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Equal, Or Unequal Time, Who Is To Say, Twin girls/md, HYP, MC, M/S Sex +| BeastIsSexy |
 Posted: Sep 21 2007, 05:00 AM
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| jkerrsan1 |
 Posted: Sep 21 2007, 06:50 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 16 Member No.: 568150 Joined: 9-September 07
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My Gawd this is hot!! :wub:
I Hope you add another chapter soon!!!!! Rock ON!!!!! :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: |
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| clitflick |
Posted: Sep 22 2007, 09:37 PM
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Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 415 Member No.: 572012 Joined: 19-September 07
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Pet, my darling, you write so well, it's breath taking. New here, but have also read "To Be, Or Not To Be The Bitch".. Thank you for your wonderful talant, and look forward to lots more. XOX, Clitflick :angel:
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| ORLANDA_LUPAE |
Posted: Sep 24 2007, 12:40 PM
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Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 472 Member No.: 45921 Joined: 5-September 04
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Im so glad I found your stories - you have such a vivid imagination and a style of writing that makes them so compelling and leaves us begging for more!
Would love to see this one developed into a longer work it has so much potential for twists and turns - a great read - many thanks for posting it. Orlanda :puppykiss: |
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| BeastIsSexy |
Posted: Sep 24 2007, 02:52 PM
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Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 104 Member No.: 543772 Joined: 21-July 07
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I creamed just reading this... Which got my dog hungry for some..but thats another story...
I LOVE IT!!! Keep It Comin!!! -Danielle Beast Is Sexy |
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| SomaElement |
Posted: Sep 24 2007, 03:42 PM
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Veteran Group: Members Posts: 935 Member No.: 91528 Joined: 9-March 05
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AMAZING stuff! mind control is one of my favourite things and you've included it perfectly into a perfect story. thanks! ^_^
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| horselover007 |
Posted: Oct 15 2007, 04:24 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 14 Member No.: 579589 Joined: 11-October 07
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wow, great story, good imagination!
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| ORLANDA_LUPAE |
Posted: Oct 30 2007, 11:57 PM
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Hardcore Group: Members Posts: 472 Member No.: 45921 Joined: 5-September 04
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This story was worth another read - its just such a fascinating, compelling idea. :rolleyes: Any chance you'll revisit this one petlover54? Deserves more appreciation and a good BUMP. :rock:
Orlanda :puppykiss: This post has been edited by ORLANDA_LUPAE on Oct 30 2007, 11:57 PM |
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| H1ddenD3sires |
Posted: Oct 31 2007, 09:17 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 10 Member No.: 586594 Joined: 29-October 07
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Absolutely delicious! Thank you for posting it. I will be watching for more.
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| Cerebus |
Posted: Nov 2 2007, 06:51 AM
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Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 148 Member No.: 81089 Joined: 26-January 05
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An interesting story with a good set up. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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| jeromy216 |
Posted: Dec 17 2007, 02:23 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 3 Member No.: 612118 Joined: 15-December 07
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oh my god. thats all i can say. this is AMAZING. i cant breathe.
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| mattlobo |
Posted: Dec 17 2007, 12:08 PM
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Veteran Group: Members Posts: 1062 Member No.: 323189 Joined: 1-August 06
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Excellent story Pet, I didn't quite reach my end before I reached the conclusion of the story but then I was reading so fast I had to interrupt myself to scroll down. I'm not a big fan of m/c but I have to agree that you worked it into your story qoite well. Hope you keep this thread open for just a little more at least but then I'll look forward to your next contrabution.
M. Lobo B) PS I know how it feels when readers say nothing. I would really like for them to try their hand at it. |
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| shockedandamazed |
Posted: Dec 17 2007, 04:21 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 48 Member No.: 405915 Joined: 30-December 06
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Marvelously original idea with a twist at the end. The pace and description was almost spot on. Keep at it. Pet, you are developing a slower, erotic pace that raises the sexual tension of your stories. With that style and and the added detail you will continue to have success in this forum. Much thanks.
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| Nitely |
Posted: Dec 17 2007, 06:44 PM
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Full time poster  Group: Banned Posts: 2596 Member No.: 502916 Joined: 15-May 07
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An outstanding, well written story that will, at times, chill you to the bone, (Yep, THAT bone...) :blink: Yet at other times, the passion generated will have you weak with need... Another well delivered story Pet... ;) Thanks for sharing this and your other great stories with us... Please accept my 10 as a small token of my appreciation... ^_^
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| Ladywolf2112 |
Posted: Dec 17 2007, 09:30 PM
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Enthusiast Group: Members Posts: 138 Member No.: 100845 Joined: 11-April 05
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This by far is one of the best I have read in a while, I couldnt keep my hands to myself as i read this. You did an outstanding job. I wish that oculd have been me. Please, I beg you Please write more!!!!!
Thank you for sharing with us. |
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