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| alicealice |
Posted: Oct 3 2007, 04:11 PM
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Hi Alice here
Maria and Josie are two young ladies who watch Captain and Buddy when we are on trips. They also watch the dogs of other neighbors including the Petersons. I wrote of Maria and Josie caring for the Peterson's dogs in Maria and Josie’s Great Adventure http://www.beastforum.com/showtopic-89298.html Here is their story as told by Maria. Some of her story is a retelling of her Great Adventure but she continues to more recent events. Hi I'm Maria. As Josie and I were growing up in East San Jose, we had no idea that we would become bisexual dog bitches. I was scared that we would grow to be like our older sisters, pregnant before graduation and have babies whose fathers were in jail or dead. To the gangs, if you had a cunt and breathed, you would become one of the gang women. Fortunately, San Jose passed laws to attack the heart of the gangs by preventing identified gang members from associating with one another. The ACLU had a cow over freedom of assembly and association but the courts upheld the laws. The police and community moved quickly and gangs were gone. San Jose is the safest large city in the US. Josie and I were saved the fate of our older sisters. We struggled through high school and got entry level jobs. We knew that we had to work hard and study to escape the second trap of leveling out when we had our first job. So we enrolled in a community college in the San Mateo hills. Josie said that we had to get away and find guys who had a future. So we had our small apartment, worked hard, and studied. But we were still looking for love in all the wrong places. We were having one lousy date after another. I came home from a bad date. All the guy wanted was to get in my panties. It wasn’t even a social date, just sex. What a pig. We had a fight and he left me mad and horny. As I opened our apartment door, I could hear Josie moaning and the bed squeaking from wild sex. I took off my shoes and quietly crept to Josie room. She didn’t expect me home this early and she must have been really hot to get the guy in bed since she left the door partially open. I peeked into the dark room lit only by the glow of her TV. On the screen were a woman and a huge man. The man was deep in the woman and driving her to multiple orgasms. The audio was low but “OOOH OH OOOH I’m cumming. F**k me. F**k me”, was clear and arousing. Josie was on the edge of her bed with her panties and shorts around her ankles, legs open, and pumping her fingers in her cunt. Her tee shirt and bra were pulled up and her other hand was pinching her erect nipples. She rocked her hips on the bed, her head back, mouth open moaning with half closed eyes, Her voice joined the audio with “Ahh Ahh I’m cumming I’m cumming OOOH OOH” and her fingers and hips rocked faster. My fingers unconsciously touched my covered pussy. It was wet from the frustrating date and now especially watching Josie. There were many nights when I quietly rubbed my erect clit and pushed fingers in my cunt imagining the cock of my yet to be true love. My orgasms were brief but powerful. In quiet desperation, Josie must have masturbated alone in her room too. But thinking she would be alone for the evening, she was loudly enjoying herself. Watching her was making me hot and aroused. My fingers as if with a mind of its own slipped under the edge of my shorts and panties and began massaging my wet clit and moved between slick pussy lips into my cunt. My nipples were hard and rubbing my bra. I had to be with her. Quickly and quietly I pulled down my shorts and panties and pulled off my shirt and bra. I had only been naked in my bedroom or bathroom and now I was slipping my bare body into Josie's room. Josie was still rubbing and increasing her pace. Her hips were moving in rhythm with her hand and her moans became more urgent, “OH OH OH (gasp) Ahh OH ooOOH”. I slipped in next to Josie and one hand joined Josie's adding to her rhythmic fingers slipping through her pussy. My fingers joined Josie’s in her cunt and searched for her G spot. My lips began sucking and gently biting her nipple. For a fraction of a second, Josie's eyes opened in shock but she was quickly overtaken by a blinding orgasm rippling through her body. Her hips rocked and I could feel the contractions of her cunt on my fingers. Josie gave a long deep moan “oh oH OH OH OOOH” and thrashed her head from side to side. I wrapped Josie in my arms and held her close. I had never before felt