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| pcfan |
Posted: Jul 25 2008, 04:42 PM
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Ok guys, its my first story, so please be kind^^
I'm not a native speaker, but I hope there won't be to much mistakes in it. I just wanted to write a story about big cats, because I really like them. If you like it, i will try to continue. OK, her it comes: Peter was an average young man with brown hair and Black eyes. But he had an ability that made him extraordinary. He was able to talk with animals. Ok, everybody can talk to animals but when Peter talks to them, he gets answers. And that’s really unusual. And he didn’t use his mouth to talk, he just needed to “send” his thoughts to whatever animal he wanted to speak with. He discovered his ability when he was a young boy and he visited a farm with his school. First he was really shocked, when a horse asked him to scratch its side. But fairly soon he got used to it and from this day on he loved nearly all kinds of animals and decided become an animal doctor. Peter never told anybody because he feared that they would declare him crazy. When he finished University, Peter worked as a vet for five years and earned lots of money, because he was the best in his town and became kind of famous. Then he decided to move to Africa and to study wild animals instead of pets. He never was married and had no family (his parents died in a car accident when he was 22) so it was very easy and two months later he was in Africa and went on safari. He was pleased that his ability worked with wild animals, too and that they all answered him, when he called them. Elephants, Zebras, Lions, Hyenas, even some birds. But he did not dare to do too much, because the safari was in a group. Some days later he packed a big bag, rented a jeep and drove into the savanna. In the evening he stopped near a small water hole, where he met a group of lions. The big cats fascinated him and he talked to them and asked if they would allow him to come close. The lions where fascinated too, and wanted to take a look at the human who was able to talk with them. They promised not to hurt him and so he went over to them and asked them about everything he could think of. In return they asked him a lot of questions about humans. 3 Days he spent with the lions and he liked them very much, even more then some humans he knew. Especially one lioness he liked very much. Her name was Imani and her fur was like melted gold with a slight touch of bronze. Every night she laid down next to him and he stroke her soft fur while she purred with a deep, soft voice. One day most lions where lying in the shadow and where sleeping, Imani came to him and asked him, if he could explain something to her. He said yes and she asked: “Some time ago I met two humans. They spent o whole week near this water hole and watched us. But they didn’t realize that I watched them, too. And I saw something strange!” “Really, what was it?” “When I sneaked up to the place where they were sleeping in the evenings, I saw them mating. I saw it every day! And he could smell that the woman wasn’t in her fertile period! Why did they do that? I can’t understand it. It’s useless!” Peter was shocked by this question, but he also was excited. “Ah, that’s easy to explain! He told her. It’s fun! And you can show that you really love each other by giving him fantastic feelings…” “What do you mean? I mated with a partner and had cups, but mating wasn’t that much fun!” “Oh, trust me, if you do it right, it is fun!” Peter said and tried to stay calm. Imani thought about his words quite a while and then said: “Can you show me how to do it right?” First, Peter was shocked by the thought of showing a lioness how to have sex. But the longer he thought about it, the more he realized that this lioness had a really hot, slim and muscular body. Also he hadn’t had sex in months and there was a willing female lying right at his side and purring softly. But he tried to stay calm and to find out, what exactly was Imani’s intention. “What do you mean, should I help you mating with a lion or … ah … you want me to … ah …” Imani looked at him with big yellow eyes and he instantly knew the answer. Without a word he reached over and started to pet her on the neck and to stroke her golden fur. He had done this before, but not in the way he was doing it now. Peter was moving is hands all over her body, from her head to the tip of her tail. And her purring got more intense. Then he gently rolled her over and looked at her bright underside. He tickled the fur under her chin and started to move down again. When he arrived at her nipples her whole body shuddered and her purring got even more intense. He could feel the vibrations moving up his arm and took his time manipulating her nipples, until they started to get hard. Then he got his head closer, inhaled her scent and started to lick her nipples and tickling her belly with his tongue. Now she made a funny meowing sound and began to shiver. When he had enough of licking and sucking her tits, he moved down to her hind legs and fondled her tail a bit. Then he put her tail out of the way and there it was! He paused to look at her treasure. Her slightly swollen pussy was right before his eyes and looked light heaven for him. Slowly he moved one finger near it and touched it slightly. Imani tensed up a bit and relaxed with even more purring. He stroke her fury lips a bit, then slowly inserted a finger inside her warm and slippery hole. When it slid in to the first