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| killaseason420 |
Posted: Jul 16 2007, 02:44 AM
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so far this story is very nice and im enjoying very much, please keep writing and writing more, wtf was outside
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| Swedishboy7 |
Posted: Jul 17 2007, 11:13 AM
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Part 8 of The Unicorns in the Woods
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I waked up the next day by the sun shining in my eyes. I opened my eyes, and at first I couldn’t remember where I was. But soon my memories began to return. I looked to my right and saw that Massrié was still sleeping. I began petting her carefully on her neck, and then on her belly. She waked up, and opened her beautifull eyes. When she looked back at me, it felt like her eyes was everything. By now I was onehundred percent sure of that I really loved her. Have you slept well? She asked me. “Yes, I have. Our little action-scene yesterday got me really tired” I answered. It got me tired too. But it was really great. You was so good! We got to do that soon again! ”Yes, we got to do that again. But not now. I have planned to look around Folsys today, to investigate my new home” Massrié yawned, and then she rose up. She seemed a bit tired still, but I was sure of that she wouldn’t be so for long. Don’t you think it’s time for breakfast now, my love? “Yeah, I’m pretty hungry. Where do we eat?” I rose up too, and togheter we walked outside. The weather was as beautifull as yesterday, and the temprature was about the same too; It was perfect and so was the weather. There was a few unicorns on the street, and the most of them was heading towards the square. Climb on my back, and I will take you there. She said to me as some sort of answer to my question. This was the first she had offered me to ride her. “I would love to ride on you. Stay still now, so I can get on you.” Massrié stopped, and I stepped to her side. I had never ridden before, so I found it pretty hard to get on her. But after a few tries, I actually found myself on her. As I have said before. She was a little smaller than me, but while riding on her, my foots were pretty high over the ground. I sat very comfortable, and when she asked if I was ready, I lended forward and grabbed her mane and then answered: “Let’s go!” Massrié started to walk, and I soon let go of her mane. “I’m heavy for you?” I asked. Yes, a little bit, but not so heavy that I can’t stand it for a day or two, She answered. Do you want me to run? “Yes, that would be nice” Then hold on! I grabbed her mane again, and as soon as she felt that I did, she started to accelerate. Soon it felt like we flew foward. It was a wonderfull feeling. It bumped a little, but I didn’t care. I felt the wind passing by my face and how Massrié worked with her muscles beneth me. And I felt free. But the feeling didn’t last long. Soon Massrié began slowing down, to soon stop. I looked around and noticed that we already had arrived at the forrest south of Folsys. I saw that the little stream that I had drinked from was popular even for thirsty unicorns. Also the berries that growed on small, green bushes that growed close to the trees was quite popular. A few unicorns did also eat the grass. Did you enjoy the ride? Massriés words made me stop looking around, and as I jumped down from her back I answered her. “I loved it” Good. The meaning was that you should do so. She turned her head to me, and gave me a little kiss. I had never kissed a horse, but I was sure of that this was not like being kissed by one. It was a very smooth and wet kiss, and I loved how it felt. But it was only a little kiss, and soon Massrié turned away her head again. Come on now. Let’s see what you think of these berries, she said as she walked over to a little bush at a big tree. I followed her, and as she stopped at the bush I walked the last bit to the bush. The berries on this bush was red, and they looked like strawberries. But they was much bigger. Maybe they were fruits? I don’t know. Anyway, I bent forward and picked one. I took the berry up to my mouth and took a bite. It tasted really good, but not like strawberries. The only thing that I can say that it tasted a little like would be pineapple. But only a little. Do you like it? Massrié asked me. “Yes, it’s really good” I answered. Then you will probalby like the rest of the berries to. Just don’t eat any black ones, they’re poisonous. I will go over to the stream to drink. Come there when you’re finished here, Simon. She walked away, and I ate. I tasted alot of different berries, and all of them was very good. After my stomach had been satisfied, I headed to the stream and drank. Massrié had gone away to some other bushes and was ating from a big bush that had cone shaped, blue berries. I drank until I was un-thirsty, and then I headed to Massrié. By now she had stopped eating, and she stood and chatted to a black unicorn. Where could they have gone then? The only place that we haven’t search through is the mountains, and they can’t have gone there!, I heard that Massrié was saying to the black unicorn. I stopped about half a meter from them. They could have run up there, but I still think that we should keep looking in the forest, the black unicorn said. Massrié had