This is a great start on what will probalby become one of the best stories I have ever read here on BF. I love your writing style where you in a very smooth way mix the descriptions with the actions. You make the storyline go on in a smooth way at the same time as your readers get a good picture of the surroundings.
The storyline itself is a awesome too. This is a very original idea and that makes it just better. I can notice that you have put down a lot of work in it and that proves that you're a very good writer, because writing in a good way takes time and effort. I know since I'm myself an authour.
I will for sure keep reading this story, since it's quality is so high and because of the story is so nice and look so promising. Myself I look very much forward to the dolphin, zebra and donkey sex scenes.
I would love to come to a school like this myself, but for boys and where there are just female animals, and perhaps stay there for quite a while. Maybe someday I will write a fantasy about that?
Finally, Thank you and a big 10. You really deserve it!

So far, this seems to be the makings of an amazing story. I hope you get another chapter up soon, I'm excited to see how this story plays out. I get a feeling this will be one of the best stories I've read here yet, just from what I've seen so far. Thanks for your contribution. ^_^ Do continue soon. _ Damien-Wolf :inlove:

do go on, I'm intrigued

more please more :wub:

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Hey I know you've all been waiting eagerly for this. I thank you all for your warm comments. Now I totally promise you that there will be some hot beastal love in the next post. So I hope you like this.


Krista nervously fiddled with her skirt as she entered the St. Beasta campus. She wore her best clothes for today. A soft white cashmere sweater with a pink mini skirt. Her long dirty blonde hair was covered in curls with some barrettes to keep it out of her eyes. Her bags were gathered around her as she stared around the campus. She saw a girl with white blonde hair that had blue streaks heading towards her. The girl was wearing the official St. Beasta school uniform which as Krista stared at the other girl in it looked pretty revealing. The girl held out her hand to Krista.

"Hi my name is Zerta Haku. Nice to meet you I'm your roommate." she introduced.

"Krista Hastings." Krista said shaking Zerta's hand.

"Here I'll help you with your stuff and show where our dorm is. Then we'll stop by the campus kennel and pick up your dog." Zerta said grabbing Krista's trunk. When Zerta bent over Krista caught a peek of Zerta's smooth supple ass from under her short skirt.

"My dog?" Krista questioned.

"Yeah, it's a St. Beasta tradition. Every girl gets their own dog. I'll explain later." Zerta said as they headed towards the Dorm Building.

While Zerta showed her the way to the Dorm Building Krista glanced around the vast campus clearly impressed by its size and beauty. She was at first against coming to a boarding school seeing as she had to leave all her friends back in Italy. When she imagined a boarding school she imagined a large ominous-looking building with constant rain. But looking around St. Beasta all those thoughts ceased. He parents had decided to ship her off to boarding school because she had a nasty habit of getting in fights with boys at her school. They wanted to find the best and highest class boarding school and had stumbled upon St. Beasta. Liking what they read about the school they registered her and shipped her off.

Krista tore her gaze from a beautiful fountain with a cement splash of water and a dolphin sitting on its tail with water coming out of its mouth. It was polished so it shinned in the sun. She rested her gaze on Zerta's ass as she walked. Krista had discovered a few years ago that she was deeply attracted to girls. But unfortunately she feared being referred to as a lesbian so she busied herself collecting boyfriends. But whenever they pursued to sleep with her she dumped them. She watched as Zerta's skirt lifted a little every time she took a step which flashed a little of her creamy ass cheeks to Krista which she thoroughly enjoyed.


They stopped in front of a shinning silvery gate between to knee-high cement walls. The walls were like small fences and on one of the walls was a black sign with the words 'Dorm Villas' in lavender. Zerta pushed opened the gate and gestured to a group of girls sitting on a bench outside the entrance of the Dorm Building. Zerta led Krista over to them and began the introductions.

"That's Polly Crystals, she's the ribbon maker. She makes ribbons for all the girls in the school. You'll get yours in a little bit. That's Bunny Wingston; she's the school tour guide. She'll be giving you a more thorough tour before class. That's Hena Roxy, she's the uniform customizer. You'll pick up your uniform when you're on your tour with Bunny then bring it back to Hena and she'll customize it. It's a great requirement for all the girls. Last but not least that's Calen Virza, she the class president. She is the person who will be introducing you to all the girls at the Welcome party tonight." Krista could feel the girls' eyes roaming up and down her body.

Calen stood up and brushed off her uniform skirt. She tucked a stray strand of bubblegum hair behind her ear and held out her hand to Krista.

"Welcome to St. Beasta, Krista Hastings. You have been assigned a schedule for today. Bunny will take you on a school tour to pick up your uniform then you will bring it back here to Hena's studio to customize it. Then you will be left to Polly to get your ribbon made. Finally you will attend your classes with Zerta and be introduced to our world." Calen said flashing a brilliant smile that distracted Krista from wondering what she meant by 'our world'.

