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| StrangeDesire |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 06:03 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 785 Member No.: 748747 Joined: 16-August 08
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I'm glad you like it. I want sooo badly to finish reading Rich bitch but I don't want to inadvertantly copy any of it. So I've been waiting. I sort of can't wait to be done with this story so I can finish reading but I'm afraid it's still at least two or three chapters away from being done. Anyway, thanks for your comment:) |
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| StrangeDesire |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 09:23 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 785 Member No.: 748747 Joined: 16-August 08
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At least 2 more chapters cumming!
I know it may seem like it but the story's really not even nearly over. Thanks you again for all the support. I hope you enjoy. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Before I noticed we were standing outside of the stable doors. I’d been deep in my own thoughts for the ten minute walk and now my heart was racing. Paul was watching me carefully and I shot him a confident smile trying not to betray my thoughts. I walked shadow past the stables and into the gated riding area. I let him go after giving him a big kiss and turned back towards Paul. “I don’t think I want to ride.” I said as we stepped through the open doors. I spotted Kaylib in his stall, freshly cleaned and beautiful. “What would you like to do?” Paul spoke softly. “Get to know him.” I called to him behind me. I was next to Kaylib now and I stroked his back softly. “Hello darling.” I was saying in a soft soothing voice. “Do you remember me? My name’s Catlynne, I’m the one who sucked that glorious cock of yours.” I heard Paul chuckle behind me and gave him a glare before laughing myself. “Well I did!” I said to him, and he made a ‘zipped lip’ motion at his mouth and I turned back to beautiful stallion in front of me. “I think you liked that.” I said moving in front of him stroking behind his ears, my fingers running through his glorious mane. “I think I liked it too.” I said, and he nuzzled my hair. I let him and placed a few kisses under his chin. “Would you like to do that again?” I pulled a stool over to him and sat down, still speaking soothingly. I stroked his belly while I sat, staring at his giant prick. The size of him still boggled my mind and I took in a big breath. “Wow.” I spoke to no one in particular. “You are a very big boy.” I added. I pushed past my apprehension and reached for him. I started stroking the beautiful animals cock and it reacted immediately. The more I stroked the larger it appeared. I was getting very turned on by now and I turned to see Paul with his pants around his ankles stroking his stiffening member. “Don’t worry about me.” He said in an almost exasperated tone. “Keep going, and don’t be afraid.” I was afraid, but it was hard to care with my pussy dripping as it was and this beautiful phallus in my hand. The tightness of my denim cut offs was starting to irritate my sensitive pussy, so I slid them off. I had bent over to slid off my shorts and now my face was about four inches away from the impressive 20 inch horse cock. I was oozing with wanting and I couldn’t stand it anymore. I took the spongy head into my mouth, still bent over so Paul could watch my beautiful heart shaped ass and the wetness spreading through my panties. I felt him behind me and tensed. “Keep going Kitty, I wanna make you cum.” And his tongue was inside me quick as a flash, he’d pulled my panties aside and was lapping up my juices. “Uhhhh!” I moaned, slipping Kaylib’s giant cock deeper into my throat. I twisted my hips unconsciously against Paul’s mouth and came. I could tell I squirted and Paul could too. He pulled his face from me and I moaned again. I didn’t want this to ever end. I felt the head of Paul’s cock push against my lips and I spread my legs a bit, inviting him. He plunged into me with a groan. “Keep going my love.” He growled. “I want you to suck him dry, I want you to be covered in his cum from head to toe.” He was ploughing in me furiously now and I all but choked on my studs giant cock as I jerked. I moaned on it and got a shock as horse jizz flooded my mouth. Paul stopped fucking me suddenly and I let Kaylib from my mouth and moaned, semen bubbling from me as I did. Paul kneeled beside me and grabbed the stallions cock, expertly jerking him and bathing me in what seemed like gallons of cum. He placed my hand where his was and I continued milking the thick white cum onto my face, tits, belly and twat. My clit twitched and I was mad with desire. “I want it inside me. Can he do that? I mean without killing me, can I take him inside me please?” I was panting with desire and humping the air like some animal in heat. “Wait one second.” Paul rumbled kicking his pants off completely. He walked out of my line of sight and came back with a large wooden crate. “Lay here, on your back.” He said hurriedly, his cock was still rock hard and I did as he bade, reaching for his cock as I did. “No, not now, if you touch me I’m going to Cum and I don’t want to just yet.” He pushed the crate right next to Kaylib. “You sure you want this?” He said. I nodded quickly, not trusting my words. I was on my back with my horse cum soaked pussy touching Kaylib's giant drooping prick. Paul reached for it and started to expertly masturbate him again, getting some of the hardness back in it. I saw what he meant to do and lifted my pelvis higher. “In me!” I moaned. “Put it in me, please Paul I can’t wait any longer.” I was rocking my hips back and forth wanting it so badly. Paul took his fingers and opened my yearning clam. With his other hand he was pushing that big hunking horse cock into me and I screamed, high pitched and short. He was pumping it into me, deeper and deeper with each stroke. “Holy, Fucking, Shit!” I screamed. I was pushing myself back against it harder, my shoulders still on the crate but the rest of my body unable to keep still. I was incoherent from then on, orgasm after orgasm washing over me life a flood. “Take it baby!” Paul was moaning. “Take as much as you can my horny little Kitty.” It was as if he was speaking another language, I understood the tone and it encouraged me, but the words were all alien. I was so far gone nothing mattered but the huge stallion dick pushing around my innards. I put my hand over Paul’s and took over shoving Kaylib inside me. Paul withdrew his hand and placed in instead on his own hard on. Almost immediately I felt my hole filling with even more of Kaylib’s love liquid and I moaned as an unexpected load came from Paul’s cock onto my already drenched tits. I came hard as I fell back on the crate, Kaylib still pouring less thick jizz over my hairless mound. Paul was stroking my face when I woke up. “Whahappened?” I grumbled. “I think you passed out for a second. Are you ok? I was worried.” I was still covered with sticky semen and I licked my lips. Paul stiffened under me and I smiled. “Yeah, I’m alright, but what about you?” I reached for his dick through his replaced pants but he stopped me. “How about you not worry about me,” he smiled. “I’m feeling better than I ever have and I think we should get you back to the house and cleaned up.” I was standing up and Kaylib was still over me. I went to his front side and gave him a good scratch. “Thanks gorgeous.” I said. “I had fun.” He nuzzled me and I gave him a kiss before walking back to the house. To be continued. :heart: |
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 144 Member No.: 186838 Joined: 13-November 05
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:o Absolutely fan-fucking-tastic. Thank you so much for sharing this great story with us. Truly well written and totally enjoyable. A 10 if I could.
