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| WolfGrey |
Posted: Dec 16 2007, 09:29 PM
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Skitlleisme Please continue writing. Your stories are very good. Please do not let those who criticise to stop you from doing what you do so well. I for one wonder why they would read something they disagree with. I also know it is therapy for some people to write about there fantasies or thoughtsrather than act them out.
So please keep up the good work and ignore those should not be here. |
| familyguy-freek |
Posted: Dec 16 2007, 09:38 PM
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Cool
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| divalicious8 |
Posted: Dec 17 2007, 12:48 AM
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now that my pussy really really hot and i wanted to be the girl in that story since i have never been penetrated by an animal... and i have been celibate for three years.....
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| burning-saddle |
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I have to say that you have a talent for writing. If I could rate, I would give you a 10. This type of story, strangly seems like something that could become a short film... if you are interested in granting permission to use the story. I think that it could be created and distributed throughout this community for all of our fellow members who would like to see this unfold rather than imagine it. I am always open for feedback.
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| hairycat |
Posted: Dec 17 2007, 02:00 AM
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Skittles, please don't go, your stories/fantasies are fast becoming legendary,
i particularly enjoy the type of thread your thoughjts follow, and you have such a talented way of presenting them, please look at all the positive feedbback you have and return to continue giving us the pleasure of your lustful dreams, 10 for you! :rock: |
| JillNa |
Posted: Dec 18 2007, 02:05 AM
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hun, I have read your stories, fantasies if u will. I will say this to u and I have said it before to you. Your writing is wonderful. I have enjoyed every bit of it. I am going to hate this forum, if u leave. You are one of the many wonderfull writers i have cum to enjoy. I have been waiting and looking forward to ur stories. I must say your fantasies, have been my thoughts exactly. I feel u r my soul mate, kindred spirit. (dont know if i spelled it correctly, but i dont care)
I beg you not to allow anyone affect you in that u will not continue your writing. I have enjoyed them. I will follow you to any forum you go to , plz just let me know. I am your biggest fan. I say to anyone who writes negativity about ur stories, you are wrong and must be jealous of a very good writer. If i believe the purpose of this forum is just that to read about fantasies, stories if true and to post them as well. Please once again, i beg you dont go. Luv Jill |
| Wolfhounder |
Posted: Dec 18 2007, 05:13 AM
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I agree with all of the other responders, your stories are fantastic... if you'd care to check, this morn "shockedandamazed" pans just about every story that they view...
PLEASE don't allow this idiot to make all of your fans suffer... |
| dolphindog6699 |
Posted: Dec 19 2007, 07:53 AM
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i could read stories all day, very good story :D thank you so much!!!
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| skittleisme |
Posted: Dec 19 2007, 11:40 AM
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Sorry all, I was just a little discouraged and turned off.. It's just hard to share this part of myself in the only place ever that I feel it'd be accepted and then have someone post something that makes me feel like something is wrong with me for being like this. I'm feeling better now though, and I really hate leaving anything unfinished, especially when I keep seeing it unfold in my mind. Soooo...
