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| lonesomwolf |
Posted: Aug 6 2007, 12:51 PM
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Oh i'm liking this. please continue, i can't wait for the next bite.
you tease lonesomwolf |
| esp_guitarist |
Posted: Aug 6 2007, 04:43 PM
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Here's the next part...it'll probably be a surprise for some of you, and some of you might have expected it. I have the part after this written already but I'm gonna leave it at this for suspence :devil2: Sorry, can't help myself
Arroyo stood up slowly, he stretched his wings and his legs before making his way out to the spring, he got outside and he said roughly, “What do you want?” She walked over to him and said softly, “Look…I’m really sorry about earlier…I didn’t mean to be so….rude…it’s just, you caught me off guard and I don’t know…It just scared me.” He looked her over, and said, “Apology accepted.” Then he turned and walked back toward the cavern. Jennifer said abruptly, “Wait…” She ran over to him and hugged him around the neck saying, “I’m ready…if this is what it takes then I’ll do it…I’ll mate with you.” Arroyo snorted and backed away, he broke loose from her hug and said, “The only reason you’re doing this now is because you want to go home. That’s not trust, that’s deceit.” Now hurt more than ever he turned and walked back into the cave. He hated humans; manipulation was all they were good for. She was trying to manipulate him to let her go home, and with that he knew she thought he was inferior, which made him trust her less. She was a liar and hated him, and if she had the chance she’d probably tell everyone she knew about his location and that’d be the end of him. Jennifer watched as he walked back into the cave, tears welled in her eyes and she slowly turned, she walked over to the cold water, where she lowered herself in, and pushed herself up under a rock, trying to drown herself. Arroyo had just settled back down when he no longer heard any noise coming from the spring…he listened, trying to hear something, anything, and when he heard nothing he panicked and ran back out to the spring….he saw bubbled coming from the water and he jumped in….he dragged her out of the water and put her on the ground where she coughed violently and shivered from the cold before blacking out. Arroyo watched helplessly, not sure what to do. He finally decided to pick her up with his wing and lift her onto his back where he carried her back into the cavern and laid her next to the fire. He laid down next to her and put his wing around her, holding her against him, keeping her warm. When she awoke the next morning, Arroyo was still holding her close; he had stayed up all night, waiting for her to wake up. She looked up at him then looked down, ashamed of herself. All she could say was, “I’m sorry….” Arroyo nuzzled her gently and said, “No…I’m the one who should be sorry…I haven’t been treating you well, and I’m sorry for that, I should be making your stay here a happy one, and I haven’t done that. I can tell my actions have only made you trust me less which is not getting us anywhere...” He sighed and looked down at her and said softly, “I’m just glad you’re okay…” Jennifer looked up at him, and said softly, “Why do you care so much about me? If you hate humans, then why are you doing this? Why not just kill me?” Arroyo looked away and said in a low voice, “Because I’ve been alone for a very long time….and I was hoping that I could gain your trust enough to convince you to stay here. But it’s apparent that isn’t going to happen.” He sighed and looked away, he paused for a long time before saying, “If you wish to return to your home I will take you, and I will turn myself in along with you. I do not wish to live any longer, I’ve lived long enough, and being the last of my kind seems a bit pointless now.” He got up and walked a few steps away before turning and saying, “When shall we leave?” This post has been edited by esp_guitarist on Aug 6 2007, 04:48 PM |
| Damo |
Posted: Aug 6 2007, 11:31 PM
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aww I feel sorry for him being so alone all he wants is someone that he trust to stay with him I no I would :wub: I cant wait for the next part :D you are such a tease :lol:
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| esp_guitarist |
Posted: Aug 6 2007, 11:46 PM
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Here's the next part, but it's definately not the end.
