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| jolly_roger1800 |
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Disciple of the board Group: VIP Members Posts: 7427 Member No.: 201658 Joined: 12-December 05
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Haven't written for a while and I do it just as a hobby, hope you all like and feel free to express you opions -_- and feel free to rate me if you like it.
Companion Kai (pronounced like the sky, except no s) had been traveling alone for five days after the death of her grandfather. He had been ill for a while and could not travel. The tribe needed to migrate with the herds to survive and they waited as long as they could. They approached her and grandfather about the dilemma and he knew for the better that the tribe must go with out him and so it was decided. He was Kai’s only family and she refused to leave him alone despite his and the elder’s protests. Grandfather walked with the spirits after the tenth night. Once she honored him she trailed after the tribe as quickly as possible. It was close to noon on the sixth day when she saw buzzards circling ahead. She proceeded with caution as the smell of death spread swarmed around her. Ahead she saw an overturned wagon and the three bodies two were pale faces, a man and women. The other body was what caused her to fear, it was a dead Pawnee warrior. She looked around to make sure none were around not that it would have mattered she thought, for if there were any she would already be dead. They were stripped of everything valuable as she searched the wagon and bodies; even the Pawnee warrior was stripped of his possessions. She looked at the dead warrior with disgust knowing of the savagery of the Pawnee who would rather leave their dead discarded then honor them properly. She was startled upon hearing a noise behind her and turned to see a yellow dog. With his head down low and eyes looking up he reminded her of a scared child and she bent low as she approached this sad looking creature. He must have been with the pale faces she thought as he allowed her to run her hand along his neck and back. She examined him for injuries and found only minor cuts and a slight limp with his rear leg. He had some blood around his mouth and she suspected it wasn’t his own. She didn’t know if the Pawnee raiding party would be back anytime soon and she didn’t care to find out. She got her stuff together and looked at the dog and in a soft voice she said, “ Come on then, there is a river not far from here.” and as they walked away she smiled down at the dog with the comfort of now having a companion on her long and lonely journey. They arrived at the river shortly before dark Kai set to work to get a fire started. Once there was a fire she sat down and got out some dried meat and fruits and started to eat. Her new companion sat obediently next to her while she ate wagging his tail and looking at her anxiously. “What is the matter with me, you must eat too.” , as she tossed him a large piece of meat with a smile on her face and she watched him eat.” I will call you Heove (pronounced he-o-v) since that is your color my friend and she patted him on the head. Kai looked at what she had for their rations and with concern realized that she did not have enough food to last her more then a week and she was not certain how long it would be before she found her tribe. Kai looked at her companion knowing they would have to stay here a while to find enough food to keep them going in their pursuit to find the tribe. Kai laid her head down with her companion next to her and fell into a deep sleep. Over the next several days Kai worked hard at building cages to trap fish, set snares for rabbits and forage for berries and roots, all the while Heove stayed at her side keeping his new mistress company. Late one day Kai was checking the cages to trap fish in the river when Heove came running in pursuit of a pheasant, which flew over Kai. Jumping into the water out past his mistress in river Heove splashed Kai in his one track thought of getting the fowl.” Eeeee!” screeched Kai, as the cold water was drenching her. Kai swished through the water to shore, which caught Heove’s attention from the pheasant towards his mistress. Kai stood on the shore dripping wet and stared down at Heove when he arrived next to her wagging his tail and panting from his little chase and completely oblivious to Kai’s anger. “ You miserable dog! ”, Kai yelled. “ Look at me. I’m working to feed us and you are playing and making it impossible for me to work! ” Heove knew he was being scolded and bowed his head expecting to be hit like his previous owner. Right in the middle of his mistresses yelling she stopped and startled him by abruptly hugging him around the neck and sobbing uncontrollably with her face buried in his neck. After some time Kai lifted her head and said, “ I’m sorry Heove. You are my companion. My only friend because my tribe is so far away and moving further ever day.” Kai went over by the stream to wash her face from the dog hair that stuck to her face from her tears. “ I cannot work all wet can I Heove”, said Kai as she looked towards him and started to peal off her soaked garments. She laid the clothes out on a boulder for the sun to dry. Now that she was nude Kai went over to a soft grassy area and sat down. “ I could use a little rest. Come lay next to me Heove. I will not scold you any more.” Kai said with a smile. After Heove lay next