(Alright….I got the idea for this from another story I read on here, the main difference was it was a dragon, not a Pegasus. My story will have a lot of similarities to the other story, as the author of that story was unable to finish it. With this story I am targeting the people who read that story and want an end…I do not wish to copy the other story, nor do I wish to out do the wonderful writing in that story. My only intention is to fill the void left by the story described above. I hope you all like it.)

He grazed in the meadow that he always did, every day and every evening. He had never seen anyone else in the meadow except for the occasional rabbit or other rodent. The lush green grass was up to his chest and rubbed against his belly as he walked. The sun shone brightly down on his wet, black coat, he had flown through a cloud on his way to the meadow, wanting to get clean. As he grazed he suddenly heard an earsplitting howl and a scream that sounded human come from the forest on the other end of the meadow. Galloping in that direction, he spread his wings and soaring into the sky, looking down through the trees, trying to find the source of distress. He spotted a pack of wolves all circled around a young human female. Normally he wouldn’t have saved a human as most of them had put a price on his head, whether dead or alive, but this female had a different smell to her….she didn’t seem malicious, in fact, she seemed like she had been taking a walk through the forest to enjoy the scenery, not to hunt or destroy as she had nothing with her. Reluctantly, he swooped down through the trees, whinnying loudly and coming down with a loud thud between the girl and the wolves, all of which immediately scattered, terrified by the sheer power he presented. He turned to the girl, looked at her for a moment, watching her, waiting for a reaction.

She gazed up at him, not sure if she should be terrified or amazed; her expression of terror from the wolves faded, and was replaced by a blank stare. She spoke up slowly and unclearly, “Wha-….where?...are you…..are you a Pegasus?” He smiled, and replied, “Yes…I am. I’m the last, no thanks to your kind.” His expression turned more serious and less kind as he reminded myself of the way his kind had been treated by humans. She looked up at him, a look of terror flitting across her face, she said in a soft voice, “I didn’t even know you existed…” he snorted angrily and stomped a hoof, “Ignorant girl…that is because I have been the last of my kind for more human generations than you have ever seen or ever will see. We were hunted down, all of us, and killed off because our coats and feathers hold value in your society, I will not go down as the last of my kind by the weapon of a human, and that brings me to my next point.” He looked down at her, his expression relaxing a bit before calmly saying, “The way I saw it, you had two options moments ago, the first was to die miserably slow at the paws of the wolves, the second was to give up your life in the human world and join me in the skies. I cannot let you go back to the humans alive, as somehow my presence would be discovered and I will be eliminated from this world.” She looked up at him, confusion and horror mixing in her expression, “You can’t do that! I can’t just leave my life behind and fly around with a creature like you!” He snorted angrily and spread his wings, causing a gust of wind to knock her down, silencing her. Now he knew just why he hated her kind so much, they were stupid, “Silence!” He brought his wings back down to his sides and approached her slowly, she attempted to back away but he quickly put a large hoof down on her torso, not hurting her but not letting her move either. He looked down at her and said, “You now have two more choices. Die as you would have before, or join me.” Tears began to flow from her eyes, she looked up at him and said, “I had a life…I was going to be successful…but it looks like that is gone now. I don’t want to die, so that leaves me with only one choice….” She wiped away the tears from her eyes and said softly, “Let me up….I’ll join you.”

This is my first story on here, though I have had some experience in writing before...tell me what you think, and don't think that it's over...it's only just begun.

You can't guess how happy I'm to see that someone is going to write a story with a pegasus! I love unicorns and dragons the most of the fantasy creatures, but pegasus are very alike unicorns if you remove their horn and adds wings, aren't they?
And the beginning is great! Just keep writing like this, and you will ceate a wonderfull story! A 10 from me

Excellent start, would love to see more and I'm not even going to offer my opinion as to what I would like to see happen here. Thank you for your literary contrabution and I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

