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| Outerlimit_69 |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 04:57 AM
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Love the story and where it going also not a bad slow start very good and an amazing writer. Can't wait for the rest!
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| Namdus |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 05:40 AM
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Your stories are so great. I have loved each and everyone of them. I hope you keep writing. Can't wait to read what will happen next in this big house. Keep it coming. Big 10 for you.
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| i_love_mares |
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 8 Member No.: 533704 Joined: 3-July 07
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Well done mate, that was a great read.
I look forward to further creative writings :] ^_^ |
| Zayroen |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 06:25 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 11 Member No.: 527332 Joined: 21-June 07
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That was a pretty damned good story, even with the short length. I cant wait to see you continue! Just some helpful hints? you use allot of comma's after quotations that you don't have to, and short sentences when you can combine them. Other then those small things this is a really good story, keep it up! :lol:
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| Pan |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 07:00 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 27 Member No.: 99363 Joined: 6-April 05
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great story, hope to see more
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| Darchangel |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 09:14 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 39 Member No.: 508215 Joined: 23-May 07
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very hot great story, can not wait for the next part
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| 2doggonecurious2 |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 09:32 AM
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i enjoyed your story. it is intense with me wanting more so please give us more . thanks again really enjoyed
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| tabette_69 |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 10:51 AM
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great story line I am glad to have read it and really can't wait to read more...thanks for posting and I appreciate your hard work...have a great day...tab
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| Pakman |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 12:50 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 3 Member No.: 526433 Joined: 20-June 07
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That was freaking hot. 10
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| roman420 |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 01:26 PM
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Wow, this is really a good story you have going on. And Haley is only on her second day of adventure. The possibilities are endless. A 10 from me.
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| Filipino Magician |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 07:30 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 43 Member No.: 97816 Joined: 1-April 05
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That was awesome. Can't wait for more.
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| bg12gh |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 08:00 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 2 Member No.: 535535 Joined: 6-July 07
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you are a amazing author. this story is very very good one of the best ive read so far keep it up
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| shaitaana |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 09:48 PM
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Beginner ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 51 Member No.: 535903 Joined: 7-July 07
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Haley now exhausted again laid down on the couch to watch tv. Deaus laid down up by her head. She stroked his fur softly as if to show her appreciation for the good sex earlier. Haley knew this was going to be a hot summer for her. Thoughts of sadness flooded her mind thinking about when Mark came back and she wouldn't be able to have sex with her new found lover anymore. The phone started to ring. Haley got up and answered the phone, it was Mark.
"Everything is kosher there Haley? How is Deaus doing?", he asked her. "Ummm it's going great, and Deaus is very happy I even took him out for a walk earlier alreayd.", Haley blushed as she stammered the word out. "That is great to hear!", said Mark. "Well I just wanted to make sure everything this going well, I'm going to get off here now and enjoy my vacation." Haley said goodbye and hung up the phone. Deaus was laying on the couch sleeping so Haley decided to go make some food to eat. She looked in the fridge and there were already steaks thawed in there. Yummy she thought. She took them out and cooked them to medium rare. After they were done cooking she went out in the living room to eat and watch tv. She fed a whole steak to her new "special" friend. After about an hour of letting the food settle Haley started to feel horny again and started to play with her pussy. Deaus watched her and started to whine so she stopped and leaned her head down to where his sheath was and pulled it back so that she could lick on his cock. She licked it till it started to swell up and then sucked it into her mouth. Deaus obviously enjoying this licked her face as she kept sucking him. Duke ready to fuck got up pulling his swollen cock out of her mouth and barked at her as if to say give me that pussy now. She got on all fours but pressed her face to the couch so that her pussy was ready for him. He licked her pussy a few times getting it wet with his slobber and then mounted her hugging around her waist with his paws as he plunged his cock into her wet pussy. Duke pumped her with a furious rhythm till she came on his cock but this time he didn't knot her. He pulled out after she came and went to her face and laid down so that she could finish him with her mouth. Hungrily she sucked him into her mouth and sucked him till he came his hot juices flowing into her mouth as she greedily sucked it all down. It tasted musty but Haley was just so turned on she wanted to show Deaus how much she loved his attention. Tired Haley called Deaus to retire to the bedroom. All the way to August Haley and Deaus got it on like animals in heat. It was now August and Haley felt a bit sad that soon Mark would be coming home. Haley was cooking dinner in the kitchen and Deaus started to hump her leg letting her know that he wanted some pussy. Haley took off her clothes and threw them into a pile then laid down on the floor so that Deaus could suck and lick on her pussy to get her going. Haley was so into what Deaus was doing to her that she didn't hear the sound of the door opening nor Mark calling out that he was there. By the time Mark came around the corner Deaus was already mounting Haley and buried deep into her pussy fucking her as she was on all fours like a bitch in heat. Mark had trained Deaus to like human pussy from a submissive he used to have so it didn't suprise him that way. He was pleasantly suprised how into it Haley was. He watched for a few minutes then stood infront of her while she was knotted with Deaus. "Oh my aren't you a nasty little dog slut, maybe I should call the humane society and tell them what you have been doing to my dog." he said to her noticing she was a bright crimson and stuck in the position she was in. "Oh my gawd, I'm so sorry Sir", she stammered out. "Please don't tell on me, I'll do anything" "Alright then suck my cock while you are knotted to Deaus", he said smiling at her as he took his cock out and got down to a level where her mouth could reach. He grabbed her hair and started to fuck her mouth as she sucked as hard as she could wanting to please him so he wouldn't turn her over to the humane society for molesting his dog. While she was sucking Deaus pulled out of her pussy all the juices flowing down her leg. Deaus started to lick off all the cum and her juices while she sucked Mark off. "MMMMMMMMMM" she moaned onto Marks cock as she felt Deaus starting to lick at her clit again. Mark pulled Haley's face tight onto his cock almost gagging her with the depth that cock went in and he came down the back of her throat. "Wow, you suck cock really good, if i'd known how good you were at sucking I would have asked for a blow job before I left." he said to her smiling as he still held her face onto his cock. After a bit he released Haley's head and Deaus had finished licking all the juices, he helped Haley to her feet. Haley went to grab her clothes she was so embarrassed and still blushing. "Don't put those clothes on yet Haley, I don't think Deaus and I are done with you yet.", he said with a big grin. Haley unsure of what to do stopped and looked at Mark. Mark went to a drawer and pulled out a collar with a leash. "You know what this is for Haley?" "It's a dog collar right?", she said as her face turned an even brighter red. "Well Haley, I used to have a human female pet for me and Deaus, but she moved away for school. I think that Deaus and I might like for you to take the job now if you want it. If you want to be me and Deaus's sex toy get on all fours and crawl to me so i can put your collar on you." Haley knew she didn't want to give up fucking the dog, she had been addicted to it the past few months so she got on all fours and crawled over to Mark. "Good girl", he said as he put the collar on her. He tugged at the collar for Haley to follow and then led her upstairs with Deaus following behind. |
| daddys girl |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 10:16 PM
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Beginner ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 85 Member No.: 521975 Joined: 13-June 07
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great job keep it cumming. I can not wait till the next chapter. You have so much talent in writing....
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| Outerlimit_69 |
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 11:23 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 4 Member No.: 537868 Joined: 11-July 07
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Amazing talent and I like where it turned with Mark coming home. I can't wait to read on what happens next. Its a very well written and interesting story.
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