tits or nipples on my bare skin. I whispered in Josie's ear “You are HOT”. Without thinking, I kissed Josie full on her mouth and pushed my tongue between her teeth. I felt Josie's tongue wrapping around mine in a deep French kiss. Then, I felt Josie's fingers move through my cunt lips trying to find my clit and opening. Women know how women like their pussy fingered and their clits rubbed. I finally had the sex I wanted. I closed my eyes and my orgasm began to build. My kiss became a deep moan and my body began contractions and my hips bucked against her fingers driving them deep into my cunt. Still kissing, I gave a muffled “oh oH OH OH OH” into Josie’s mouth and I shuddered as my orgasm swept through my body. Josie held me as I thrashed and shook as my cum finally subsided. Josie opened her eyes and smiled. “Maria, that was wonderful. I love you. I love you.” “Josie, my best friend. My lover. What did we do? Why did we wait so long?” “Maria, I wanted to touch you so many times but I was scared that I would drive you away. At nights as I played with myself, I started to think of you and not some guy. This really scared me. I am not a lesbian. I’m going to marry and have children. But with you, it’s different. You’re my best friend and I love you. We are best friends making love. But we are not lesbians. I don’t want to make love to a woman; just with you.” We didn’t want our friends to become suspicious so I still have my stuff in my room, but I sleep with Josie. As lovers, we found many web sites with girl-on-girl. These are OK but are not a real turn on for me. We also found sites with women with their dogs. These dogs rock and the women f**ked by dogs cum so fast and hard. Imagine all the good stuff about a guy without all the bad stuff and you have a dog. And, it looks like these women like the dog f**king them more than any guy. My gosh, those dogs have huge erections and a knot. These women love the knot. I wondered if all of this was true or just to sell porn? Some of our new friends told us of easy jobs watching the homes of the rich people when they were on trips. You care for their pets, make sure the gardener cuts the grass, maybe clean up some rooms. But you get to stay in huge houses and eat the great food they leave in the fridge; better than staying in our small apartment. So we started house sitting. Then, we met Sam and Tyke, the Peterson’s dogs. Maria’s story continues (and you know what happens next) This post has been edited by alicealice on Oct 3 2007, 04:24 PM |
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Posted: Oct 3 2007, 06:04 PM
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THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!
Again, Thank you for continuing the adventures of these two very erotic and sexy ladies and their K-9 antics! I, for one, enjoy your writing and I'm always looking for a new posting from you, either a new story or a continuation of one of your earlier ones. I devoured this one in no time and am anxiously awaiting for the next installment on this one. Another 10 on its way to you, too, dear. Jetsons |
| cluedog |
Posted: Oct 4 2007, 12:10 AM
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alice every time i walk into a book store,i always fantasize that i will see one of your FANTASTIC!! stories on the self. your stories should be read by every women,who dreams of being a k9 lover can't wait for more. :D
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| poe_boy |
Posted: Oct 4 2007, 12:56 PM
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Once again your stories are so hot!!! thankx so much for posting :beer:
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| alicealice |
Posted: Oct 4 2007, 10:32 PM
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Hi Maria continuing
Josie and I find watching rich peoples' homes easy extra money and a nice place to stay. Alisha and Shanna referred us to the Peterson's who were going on a six week trip to Greece. What a huge house in the hills. Peterson is a high priced defense lawyer and she is his second wife, his trophy. They have two dogs, Sam and Tyke, and must be rolling in money. Since there were two of us, we also were watching the Bradford home which was just next door. Note that in the hills “next door” means a car ride down long drives and back up another long drive. You don’t just cross the lawn. (Alice: they were watching our home. Bradford is our family name.) They have two dogs too. After seeing the women with dogs web sites, Josie and I have suspicions about any woman who has a