now noticed me, and she turned her head to me. Oh, hello Simon. This is my friend Sardiff. “Hello Sardiff”, I said as I looked on him. He was a big, black unicorn stallion. He was much bigger than me, and he seemed to be very powerfull. Hello Simon. It’s a pleasure to meet our new member. I guess that you two completed the tradition yesterday? Yes, you can be sure of that! Massrié said. Unicorns seemed to think that sex wasn’t anything special. It was certainly not a sensitive subject for them. But back to the subject now. Simon, two young foals has gone missing. Their parents, Pingall and Erlasse, last saw them when they went outdoor to drink. That was around dinner time two days ago, and none has seen any of them since then. Their names is Filsy and Ytrol. Sardiff here is the leader of the group that searches for them. We have searched for them in the northern and the southern forest, around the lake, in town...yes, pretty much everywhere except in the mountains. Massrié, let’s search one more day before we go up the mountains and search there Okey then. But I still think that they’re up there... “Why you think so, Massrié?” I asked her. I don’t know...it just feels so. But now I shouldn’t keep you away from your job anymore, Sardiff. Good bye. “Good bye Sardiff” Good bye Massrié and I began heading back to town, while Sardiff went to the south. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I hope you enjoyed that part. More is comming soon! |
| dragonic49 |
Posted: Jul 17 2007, 12:59 PM
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Hmmm... wonder what is up in those mountains??
I reckon I know what it is and I just have to say; Nice work Swedish. Look forward to reading it! :D Dragonic ^_^ |
| horny 4 horses |
Posted: Jul 17 2007, 01:01 PM
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wonderfull, absolutly smashing story, got me higher then a space shuttle
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| Swedishboy7 |
Posted: Jul 17 2007, 03:29 PM
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Part 9 (Already?)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A dragon was running towards the cave on the hillside. She was freezing after comming directly from the warm forest. Even though she had lived here whole her life she had never got used to the cold climate in the mountains. To make it even better, she saw that it soon was going to begin snowing. She didn’t like snow. She hated it. And ice she hated even more. She didn’t even want to live here! She just did because her sisters forced her. Someday I will get rid off them, she thought to herself. But first I got to complete my mission. The red dragon female made her way to the cave, and soon she was swallowed in it’s darkness. “So you have finally arrived? It did take you quite some time, didn’t it?”the big, blue dragon said. The red dragon looked at her blue sister, who sat in the middle of room. She had walked through the long maze to finally come to where her sisters spent the most of their time; the big, central room. It was lighten by torches that hung on the walls, and their light reflected in the gold that laid in big piles on the floor. But the red dragon didn’t look at any of these valueables. She just looked into her evil sisters eyes and gave her the information that she had collected down in that wonderfull village. “The watchers were right. He has arrived. I saw him doing their tradtion with their leader yesterday night. He will be an easy victim for ous.” The green dragon, her other sister, began speaking with a voice that her red sister had hated through whole of her life. “We thought so...But now you got to tell ous why’re you were so late. And you do better have a good motivation!” She smiled, because she knew that whatever reason she might have, Yeflora, her older, blue sister, was going to punish her for being late. “You know why. You know that I hate this place, and that I want to stay in Folsys! But you two just ignore me!” She screamed out. It become a little pause, before Yeflora answered her screaming with a patient, calm voice. It sounded like she was talking to her sister as if she had been a little, cute rabbit that had become afraid of something. “So, so. Let’s calm down now. You know that we can’t live with those peasky unicorns. You know why we live here. And the treasure...do you really just want to leave the treasure here, so anybody can steal it?” Before her sister had the chance to say a word, she continued. “I thought so. I’m pretty sure of that you know what’s going to happen now, don’t you? You have been trying to hide from your own sisters, your screaming at ous and you’re critising ous for our choice to live here. Yes, we will use it at you, Tyrsa.” As Yeflora had said this, she walked over to one of the corners of the room, following the paths between the piles of gold and jewels. She soon found what she had looked for, and soon Tyrsa was lying on the floor, screaming in pain. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Next part is comming soon :) |
| dragonic49 |
Posted: Jul 17 2007, 03:33 PM
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The dragons! ^_^
Can't wait until the next part comes out, Swedish! :D Keep up the great work. ^_^ Dragonic ;) |
| GrafikImage1 |
Posted: Jul 18 2007, 01:18 AM
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YES!!