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He smiled and removed his hoof from her and gently picked her up by her clothing. He lifted her chin with his muzzle and looked into her eyes and said, “Survival of the fittest” before turning and walking back towards the meadow. He said loudly so she could hear him, “If you try to escape I will not hesitate to kill you, and do not try hiding because I can fly, and that would be foolish.” She followed reluctantly behind him and once they broke out into the meadow he turned to her and said, “Now, let us start over.” He bowed before her and lifted himself back up, saying, “My name is Arroyo…and you are?” She looked at me, confusion filling her eyes, “I’m Jennifer….” he smiled and said softly, “Nice to meet you Jennifer.” He turned and walked slowly out towards the field, grazing slowly as he went. She followed him, looking around, presumably contemplating what had just happened to her. She lifted her head, he noted, and she asked, “I have always heard about Pegasus’s…I always thought of them as gentle, kind, and caring creatures…so far you haven’t come across as that…why?” He snorted…perhaps he should just kill her, she was almost too ignorant to bare, “Because your kind has always admired us for our beauty and therefore didn’t want to put a bad label on such a beautiful creature. And to be honest, we’re not as I acted before. I act this way because I am the last, and do not want to die. I merely wish to survive by whatever means possible.” She looked down, he could tell she felt stupid, and she deserved to feel that way for acting as such. She began to cry and she sat down, burying her head in her arms with her legs pulled up to her chest. He sighed….this was ridiculous. He walked over to her and said, “I will make you a deal. If I can trust you, then I will allow you to leave.” She looked up at him with her tearstained face and said, “What? Just like that? What will it take? I don’t understand.” He turned and lowered his shoulder, saying, “Enough. You will figure it out in due time. For now it is time for us to return home, now climb on.” She sighed and climbed onto his back and had barely grasped onto his mane before he took off into a gallop and spread his wings, soaring into the sky. He headed towards the mountains, towards his home. He glanced back at her and saw joy in her face, and realized she had probably never flown before. He did not want her to hate him; in fact, he wanted to be her friend at the least, so he decided to give her a bit of a ride. He said, “Hold on tight,” before turning upward and soaring towards the sun. He went straight up then with a huge wave of his wings they soared upside down, G-force keeping her pinned to his back. He flew back around, right side up again and looked back at her. Her eyes were wide with adrenaline and she stared straight ahead before breaking out into a laugh, “That was AMAZING!....” He smiled and then he slowed and landed on a mountain ledge at the entrance of a cave, “I’m glad you enjoyed that.” She climbed down from his back and looked at the cave, “Is this the place?” He turned and started into the cave, “Yep” He called back. He walked in with her close behind him and turned to his right and into an opening where a fire was lit in the corner, illuminating the cavern. He went to the corner next to the fire and lay down; she followed and sat on the other side of the fire from him. She leaned against the rocky wall and sighed gently observing her new home. He watched her closely, and then settled down and lowered his head to the floor, closing his eyes. “I need to go to the bathroom.” He lifted my head and opened my eyes, “You need to go where?” He had never heard of such a room and watched her. “Oh…uhh….I need to relieve myself,” she said blushing slightly. He could sense her embarrassment and asked, “Why are you blushing? And why are you asking to relieve yourself?” She looked at me, dumbfounded, not sure how to reply to this, “I….uhh….isn’t there somewhere I should go?” He looked at her, remembering just how prude the humans were. He sighed and said, “You humans amaze me. Every creature must relieve themselves, it’s been that way since the beginning of time and yet your lot feels as though this is a private, dirty thing that shouldn’t be spoken of.” He lowered his head back down and closed his eyes before saying, “Find a place to relieve yourself, there isn’t anywhere for you to go unless you can climb down a cliff.” She stood up angrily and walked out of the cave to the edge of the cliff. She held her arms, covering her chest looking around, extremely embarrassed by what she was about to do. She looked back to make sure Arroyo wasn’t watching from the cave and she went over to the edge of the cliff and unzipped her pants. She sat on the edge of the cliff and urinated off the side, blushing the entire time. Once finished she stood up, fastened her pants and walked back into the cave, sitting down by the fire, not looking at him. “Next time I’ll show you the spring that comes from the mountain and flows down the mountainside….you will feel more comfortable going there.” He kept his head down and his eyes closed, but he knew she was angry. “WHY COULDN’T YOU SHOW ME THAT A MINUTE AGO?!?! ARE YOU JUST SO CRUEL THAT YOU WANT TO WATCH ME SUFFER?! DO YOU REALIZE HOW MUCH I’M GOING THROUGH?!” Arroyo’s eyes flicked open, he glared over at her and said, “You and your mortal problems. Do you know what it is like to be hunted your entire life? No. You don’t. Do you know what it is like to watch helplessly as your mate and your foal are slaughtered before you? No, you don’t. What you’re going through is nothing compared to what would have happened had I let those wolves eat you. You should be thanking me, and so far all I’ve gotten is mindless ignorance. There is a fine line between life and death, and that line was almost broken today, but I pulled you back and saved you. Life and Death are the only things that matter in this world, they govern you, they govern me, and they govern every living thing that exists. You should be dead right now; don’t you think this is better than being dead?” He glared at her, fear shining in her eyes. She saw the hurt in his eyes, knowing she had insulted him, she lowered her head and said softly, “I’m sorry…I’m just….” Arroyo snorted and demanded sharply, “You’re what?” She looked up, tears flowing from her eyes again, “Scared.” She said softly. Arroyo sighed…he looked up at the ceiling of the cave for a moment, then looked over at her again and said, “Have I harmed you yet?” She looked up at him and said, “….N-no….but…” He cut her off and said, “Exactly. I do not intend to hurt you; the only way that will happen is if you bring it upon yourself by trying to escape. We have gone over that already.” He paused for a moment, and then finished, “To answer your question, I didn’t show you the stream because you needed to rid yourself of this foolish embarrassment of your body.” She sighed and slumped down on the ground, silent for a very long time. Arroyo rested his head back down and closed his eyes, but not attempting to sleep, knowing she would soon be asking another question. “How can I gain your trust?” She asked. Arroyo didn’t open his eyes or lift his head, he just responded, “Rid yourself of your human morals and be open to me. Do not lie, do not be embarrassed by natural functions or any other aspect of your body, and most importantly, trust me. If you can do that and you still wish to leave, then you may.” She stayed silent for a while, contemplating what he had said….her human morals? What was that supposed to mean? What exactly did he want, for her to just pee right in front of him? She watched him, wondering what all was going through his head. She sighed and laid herself down, giving up on the questions for the night. She would find more out tomorrow. She closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep.