Her first thought was to leave right away…but then she saw the hurt in his eyes, the glow that had once illuminated his fiery spirit had gone away and he seemed empty. Jennifer stood up, she walked over to him and hugged him dearly, “Make love to me Arroyo.” Arroyo looked down at her with surprise and he said, “No….you do not wish to, I can see it.” Jennifer said softly, “You were right all along…there is no reason for me to be ashamed of myself…I want to make love to you, it’s the least I can do after you saved my life….twice.” A weak grin flitted across her face. Arroyo looked into her eyes, he still didn’t believe her, and that was when she decided to take matters into her own hands…literally. She rubbed along his side and moved towards his rear. He turned away and nipped her gently, not sure what to say. She moved back to his rear and moved her hand along his thigh and towards his belly. She rubbed his belly gently and then her hand moved to his inner thigh and then upward, she rubbed his sheath gently, coaxing him to drop his penis. She rubbed his balls gently and giggled slightly as he stomped his foot. Arroyo could tell she was serious now, and he stood there enjoying the feeling of her touch. Never had he felt anything like this. She continued to massage his package until his penis was hanging all the way out; she stood up and kissed his muzzle. Arroyo smiled and said, “So this is your decision then?” She nodded and walked out towards the spring, waiting for him to follow. Arroyo followed right behind her, licking at her legs and genitals as he went, causing her to get a bit weak legged and stumble a few times. She leaned back on a rock and smiled to him, she said softly, “I’m ready.” Arroyo smiled and approached her, licking her crotch, causing her to groan and squirm around on the rock slightly. He smirked, enjoying her reaction, and then he lowered his head and continued licking her. He pushed his tongue into her, causing her moan loudly and causing him to become hard. He continued licking her, wanting to pleasure her like this and get her relaxed before moving on to the real thing. Jennifer moaned loudly as his tongue probed her insides, this was far better than any human tongue she had ever experienced as it was much larger and unbelievably strong. She thrusted her hips up to his mouth, moaning loudly, she wanted more of him in her. She felt her orgasm building deep within her and Arroyo much have sensed this because he began moving his tongue quicker in and out of her before pulling out and using his tongue to lick from her anus all the way up over her clit. Jennifer let out a squeal of pleasure before she burst into orgasm, moaning loudly and thrusting into his muzzle. As she stopped convulsing and relaxed Arroyo stepped forward and rested his forelegs on either side of the rock and he pushed himself forward. He wrapped his wings around both of them, enclosing them together, he smiled down at her. She reached down and grasped his shaft, rubbing it gently, causing him to thrust slightly into her hands. He licked her face and moved down her neck to her breasts, each of which he nipped at and then licked gently. He groaned slightly as she continued to rub his shaft, and he pulled away slightly signaling that he wanted to enter her. She inhaled, enjoying the musky smell of him surrounding her, and the smell of both their arousal, she looked admiringly at his giant penis which was now dripping with pre-cum. She guided him down to her now saliva coated pussy and waited. He slowly pushed forward, inching in his massive shaft deeper into her. She groaned loudly out of both pain and pleasure as she had never had anything this massive inside of her before. As he kept pushing in his length, she gritted her teeth and held back tears of pain…he was enormous. As he pushed in and his shaft became thicker it began pushing on her G-spot and all pain was over come by intense pleasure, she groaned out loud and wrapped her arms around his neck. He took this as encouragement to keep going so with one giant push he pushed all the way in, through her cervix. She yelled out in pain, but was again over come by pleasure as he pulled halfway out, stimulating every nerve she had. Arroyo groaned, he had never felt anything this wonderful. He began thrusting slowly, his breathing intensified and he began to sweat. Jennifer groaned out load with every push he made and she too began to sweat. Arroyo lifted his wings from around them, allowing them both to cool down a bit, but with that he began using his wings to push his body back and forth with more force, burying himself into her every time. Jennifer felt an orgasm rip through her all of a sudden, and her body convulsed like mad, she grabbed onto Arroyos mane and cried out with pleasure as her muscles contracted around the huge shaft inside of her. Arroyo groaned loudly as she squeezed his penis inside of her, he could hardly thrust in and out anymore it was such a tight fit. He felt her insides lubricating him with her orgasm and he began to thrust again, faster still, feeling his own orgasm building up. Jennifer was swept into another orgasm, this one more mind-blowing than the last and her body convulsed and thrust into Arroyo’s, wanting more of him inside. Right as she came back down she heard Arroyo let out a loud whinny and she felt hot liquid gush into her womb, sending her into another orgasm, causing her to scream out loud with pleasure. Arroyo whinnied as his cum gushed through his shaft and pulsed into her; he groaned and continued thrusting lightly through his whole orgasm. He finally came to rest on her and he felt his member begin to shrink back into his sheath. He felt it pop out with an audible, “slurp” as his cum gushed from her filled womb. Jennifer moaned as she felt him leave her, leaving her feeling empty. She looked up into his eyes as he looked down into hers and they kissed. She opened her mouth wide, as did Arroyo, allowing their tongues to collide and explore each other. Finally Arroyo moved away from the rock and let her up; she stumbled slightly so he helped her over to the spring where she cleaned herself up. He nuzzled her gently and said, “I love you Jennifer.” She turned to him and said softly, “I love you too Arroyo.” They went back to the cavern and laid down by the fire, his wing around her and her head on his shoulder, they fell asleep. |
| Damo |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 12:02 AM
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That was absolutly fantasic I love the way you biult it up like this :wub: I hope Jennifer stays with Arroyo now :inlove: Love to read the next part :D
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| Litldolphn |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 01:43 AM
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wow that was amazing writing 10 from me :)
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| littlepet |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 02:39 AM
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That was a very wonderful story.you told. True love can be stop
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| NearWater |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 03:46 AM
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Very good. I admire your writing style. I have never had the ability to write such story... at least to completion. You deserve this 10. That is, if I could vote. Alas, know that I enjoyed it. Thanks.
