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| Skeezix |
Posted: Oct 26 2007, 05:05 AM
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My God!! A FANTASTIC story!!!! Very well written too !! PLEASE keep it going!! I gave you a ten, but you deserve much more! Thank you!!!!!
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| WolfSong4u2 |
Posted: Oct 28 2007, 02:39 AM
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Thank you for such a wonderful story and for the time and effort it takes to produce one. You've definitely gained a new fan!
~WS |
| kevkaos |
Posted: Dec 1 2007, 11:21 PM
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Chapter 3....FINALLY !!
The events from the cabin were all sort of a blur as I awoke at my house, in my bed...sore but amazingly fulfilled. My collar still around my neck, it was beginning to be a part of me, something I enjoyed wearing and seldom thought about! I lazily crawled out of bed, stretching and allowing my eyes to focus on my room...there's a note on my mirror, "Appointment 10 am at Dr Smythe's office"...I look at the clock, it's 7, I have plenty of time to get ready. I turn on the shower and start to undress...ugh, I need to shave BAD! The room is filling with steam and Jake noses his way into the bathroom with me, "Jake, you be good" I tell him and he just looks at me with those big brown eye as if telling me "No problem, I'll be good, just leave me in here with you"...I smirk and jump in the shower...the hot water feels so good on my body...I let my fingers explore my nipples, tugging on them slightly... that feels so good....I find myself getting more and more arroused in the shower....rubbing my clit between my fingers all I want to do is cum....I force myself to stop..."Dr appointment...don't be late...no more cabins!" I think to myself. I shave my legs then focus on my pussy...I love shaving myself, it makes me feel so sexy. I love the looks of my pussy after I shave, so smooth, so soft...god it feels good. I finish my shower and reach out just grabbing the towel...standing inside the shower I dry myself off...my pussy is soaking wet though...I should've finsihed playing with myself while I was in the shower! I slide the door open and look at step from the shower. Good old Jake is sitting there staring at me...I pet him on the head and turn to look at the mirror...there, written in the steam on the mirror, is the word "Blue"....I immeditely drop to my hands and knees and push my ass towards Jake..."Come on Jake....Fuck me...Give me your cock" I grunt. Jake knows what's up and stuffs his nose right between my ass and his tongue goes deep inside my pussy..."OOOOOOOHHHHHHH YESSSSSS!!!!" That feels incredible. I'm holding myslef up with one hand and pinching my right nipple with my free hand...massaging my breast and panting rapidly...I push back again...signaling Jake that I want his cock! Jake knows this position and jumps on my back...I feel him grip my hips and start thrusting...he's searching...I take my hand from my nipple and reach beneath me, taking his cock in my hand I guide him to my ever so eager pussy. With one thrust he is balls deep inside me. He pushes so hard all of the air leaves my lungs! He feels WONDERFUL! He begins to jack hammer my pussy like it was his first time. Pounding his cock inside me on the bathroom floor! I rest my head on my forearm, looking between my legs I see his knot forming and pushing against my pussy. My lips expand and retract around his cock, almost sucking him inside me. His knot is pressing hard against my clit and I take my free hand and slide it down between my legs. I feel his knot with my fingers and reach behind his knot....helping him push against me...I want that knot inisde me! "FUCK ME JAKE! GIVE ME YOUR CUM!!! BREED YOUR BITCH!" I start screaming! He takes my screams as incentive and adjusts his stance...pulls back about 2 inches, grips my hips lower and tighter, then thrusts HARD into me....His knot slides right past my entrance and brings his entire cock with it! "OOOOHHHHHHH That's it! I'm going to cum! Fuck me Jake...Fuck me harder....good boyyyyy" I mutter. I feel him tensing behind me...his cock swells even more, stretching me like never before...and then, he explodes inside me. God his cum is HOT. I can't get enough...I start to rotate my hips against his cock, trying to make myself cum again...I rub my clit fast and hard while Jake remains locked inside me...his cum pulsing drop by drop into my womb. I feel another orgasm building...It's coming FAST...Jake pulls...trying to dismount..."Nooo....stay...be still...don't move...be good," I plead. Then it hits me....another bone jarring orgasm racing through my body....my pussy clamps down around Jakes cock and I pull him deeper into me. I lie there on the floor, Jake locked inside of me, panting and nearly exhausted. Jake pulls...once...twice...three times...each time sending shivers