dog, especially a big, non-neutered dog. I guess we just have nasty minds but Mrs. Peterson and Mrs. Bradford each have two big intact dogs. It was late evening and I drove to the Peterson’s to check everything and stay for the night. The money watching two houses is good but it means Josie and I have to sleep apart. When I arrived at the home, the Sam and Tyke greeted me. They are huge but so well behaved. Sam wanted to play as we often did and wrestled around on the carpeted family room floor. I was on my back and Sam pushed his nose into my crotch. It was like an electric shock. Even the most aggressive guys try to grab some tit or a kiss before going for my cunt. Here, I was with Sam between open legs. He was not aggressive but very insistent. I was scared that he would bite me if I were not calm and submissive. He was now the alpha and I didn’t want any part of challenging him. Sam pushed his nose up the leg of my shorts and began trying to lick my panty covered pussy. Oh my God, he must do this with Mrs. Peterson! Sam is a real trained dog just like the ones on the web sites! Imagine beautiful Mrs. Peterson licked by Sam to cum over and over again. My pussy was wet from thinking of her feeling these pleasures and Sam’s wet tongue. I arched my back and pulled off my shorts and panties to give Sam’s tongue full access to my wet pussy lips. His tongue slipped between my pussy lips and wiped over my clit. The texture and size of his tongue were stimulating all the nerves in my cunt. No man (or woman) had ever made me feel so good. Sam worked the tip in to my pussy and it was like a snake twisting its way deep into my crevasses pushing almost to my cervix. A lot of guys would have been proud to have gotten their cock this far. The base of his tongue rubbed on my clit, the top was pushing on my G spot, and the tip was deep in me. All the touch points were covered as Sam rhythmically moved his tongue. I moaned “oooH OOOH oH oH OH” as I felt the most intense cum beginning to build. Pushing it in, pulling out, wiping across my clit and then back in again. My hips rocked in synch as I pinched my nipples through my tank top. Then my hips rocked faster and I held Sam's head as a teeth clenching orgasm swept through me. “OH OOOH (gasp) I.m cumming OH OH Stop Stop stop” Sam kept trying to lick me as I pushed his head away. His tongue was too much for me to take any longer. Then I saw the tip of Sam's red cock poking from its furry sheath. Sam moved over me and his cock was starting to peek further from its sheath. Small spurts of pre-cum wet my leg and the floor. Sam was trying to position his cock to enter but I was too low on my back. I thought that this was an opportune time to find out if all of the stuff about women and dogs was a good as the videos, web sites, and stories say. I lifted her hips to give Sam a good shot in the missionary position. Sam poked and missed several times. I rolled over on my stomach and pulled my knees under me to try to get into a doggie position. Now on my hands and knees I presented myself to Sam. He poked and hit my cheek. Then, he hit the edge of my cunt. “OW! That hurts!” Each try was like a poke with a finger. It was not like the fat, blunt end of a man's erection but it felt like there was a bone in his cock. (In fact there is.) By now I was not thinking about Sam getting mad but more about getting Sam into me. I want to be f**ked by this dog. I dropped to my stomach, grabbed my phone from my shorts, and called Josie. ”Josie, hurry and come to the Peterson’s. Help me. Sam’s an Internet dog, like the dogs we see on the Internet" "Like the dogs on the Internet?” “Sam ate me and now is trying to f**k me” "Sam did what to you? What is he trying to do?" “Josie, please get here as fast as you can.” "I'll be right there". Josie left quickly. Now to get from the Bradford’s to the Peterson’s is not just walk next door, but rather get in the car and drive. I was anxious and called Josie three times while she drove to the Peterson's. When Josie saw me, Sam was still over me waiting for me to get into position. "Maria, do you want me to pull him away?" "No No Just help him get it in. I'm going to get up. Guide him." I pulled myself back into doggie position with Sam on my back. Josie put her hand on Sam's cock and guided him to the opening of my cunt. In one thrust, Sam’s thin finger like cock was in me and began pumping rapidly. As Sam pushed deep in my cunt, I gasped a short "OH " in rhythm with his rapid strokes. His cock expanded with each stroke and his cock rubbing on my vaginal walls soon locked and pushed