....here's Part 2! Picking up right where i left off.. "Oww.." I whined sorely, reluctantly getting back up onto my knees and pouting my sore and freshly used pussy out as they unleashed one of the German Shepards, and the guard lightly kicked my knees a couple feet apart on the cum-drenched tiles with his boot. I looked behind my shoulder nervously as I saw the new dog stand between my thighs and give my pussy a few licks before climbing up my back and mounting me. I looked over at the Guard desperately, my eyes pleading for help, "Oh God please, not again!! Not with a dog! I didn't do anything to deserve this, I swear!!" The guard grinned at me and then pointed up at the corner ceiling, and just as the dog on my back found his mark and began to sink its cock into my wet pussy, I noticed the small security camera pointing at me beneath the TV which showed my shocked and strained expression, and the word "recording" blinking in the bottom right corner. It was horrifying to see myself on the screen doing something so perverted as I felt the dog on my back continue to work its cock into me. "No! Oh! Help!!" I pleaded, trying to protect my already shattered dignity as the new dog bitched me in front of the guards and the camera. I wanted nothing more than to reach back and knock the dog off, but the steel handcuffs prevented this instinct. Crying between moans, I was once again forced to accept that a dog was going to have its way with my pussy, and there wasn't anything I could do about it. The dog panted heavily over me, it's surprisingly hot cock pushing deeper and deeper into my pussy with every thrust as my moans began shamelessly escaping my lips. "She's really starting to enjoy it now," one of the guards stated as he kneeled down next to my naked, handcuffed body, fondling a breast with one hand while his other hand reached down and began roughly rubbing my stimulated clit. "Cum for the camera, sweetheart, don't hold back.." the guard whispered in my ear as his fingers worked over my sensitive clit, which combined with the dog's thick cock piercing into my depths was quickly overwhelming my senses with pleasure. Everything became a hazy blur as I weakly told myself in my mind that I wasn't allowed to give anyone the satisfaction of making me cum against my will, especially not while a dog was doing such a humiliating act to me, but even as I thought this my moans turned into sexual screams and wails, and I began desperately pushing my hips back to meet each thrust of the dog's swollen & deeply penetrating animalistic cock, my body's desire for pleasure betraying me. "Yes! Yes!!" I began moaning out guiltily as the guard worked his fingers over my clit faster and I felt the Shepard's knot somehow cram itself into my muff, it's jolting cock now rapidly swelling larger and larger inside of me. I barely noticed the pain as my vision began to white out and my legs began to shudder while my powerful, blissful orgasm began surging throughout my body. "Wow," the guard said as he brought his hands back and stood up, watching me moan and writhe on the floor beneath the dog as my body climaxed intensely, "That didn't take you long! You must really like having your twat stuffed with dog-cock, huh?" The slight feeling of shame from his words combined with the sudden burst of nasty hot dog cum deep inside my pussy only prolonged the bliss of my orgasm. "Oh God!", I moaned outloud while feeling the German Shepard's cock continue to pulse and erupt inside of me. My mind just couldn't piece together why a second dog was now filling my pure body with its gross animal jizz which should never, ever be inside of me- not under any circumstances! I slowly looked up at the ceiling camera, seeing on the monitor a young, naked, sweaty and sexually flushed blond girl with her eyes full of guilt, and a large, nasty dog drooling onto her while standing over her bare back, it's cock fully pierced into her womanhood. When I'd woken up and showered this morning, and got dressed up cute for my boyfriend and left for the airport, I'd of never thought such a taboo thing would end up happening to me. Yet here I was, naked and bound in a growing puddle of cum with a dog over my back, it's knot locked firmly into my pussy as he pants heavily into my ear while a camera records every second of my debasement. Once again one of the guards gave the dog a command, and it turned its body around with it's cock still stuck deeply inside of me, and I felt my knees slide backwards through the cum on the floor tiles. I knew what was about to happen, and I desperately reached forward, grabbing onto the wall pipes to brace myself as my arms were suddenly pulled taut, and the dog began pulling my hips back with its cock. "Eee!!" I yelped out painfully as the knot stretched my too-small pussy open until it finally managed to pull it's swollen cock out, my cum-drenched pussy first spraying, and then drooling the dog's foul smelling semen onto the floor as it puddled beneath me, mixing with the previous dog's spent seed. I just barely noticed the guards talk amongst themselves as I laid on the floor gasping, trying to catch my breath from the overwhelming ordeal. A few of them left by the side doors with the two dogs that they had raped me with, while