Krista nodded and watched as Calen gestured for some nearby girls to take her bags and chest and head into the Dorm Building. Bunny stood up and gave Krista a smile and a handshake before gesturing for Krista to follow her. Calen watched them exit before turning to Zerta.

"Bring her to the Secret Forest through the pool slide entrance." Calen told her.

"Yes, ma'am." Zerta nodded.


Krista gasped at the sight of the Olympic sized pool. It was an outdoor pool and the water was so clear it shined beautifully in the light of the sun. Bunny explained that girls for Gym could either wear the school required bathing suit or get one of their own. Krista told her she hadn't know about the pool and therefore had no swimsuit. The other girl smiled and said they could go into town the next day and buy her one. Bunny led her away from the pool and into the school building and introduced her to all of her teachers. They walked by the registration office and picked up Krista's uniform which she noticed didn't look anything like Zerta's, Bunny's or Calen's, Bunny noticed this.

"Don't worry once we take that to Hena your's will look just like ours." She told her.

Krista smiled and nodded. They headed out of the school building and back towards the dorms. As they walked back through the gate Krista saw some girls smiling and waving at her and Bunny before entering the Dorm Building. They walked down a long hallway and passed several girls that greeted Krista as they passed. Bunny stopped in front of a door painted ebony with the words 'Uniform Customizer' in pink. Bunny knocked on the door and waiting patiently and turned to Krista.

"So Krista what brings you to St. Beasta?" she asked.

"I had a nasty habit of getting into fights with boys at my school. I mean I have nothing against guys, I dated several, but something about punk guys just pissed me off." Krista said tucking a strand of dirty blonde hair behind her ear.

Bunny nodded and turned back to the door as it opened to reveal Hena. Hena smiled and gestured them in. She asked Krista to hand over her uniform. Krista did so and was then instructed to strip to her undies and stand on a platform to model. Krista was nervous at first but did so. She now stood in only a lacy pink bra and black frilly panties with a white cat on the front. She watched as Hena made markings on the uniform. Hena tossed the shirt and skirt at her and told her to put them on so she could see the measurements. After slipping on the uniform minus the jacket Hena began making notes and marked on the skirt and shirt with a fabric marker and asked Krista to slip them back off. Bunny handed Hena some fabric scissors which the other girl used to snip the hem of the skirt and handed it back to Krista and instructed her to slip it back on. The newly made hem stopped just below Krista's panties. She then took the dress shirt and snipped the sleeves, plucked off some buttons, snipped the collar and handed it back to Krista. The sleeves stopped at her elbows, the collar stopped just above her breasts, the edge of the shirt stopped above her bellybutton. Krista blushed at the altered version of her uniform.

"Are you sure I won't get in trouble for this?" Krista asked gesturing to her uniform.

"Oh sure, they don't care. It's a tradition, especially since there's only girls at this school." Hena said waving her hand.

"Okay next stop, the Ribbon Maker." Bunny said handing Krista a pair of white knee length sock and black flats. She folded Krista's clothes and handed them back to Krista.

The dirty blonde haired girl took her clothes and followed Bunny out of Hena's studio and down the hall to a light blue painted door with black letters that read 'Ribbon Maker'. She knocked on the door and awaited the person to answer. Polly opened the door and smiled before gesturing them in. She tugged Krista over and sat her down at a vanity mirror.

"Pick what color you want your ribbon to be." Polly said.

"Um...White." Krista told her.

"What color do you want your name to be on it?" Polly asked.

"Lime green." Krista answered.

Polly nodded and walked over to a rack of hanging ribbons and grabbed a long white one and snipped off a few inches. She put the ribbon under a sewing machine and typed in what she wanted embroidered and pressed the 'on' button. The machine whirred and began putting the letters on the ribbon. Once it was done Polly picked it up and tied Krista's hair up in a causal bun but left some curls of dirty blonde hair to frame her face.

"Ok you're done. I'll call Zerta and you can go to your classes and I will see you again at the Welcome party later tonight." Polly said patting Krista's shoulder. She pulled out her phone and told Zerta she was down and hung up again.

"How come everyone is being so nice and welcoming to me? I mean at my old school no one was ever this nice to me and said they'd throw me a welcome party." Krista said turning to Polly.

"Because here at St. Beasta, it's a tradition to care and welcome every new-comer to the school. You'll understand more at the Welcome party tonight. But I will say one thing; you don't have to worry about fitting in, because here at St. Beasta everyone shares the same secret." Polly said tucking back a stray bang from her eyes.

Krista's brow furrowed in confusion. "Same secret?" she questioned.

"Like I said, you'll find out tonight." Polly said opening the door to reveal Zerta.

"Ready for your first classes at your new school?" Zerta asked with a smile.