my body. My eyes were closed and a stream of "OH...OH...OH." came from me and a dribble of clear fluid dripped from my cunt. I was so wet. Sam sprayed pre-cum out of me with each stroke. "Maria, what’s happening?" "It really got big OH OH and getting bigger OH (gasp) with each push. I feel really wet. oooH OH (gasp) (gasp), OH OH" "What? Maria?" "It's so BIG and pushing on my G spot. OH OH OH I’m going to cum..... I’m going to cum" I started to shake with an orgasm. Sam stopped his strokes and danced on his toes to stay in position. "OH It's warm and OH OH (gasp) I can feel it pumping in me. My belly is starting to fill. No guy can do this. OH OH What does my pussy look like? It feels like a (gasp) watermelon in me." Josie put her hand over my pussy and could feel the bulge of Sam's knot. It was connected to his big balls with a small flexible tissue. Strange. Guys just have a cylindrical cock with a head. I stayed on my hands and knees with Sam on my back. I shuddered several times as each contraction of Sam’s knot pushed hot dog cum in me and drove another orgasm through me. Sam was starting to get restless and started moving around. "Keep him on me. This is soooo good." Josie petted Sam to keep him still and on me. "I think it's starting to shrink and go down. Feel my pussy" Josie put her hand again on my pussy. My clit was very hard and erect, wet with dog pre-cum and cum. Josie gave it a rub. My God what a feeling and I gave out a deep moan. "OOOOH OooooH" "You made me cum again. Do it some more." Josie rubbed my wet clit again and I came and moaned again. Josie kept rubbing until I screamed, “Josie, ...Stop. ...Enough... Enough. See if Sam can get out." Josie felt my pussy and the bulge had gone down. Sam pulled out as the suction made an audible sucking sound followed by a "plop" and cum and pre-cum poured from my pussy and down the inside of my thighs. I was exhausted but never felt so good. The place was a wet mess. Dog cum was dripping from my cunt and down my thigh. Josie and I spent nearly an hour shampooing the carpet and cleaning up. Josie asked "Do you think Tike does this too?" Josie and Tike spent almost hour licking and f**king. I loved sucking Josie's hard nipples as she swayed locked in a tie with Tike. Her clit was wet by the stream of pre-cum leaking past his knot and her cunt lips. I drove her to orgasm after orgasm fingering her dog wet clit. Unlike my adventure with Sam, we were prepared and the clean up was quicker. We noticed that Sam was ready to go again but we had to take care of Captain and Buddy. Later we were at the Bradford’s and Josie asked "Do you think Buddy and Captain are like Sam and Tike? They're big and I think that they're not neutered" Josie went to Buddy and wrestled with him. She then pulled down her shorts and panties exposing her cunt to his nose. Buddy looked and pulled back. Josie pushed two fingers in her pussy and put them to his mouth. Buddy licked her fingers and hand. Then, he licked her face as he moved away from her. Josie moved into a doggie position presenting a clear invitation to mount with her cheeks open and her cunt ready. Buddy sniffed and backed away. "These dogs are stupid. They no clue what to do!" "Josie, we need to get a dog.” “Maria, we need two dogs.” Maria and Josie’s Adventure continues. |
| ORLANDA_LUPAE |
Posted: Oct 4 2007, 10:39 PM
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Very nice start Alice - having read 'Maria And Josie's Great Adventure' we already know where this one's going and yet... - well I'm addicted anyway but wonder how you're going to develop this one. :unsure:
It would be nice to hear something of the thoughts going through the two girls minds - their desires, fears etc. Whatever you send our way I'm sure it will be compelling and as usual beautifully written. :thinking: Thanks for your efforts. Orlanda :puppykiss: |
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Posted: Oct 5 2007, 08:49 PM
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Alice,
Do you really think Captain and Buddy's training would hold in that situation Alice? Your young housesitters naughty minds must be racing in so many directions right now after feeling the intensity of orgasm a dog can bring. :angel: Thanks again Alice for so much good instruction, understanding, and naughtiness. :devil2: |
| crashkid23 |
Posted: Oct 6 2007, 06:45 PM
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that was amazing i love the first timers stories and cant wait to see more of there adventure. please post again soon! oh yeah great detail structure too!
