this is so a "adult" version of twilight lol except werewolf instead of vampires

First off, quit comparing this story to Twilight. Secondly, I can see the similarities between this, and a story by a mutual friend. Third, I'm in love with this story. You, like our mutual friend, are a great author. Currently awaiting your next chapter. Until then, Auf Wiedersien.

J

Bump ^_^ eagerly awaiting!

Okay...ya...twilight is a bad book. Stop comparing this to it.

im just waiting for a new chapter ^_^ :wub:

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Just to let everyone know "Tina" hates Twilight. Don't compare her story to it!

This story is better than Twilight by far anyway. Good day.


Also hai guys =).

As I'm reading through some of the posts a couple pages back (after I read the first few on this page)

I would like to point this is no way a rip of Twilight with werewolves.. this is something Tina had talked about writing before that crap.. Besides everyone knows this is better anyhow. =)

You got that right. I haven't even read the Twilight series, but having seen the previews for the movie...I want to burn those books. This is one of my fav stories on here.

this is the most godly and beastly (pun intended) storie ever! :devil2:

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Oh i need some more of this story hehe :heart: :heart: :heart: just love it

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my fav story

** I want to thank all of you for sticking by my story. And I must add I'm honoured at the sight of all of you putting it above that trash; Twilight. I still have not read it and don't intend to. However, if you feel the need to compare this to it, I suggest you stop reading. You could not POSSIBLY be getting the full effect.

Either way, thank you to all. I've found some free time and now will continue with the long - long awaited chapter.

Yours,

T. **



( Part 31. )




Jeff had gotten in the shower habitually. His instructions were for her to get ready and go start the car. Tina hustled about and tossed on her hoody and her boots. Grabbing her keys she gave a look back to the bathroom door then hurried outside.

The front door clicked shut behind her.

"Hello there pretty." Tina turned and THWACK. Blackness...

A cigarette hit the ground, crunched out by a pair of large black Doc Martens. "Too easy..." The gruff voice echoed in a soft chuckle. "Load her up, quickly."

Two more dark figures grabbed Tina's form from the concrete and lifted her. A black SUV pulled up front, the back passenger door opening to allow them to load her in to it.

"Let's go." The same voice spoke smoothly. And within moments the area was left in silence.


Jeff rushed out the door, his coat half on. "Tina...?" Tilting his head up he sniffed. "Tina?" The car wasn't on. And she wasn't inside... Where could she... A growl rose in his throat. Turning on his heel he inhaled again. Males... Three of them. The next step he took resulted in a crunch of metal beneath his sole. Removing his foot, his eyes widened. It was her keys...

"TINA!" His throat was hoarse as he howled. Feeling his beast rise to the surface under the dusk sky. Claws tipped his hands, his eyes radiating with rage. His chest felt tense the loss of his breath causing his heart to beat erratically.

She'd been taken. Taken from him. Closing his eyes, he tried to call to her, but nothing. What if she was hurt...? He shook with anger. Grabbing the keys, he almost tore off the door to open it. Starting the truck and peeling out of the driveway.


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"Mom?! They took her."

"What do you mean they took her?"

"They took Tina." He was frantic.

"Who's they, Jeff?! And why did they take her?!"

"I don't know... I don't know... They-they... She's gone, Mom. Get Dad, get a hunting party. I want her back. I need her back."

"Jeff breathe, get here now, I'll tell your father."

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Tina groaned softly, she went to sit up... "My head..." Whining, she tensed and shook. I can't move my hands... Opening her eyes didn't offer much assistance. The room was pitch black.

"I'm glad to see you're awake... Welcome to my home Tina. So nice to have you..."







( To be continued! )


** Hope you enjoyed it. Mmm, cliffhanger! **

( Part 32. )



"Where am I!?" Tina growled loudly. She felt her muscles tense then a violent pain shoot up her back. Gritting her teeth, she bit back a whine.

"I wouldn't do that cupcake... You can't see it, but there's a metal ring around your neck. You turn, you die. Very simple." The man smiled and stood from his chair. A mere shadow in the already blackness.

"As I said, you are in my home. Please try and keep up."

Tina glared through the darkness as if it would part at her very whim. She could hear him, smell him. But nothing was familiar. A hand reached out to her and she struggled to get away. Her arms were tied behind her, legs tied together and strapped to what she assumed to be a bed or large cot...

A warm hand caressed her throat and tugged on the collar. "You're not going anywhere sweet heart. I'm certain you're not aware... I am the alpha of the Full Moon Rising clan. I know that dear sweet Jeffrey has claimed you." He chuckled running his hand to her cheek and cupping her chin. Gripping it tightly as she couldn't bite him at this angle.

"But... I think you would be more useful to me... After all, the will of the strongest and what not. Sure he will try and rescue his love... But that will simply work to my benefit." Grinning wide he caressed her cheek and let her go.

"You're a pig." She spat at him, another growl passing through her throat.

"Now, that's not nice deary. Wolf, and you know better. You will learn to love me..." He chuckled. "Think about that if you want to survive." His finger tips slid down her chest, the center of her sternum. Tina was now painfully aware that she was in the nude in front of this strange male. Wriggling against her binds, his fingers continued until they rested beneath her navel. Circling softly.

"Soon, my pretty bitch." She lashed out at him. Pulled back against the tight ropes against the bed.

"Tsk... So feisty. I can see why he'd want you as a mate. But to be so foolish and leave you alone like that. What kind of mate is he?" Pulling away from her he stood up and stretched. "I'll leave you to ponder this night, pup. I suggest you think long and hard."

Boot steps echoed off the bare walls. Light spilling in over her form as he opened the door and exited.

Tina wanted to vomit. The smell of him was overwhelming. She didn't want this. Whimpering she closed her eyes and tried to call to him. But her mind was restless, her beast subdued. "Jeffrey..."

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"The boss' bitch is a real fine piece." One man said to another. A swift hit to the back of the head and he stumbled off his stool. "Sir!"

"You don't speak of her, understood?" The two men nodded blankly.

"W-what do we do if he shows up?"

"He won't, not yet. And not alone. And I certainly wouldn't have just YOU TWO cleaning it up." Growling annoyedly, he ran a hand over his unkempt face.

Stubble grew over the normally well shaven goatee.

"Alert me if anything else happens."

The two nodded once again, simultaneously.



( To be continued. )

OMG! Not one but two new chapters! It's great to have you back :D definitlly looking forward to Jeff's next move!