Mare
sweetly standing,
gracefully grazing clover,
eyes glistening, gazing, enticing,
mane and tail streaming in the breeze,
bold spirit, irresistable form, sensuous touch,
stance and tranquility answering the stallion's call.

Stallion
swiftly galloping,
hooves tearing sod asunder,
heart thundering intensely wild,
flared nostrils catching scent of mare,
whinnies singing passionately out her name,
vibrant spirit and gallant form vying for her company.

I wrote this poem inspired by a Klaus Doberman piece of two aroused stallions, drawn in a pose that implied they were circling each other. They weren't mounting or doing anything cartoonish, but it was clear in the drawing they had an affection for one another. I do not have Klaus' permission to post the piece (he's rather difficult to get a hold of), but someone else may already have posted it somewhere on the forum anyway. Anyhoo, here is the poem:

The Stallions' Dance
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The tranquility of dusk
Relieving a waried sun
Simmering equine musk
Settling more than one

A nuzzle and a whuffle,
A tired curling of necks
Breeze causing a dust shuffle,
No difference their sex

Beheld in one another's embrace,
A day of romp to an eve of love
Beating hearts quelling time's pace
Even as the skies darken above

The moon rises and sets,
But 'tis paid little heed,
Passing another day yet,
Nowhere canters either steed

A man might see them and say
Two stallions cannot play this way
But cannot is a man's invention
Following it is not their intention.

Not able to understand all what you mean, but I definitely felt something... Masculine and powerful stallion... Possibly something related to Chinese philosophy, yin ang yang

/Two/ stallions, actually. :P I was careful in the grammar:

"Stallions' Dance"

Stallions'

The apostrophe after the "s" marks a possessiveness of the plural. :)

You are an excellent writer..
I love just that fact alone..
I understood the poem perfectly!
I understood the words, sentences and their exact meaning..
I come from a family of writers so I am used to grammatic poetic structure.

These poems you have written seems professional.
I do hope you use this talent to the fullest..

:D

Excellent work!
I look forward to reading anything else you may create and post!