him. I feel the same way about Kaylib.”

I pulled away from him, shocked. “You’ve let him...I mean...You’ve actually..”

“No.” He smiled and kissed me again. “I wish I could, but no I’ve just masturbated him and masturbated to the thought of him. But I love him, and I think he’s beautiful. I’ve felt that way for a long time, about a lot of my animals.” He was stroking Kaylib again, one are around me. “So, you’ve never had Shadow inside you?”

I shook my head against his chest. “No, I’d never even thought about it ‘till yesterday.” I hesitated, I hadn’t really let myself think of making love to Shadow, but I did now, and I felt the warmth spread between my thighs. “But I want to. God, I want to so badly.” Somehow, I felt better having said it out loud.

“Let’s go get you cleaned up,” He was stroking my hair and looking into my eyes lovingly. “ we can talk more after you’ve washed all of this off you.” He kissed me again, and gave Kaylib one last stroke before we walked back to the house.

To be continued.

I like how the atmosphere & mood is set. Do go on !!

I know I said I wouldn't be posting till monday... But I lied, sue me. I'm addicted to this story and I hope at least a few of you are too.

Thank you bitchpuppy, mattlobo, rckyroad2, RiverOfHeresy, and anyone else who commented, encouraged, gave advice or just read. I appreciate it all. I really do.


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Back at the house, Paul lead me to the large stone shower in the master bedroom. I was still shaking a bit from nerves but his steady arm on the small of my back and calm demeanour were beginning to do the job of soothing me.

Stepping into the shower Paul began deftly undressing me. The gray jacket and white shirt were off in moments. Oddly, I was feeling a bit shy with his face now ever so close to my still wet pussy as he slid off both boots, and then the tight fitting pants. Standing there in my light blue lacy bra and thong panties that rode low to show off the curve of my rounded hips and ass I felt exposed.

“Will you wash my back?” I asked shyly, watching my man’s crotch through my lowered eyelashes. I was still horny and I was hoping I could get some satisfaction from him before we delved into serious conversation again.

“Actually,” he spoke, reaching behind me and expertly undoing the clasp of my bra. Letting my breasts free he grabbed the left gently underneath and stroked my large hardened nipple with his thumb. “I was hoping you’d let me fuck you before you showered. And during your shower I’ve got a few preparations to make.” He lowered his head as he spoke to me. Never taking his eye from my painfully hard nipple, nor did he stop stroking it.

I was purring with desire at this point, arching my back towards him unconsciously. Paul took my nipple into his mouth sucking me until I gasped.

“Before?” I spoke through rapid breaths, panting with pleasure. “I need to wash the smell off...” I moaned as his tongue circled my nipple and he let go. Paul looked up at me his blue eyes locking with my brown. “And what preparations? What are you preparing for?” I searched his eyes for a clue, but I saw nothing there but love and lust. He started stroking my nipple with his thumb anew and smiled at me.

“No.” His voice was raspy with desire. “If you couldn’t already tell, I like the smell.” I looked down at the bulge in his pants. It did indeed seem that he liked the smell. “And as for my preparations, don’t you worry about that. You’ll find out when you need to.” Paul took my nipple back into his mouth and simultaneously thrust his fingers deep into my aching slit. My resolve to know what he prepared for fading as my orgasm mounted.

He pulled me to the cool tile of the bathroom floor. I kneeled with him bringing his head from my nipple for a kiss. I was grinding my pussy against his fingers as another orgasm washed over me. After I cam I shoved him down on his back, hastily removing his belt and undoing his pants. He was rock hard as I pulled the large member from his boxer briefs and the nearly purple large mushroom head glistened with drops of pre-cum.

“Suck me.” Paul rasped, back arching bringing his cock closer to my mouth. “Suck me like you sucked Kaylib.” He was all but humping the air in his passion and I took the head of his warm cock into my mouth.

Remembering Kaylib’s hot horse cock in my mouth did nothing to calm my urges. As the exact opposite happened I imagined what his long alien rod would feel like penetrating me and took Paul’s cock fully into my mouth.

“God!” He moaned stiffening even more than I thought possible in the back of my mouth. He was like stone, diamond, pushing in the back of my throat. “You’re thinking of him now, aren’t you?” He didn’t sound upset or jealous, just horny so I nodded. Not wanting to realise him from my full lips I reached between my thighs to slid my delicate fingers up and down my dripping cunt.