to her she joined him and placed her arm over his body and fell asleep. During her slumber Kai was having nightmares of her tribe leaving her behind and was restless in her sleep. Heove raised his head sensing his mistress’s distress and licked her along her neck to comfort her. After a while Kai’s nightmare turned to a wet dream with the sensations her body was feeling from Heove in her sleep. Soon she started to coo and grew moist between her legs. In her sleep Kai’s hand went down to her vagina and the other went to her breast to play with her sensitive nipples. She switched hands, which inadvertently placed her vaginal juices all over her breasts and nipples. The sent caught Heove’s attention and he started to sniff then lick Kai’s breasts and nipples. Kai was panting in pleasure as a small orgasm hit her in her slumbered state. Heove was now moving his head down towards her vagina across her belly looking for the source of this heated sent when the spurt of her juices from her first orgasm caught his attention. At first he lapped with his tongue at her juices around her moistened vagina, then with his nose he pushed her hand aside to get to the moisture beading on her pubic hairs. Kai opened her eyes staring up at the sky knowing she was not alone in her lust. She lifted her head and looked down almost startled to see Heove licking her fiercely at her womanhood. “ What are you doing?” Kai moaned in disbelief. She could not get her self to stop him having never felt such pleasure. Before Kai could finish thinking of what was happening she was hit with an intense orgasm. “ HEOVE! ”, was all she could grunt through gritted teeth and closed eyes. “AHHHHH!” she cried as her body spammed with another wet orgasm and she forced her self to stop Heove by grabbing him by the fur on his neck. Kai starred at Heove with glossy covered eyes trying to catch her breath while small orgasms forced her body to twitch, which showed on her face. This caused Heove to cock his head in curiosity. Kai just stared at him in amazement at what just happened for several minutes before Heove broke the stillness by licking her across her face. This made Kai blurt out a small laugh. “ What have you done to me Heove? Never have I felt so wonderful.” Kai has touched herself before, but since her grandfather became ill so long ago she has not pleased her body in this manner. Kai is still untouched by a man though she broke her hymen some time ago with a polished deer antler at the advise from a friend who told when she was to be with a man for the first time it would be more pleasurable if she were not a virgin. Now the musky smell coming from Kai had it’s effects on Heove and his bright pink and purple penis poking out caught Kai’s attention while she sat on her side. She stared at it and slowly her hand moved towards it. As she slowly wrapped her hand around his member her eyes focused to Heove’s face to see his reaction. Heove whined with anticipation as Kai started to feel along his penis with her hand clasped around his stiff penis. Up and down she gently moved her hand. Kai thought what it would be like to be taken by Heove. She remembers when she was younger ease dropping on the older girls and on one occasion they were making fun of the younger men who were rumored to copulate with the backsides of buffalo they had just hunted while they were still warm. Kai was brought back to the present by Heove’s whines. Uncertain about matting with Heove she thought of what to do. With certainty she said to Heove “ I will please you as you pleased me Heove”, and she had lay down on her back. Kai looked to where Heove was sitting on his back legs and she scooted on her back towards his penis moving almost right under him. Kai gently touched his penis with the fingertips of both hands and lifted her head closer to him. Kai closed her eyes and started to lick along his shaft. Soon she tasted the precum starting to drip out and was surprised that it wasn’t unpleasant taste. Kai flicked her tongue at the tip where the precum started to drip and she noticed this caused Heove to whine with more anticipation. Kai moved closer and what seemed like the logical thing to do, she engulfed his penis in her mouth. Heove stood up with eagerness at her actions and moved around her licking her shoulder. Kai smiled knowing she pleased Heove. Kai released him and said, “ Come lay next to me Heove”, and patted the empty spot next to her. Heove moved next to her and lay down next to her with his head up. Kai ran her fingers through the fur on his head and motioned for him to lay down all the way down on his side. Kai got on all her knees and bent down and put Heove’s penis her mouth. Kai’s mouth swallowed his penis and then she started to gingerly swish it around while sucking on it. Heove groveled at her actions and soon the knot was becoming visible. Kai bobbed her head up and down slurping up his juices and was now feeling aroused by the events taking place. Kai moved one of her hands underneath and between her legs and started to rub her clitoris. Soon Kai was moaning, as her rubbing became penetration with her fingers. Kai was slurping more wildly up and down Heove’s penis and she felt an orgasm starting to build. Then she stopped. “Take me my love.” Kai said while wiping away the juices dripping from her chin and moved around positioning herself with her rear facing him. Heove knew what to do and mounted her clasping on her and started thrusting all over. Kai