Ive been working on this for the last 3 days or so. I usualy just color other peoples outlines, but I decided I needed to attempt to do my own complete work. Its my first try EVER at making art like this, so be easy on me, plus it isnt complete. I still have to so some more highlights and lowlights, along with a background. ^_^ Tell me what you honestly think of it so far, and give me any helpful comments you can to help me improve future works. :beer:

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:w00t: great job
especially since you said you've not done anything in many years
hope to see more from you
u get a 10 from me :w00t:

Thanks, this is my first original piece EVER. Ive done alot of other stuff in photoshop, but never anything pornographic or yiff in nature. Ive added some more detail to it. Im not cut out for this kind of thing I guess. I start off well, but then after several hours I get bored and begin to rush, making it end up looking... rushed. Im no good with hair, it looks dirty and knotted like she has never bathed (which some may like :lol: ) Mostly because I rushed it and didnt take the time to do strands and highlights.

I guess Im about done with this one, so Ill start thinking about a new one to start. Tell me what you guys and gals think ;)

This post has been edited by InTheHeat05 on Sep 5 2007, 04:10 AM

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Very nice. For a first try ever, I'd say that's pretty damn good. Your experience with image coloring is definitely shining through. I see what you mean about the hair, but it's really not bad. Since it's not the focus, I didn't notice it anyway until I examined it. Needless to say, it's much better in the second pic with the extra work from shadows and lighting, just because it gives everything a more natural look.

Either way, it's artwork of a canid, I like it out of principle. ^_^

great stuff :wub:

Here is what I have finished so far on my next one. Ive only layed in the base colors, so I still have textures to add, and highlights/lowlights to add. What do you think?

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A little further along now. Still more to go.


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looks good so far -- can't wait to see more of it done
:rock:

It's a decent start, I'll give you that much. I can't kiss butt and drool over it and say it's fantastic though. 4 things that stand out to me are...1. his chest muscles are more boob like than chesty...2. his stomach needs a little definition just so it doesn't look totally flat (which you might be doing through shading?) 3. the hand is a bit too small and 4. his cock seems a bit out of place. Again these are fairly minor things and for starting off these are worthwhile drawings. At least you have some grasp for anatomy, could use a little improvement, but no artist is really perfect.

You are entitled to your opinion, but I find your comments a bit picky. 1) His chest muscles look like large well sculpted muscles to me... might could use a little work, but this picture wont be super detailed. 2) Again, this picture isnt going to be much more detailed than what it is. Adding more detail to his stomach would mean i would have to add more detail everywhere, and Im not doing that. 3) His hand MIGHT be 5%-10% too small, but I didnt notice until you said anything. 4) Would you rather his cock be on his stomach? It looks fine to me. Might be tilted or twisted a few degrees, but things dont always sit nice and neat in nature. He just came around the corner, so maybe his leg caught it and pulled it to the side a little.

Like I said, your entitled to your opinion, and thanks for chiming in, but for my second work ever, Im not sweating your negative remarks too much.

cool pics

cpl4k9

It's not negative remarks, it's constructive criticism, that thing artists do to help other artist's improve their skill! A negative remark would be me saying OH WOW DUDE THAT SUCKS WHY DO YOU EVEN BOTHER LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!1!!!11pne!1

:P

The chest isn't as boob like as I thought after a second glance, that there is my bad. The details stuff, well that's you're preference. And the cock, the reason why I said it was off was because it was too close into this thigh, at the angle he's standing it would be a little further to his left. But I think it's also because of the line where the sheath begins, is going passed where the line where thigh ends, so it just looked off to me. *throws his arms up in the air* I was just trying to help because as I stated in my original comment "It's a decent start" and "at least you have some grasp for anatomy" meaning it's not like I don't think you lack the ability to at some point be a good furry artist.

It wasn't intended to be negative, but I can't flat out lie to you and say it's a brilliantly designed image either. Being that you have some talent, it would be a shame to just ignore your image and not throw out a few suggestions.

i think you did good, intheheat. keep it up, you can only get better and you may suprise yourself

good work

^_^ G'job!!