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Posted: Oct 6 2007, 09:42 PM
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Loverly story well written can't wait to read more. 10
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Posted: Oct 6 2007, 10:15 PM
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Fantastic story, definitely a 10. B)
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| alicealice |
Posted: Oct 7 2007, 08:06 AM
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Hi Maria continuing
The Bradfords returned last week so, Josie and I are at the Peterson's. Now their return flight has been in the air for hours. Our time with Sam and Tike is coming to an end. Josie is on her knees with her head between her elbows. Tike is relaxed on her back with his cock tied deep in her cunt and pumping hot, white cum into her womb. Josie is making soft wimpering sounds as waves of cum sweep over her. "oh oh oh Awwwhh OH OH oh oh" as Tike's contraction rub and stimilate her G-spot. Sam is following me around. His cock is nearly retracted in his sheath and he is ready to go again. But we don't have the time. I stop to touch and suck Josie's clit wet with Tike's clear pre-cum dripping past his knot though Josie's slightly open pussy lips. Her clit is erect and easy to suck. "OH OH OH Maria OH OH, your driving me Oh oh oh out of my mind oh oh" Sam started licking my exposed cunt starting my motor again. His broad tongue was licking the cum still dripping from my vulva and matting my pubic hair. But I have to have some self control since we have to start cleaning up. "Maria, Maria ..... Get around to me. I need to suck you clit. Ooooo Ohhh I want to eat you with Tike f**king me." I moved my crotch to Josie so she could eat me. "Oh God, Josie, eat me eat me. Make me cum. OH OH OH OH" It didnt' take much to bring me off again. Sam was licking my tits and rock hard nipples. I started stroking his sheathed cock and spurts of hot pre-cum began wetting my belly and Josie's hair. "Oh Josie. We have to stop OH OH OH ... Stop. We have to clean up. The Peterson's will be home sooner than we think. We can't leave any traces of what we have been doing." Reality and fear sent a chill through both of us. Sam and Tike were still wanting to play but we had to stop. Josie raised her body to slide Tike off and he turned and began his pull out. The sound of air filling a vacuum and his knot and then long cock plopped from her cunt. A flood of pre-cum and globs of sticky white cum gushed free on to the stack of towels. We washed towels, cleaned-up, and showered. Other than the slow drip of dog cum into the pads in our panties, there were no signs of the weeks of dog f**king that we enjoyed. The Peterson's will never know why their dogs were so happy. (Little did the girls know that all of their adventures were recorded on hard drives by the Peterson's and also viewed by us. --- Alice) Mrs. Peterson's dogs, Sam and Tike broke our K9 cherries and the experience was incredible. Josie and I were f**ked and licked the entire time we watched the Peterson house. We were addicted to dog cock. But now the Peterson's returned and we don't have dogs any longer. That night in our apartment, Josie lay naked in my arms with our nipples hard and touching. "How are we going to get dogs like Sam and Tike? I heard that Mrs. Peterson went to Brazil for these specially trained dogs. No way can we get dogs like Sam and Tike." "Maria, maybe we can train some. The dogs we see in the Internet look like ordinary dogs." "Ya, but, a lot of them just lick and try to mount and get off and start over and over. Damn, I want a dog that knows what to do and can get it done. I want one like Sam or Tike. I don't want some dumb dogs like Captain or Buddy. They don't even know how to start to f**k you. They are clueless." "Hey, we were the smart ones in school, let's Google a bunch of stuff, study what we find and then figure out what to do." "Maria, what about boy friends? Husbands? Don't we still want to get married and have kids? We can't be f**king dogs and have a life with husbands and families. My Mom and Dad would die if they knew what we did. "What have we done? (Sob)" Josie started crying and shaking uncontrollably. I tried holding her tight. But she began pushing me away. The enormity of what we have become hit me like a ton of bricks. "Maria. First we started f**king each other. Oh God, we're lesbians!!! And now we've been f**king dogs. We are dog f**king bitches. Dirty, filthy, dog cum filled bitches. "Oh, God forgive us. Maria, we can never get married. We will never have children. We will never be happy. We