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| ~Kamiboorei~ |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 04:27 AM
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This story is getting better and better!!! You have an amazing talent for this ^_^ Keep going !!!
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| esp_guitarist |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 05:22 AM
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Here it is, the next part! Depending on how tired I am, I may post the next part later tonight....err...this morning. It's already 12:22 AM
Jennifer awoke slowly the next morning; she could tell it was close to noon by the amount of light shining in from the entrance. She yawned before looking up at Arroyo; she smiled warmly and rested her head back on his shoulder as he slept. When he awoke a little while later he smiled at her briefly before laying his head back down, wanting to go back to sleep. Jennifer giggled slightly and ran her fingers through his mane; she kissed him on the cheek then stood up to stretch her legs. Arroyo watched her, enjoying the fact that she was no longer covering herself and instead walking easily around in front of him. He knew she trusted him now, and he felt that he trusted her as well…he sighed knowing that now she may wish to return home. Jennifer had gone over to her basket to pick through the remnants of her food. Once she had finished eating she walked back over to Arroyo and lay down next to him. He said softly, “You have done everything I asked of you, and now I feel as though I can trust you…if you wish to return home I shall take you.” He looked in her eyes, hoping she’d pick whatever made her happiest. Jennifer didn’t know what to say…a part of her wanted to see her friends and family again, but part of her wanted to stay here with her new lover. She looked down for a moment, thinking, and she said softly, “I….I don’t know what I want to do…last night, I only wanted to be with you, to hold you, to love you forever…but now that I think about it, I also want to see my family again, I’m sure they all think I’m dead, and I hate for them to suffer.” She sighed and continued to look at the ground…she wasn’t sure what she wanted…in a perfect world she would have asked Arroyo to return home with her so she could be with everyone all at once….but she knew he wouldn’t agree to it. She looked up at him and said softly, “I don’t want to decide right now….can we do something else?” Arroyo smiled and said, “That’s fine….whatever you decide should be what will make you happiest, take as long as you like.” She smiled and kissed his cheek gently, “Thank you Arroyo.” She rested her head on his side and the two laid there for a while, just enjoying each other’s company. Her gaze began to wander again and just as always it landed on his sheath, except this time she didn’t turn away or try to push away her thoughts, instead she reached over and touched it gently. Arroyo’s ears perked up and he lifted his head, he nipped her shoulder gently before saying softly, “This is quite a change…” She smiled at him then turned her attention back to his sheath, knowing he enjoyed her touch. She scooted a little closer and she leaned against his belly, he laid his head down and closed his eyes, enjoying the wonderful feeling of her touch. Jennifer massaged his groin gently, rubbing her hands up and down his sheath and along his balls. Arroyo let out a low groan as his penis began slowly exposing itself from his sheath. Jennifer took this as encouragement to continue so she rubbed him gently and gazed in awe as his shaft expanded and became fully erect, though it still touched the ground due to its sheer weight. She took it in her hand and began rubbing up and down its length, watching happily as Arroyo lightly thrusted into her hands. She then got onto her knees and positioned herself in front of his shaft as she began rubbing its engorged head against her clit. She moaned slightly and Arroyo continued to thrust lightly, wanting her to continue. Jennifer rubbed his shaft along her clit slowly at first, then as they both began secreting fluids and they became lubricated she moved at a faster pace, moaning loudly and massaging her breasts with her free hand. Arroyo let out a soft groan, this was much different than anything he had ever experienced in his many years on the Earth…this was something no mare could ever do for him, and despite the many wonderful times he had had with his mate before she died, what Jennifer was doing was quite amazing. Jennifer felt her orgasm building deep in her, but she wanted him to go before she did for fear of not being able to finish him off. She moved his shaft away from her clit for a few moments, still rubbing it with her hands before once again rubbing his massive penis against