one of the remaining guards reached down and unleashed the remaining German Shepard, and I saw its long gross cock bobbing beneath it as it trotted over to me. Oh god this dog was going to do the same thing to me, I thought with butterflies of excitement in my stomach as I stared at it's hanging cock, my pussy suddenly feeling heated and sensitive. I blinked, surprised at myself as nasty perverted thoughts began filling my mind while I tried to look away from the dog's ugly dick. As it walked around behind me and abruptly started lapping at my sensitive muff, I started to come to my senses. No, I can't let a third dog fuck me, I told myself while bitting my lip, trying my best to ignore how good the dog's long rough tongue felt as it rooted its snout into my exposed sex. I already felt awful that I had allowed myself to pleasurably cum for someone -no, something other than my boyfriend. I wouldn't be able to look at my own reflection without feeling ashamed if I let a third dog make me it's bitch. "Pl-Please.." I begged out weakly at the guards between moans as the dog behind me continued to lick at my pussy, while I slowly got back up onto my hands and knees, subliminally pushing my sex out earnestly at it's lashing tongue, "Please no more! I won't tell anyone about this, just please let me go!" I pleaded out desperately. The guard next to me chuckled as he knelled down at my hips and gave the dog some command which made it stop licking me and back away. I felt the guard's hand drift up my inner thighs and stop at my crotch. "Unf!!" I moaned out sexually as I suddenly felt the guard's fingers rubbing my clit. I began breathing heavily and moaning as I lifted my hips up invitingly while he continued to rub over my sensitive button, all thoughts of protesting leaving my mind. The guard laughed to himself and then leaned down to my ear, whispering "I knew it when I saw you in line, that you're the type of slut that need to be fucked hard and raw, and as soon as possible." I began moaning harder, offended at being described in such an inaccurate way, but my god he was bringing me closer and closer to orgasm, and I just couldn't bring the words out of my mouth to protest. Rubbing my clit faster, he said into my ear "and judging by all the film I have of these dogs deep dicking you, I was right." Oh god, no, I'm not that type of girl, I thought to myself weakly as I felt my orgasm begin to build up. Then, seconds before I would have climaxed, he pulled his hand away. "Uhhh!!" I protested as I raised my ass up and pouted my muff out, while my pleasure quickly died down - replaced with frustration. He left me like that for a couple minutes while he talked with a couple of the other guards, chuckling lightly, and then leaned down again, rubbing his fingers over my clit firmly and quickly. And then once again, just as my easily read moans began to become very vocal, he withdrew his hand from my swollen clit, my pleasure quickly dieing out without release. I tugged my hands roughly, the sturdy pipe they were cuffed to forbidding me from reaching back and masturbating myself to orgasm. I almost began to cry in frustration, embarrassed at how horny his teasing had made me. "Aww.." the guard said as he lifted my chin with the tip of his boot, grinning down at my flushed and frustrated face. "If you really want to cum, I could let the dog fuck ya. What'cha say?" he asked awhile pointing over at the dog, it's long cock still poking out of it's furrry sheath. I looked up at the guard angrily, and shook my head "no" with a pout. With a heavy sigh and a look of dissapointment, the guard reached down again, once again firmly rubbing my clit. I bit my lip, trying my best to ignore the sexual stimulation, but after a minute I had broken down to the pleasure and started moaning again, which is when he stopped rubbing. "Miss, you SURE you don't want the dog to fuck you?" he asked with a smirk. "Stop it!" I whined out, "Stop touching me, please just let me go!" I protested as I tugged at my cuffs again, and then abruptly stopped with a groan as he returned to rubbing my clit. I moaned and whined as he began to rub me faster, and whispered "Just say Yes, and I'll let that dog loose on your horny little twat." The image painted by his words furthered my arousal as I moaned, gasping as the pleasure and frustration began to overwhelm me. Hesitantly, I swallowed my pride and moaned out, "O-Okay." "Okay, what, miss?" he said leering at me as I began to blush, looking away from him and at the dog and it's cock. He began rubbing my clit even faster, as if to encourage me. And in my heated state, it was working. "Ok - I'll.. with-with the dog.." I stuttered out, ashamed to even utter the words. "You want to be fucked by a dog? Say it." the guard ordered me, his fingers bringing me closer and closer to climax. With a final frustrated moan, I broke down. "Yes!! I want to be fucked by a dog!! Please let the dog fuck me!" I pleaded at him desperately. A few of the guards behind me began laughing as the guard smiled down at me, pulling his hand away from my sensitive clit as he grabbed the dog by the collar and lead it over me. I felt the dog's long, hot cock slip up my thighs and briefly slide its absurd length up between my wet pussy