are going to Hell. God will punish us. We are going to Hell. "We don't dare tell anyone. Not the Priest at confession or anyone. Our lives will be just lies. We have to lie to our parents. Lie to our friends. We are not what we appear to be. "What are we going to do?' Josie broke down crying. We were both naked holding each other while we cried. I felt like SHIT. I helped us slide down a very slippery slope and we were spiraling down to be worst than the whores we never wanted to become. Those whores f**ked a lot of guys but NEVER dogs. The life of lust and pleasure that we have been living has trashed our dreams. No husband; no family; no happy ever after. No hopes. We cried ourselves to sleep. I still had Josie and she had me. We slept intertwined, still naked, but far from sexual. I had tormented dreams of discovery by my mother and father. Their lovely, bright, shining daughter was now a lesbian dog bitch. Morning creeped in under a gray foggy sky. Josie was still asleep. I still loved her dearly. I hope she still loved me. Sex was the furthest thought in my mind but I kissed Josie and she slowly opened her eyes. "Maria, I still love you. I really do. But I know that I can still love a man and have his children." "Josie, I am so happy with you. I love you too; even more now. I can still love a man and have his children. But what are we going to do?" "Maria, after reading all of the porn on the Internet, I think that men are strange. They have secret wishes to watch their wives to be f**ked by other men or f**ked by other women. So perhaps we can find husbands who want to watch us f**k each other." "What about dogs?" "Maria, some husbands want to watch their wives f**ked by dogs. Some even train their dog and seduce their wives into f**king their dog. We just need to be very careful how we select our boy friends and perhaps when we are married, we can get them to get us to f**k each other and f**k our dogs." "So, Josie, may be we can have our husbands, our families, each other, and DOGS too?" "Yes. But no one must know. Our parents will not understand. We will break their hearts. They must never know. Our children must never know. Our friends must never know. What ever we do, only you, me, and our husbands are the only ones who will know. And we have to have our husbands believe that they are to blame and it will be their shame if anyone found out." So that morning, our life plan was born. As the fog cleared and the sun broke through, our lives began to shine again. We would live our sexual lives hidden from all but try to live the American Dream in public. We know that we need to take special care and plan every move. The risk of discovery is high and the consequences will be devastating. We've been asked by the Peterson's to house sit again. They must like the way we take care of everything, EVERYTHING. Mrs. Peterson commented on how well the dogs behaved on their return and that the dogs must really like us. Little does she know how much they like us. Josie and I are going to take care of her dogs every possible opportunity. We want to learn how Sam and Tike were trained or at least figure out how to train a dog for us. Maybe two dogs once we know what to do. But no one will know our private sex lives. We are starting to date guys now. We think we now know how to find the right ones and it's not at bars or baseball games. Maria and Josie’s Adventure continues |
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Posted: Oct 7 2007, 08:15 AM
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You have painted a luscious fulfillment of one of my fantasies.
If only I could write so richly... :wub: Thanks, Bearly... |
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Posted: Oct 7 2007, 11:11 AM
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Alice you have the ability tp write a very interesting, yet sexy story. This story I loved reading...
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Posted: Oct 7 2007, 06:14 PM
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Can't wait for the next part of the adventure.
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Posted: Oct 7 2007, 09:56 PM
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Nice development of the plot Alice - lots of different directions that the story can take off in and giving the girls a little feeling of guilt :blush: is a nice touch - look forward to seeing which route you take this down. :thinking:
Thanks again for all your hard work. :clapping: Orlanda :puppykiss: This post has been edited by ORLANDA_LUPAE on Oct 7 2007, 09:57 PM |
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