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The next morning Jennifer awoke slowly, trying to figure out why she was so stiff and sore…then she noticed that her sheets were gone…she must have kicked them off during the night. She reached over to her alarm clock and….wait a minute, she thought…where’s my alarm clock? She opened her eyes and groaned sadly as she realized it hadn’t all just been a dream. She sat up, rubbing her eyes and looking around the cave…the fire had died down, but had not gone out….There he was, the massive black beast that had taken her captive. She looked at him, noticing how muscular he was…her eyes traced along his neck down to his forelegs and along his beautiful black wings. She watched his chest rise and fall for a few moments before continuing to look at his body, her eyes traced along his hind legs and the side of his rump before for lowering and coming to a stop at his sheath. She gazed at it, not sure why it intrigued her, she noted how much larger it was than a normal horses and how the two orbs behind it were as large as her fists. She turned away quickly, ashamed of herself at how she was looking at him like that, after all, he had taken her captive. She stood up and walked out to the edge of the cliff; she sat on the edge and looked towards the east, at the rising sun, trying to put what she had just seen in the back of her mind. She gazed for a long time, she lost herself in her thoughts and memories of her old home…wondering if she’d ever see it again. She was so wrapped up in thoughts she didn’t hear Arroyo come up behind her. He sat down next to her and looked out at the sun as she did and said softly, “Like the view?” She woke up from her trance, startled almost and said, “Wha-…? oh….yeah.” She blushed slightly not sure if he was talking about the sun or his crotch, but then watched as he gazed towards the sun and relaxed, realizing what he meant. She began to feel bad about what she had said last night, she said softly, “I’m…I’m sorry about yelling last night…I shouldn’t have…” she wanted to say something comforting to him about losing his family but she couldn’t quite find the words for it so she fell silent. He looked over at her, smiling and he said, “Apology accepted…I understand.” They both fell silent for a while then finally she broke the silence by saying, “Is there anything around here that I can eat? I’m starving.” He looked over at her, he said softly, “Get on…I’ll take you to find something.” She climbed onto his back and he lifted himself off the ground. He jumped off the cliff and spread his wings, gliding into the air. They soared over a field, over a river, and through a valley before coming to a stop at the far side of an old abandoned farm. He let her off and said, “Through there is a garden that grows all sorts of vegetables. The owners of that house died a long time ago, but their garden remained. I come here every now and then when I want something a little different to eat.” Jennifer smiled then said, “Thank you.” before walking out to the garden…she found an old basket on the ground and picked it up, she began filling it with a few vegetables and some fruit. Strawberries, apples, grapes, carrots, lettuce, and even some corn all filled her basket and she turned and walked back to Arroyo, she offered him a carrot with a smile on her face. He smiled and ate the carrot saying, “Thank you.” He lowered himself down and let her climb on; he turned and galloped through the trees. He found a clearing and opened his wings, soaring into the air. Once they had returned to the cave he let her off and they both walked back into the cavern with the fire. She sat down next to it with her basket and she picked through them, finding an apple which she began eating. Arroyo lay down next to the fire, laying his head down and closing his eyes. Carting around a human on his back took a lot out of him, so he rested a while as she ate. After a while he asked, “Are you thirsty?” She looked up at him and said, “Not really….but if it means water, I could use a bath.” He stood up and said, “Follow me.” She stood up and followed as he led her down another cave. She saw light coming from the other side and when they reached it, she realized it was another opening into the cave system. To her left was a large pool of water that flowed to the edge of the mountain and fell as a waterfall. Arroyo walked over to the waters edge, taking a long drink of the water. Jennifer looked at him, watching him drink from the water. She approached the water and looked all the way to the bottom, it was so clear. She reached down to touch it, and