lips, but then it continued to slip up my ass, and then up along my back as I felt it drag along my spine while the guard continued to lead him up my body. Eventually I felt the dog's cock in my hair, and as he turned the dog around between me and the wall, it's dick ran across my cheek and then flipped right against my face. "Well?" the guard asked impatiently as the veiny bestial cock in front of me poked my cringing face, "Open your mouth and suck that dog's dick like a good girl, and maybe I'll let him fuck you." Oh God, how low have I sunken, I asked myself as I opened my mouth and leaned forward, the dogcock's rustic tasting tip sliding between my lips and across my tongue as a few spurts of precum dripped down my throat. My eyes closed, I began working my head back and forth underneath the dog, taking more of its length into my mouth as I began serving its cock with my lips and tongue. It was a lot warmer than I was expecting, and had such an unnatural feel and shape as it began to slide further out of the dog's sheath, growing larger as it's protruding tip was now beginning to hit the back of my throat. As I tried to move my head back so that I wouldn't be taking too much of the dog's cock, I suddenly felt two heavy paws on my shoulders, and opened my eyes wide and in shock as the dog began forcefully thrusting it's cock down my throat. "Unmf!" I gagged out in panic against the cock lodged in my throat as the dog began jackhammering it's cock into me, it's large balls wildly slapping against my chin as I desperately gasped for air through my nostrils. My lips gradually spread open as his knot pushed in, keeping my jaw stretched open as his cock began to tremble as it was lodged into my throat, followed by a sudden spurt of his semen. I desperately swallowed the the disgusting hot fluid as he continued to empty load after load into me, until finally the [SPAM] of sperm died down, and the German Shepard hopped off my shoulders, walking away from me as his cock slipped out of my lips. I leaned my head down, coughing up bits of cum as the foul scent of dog, cock, and semen hit my nose from my own breath. I felt so shamefully dirty at that moment, never having imagined that I would have ever done such a thing, especially not in front of so many witnesses, and to a dog! But, at least my ideal was over now, I thought to myself reassuringly. Soon this awful day at the airport would be a distant memory. Just then I heard loud sudden barking as a couple guards walked in from the side door with an incredibly large Great Dane which was pulling at it's leash, while saying "Look what we found in the pet shipping area!" My heart sunk in my chest as I looked over at the large beast - it stood at almost 4 feet tall and looked more than twice my size, and as it stepped into the room it lifted its massive snout up into the air and began sniffing, and then focused it's eyes right on me. Suddenly the huge beast of a dog began tugging desperately at it's leash, both the guards that were holding onto it almost being knocked forward as they regained their footing and grasped the leash tightly, restraining the dog with all their might. "We let it sniff the pheromones and now he's all wound up!" one of the guards explained while pointing beneath the dog. Oh, my god, I thought while looking at the Great Dane's massive dick as it began to extend inch by inch from it's sheath before my very eyes, the gross bright white and red veiny cock reaching down towards the floor. Although it was a dog, I couldn't help but instinctively feel completely inferior to it. I became nervous and scared, the butterflies in my stomach causing me to break out in goosebumps as I barely noticed my vulnerable pussy begin to wetten as I kept my hips up in the air while frozen stiff on my hands and knees. "Great!" said the guard standing next to me, "She just sucked a dog off in hopes that we'd let another one fuck her, but I was getting worried that we had run out!" I gasped in horror as I looked over at the straining Great Dane, and then at the guards which were holding him back, as they smiled at me. "Well let's see if he know's what to do then!" OH fuck, this can't be happening, I thought to myself as I saw them reach down and unleash the monster of a dog. I opened my mouth, wanting to protest, but as the massive Great Dane bounded over to me, I was stuck like a deer in the headlights and couldn't find the words. Instantly the large dog rammed its head into my crotch, snorting at my cunt loudly with the force of a vacuum cleaner, and then I heaved as it's heavy weight was suddenly over my back, pushing my knees hard against the floor. I felt his huge cock poking and slapping at my inner thighs as he continued to climb up my back, and then without warning I suddenly felt his teeth around my neck, followed by a loud, low growl as he held his jaw around my neck. "H-Help!" I squealed out, tugging at my handcuffs while straining my back, unable to budge the 280 pound beast as he continued the thrust his cock aimlessly, prodding my thighs almost painfully as he growled again. "Miss, you have to reach back and put his dick in your pussy before he bites ya!" One of the guards yelled out. The thought of that massive cock getting inside of my pussy was absolutely