knuckle, the golden lioness let out a soft roar and he could feel her muscles tensing and relaxing in a slow rhythm. He moved his finger a bit inside her hole and she went crazy with purring and growling. Peter took his finger out and sniffed at it. It was sweet and really stimulating. His Member in his boxers was as hard as it never was before, but he managed to control is desire. With trembling hands, he parted her soft lips and started licking at her open pussy. This really drove her wild and for a second he feared that she would turn around and tear him in pieces, but instead, her body convulsed and he could feel, that she was very close to an orgasm. And then he stopped, just before she could climax. Imani needed a second to realize it, but then she turned around and looked at him. Her yellow cat eyes wide open from shock and her mouth wide open, gasping for air. “Why did you stop?? I think I was on the edge of something big!” She managed to ask him. “I just wanted to know if you like it.” Peter said with an evil grin and slowly inserted one finger into Imani’s pussy. She shivered again and then she realized what he wanted from her. “Oh please, please don’t stop!” She begged. “Please show me everything!” Peter waited five seconds, then he started again moving his finger inside her and making her body convulse with pleasure. “Please!” She begged again and now he accepted her begging. With one finger inside her convulsing pussy and one hand working on the outside, stroking her lips and her ass, he drove her crazy again. Then he used is mouth to suck on her clit, which he avoided to touch earlier. The lioness let out a loud growl, and her whole body stiffened up. Then she exploded and love juice was squirting from her pussy right at Peters face. She climaxed for what seemed an eternity and he could feel the contractions of her pleasured pussy on his still inserted finger. She took some minutes to come down from her Orgasm, until she was able to talk again: “Shit! That was the best thing I ever experienced! What did you do with me? It was like you where controlling my body!” She exclaimed. “That’s called an orgasm!” Peter explained to her. “It’s what you should experience during sex. And that’s why mating can be real fun!” [COLOR=blue] |
| Catboy58 |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 02:58 AM
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That story was awesome! Please continue, I really look forward to how this develops. Thanks for the great story!!! :wub:
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| pcfan |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 07:12 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 32 Member No.: 294134 Joined: 8-June 06
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Thank you! I hope my English is not to bad. More than 100 views and just one reply? The others don't like my story? Perhaps the second part is better... “But we didn’t mate! You just put a finger inside me!” “Yea, you can climax without a member in your pussy. But it’s even better when you really fuck! What I did to you, you could even do to yourself, then its called masturbation. Humans do that if they need sexual relief and there is no willing partner nearby.” She looked at him with a puzzled look on her face. “Just try it. Lick your pussy!” He suggested. Imani curled up into a ball and started to lick her own pussy that was still wet from her previous orgasm. And some minutes later, she experienced her second orgasm. Not as strong as her first one, but very pleasuring to her. Meanwhile Peter rubbed his rock hard member through his shorts and then he thought: “I just helped her to have a really good orgasm and showed her how to masturbate. Now, it’s my turn!” Then he pulled down his shorts and said: “Imani, I you should get to know both sides of sex. Males can have orgasms, too!” The lioness turned her head and locked at the rock hard thing in his Hands. “Oh, I would like to see that!” She exclaimed and came closer to sniff at his throbbing manhood. “I think you already experienced it. A man ejaculates his sperm, when he has an orgasm and you said you had cubs already. So the father must have an orgasm inside your pussy!” “Really? Now I understand why the males always try to mate with us, even when we are not in heat!” “Yeah, but now you know how it feels! Please return that favor, I really need it! She sniffed a bit more at his penis and then she started to lick. First the tip in small circles and then getting more confident, she licked his whole penis with long slow licks. Peter was in heaven as her rough cat-tongue passed over his sensitive skin and came really fast, squirting his stuff on her tongue and inside her muzzle. When he was done, he told her to stop and collapsed to the ground. “Mhhh!“ Purred Imani. “Tastes kind of good!“ Then she lay down beside him and rested with her head on his lower stomach, near his cock. She watched fascinated how it went soft. “How you do that?” She asked curiously. “Oh, I can’t really control it. It gets hard, when it is stimulated and after orgasm or when the desire goes away, it goes back to normal!” |
| Tranquillized |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 03:33 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 20 Member No.: 734796 Joined: 23-July 08
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Trust me man, don't be phased at the amount of answers / replies you get. Your story is doing great so far, and other people should at least be polite enough to comment on this.