reached beneath herself to help guide Heove’s member in to her. Kai was quivering with a mixture of exuberance, lust, and doubtfulness as she found his penis and maneuvered it the entrance of her dripping hole. Heove felt her hand and kept thrusting. Suddenly he felt his penis go partially into her and thrust again even harder knowing he found his mark. “Ahh!” quipped Kai as the first penetration hit her. Heove was now inside her and thrust with more ferocity. “Oh, oh, oh.” Kai moaned out loud. “My love don’t stop I beg you not to”. Soon Heove’s not started to enter Kai and at first she felt some pain as her vaginal walls expanded. When her next orgasm occurred the pain was gone and she was relaxed enough for the knot to enter all the way. When this happened multiple orgasms occurred for her in what seemed like an eternity for Kai. When Heove released his semen into her she appeared to convulse and her mouth opened as to scream but silence emerged and then darkness took her with the overload of blissfulness. While in her in a helpless state Heove was next to her with his knot still in her. After a short while the knot just popped out which caused Kai to stir. As the world returned to her knees were bent with one up and the other on the ground on its side exposing her vagina with all its fluids escaping her. The glisten attracted Heove’s attention from cleaning himself and he got up to his mate. His tongue glided between her legs as he cleansed her of their mixed juices. As he finished what was left Kai was aware of what was happening but to weak to stop him and she felt a final, but gentle orgasm leave her. When he finished he lay next to her and both slept for many hours. When Kai awoke she went and bathed in the river while Heove got up and sniffed around. When Kai was done she felt famished and sat down under a tree with extra food for Heove. As Heove was wolfed down his rations Kai ran her fingers through the fur on his head. “ I don’t think we have worry about catching up to the tribe as quickly right my love?” Kai said and grinned when Heove perked his ear at her while eating. This post has been edited by jolly_roger1800 on Sep 28 2007, 07:17 PM |
| lunalupo |
Posted: Sep 29 2007, 12:07 AM
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Supreme Being Group: VIP Members Posts: 4328 Member No.: 547048 Joined: 28-July 07
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This is truly an awesome story. Well written with real live characters in a very plausible situation. I applaud your story telling and excellent erotic talent. Hopefully you will post many more for us to enjoy.
You got my TEN. Lunalupo |
| petlover54 |
Posted: Sep 29 2007, 01:30 AM
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A good story, with a great plot, an pretty well written. I hope there will be a second part to this. A 10 for you. With my thanks, Pet :P |
| packer |
Posted: Sep 29 2007, 02:36 AM
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:rolleyes: wow truly awsome. thanks for sharing
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| jetsons |
Posted: Sep 29 2007, 06:16 AM
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I LOVED IT!!!
Thanks for sharing with us. Jetson |
| grayowl |
Posted: Sep 29 2007, 12:17 PM
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:D Wow! Great story. Lots of potential for a long story. Thanks.
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| redblackdragon |
Posted: Oct 5 2007, 10:46 AM
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love the story :) .. i dont usualy read stories but this was a good one.. keep up the good work
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| crashkid23 |
Posted: Oct 7 2007, 04:51 PM
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wowsers that was truly magnifico i cant wait for you to post more on this story! It was totally awsome! I absolutely loved it! Thank you for posting! ^_^
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| kevinalmighty |
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very good story keeps your mind focused on what is going on thruout thanks much
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| yowsabowsa |
Posted: Oct 8 2007, 01:01 PM
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Wonderful story. Thank you very much!!!
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| gordonguy24 |
Posted: Oct 18 2007, 05:29 AM
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thaks
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| Skeezix |
Posted: Oct 19 2007, 04:02 AM
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Excellent story and terrific plot!!! Very well written. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your work!
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| Sins33 |
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Excellent story ...........loved it ..............you get a great big 10 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hugs Mary :wub:
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| buddha1701d |
Posted: Oct 30 2007, 03:07 AM
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I would have to say this has earned a TEN from me as well!
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| BlakJak1032 |
Posted: Oct 30 2007, 02:46 PM
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Very nice story, Thank you for posting!!!
You get a 10 from me |
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