through my body...until finally, he pops free. His cum runs from my pussy and onto the floor...I try to catch my breath. I look at my watch, "9 o'clock! I barely have enough time to get dressed!" I can't take another shower and clean up...not enough time...I race through the house getting dressed quickly. I grab my tank top with no bra and my spring skirt, mid thigh, no panties, and a towel to sit on! I race to my car, spread the towel on the seat, hike up my skirt, and jump in....racing to the Dr's office. I screach into the parking lot at 5 minutes to 10...and run into the office....whew, I made it, with 2 minutes to spare. "Why Hello Brandy, glad you could make it on time today...the Dr will be with you in a moment." I opted to stand and wait given Jakes cum was still leaking out of my pussy. A few moments later his assistant came in, "He's ready for you now" and let me to his office. She had me sit down and wait and within a few moments, Dr Smythe appeared. "Hello Brandy. How are we today?" he asked. "I'm fine, I was almost late again. I got "tied" up at home" I replied with a smile. "Yes, I know. That was part of your treatment. It seems to be working well don't you agree?" He asked. "Um, I think so. But I still don't understand why, or how...or what is going on. What's happening to me? I feel wonderful, but I'm filled with lust almost constantly" I replied. "You will understand soon enough. Let's get started shall we?" He replied. With that, I heard him call to his assistant..."Ms. White, could you please bring in the testing equipment I asked you for?" "Right away Dr." she replied. A few moments later, his assistant came in with a tray, there was a towel over whatever was on the tray and she set the tray down on the table next to me. "Thank you Ms White. Please make yourself available later, I may need your help with this one." He said. "Now Brandy, I'm going to test your cammands and see how well things are going...and then we will continue our session...how is your blue rottie today?" He asked. I stood up from my chair, peeled my top off slowly and then even slower, I slid my skirt down my legs...turning in small circles, teasing him...showing him my body and getting more and more worked up while doing so. "Very nice. Please, step towards the sofa." He asked. I walked across the room towards the sofa and he said, "Rottie" I immediately threw myself on the sofa, spread my legs wide and threw my hands above my head as if I were being held down. I started gyrating my hips, displaying my pussy for him or anyone that came into the room. Again, Dr Smythe smirked and said, "Blue". Without hesitation, I rolled onto my hands and knees and hiked my ass in the air. "Please fuck me" escaped my lips. Dr Smythe just smirked and then said, "red". Somehow, as if I knew it was there all along, I reached over to the tray his assistant brought in and there was a vibrator there. I took it from the tray, sucked it down my throat and got it all wet...then turned it on and inched it towards my pussy. I began to rub it on my clit...the sensation was wonderful. I pushed the vibrator deep inside me and began fucking the toy in front of my Dr! "Very good Brandy." he said. "Ms White, please come in here for a moment." he said into the speaker box the table. His assistant came into the room, "Ahhh, very nice Dr...she is a lovely specimen. And well trained too" she said, "How may I assist you?" she asked. "Brandy, BLUE" he said...I flipped back onto my hands and knees and looked at his assistant, the vibrator still humming away inside me..."Please fuck me" I said to her. The assistant looked at Dr Smythe, "May I?" she asked. "She is begging for it, so by all means, please do". Ms White went to the tray and there was a very LARGE strap on there. She disrobed and what an amazing body she had! Dr Smythe helped her into the contraption...it was as thick as my arm! Just looking at it made me crave it. "Please, put it inside me, fuck me. I beg you, please fuck me!" I said. She got behind me on the couch and removed the vibrator from my pussy...she rubbed the new rubber dildo on my clit and I started grinding against it. Then she positioned it agaisnt my pussy...."Fuck me. Put it inside me!" I screamed. With that, she pushed against me. My pussy stretched and took every inch of that rubber cock! She worked it slowly inside me...until all 12" was buried deep inside my pussy. Then she grabbed me by the hips and began thrusting into me. I was pushing back the entire time...wanting that cock so deep inside me! "Yes! Fuck me! I love that cock inside me! Fuck me HARDER!" I screamed. Dr Smythe appeared in front of me...his cock in hand. I reached up and did not miss a beat, took him completely down my throat like a cum starved little whore. He grabbed both sides of my hed and litereally fed me his cock. I was rocking back and forth between the two of them, moaning deeply agains the Dr's cock and