Krista nodded and smiled. She stood up walked over to her roommate and waved goodbye to Polly as the exited the Ribbon room. As they walked down several more girls passed them and greeted her kindly with smiles. Krista couldn't help but feel warm inside at being welcomed so nicely. They exited the Dorm Building and headed into the school building.


Zerta quickly adjusted her skirt and hair as she watched the last few minutes of class tick by. Calen had told her to bring Krista to the Secret Forest through the pool side entrance. The Welcome Party didn't start until 6:30, after the sunset and the stars were sparkling. She and Krista were to come in their uniforms and she knew the animals wouldn't mind a new girl. The loud shrill of the school bell rang out bringing her out of her thoughts. She was now supposed to take Krista to receive her dog. She stood up and walked over to Krista and gestured her to follow her to the 'Dog House' it was where all the dogs were bred and raised while they awaited being adopted by new students.

"So what's the deal with the whole giving dogs to new students?" Krista asked they walked.

"It's a St. Beasta tradition. The school is named after Beasta Goren, the goddess of all beasts and the school was built in her honor. So since she was the Goddess of all Beasts they decided to start a tradition in her memory to give a dog, a beast, to each girl as a companion." Zerta explained opening a chain link gate.

Krista giggled when dozens of dogs gathered around her in fits of happy barking and sniffs. Zerta stroked several of their heads and gently pushed them away and led Krista towards a small building where a girl in the school uniform was sweeping in front of. She had long amber hair and hazel eyes. She looked up from her sweeping and smiled at Zerta.

"Hi, Zerta. What can I do for you?" she asked.

"Hi Scarlet, this is Krista. She's new and she's come to pick out her dog." Zerta told her.

Scarlet smiled and shook Krista's hand.

"Well, here let me show you all the dogs. Don't worry they're all very well behaved. The just get really excited around new girls." Scarlet said in a kind of tone that sounded as if she had a second meaning behind her words that Krista didn't catch.

Scarlet whistled and snapped her fingers. All the dogs came running over to her and lined up. She smiled at them and stroked their heads and backs and turned back to Krista. She told her she could pick anyone that she wanted, any one that suited her type and 'needs'. Krista spotted Zerta sending Scarlet a look and a shake of her head. There was a Boxer, a Great Dane, a Doberman, a Dalmatian, a Rottweiler, and a Saint Bernard. From what she spotted they were all male and Scarlet explained that the females were supposed to stay at 'The Dog House' so they could be bred with. She also mentioned that there were more dogs but the ones in front of her were the first group. After scanning over the dogs Krista couldn't help but choose the Saint Bernard.

"He's just so cute I can't resist." Krista said hugging the Saint Bernard around the neck earning her a lick in the face and a nuzzle in the cheek.

"What are you gonna name him?" Scarlet asked.

"Bruce." Krista explained.

Scarlet nodded and waved goodbye as they walked out the chain link gate with Bruce keeping close to his new mistress. Krista noted that he would occasionally stick his nose up under her skirt to sniff her pussy every now and then making her blush slightly as they walked back towards the Dorm Building. Zerta led them towards their dorm and tossed Krista her key to the dorm. Zerta unlocked the dorm and opened the dorm. Krista gasped at the dorm. It was fairly large and had to 4-poster beds, 2 dog bed, 2 dog food and water dishes, a TV and DVD player, two dressers and what looked like a small chest that was open slightly to reveal that there where movies in there.

"Well this is our dorm, that over there is the movie chest, through there is the bathroom and over there is Carl, my dog." Zerta said pointing to a friendly napping Pit-Bull on one of the 4-poster beds.

Bruce padded over and hopped on the bed that wasn't being occupied by the other dog. He curled up and closed his eyes to sleep. Krista smiled and began unpacking her bags.

"What time is the Welcome Party?" Krista asked.

"6:30, so you might want to rest up and take a shower before we go. It's only 2:30 now plus you are required to wear your uniform. But don't worry everyone else will be wearing their uniforms too. Trust me tonight will change your perspective on everything will change forever." Zerta said gently petting Carl's head.

Krista nodded still confused but continued to unpack. She vaguely wondered what events would unfold at her new school.

Mmmm, I love where this headed... :wub: You've done an outstanding job of weaving this beautiful story so far... Thank you for sharing... ^_^ I'll be looking forward to future additions... :wub: First installment of many 10's to cum... ;)

wow, very well written! cant wait to read more ^.^

keep up the good work

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:wub: fantastic continuation! this is building up very nicely :D

great writing,still one of the most original story ideas ,looking forward to hearing more !

You're creating a wonderful story here. You just make the story better and better! You have got a great writing talent and a great imagination too. That's a perfect combination, so keep it on. I can't wait for the next installement of this wonderful story!

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mmmmmm im sure even a first timer here would agree that this story will be the best they'll ever read