her clit. Arroyo groaned louder now, knowing he was about to spill his seed. He thrusted lightly a few more times, as much as possible while laying down before letting out a soft whinny as he exploded into an orgasm. He shook slightly as he shot load after load of cum all over Jennifer’s legs and stomach while she continued to rub his now fully flared head against her clit until she too erupted into orgasm, moaning loudly. After what seemed like an eternity to the both of them, they both relaxed and Jennifer lay against his belly, watching curiously as his shaft began retreating into his sheath. She giggled slightly and rubbed his belly affectionately with her hands. She lay against him and wrapped her arms around his neck, kissing him gently. Arroyo smiled and lifted his head to meet hers, returning her kiss with his own. They locked lips and explored each other contently, until Jennifer broke loose, mainly for air. She giggled slightly and looked into his eyes, smiling happily. Arroyo said softly, “Thank you, that was…different, to say the least. I’ve never experience that while lying down, it was nice.” Jennifer said softly, “It was my pleasure” She giggled again and rested her head against his neck. |
| Damo |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 05:31 AM
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aww they are so cute together I hope she stays with him :inlove:
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| lovethymare |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 05:49 AM
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I realy don't do much reaading, but this is an awsome story you had me hooked from the begining. maybe because my biggest fantasy is to become a centuar (half man half stallion) :blush:
A big 10 from me :D , LTM |
| Swedishboy7 |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 08:10 AM
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You're just making it better and better! Keep it on :D
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| esp_guitarist |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 03:42 PM
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It's coming up everyone, I've just got a little bit more to write and it'll be ready....give me....15 minutes.
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| esp_guitarist |
Posted: Aug 7 2007, 03:49 PM
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Here it is! besides the sex scenes, this is probably my favorite part so far :P
After a while she cautiously approached a subject she longed to know about. She asked him casually but quietly, “You said something the other day about your family…I’d like to hear about them if you didn’t mind.” Arroyo sighed slightly and said in a quiet tone, “That was a very long time ago…she was beautiful.” He paused to gather his memories before continuing, “Her name was Cyrene, beautiful buckskin color with a dark flowing mane and tail….beautiful blue eyes…” He chuckled slightly at his next memory, “Her sire didn’t like me much…I was always a bit of a trouble maker as a colt and was always getting in trouble with the lead stallion. It was a big herd, you should have seen it, it was quite amazing…it was also large enough for Cyrene and I to sneak off every now and then to be alone and just talk. We always talked, it seemed like there wasn’t ever a time where we had nothing to talk about. One day her sire caught us together, talking, and he knocked her down before taking her away. As they were leaving I heard him tell her to stay away from me, but she wasn’t listening to him, she was looking back at me with tears in her eyes. I was so mad, but there was nothing I could do….If I argued or fought back he would just hate me more…I had to do something to win her from him.” He sighed and looked down for a moment, remembering that moment was painful to him. Jennifer rubbed his neck gently, comforting him. He smiled slightly to her touch and continued, “There was this stallion, Torn, he had an eye for Cyrene, but he was a brute and he only wanted her to mate with. One day he went after her, and luckily I was nearby. I stepped between him and Cyrene and told him if he wanted her he’d have to kill me. Obviously, we fought, and about halfway through the fight, her sire had come up to comfort her, but he was also watching. After what seemed like forever, I had won and Torn lay there dead, but I was hurt pretty bad and I collapsed. When I woke up, guess who was standing there looking more worried than anyone else?” He smiled and Jennifer said, “Cyrene?” Arroyo smiled and said, “No, but she was a close second. Her sire was standing there, looking like he wanted to cry. When I woke up, he hugged me and thanked me for saving his daughter, and then he said that I had earned his trust and that if Cyrene wished to be