Personally, I do love the whole big cat thing. But the mental speaking turns it to a whole new level. ^_^ |
| Ra463 |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 04:43 PM
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Disciple of the board Group: VIP Members Posts: 13302 Member No.: 237450 Joined: 14-February 06
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dude dont stop i have been on BF for a while now and your story is the best i have seen so far, when is the next instalment/chapter?
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| pcfan |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 09:31 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 32 Member No.: 294134 Joined: 8-June 06
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Ok, here comes the next part... Hope you're enjoying the action^^
“You mean, when I stimulate it, it will grow again?” Purred Imani. “I think I need some time to regain my strength!” But the lioness didn’t wait and started to lick his cock again. And instantly Peter felt his cock rising again. “Oh my god!” He groaned and watched fascinated as the lioness used her skilled tongue to pleasure him again. Then she stopped and turned around. She was crouching before him, lifting her tail and showing him her swollen pussy. “Please mate with me!” She purred and Peter didn’t hesitate for long. He got up, positioned himself behind her and put the tip of his cock at the entrance of her wet hole. “Oh my God!” He thought. “I’m doing it! I’m fucking this hot lioness! And I love every second of it!” Then he slowly inserted his penis and started groaning. The feeling was unbelievable. She was so wet and hot. And her pussy was very tight. If he hadn’t just cum before he would have blown his load instantly. But now he slid inside this lioness’ hot pussy until he could feel the soft fur of her back on his balls. Then he slid out again. With long slow strokes he tried to keep from cumming as long as possible. The lioness under him moved with his strokes und was purring constantly. After some time of this, her pussy started convulsing and he knew she had an orgasm again. With two more strokes he lost it and his own orgasm was hitting him. He blew a huge load of sperm deep inside the hot lioness and collapsed finally on her back. Still inside her pussy, his cock shrank down again and finally came out, followed by white, sticky liquid. Both, the human and the lioness lay down beside each other, totally spent from their mating. |
| Sacrifice_19 |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 09:49 PM
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hehe .. that was indeed a nice and hot story ... and it's very well written =)
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| pcfan |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 10:07 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 32 Member No.: 294134 Joined: 8-June 06
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Thank you! If somebody wants to correct the grammatikal errors word left over in this story, he can reach me with a PM^^
I'm trying to continue with some more parts. I can't promise that all of them will be good, but I'll try my best! Next part will come tomorrow... |
| rinthewolf |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 11:20 PM
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Your English ids very good. I only saw a few errors, and none of them were so serious as to make it misunderstandable. And this story is very awsome! I love the thing abotu him talking to the lions. Will he have this kind of experience with any other anaimals in Africa?
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| Sacrifice_19 |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 11:23 PM
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can't wait to get into bed - apperantly only to get off the bed tomorrow ;)
you're welcome. |
| Tranquillized |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 12:32 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 20 Member No.: 734796 Joined: 23-July 08
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Mmm, nice addition Pcfan.
A bit of constructive criticism: Try making your additions longer, like your first chapter. More 'action' and people can enjoy the story for a longer time. ^_^ This post has been edited by Tranquillized on Jul 27 2008, 12:32 AM |
| jereth |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 02:54 AM
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lions humans and sex
what else do you need excelent work |
| paraplegiczoo |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 04:07 AM
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Full time poster Group: VIP Members Posts: 2723 Member No.: 734025 Joined: 22-July 08
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very nice story, thx for sharing
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| Catboy58 |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 04:17 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 9 Member No.: 241603 Joined: 23-February 06
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Wow thanks for adding to the story! Please continue.
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| GreyWolf_Traven |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 06:26 AM
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Veteran ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1332 Member No.: 735606 Joined: 24-July 08
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I am awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story. Big cats have always fascinated me, so please continue.
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