fucking the dildo for all it was worth! I felt my orgasm building. "MMMMMMMRRRFFFFFFF" was all I could mumble as my lips were planted around the Dr's cock. His assistant kept slamming that cock inside me...driving me crazy with lust and stretching my pussy to a painful yet very pleasureable state! Soon, the Dr tensed up and began to cum in my mouth. I swallowed and swallowed. He pulled from my mouth and I licked him clean while his assistant slowed her pace inside me. Finally, she slowed and pulled the neormous cock from inside me. "Excellent work Ms White. Please clean up the tools and schedule another session for Brandy next week", he said. "Brandy, please get dressed now' he said to me. I answered "Yes Sir". Within minutes I was dressed and we were finishing our session...I felt revived again! What an experience! "Now Brandy, this week you will be doing some work with Emily at my friends kennels. She will take you there and take care of you while you are there. I have given you some new commands that she will test on you when you are there. You will enjoy your time there and question nothing. Do you understand?" he asked. "Yes Sir" was all I could say. |
| Skeezix |
Posted: Dec 2 2007, 08:17 AM
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Terrific Update!!! Excellent writing style!!
Thank you, THANK YOU!! |
| littlepet |
Posted: Dec 2 2007, 08:47 AM
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What a great story. Hope you have more to come.
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| rinthewolf |
Posted: Dec 2 2007, 10:44 AM
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i LOVED this story. I like the whole hypno thing. matbe i'll try it on my girlfriend and have something to write about. Who knows, maybe I'll make a hypno story after my present one.
If you would check it out that would be cool. It's called Furrie world. http://www.beastforum.com/showtopic-119539.html |
| ironmick |
Posted: Dec 2 2007, 12:39 PM
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wonderful story
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| addicted1 |
Posted: Dec 2 2007, 09:41 PM
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Disciple of the board Group: VIP Members Posts: 8492 Member No.: 196189 Joined: 2-December 05
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great story would love to read more.
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| sanukthai |
Posted: Dec 3 2007, 01:31 PM
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This is a great story, I thought at first you might have moved a bit quick, could have used some more development, but the cracking pace is just its thing
10 if I could vote |
| funtime515 |
Posted: Dec 10 2007, 05:02 AM
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Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 952 Member No.: 18795 Joined: 21-April 04
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A wonderful story well written. I hope you have more for us soon. A 10 from me
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| parex |
Posted: Dec 10 2007, 05:52 PM
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Supreme Being Group: VIP Members Posts: 3566 Member No.: 602355 Joined: 27-November 07
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FANTASTIC STORY- LEAVES ME WANTING MORE- THANKS FOR TAKING THE TIME TO POST
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| WolfGrey |
Posted: Dec 11 2007, 02:48 AM
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Oh to have that kind of control. I'm the master but they still have there own will.
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| watchdog_1 |
Posted: Dec 12 2007, 07:38 AM
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Well told, Kevkaos. Like other readers I think the hypnosis angle is a nice touch. Good descriptions that lead the reader to the next bit of action. You've married the Dom/sub lifestyle with this one very nicely.
I was very aroused by the finish of the third chapter and hope to read more of your work. I like the continuity from story to story; it lends more excitement knowing what's happened in previous chapters. Keep it up. I'm new on the site and haven't figured out all the protocols and angles yet; but I will. If I could vote here I'd give you a 10. |
| ribabit |
Posted: Dec 12 2007, 06:06 PM
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Wonderful story well written can't wait for the next chapter has gotten me all wet
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| Oldsaltblock |
Posted: Dec 13 2007, 05:23 AM
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Dito to what everyone else has said here. Thank you for a wonderfully written story that is spaced and with good grammer as well.
A 10 vote for you. I will keep watch to see if and when you have more with eager anticipation. |
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