horrifying, but as I heard the dane growl louder, I made the decision that I was more afraid of his jaws around my neck. My heart beating a million miles a minute, I frantically reached back, grabbing onto the dane's huge, hot cock. I couldn't help but realize how small my hand felt as I tried to grip my fingers around it and guide it to my entrance. As I guided him between my pussy lips and he began to thrust, his blunt tip pounded against my love hole, unable to enter. "It's - Oww! It's too big! It won't fit! Help!" I squeaked out, completely helpess as the Dane bit down a little tighter. "Well MAKE it fit, and fast!! We can't get near him without getting attacked, he's really determined!" one of them told me. Straining with my face on the floor and both hands between my thighs, I grabbed onto the dane's cock and guided it with both hands, pushing it against my entrance. God, it was like trying to take a knot first thing! And then, without warning, my pussy gave way as the dane let go of my neck, and rammed a solid 7 inches of it's thick cock into me in a single, powerful thrust. "AHHHHH!!!!!" I screamed out at the top of my lungs, the dane now steadying over my back as he suddenly began jolting his powerful hips, drilling his cock into my much smaller body. I began screaming and wailing with every thrust, having a hard time adjusting to the dane's uncomfortable size and as he sunk a couple more inches of his cock into me. "Fuck, she's too loud, man!" one of the guards said while looking over at the door nervously. The guard by my side quickly began looking around the room, and grabbed my panties up off the floor, suddenly shoving them into my opened mouth. Next he reached over and picked up one of my knee socks, and tied it around my head, successfully muffling me as I tried to scream again, unable to spit my panties out. "MMPH!! MMPH!!" I whined out inaudibly, the dane's weapon darting into my tight pussy as he climbed further up my back, his massive paws sliding over my shoulders and onto the ground on either side of my neck as he now simply stood above me. Each thrust of his cock rocked my whole body forward, but his sturdy legs held my shoulders back and trapped me in a vice. With my body having no where to move as the dane continued to slamfuck my pussy, my body had no choice but to accept his full length as he painfully rammed the tip of his cock into my cervix. Although a few tears had run down my cheeks and soaked into the cloth of the kneesock tied around my face, after about another minute of being fucked, I was finally starting to get used to the dane's extreme penetration. It was uncomfortable and overwhelming, but he was fucking me good and right, and I couldn't help but start moaning against my gag as I lifted my face off the floor and held my torso up by my elbows. As the dane held my body still while plowing into me, my breasts were the only part of me moving, as they began first swinging, and then jiggling chaotically to his rapid thrusts. I was so overwhelmed and completely dominated by this dog and his massive cock, that a simple glance up to the monitor to see how he dwarfed my body and was fucking me so rampantly was all that it took to send me over the edge as first my thighs, and then my entire body began to shudder and spasm in orgasm. I moaned incoherently against my gag as my body learned for the first time that such a level of pleasurable bliss existed, and it was prolonged for what seemed like minutes by the huge nasty great dane that was defiling my body as he claimed me as his bitch. As I finally came down off of my high, I rested my head on the ground and looked down past my sore, shaking breasts, my eyes focusing on the 4 inches of cock which were still plowing the rest of his length in and out of me, as well as the threatening, melon-sized knot at the base of his cock, which i'd suddenly become aware that it was roughly banging against my crotch. I squealed and moaned with each thrust, feeling his cock invade the depths of my cervex as his hideous knot pushed against my much-too-small entrance, physically unable to enter me, much to my relief. But with how swollen his cock had become, he didn't need to knot me to stay tied. As his cock began to swell and his thrusts began to slow to small jolts, I couldn't help but feel like I was being fucked with an arm. Moaning whorishly through my gag as the dane pleasured me with his cock, I pushed my hips up and back against him, ignoring the pain as about 1/4th of his gigantic knot slowly pushed my pussy open, stretching me to my limits. I curled my toes and tugged strongly at my handcuffs, as some primal instinct embedded deep inside my mind forced me to try and be a good mate to this dog, my body wanting to accept his seed, to be filled with every ounce of it, and to be made pregnant. And as he suddenly stopped humping, I braced myself and clenched my pussy down tighly on his cock, and felt his cock first begin to pulse, then tremble, and suddenly shudder as the tip of his cock shot it's first powerful surge of the dog's semen, exploding thick chunky cum into my cervix and completely filling it in a single spray. I strained my head up and back moaning as the huge beast's head towered over my own, the length of his cock