optimus	Posted: Jan 16 2008, 05:49 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 5 Member No.: 52555 Joined: 2-October 04 Rate Member: 109876543210	excellent work. truly erotica! I enjoyed the emotional aspects as well as the graphic ones. Thank you

onethumper	Posted: Jan 16 2008, 05:58 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 24 Member No.: 160880 Joined: 14-September 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	great story thnks, i would give u a10 if i could vote

gordilicious	Posted: Jan 16 2008, 07:28 AM
Hardcore Group: Elite Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 189209 Joined: 18-November 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	optimus, onthumper, Shadow Love... Thank you :) Glad you enjoyed it!

FL-guy	Posted: Jan 16 2008, 04:24 PM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 336 Member No.: 494406 Joined: 2-May 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Great great story. Reading that made me feel like I was right there with you. I was with you in spirit. Made me want to be there to have at you after Max did. Or maybe even have Max have at me after having you..... Either way, thanks for that great story and hope you write more.

runamock	Posted: Jan 16 2008, 09:16 PM
Veteran Group: Members Posts: 1006 Member No.: 584294 Joined: 24-October 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Well written love story........Thank You

gordilicious	Posted: Jan 16 2008, 11:18 PM
Hardcore Group: Elite Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 189209 Joined: 18-November 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Thanks, runamock and FL-guy... Glad you liked it! :)

4outdoorfun	Posted: Jan 17 2008, 01:50 AM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 158 Member No.: 528025 Joined: 23-June 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	This story is really good, you need to continue writing.

Damien-Wolf	Posted: Jan 17 2008, 02:26 AM
Beginner Group: Members Posts: 78 Member No.: 481214 Joined: 12-April 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	:blush: Wow, what an excellent story, I loved it,t he details and plot were perfection. You have quite a talent , I do hope to see perhaps a part 2 of thisd story soon, as well as many more great writings from you . ^_^ Keep up the awesome work gordilicious _Dami :beer:

hidetanner	Posted: Jan 17 2008, 03:37 AM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 106 Member No.: 598674 Joined: 21-November 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Well written story with good content. Look forward to more. Thank you.

gordilicious	Posted: Jan 17 2008, 08:06 AM
Hardcore Group: Elite Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 189209 Joined: 18-November 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	hidetanner, 4outdoorfun, Dami... Thanks a bunch for the feedback. When I get a chance (and some inspiration), I'll definitely write more... 'Till then, thanks again for the kind words :) G

tumblebug	Posted: Jan 17 2008, 07:10 PM
Veteran Group: Members Posts: 887 Member No.: 189436 Joined: 18-November 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Excellent story, well written, and one that could be ongoing. Hope you continue writing. A-10 for now. :P :P :P

alicealice	Posted: Jan 18 2008, 01:57 AM
Veteran Group: Members Posts: 1272 Member No.: 310791 Joined: 8-July 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	gordilicious Very nice! Well written and paced. Alice PS. Another 10

gordilicious	Posted: Jan 18 2008, 08:22 PM
Hardcore Group: Elite Members Posts: 616 Member No.: 189209 Joined: 18-November 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Alice and tumblebug... Thanks so much! Very glad you liked it. I'm working out a way to make Liz and Max perhaps an ongoing piece... We'll find out in due time ;)

Lustin	Posted: Jan 21 2008, 05:35 PM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 110 Member No.: 152023 Joined: 25-August 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	Thank you good story. :D

funtime515	Posted: Jan 21 2008, 06:46 PM
Veteran Group: Members Posts: 814 Member No.: 18795 Joined: 21-April 04 Rate Member: 109876543210	You definetly have good writing skills. This was a very interesting and delightful story. I hope you will have more for us soon. A 10 from me