as she submerged her hand, she realized it really was spring water, it was freezing! She sighed, knowing this was probably the only place she would get clean from now on. She looked over at Arroyo, she wanted to take a bath but she didn’t want him around. She had sort of hoped he’d take the hint when she said she wanted to bathe. Then something he had said filled her mind and she realized just what he meant by human morals. He wasn’t going to leave as she took her bath, he was going to sit there and watch her the whole time. The only way she was going to be able to do this was if she trusted him, and frankly, she just didn’t trust him enough to do this. She said nervously, “Um….could I have a little privacy? I want to take a bath.” Arroyo lifted his head up, looking at her; he sighed and said, “What is the problem with you humans? Why do you insist on hiding your beautiful body from everyone? It just doesn’t make any sense to me, I’m naked, all the animals you keep as pets are naked, none of us are ashamed by it so why are you?” He turned and started back towards the cave, he said as he left, “At this rate I don’t think you’ll ever gain my trust, nor will you ever trust me.” He walked back to the cavern with the fire and left her at the spring to take her bath. Jennifer watched as he spoke then left, she was stunned, and a little bit hurt on the inside…it was almost as if he wanted to see her naked. Or maybe…maybe he had a point. She sighed and once she was sure he was gone she stripped of her clothing and lowered herself into the cool water, shivering slightly as it reached her breasts, causing them to harden slightly. She sighed as she got used to the water, and she began rubbing gently trying to get the dirt off of herself. Once she was satisfied, she leaned up against the side of the mountain, relaxing in the water. She got out a little while later and realized that if she put her clothes back on they would get soaked and she’d be miserable. Reluctantly she sat on a boulder and waited for her skin to dry so she could put her clothes back on. She kept watching nervously, hoping Arroyo wouldn’t come looking for her. When he did and she still had yet to put her clothes on, she blushed heavily and tried desperately to cover her breasts and pull her legs up to her chest, hiding her genitals. Arroyo said calmly, as if all were normal, “I was just checking on you….I figured you’d be done by now….why haven’t you put your clothes back on?” She looked over at him and said meekly, “Because I don’t want to get them wet….it’s the only set I have….” Arroyo sighed and said, “You know they’ll wear out eventually….why wear them at all? You need to get over this, you’re being ridiculous.” He turned and walked back to the cavern with the fire. He was mad now, why was she being so stubborn? Was it so hard for her to just go without her clothes? Jennifer felt tears run down her cheeks as he called her ridiculous. She knew she was by his standards, but he was a bit irrational by hers. She began to think of her old home, she wanted to see it again, and she knew he wouldn’t let her leave if she didn’t give up her clothes. It seemed dumb to her, but she wasn’t the one to decide. She mustered up all the strength she had and she walked over to her clothes and picked them up. She didn’t put them on, but she turned and walked back to the cavern where Arroyo was. She held her clothes over her breasts, still heavily embarrassed by the whole thing…but she knew this was what he wanted. She walked over to the fire and tossed in her clothes, then turned and sat down against the wall where she pulled her knees up to her chest and hid her breasts. She wrapped her arms around her ankles, trying to hide his view of her genitals, as she watched as her clothes burned. Arroyo smiled as she did this and he said, “Good…very good. At this rate you’ll be back home in no time.” He watched her for a while; he could tell she was cold, as she wasn’t very close to the fire. He spoke softly, encouragingly, “Jennifer, come sit next to me….Between me and the fire you should be warm.” She looked up at him; she couldn’t believe what he was asking of her. She stuttered, trying to find a response. “I….no….no I can’t….it’s bad enough that I don’t have any clothes…” Arroyo snorted, he stood up and walked over to her, glaring down at her, he said loudly, “What more have you to fear of me? You’ve come this far, what difference does it make if you’re sitting against the wall or up against me?!” He turned and stormed out of the cave to the main entrance and he galloped off, soaring into the air. He needed some time to cool off.