my mate then it was fine by him.” Jennifer smiled; she said softly, “Sounds like trust is a big deal to your kind, not just you.” She giggled slightly and Arroyo nipped her gently, saying, “Trust is what governed us, it was what we lived by. You had to trust everyone in the herd to protect you and you had to be trustworthy to protect them….anyway, Cyrene and I became mates and had a foal, Radon….Cyrene and I loved him so much…he was ours. Now…mare Pegasus’s only come into heat once every…15 or 20 human years or so, and naturally, the foals grow just as slowly. We do not die of age, and we do not get old, we are born, then become fully grown and live as such for an eternity. We can be killed though, just like any other living thing. So anyway, Radon grew and our love for him grew. Then the humans came, they captured almost all of the herd, including me, Cyrene, and Radon. They bound us by chains and we couldn’t escape. They came down the line, killing everyone one by one and skinning them.” He shuddered and closed his eyes, it was a horrifying sight, he continued, “They came to Cyrene and Radon….and I watched helplessly as they were slaughtered…everything I had worked for was gone, and I was heartbroken…” tears began to fall from his cheeks, but he continued, “I don’t remember what happened next, but I know that I broke the chains and killed the two men who had slaughtered my family…then I went after the ones who had watched…then I went after any human I could find…blinded by rage…so much blood…I drew more blood than they had, and when there was no one left, I freed the last of my herd, though I didn’t follow them…I came here, and have been here ever since…that was all probably….” He thought for a moment, “four or five hundred years ago…yet I remember it like it was yesterday…” He sighed heavily, his heart hurt and he felt miserable…and yet…he felt a lot better at the same time. He had never told anyone what had happened, and it felt like a big weight was lifted from his shoulders. He sighed gently and nuzzled Jennifer before saying, “I assumed the rest of my herd was hunted down and killed, and I have searched the skies for any traces of anyone left…but I’ve never found anyone. Her sire was one of the ones I freed…I didn’t say a word to him after that, I just left.” Jennifer rubbed his back comfortingly and said softly, “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to bring up such a painful topic…” Arroyo smiled and said, “No…I’m glad you did…I feel like I’ve got a bit of closure now…thank you.” Jennifer smiled and kissed him happily before getting an idea…it wasn’t definite that he was the last of his kind, he just thought he was…but Jennifer just knew there had to be someone left out there. Maybe if she were to help him find someone of his own kind, he wouldn’t be so lonely anymore, and if that were the case then maybe she could return to her old home without feeling guilty for leaving him. But then she thought of him mating with someone else and she became a bit jealous, only to push that thought away. She knew he would be much happier with someone of his own kind, as they could produce him a foal, Jennifer could not. As she thought about this she kind of spaced out and awoke when Arroyo nudged her gently before asking, “You okay?” Jennifer smiled and said, “Yeah…just thinking.” She decided to present the idea to him later as she scratched his neck gently and said, “I’m going to go for a swim, want to join me?” Arroyo smiled and said happily, “I’d love to.” He stood up and followed her out to the spring, slowly making his way into the cool water. He snorted slightly as the surface of the water touched his undercarriage, the water was cold and it hurt slightly, but he just kept going into the water, ignoring the uncomfortable feeling as his balls shrank rapidly. Jennifer laughed at him, she couldn’t help it. Arroyo smirked and splashed her with his wing, causing her to squeal slightly, as she hadn’t gotten into the water yet. He laughed back at her and said, “You coming or not?” Jennifer glared at him playfully then jumped into the water, splashing Arroyo. She surfaced, laughing and Arroyo nipped her playfully. She splashed him with her hand and Arroyo retaliated by bring both his wings up alongside her and pushing them inward and into the water, causing two waves of water to completely cover her. He laughed and she came up out of the water, coughing slightly and she said, “That’s not fair!” Arroyo kept laughing as he said, “All is fair in love and war” (I think that’s the right expression…someone tell me if it’s not :P) Jennifer smirked and said, “Fine, you win.” She walked over to him and hugged him closely. They stood there for a while together, enjoying the sound of the running water and the birds in the distance. |
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