pumping load after load of his cum into me as he slowly emptied his nuts, causing my lower stomach to slowly distend. My eyes hazed over as I weakly rested on my head on the ground, and as my vision began to black out, the last thing I remembered feeling was the Great Dane's cock still continuously spewing its hot cum into me. I'd woken up feeling sore and sticky, as I lifted my head and looked confused around the now empty room. Sorely I pulled myself up to my knees, which is when I felt a huge glob of luke-warm cum push out of my pussy, sliding down my inner thighs to collect in the alarming mess of semen puddled on the floor. I began recalling my entire ordeal as I scooted out of the cum puddle, realizing my hands had been uncuffed. I quickly reached around my head, pulling the tied kneesock off and pulling my wet thong out from my mouth as I coughed, good lord did this room wreak of sex.. or was that stench coming from me? As I slowly stood up and looked around the room again, I saw my clothing and purse piled up next to a bucket and a sponge. I cringed as I leaned down, dipping the sponge into the water bucket and wiping the excessive amounts of cum off my crotch and legs, slowly but surely cleaning myself. Next I hurriedly got dressed, first putting on my bra and my blouse, and then my short skirt. I cringed at my thong, remembering how I told myself I'd never wear it again after watching the first dog rooting around in it, but regrettably stepped into it and pulled it up my legs, deciding my skirt was too short to risk going commando. Now I sat down on the floor, pulling my kneesocks up - thank goodness they were just tall enough to cover my sore, red knees. After fastening my shoes on, I hopped up to my feet, dusting myself off while looking at the gross smelly mess on the floor as the realization set in that all that semen had been inside of me at some point. I shuddered, my poor muff still feeling sore from the ordeal. Grabbing my purse, I looked up at the monitor. My hair had gotten a little wild, but aside from that and the feint blush to my skin, the cute blond girl on the screen looked pretty normal and innocent. I noticed the monitoring will still flashing the message "recording", to which I raised up my middle finger at the camera with a bitchy glare, and then promptly stomped out of the room, back into the hallways of the busy airport. As I nervously clutched the sides of my skirt while I walked past all the random people in the hallways with a slight limp, paranoid that they'd somehow be able to tell that I'd spent the last hour being fucked by dogs, I just hoped that the security guards would keep the videos they'd taken of me to themselves, and prayed they wouldn't show them to anyone. ------The End! (I think..) Once again, thanks to everyone that posted in my defense or supports my writings. Without wonderful readers like you guys, I wouldn't have any reason to post here. It's just a huge relief to know that I'm not alone and other people find this line of thought with fantasizing hot as well! I just love you guys/gals! :D Well, til next time~ This post has been edited by skittleisme on Dec 19 2007, 11:41 AM |
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Posted: Dec 19 2007, 12:41 PM
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Let me be the first to say.
Thank you. And there is nothing wrong with you, but so much that is oh so right :) |
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Posted: Dec 19 2007, 01:24 PM
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fantastic
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| skittleisme |
Posted: Dec 19 2007, 02:07 PM
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thank you both for the comments :) reading over this again, it seems it won't let me edit the typos.. there was a part where I described that I was "serving his cock", what I meant was "servicing".. oops!
also there's a part where i said "at least my ideal is over now" instead of "ordeal".. and another part says "until finally the [SPAM] of sperm died down", apparently the word t`orr=en_t gets filtered out for whatever reason, lame! Oh well, so much for being a perfectionist. :ruck: although being "spammed" with cum is kind of funny! This post has been edited by skittleisme on Dec 19 2007, 02:11 PM |
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Posted: Dec 19 2007, 02:14 PM
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just read part 2 OMG it was incredible thnx so very much :devil2: :devil2: :devil2:
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Posted: Dec 19 2007, 05:05 PM
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Another exciting chapter for a very exciting story. I do hope you will continue writing either of your stories or at least start a new one. Your writing style is very visual and sexy. Thank You.
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Posted: Dec 19 2007, 07:19 PM
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You were very right, not to let one person get you to stop. This is a place for fantasies. If someone cannot understand that, sucks to be them. Loved your story. Keep up the good work and keep us all cumming. :heart:
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