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When he returned later that night he found Jennifer asleep on the ground, next to the fire with tearstains down her cheeks. He nuzzled her gently to wake her, she jerked awake, but then relaxed as she saw that he wasn’t mad anymore. She sighed and looked down, not sure what to say. He said softly, “I’m sorry for yelling at you…I just don’t understand why it is so difficult for you to expose yourself. You’re much more beautiful than any human female I’ve ever seen, and if you were a mare I’m sure you’d be proud of your body, instead of ashamed like you are now.” Jennifer looked up at him, she said softly, “You’re right….I’m acting foolishly…I’m sorry…I’d like to lay next to you tonight…I was rather cold while you were gone, even with the fire…” Arroyo smiled and laid down next to the fire, nickering to her. She stood up, still hiding her breasts with her arms, she sat down next to him and leaned against his shoulder, resting her head on his neck. He smiled and moved his wing out from under her to wrap it around her, keeping her warm. The next morning Jennifer was the first to wake up again and she found herself examining his body again, she just couldn’t help herself. When her gaze fell upon his genitals she looked upon them lustfully as she realized she hadn’t had any sexual relief in days. She continued looking at his genitals as she began to touch her own. She massaged her breasts, one at a time while her other hand gently stroked her clit. Her juices began wetting her hole and she slid a finger in, groaning slightly. She looked over at Arroyo, knowing her groan had awoken him. He looked at her, and yawned groggily before lowering his head back down, he could smell her activities and understood, expecting her to continue. When she didn’t, he turned to look at her, he could see the embarrassment in her eyes, and he sighed before saying, “Why did you stop?” Jennifer looked at him, terrified almost, she knew that if she told him why she stopped he’d just get mad at her for being prude, so she said as casually as possible, “I….I dunno….I got bored.” Arroyo snorted and hissed, “You lie. I told you not to lie. I’ll ask you again, why did you stop?” He glared at her and tears began falling from her eyes as she said quietly, “Because I’m embarrassed….I don’t want you watching.” Arroyo looked at her, he said, “Why are you doing this to yourself? If you need relief, then go ahead, what do you think is going to happen if I find out? What are you afraid of?” He shook his head and turned to look at the fire. He stood up and began walking towards the spring, he said quietly, “You’ll never gain my trust like this, you still don’t trust me….” Jennifer was crying harder now, she called after him, “Yes I do! I want to earn your trust….please Arroyo…” Tears were streaming from her eyes; Arroyo turned to her, he said sharply, “Oh you trust me, do you? Prove it then, mate with me.” Jennifer looked at him, utterly stunned. Her tears stopped, and she just stared at him, the great black winged horse in front of her had just asked to have sex with her. She looked at him, utterly disgusted and she said, “You….I…..NO!” Arroyo snorted, he turned away and walked to the spring. He knew she wouldn’t mate with him, and he hadn’t gotten his hopes up. Jennifer watched him leave, feeling stupid, confused, and slightly horny. She wanted to finish what she had started earlier but she just didn’t have the heart to do it anymore. The look in his eyes when she said no…it killed her inside. She knew she had disappointed him, and no matter how much she disliked him, there was a part of her that thought he was the most amazing creature in the world. She went out to the spring, and when she saw him lying by the waters edge looking at his reflection she wanted to cry again. She turned and walked back into the cavern, knowing he hadn’t seen her… she didn’t want to disturb him. She felt terrible for what she had said to him. Later that evening Arroyo returned to the cavern where Jennifer had been all day thinking and eating the occasional fruit or vegetable. He lay down by the fire, looked away from Jennifer and didn’t say a word. He was through with trying to get her to trust him; he was through trying to trust her. Every time he thought he had gotten to her, she turned around and did something to ruin it. If this was how she wanted to live the rest of her life then so be it, he’d go back to his normal life. Jennifer looked over at him and sighed gently, knowing he was mad at her. She got up and went out to the spring to take a bath and go to the bathroom. She wanted to masturbate; she had so much tension built up she felt like she would burst….but she just couldn’t bring herself to do it. She was miserable and finally she decided that there was only one way to fix everything. She got out of the water and went over to the cavern, she called inside saying, “Arroyo, could you come out her for a second?”

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