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| mr.ed |
Posted: Mar 7 2008, 10:56 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 15 Member No.: 48712 Joined: 15-September 04
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You have a way with words my friend, very articulate. Looking forward to more of your work.
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| Swedishboy7 |
Posted: Mar 8 2008, 08:16 AM
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Disciple of the board Group: VIP Members Posts: 9444 Member No.: 536087 Joined: 7-July 07
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You have done a great work with this short story, and even though it isn't as erotic as most of the others around here, it's still very good. A big thank you for writing it and a 10 :)
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| columbusjack |
Posted: Mar 8 2008, 02:27 PM
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Thanks, MrEd and SwedishBoy. Thank you, I appreciated your comments. Swedish Boy, you were the first person who rated me when I joined BF. Thanks for that to!
Love the name, MrEd... I alwas thought that Wilbur had more than a owner:horsey relationship with Mr. Ed. And that Carol (his wife), hot little vixen.... |
| monte overman |
Posted: Mar 14 2008, 05:22 AM
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That was a very enjoyable erotic story. The presentation was not harsh or crude, but gently explored the possible beauty of "what if". :wub:
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| columbusjack |
Posted: Mar 16 2008, 06:40 AM
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Enthusiast ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 182 Member No.: 647904 Joined: 13-February 08
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Thanks Monte. Yeah... what if... maybe someday...
Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. --ColumbusJack |
| youlittledevil |
Posted: Mar 26 2008, 11:12 AM
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Full time poster ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1717 Member No.: 669773 Joined: 21-March 08
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Wow i wish that my first time would happen like that.
I really like you're writting i could almost feel the love in your words Thank you Columbusjack |
| clitflick |
Posted: Mar 26 2008, 06:33 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 415 Member No.: 572012 Joined: 19-September 07
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Banal use ot the english language?? I think not my friend. Lovely story. A 10 for you1 Thank you, OXO Clitflick
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| in2k9s |
Posted: Apr 1 2008, 12:14 AM
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Full time poster ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1611 Member No.: 234043 Joined: 6-February 06
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:D WoW!!!
Great story!!! Thanks for sharing!!! A BIG 10 from me :puppykiss: in2k9s |
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