Without warning Paul got up and shoved me to my knees.

“Take me please!” I was nearly screaming now. “I need you. God I need you in me now.” I felt the head of his cock slip past my engorged pussy lips and plough into me, hitting my cervix with force.

“We’re going to have to stretch your twat more than that my love.” He spoke as he drilled into me painfully. I’d never minded pain and this was no different. I thrust my hips back against him roughly. I could feel him pushing at my cervix and I loved it.

He was drilling me faster now. I could tell he was about to cum. And while I didn’t want this to end I wanted his cum inside me, filling me up. Suddenly he pulled out and I yelped my disappointment.

“I’m not done with you yet.” He replied to my obvious dissatisfaction. “ I just don’t want to cum in that hole.” I started to protest, but before I could get anything out I felt his fingers, wet from my dripping cunny probe my nearly virgin asshole. I recoiled, we’d tried anal less than a handful of times and each time the pain was too much for me to handle.

Paul grabbed my hips and brought me back towards him.
“You,” he breathed heavily. “are my bitch. And I am your master. And if I say you’re going to take my cock in your ass, you’re going to take it, and love it. Do you understand?” I nodded. Frightened but aroused I arched my back, displaying my tight puckered asshole for him to use as he liked.

“Good girl.” He cooed. And before I knew it he’d plunged his long thick cock into my anus. I screamed. Pleasure and pain wheeled up inside of me and I bit my lip against it all. I was afraid he was going to fuck me as hard as he’d just fucked my pussy and I tried to keep from clenching.

“That’s right Kitty.” He sighed soothingly. “Let me in baby, just relax, I promise I won’t hurt you any more than I just did.” He was right, slowly he pumped inside me. Pre-cum and pussy juice lubricating the smooth ride. I was purring with pleasure, the pain was gone now and all that was left was the hot poker of pleasure sliding in and out of me.

“Please,” I moaned “fuck me. Fuck me hard!” He didn’t need any more of an invitation. Paul sped up, grabbing my hips and pulling them back. I was pushing back into him at the same time and the slaps of his pelvis against my ass echoed in the room. I knew my already tight hole was clenching as I came but I didn’t care.

“I’m gonna cum.” Paul growled. “Oh God Kitty I’m cu...” He thrust into me one last time roughly and stayed there. I could feel his dick twitching inside me as he let loose all his seed. I moaned and fell forward. Unable and unwilling to move.

Slowly Paul lowered himself next to me, our noses and inch from touching. I moved in for a kiss and he brushed my hair out of my eyes as I did so. He continued placing kisses all over my face, my eyelids, my nose, my forehead, speaking in between each.

“Now” kiss “darling.” Kiss “I need” kiss “you too” Kiss “get cleaned up.” He stopped kissing me and looked me in the eyes. “You’re alright?” He asked, concern in his eyes.

“Yes,” I responded and nodded to assure him. “I’m wonderful.” He smiled at that and placed another kiss on my nose.

“Yes, you are.” Paul stood up and gathered both of our things, stopping at the bathroom door he looked back at me. “I’ll be gone most of the day, but I’ll be back this evening. Why don’t you get some rest.” He added. “I hope I wasn’t too rough with you. If you need anything at all it’s here in the house. I’ll see you tonight.”

At that he left me staring at the door, tingling with anticipation at what he could possibly be preparing for all day. I couldn’t wait to find out.
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To be continued....

Very good SD. Can hardly wait to read the rest.....you have a story tellers talent my dear....Jim :beer: :rock: :devil2:

Yowsers, Babe... what an improvement. Are you sure you ain’t some famous writer IRL because what I see here is like night and day when you compare your first chapters with the last. I find the story line not only intriguing, but also easy to read and understand. You learn fast and I'll definitely be back to ready more of this tale and any other that you put your name to. :beer:

M. Lobo B)

Thank you so much. I've been writing for a long time but I've never let anyone read it (other than my husband) and after a bit of constructive criticism (I so appreciate the detailed message.) It was easy to to see how I could improve. I'm even enjoying writing the story more now. I hope to continue improving upon it and will be adding more on monday after some quality time with the husband.

Thank you again.

This is developing into one of the best erotic stories I've ever read, period.

Wow! That was HOT. Thanks for the post.