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| hollywood1976 |
Posted: Aug 22 2008, 03:10 AM
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great stories your a talented writer :)
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| RiverOfHeresy |
Posted: Aug 22 2008, 12:28 PM
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F A N T A S T I C !!!
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| mattlobo |
Posted: Aug 22 2008, 12:38 PM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1062 Member No.: 323189 Joined: 1-August 06
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Very hot addition SD. Thank you for sharing it with us Babe.
M. Lobo B) |
| StrangeDesire |
Posted: Aug 22 2008, 05:39 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 785 Member No.: 748747 Joined: 16-August 08
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No update just yet as I'm waiting for rules information. I've written most of the next chapter but am waiting to post it. I promise your patience will be rewarded :angel:
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| rtfrmn |
Posted: Sep 26 2008, 09:57 AM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 901 Member No.: 144046 Joined: 8-August 05
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I must apologize to you "SD," as I sent you a message before I found your story thread here. I am addicted to your story! It is simply mezmerizing and your penmanship is superb! The storyline/plot is nothing short of erotic, and, as has already been said, your tale truly tells a story that transends "ordinary porn." If there was anything I would add/change, it would be the notable absence of acknowledgement of a stallion's "flaring" upon orgasm. Since the head of a horse cock flares -- expands -- to such an extent, it can be (IS) very dangerous to a human to have it inside their mouth when it occurs. Real physical injury could occur with a large horse. That aside, your story is truly as hot, sexy, erotic, and addicting as any ever written. Thank you so very much for finding the courage/inspiration to share your talents (and beauty!) with us. You are greatly appreciated.
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| dragoneyes |
Posted: Sep 26 2008, 06:08 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 768 Member No.: 278930 Joined: 9-May 06
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I just read your story from the beginning. It is an excellently written and very exciting story. Why haven't you written anything for a month? I think you spoiled me with your earlier quick posts. Please continue writing, if not this story then some other. Thank You.
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| litlwillie |
Posted: Sep 27 2008, 12:02 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 689 Member No.: 352344 Joined: 25-September 06
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Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Your story is so hot! I have a fantasy about my S.O. getting f****d by a dog then a pony and then a full sized horse. Your story allowed me to vividly imagine it happening. A 10 for you.
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| si_has_k9 |
Posted: Sep 27 2008, 01:49 AM
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 197 Member No.: 659583 Joined: 3-March 08
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SD well great story i wish i had a tenth then penmanship you have
keep up this very well writen story and a big ten from me :wub: |
| StrangeDesire |
Posted: Sep 27 2008, 02:06 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 785 Member No.: 748747 Joined: 16-August 08
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Actually I was just finding this story so I could link it to you. Thank you so much for your kind words, all this encouragement is getting me in the mood to try to finish the story like I intended. Life got a bit busy and my passion to finish writing this waned but I think I may try for the last few chapters. Also thanks for the tip, I didn't know that about horses as I've never been with one and have very little sexual knowledge of them. Unfortunately I don't think Kaylib's going to be in the story much more so I won't get the opportunity to add that. At least not in my plan so far...But who knows. Again thank you. |
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| StrangeDesire |
Posted: Sep 27 2008, 02:08 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 785 Member No.: 748747 Joined: 16-August 08
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I'm sorry for the long delay and I'm going to try to remedy that asap. When I started writing this I didn't have a job and I got one the day before I posted the last story....So life got in the way and since the muse has left me. I'm going to spend some time staring at the computer screen this weekend and hope she pokes her head back into my life. |
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| StrangeDesire |
Posted: Sep 27 2008, 02:10 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 785 Member No.: 748747 Joined: 16-August 08
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Thanks everyone for your kind words and input. I promise I'm going to try to finish this soon, maybe even as soon as this weekend muse allowing.
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| animal antics |
Posted: Sep 27 2008, 04:40 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 660 Member No.: 374940 Joined: 6-November 06
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Great story, it got me excited, really loved it, thanks. :D
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