poorsean	Posted: Aug 24 2007, 02:49 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 13 Member No.: 254332 Joined: 24-March 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	[FONT=Arial][SIZE=7][COLOR=blue]great story keep up the writing it keeps the story intresting with all the twistes :)

neversaidnever	Posted: Aug 25 2007, 03:37 PM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 110 Member No.: 334773 Joined: 22-August 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Thank you all for the responses glad you are all enjoying it :) I should have the next part up on Tuesday I am off for a weekend of crazy concerts and watching the Smashing pumpkins and my hangover should have faded enough by then to write the next part. Never

traveler1736	Posted: Aug 26 2007, 04:33 PM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 23 Member No.: 432154 Joined: 3-February 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	One of the hottest stories I've read here. Thanks and keep it (us) up.

Wmtale4	Posted: Aug 26 2007, 07:12 PM
Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 964 Member No.: 330939 Joined: 15-August 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	:inlove: Please don't stop... :crying: there's got to be more. Thanks for posting. :rock:

lawtranny	Posted: Aug 27 2007, 10:01 PM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 101 Member No.: 520480 Joined: 10-June 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	A brilliant story and a great read. Thanks for the tale and for sharing with us. I hope we will see more from you very soon. I loved the content, a little bit of everything for the reader. Keep up the good work. ;)

neversaidnever	Posted: Aug 30 2007, 08:03 PM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 110 Member No.: 334773 Joined: 22-August 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Hey law thanks for the compliments on both stories :) and thanks for the kind words from everyone else. The next update will be either at the weekend or in about a week. Depends on when I can find the time to get it finished. Never

jamieee	Posted: Aug 30 2007, 09:41 PM
Beginner Group: Members Posts: 85 Member No.: 537436 Joined: 10-July 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	wow what an awesome story you have started to write, its well-written. i love the twist later where her dad gets in on the action, i thought he was going to be pissed @ her lol. keep writing! =)

JillNa	Posted: Sep 1 2007, 08:14 PM
Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 146 Member No.: 411667 Joined: 5-January 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	OMG, Plz keep the chapters going , this is a great story.

Utahwmn4k9fun	Posted: Sep 2 2007, 03:25 AM
Newbie Group: Members Posts: 21 Member No.: 542806 Joined: 20-July 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	This is such a great story I hope you continue :)

Dogsdad	Posted: Sep 2 2007, 05:02 PM
Full time poster Group: Members Posts: 2808 Member No.: 506566 Joined: 21-May 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Great story!! Hope your partying doesn't interfere with the continuation. Eagerly waiting for more. One of the best stories here.

knotaslut	Posted: Sep 2 2007, 10:58 PM
Addict Group: Banned Posts: 327 Member No.: 477301 Joined: 6-April 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Finds something to do with her hands waiting for the next part of this wonderful story

lunalupo	Posted: Sep 3 2007, 05:24 AM
Supreme Being Group: VIP Members Posts: 4328 Member No.: 547048 Joined: 28-July 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	Really tremendous writing. Your erotic imagination is a real turn on. Hope to see many more from you. You got my ten. Lunalupo

maico	Posted: Sep 3 2007, 06:28 AM
Beginner Group: Members Posts: 59 Member No.: 529337 Joined: 25-June 07 Rate Member: 109876543210	absolutely fanatastic, a deserved 10: can hardly wait for the ensuing chapter. Thanks for posting

Darinieh	Posted: Sep 10 2007, 08:49 AM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 290 Member No.: 323479 Joined: 1-August 06 Rate Member: 109876543210	Very good rearly enjoyed this and now can't wait for more updates, keep up the great work :D

CHENGSTER	Posted: Sep 15 2007, 03:36 AM
Addict Group: Members Posts: 291 Member No.: 201294 Joined: 12-December 05 Rate Member: 109876543210	wow !! hot hot hot !! thanks for sharing.