It was Dragons I knew it Awesome story can't wait for the next part Keep up the amazing work GrafikImage |
| GodLikePhoenix |
Posted: Jul 18 2007, 10:12 AM
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yay, dragons are now being involved here, wooo, great writing sweedish, please continue, without further adue
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| Swedishboy7 |
Posted: Jul 18 2007, 07:11 PM
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Disciple of the board Group: VIP Members Posts: 9444 Member No.: 536087 Joined: 7-July 07
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Part 10 :)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I had had a very nice day with Massrié. When we had returned to town, she and I walked around, talking. We had visited the library, eaten lunch and after that we had taken a walk along the beach. We had now just returned back to Massriés little house after the dinner. I had learnt alot of new things about the unicorns and the surroundings around Folsys today. Massrié had told me that unicorns usually became about 80 years, but that some of them reached the age of 100 years. Anotother thing that I had learnt today was that an unicorn was ready for reproduction at around the age of 13 years. I had asked her about how it come that humans knew about unicorns, when none had returned from this world to the humans one. She answered that she wasn’t really sure, but that it might come from the fact that throughout the history, a few unicorns had visited the “other place”. Before I could ask her about how that went, she continued telling me that sometimes, unicorns just disappeared. She thought that the same thing happened to them as it happened to humans. It seemed like it could be true, so I accepted it. I had also learnt alot about Massrié herself. Her parents, Marol and Fregdase, had been very good to her, she told me, but they had never let her do anything at her own. She lived the beginning of her life in Wosys, which was another unicornian town, but when she was 17 and her parents still didn’t care about her own will, she fled. After two months in the forrest, she arrived in Folsys. She was accepted, after going through the same welcomming tradition as I had gone through, and not so long time after she had arrived she started climbing the ranks in Folsys. At the beginning she had been a normal citizen, but soon she got the work as foodguard. Her work was to watch the bushes to the south from “the creatures in the south”. When I asked her what they were, she just ignored me. Since I didn’t want to nag on her, I let her keep telling her story. Then she had just worked her way up to the top, as the city’s leader. But it wasn’t anything special about it, she thought. It was just as any other work, except that you needed to take more responsibility. The unicorns seemed to have a pretty odd social system. Some unicorns didn’t need to work at all, but they could never become something either, like the leader of the town. If you wanted to become a unicorn with a high rank, you needed to work. You could be a librarian, a food or water guard, a writer (An unicorn who wrote books about things. How this could be a work, I didn’t really catch, but I accepted it) or maybe a soldier. None of these works were paid, and I couldn’t understand why they did it then, so I asked Massrié. She answered me that someone needed to do it, and that’s why they did it. I didn’t got any wiser by this, but I accepted it. It was pretty much that I didn’t understand, but I thought that I soon would. Right now I didn’t care so much about that though. I didn’t even think about my home, and how worried my parents, my brother and all the other of my family-members were about me. I had thought about them a little, but I decided that I couldn’t return now. Most because of that I had found my love, but also because I didn’t know if I was going to be transformed into a unicorn anytime soon. But as I said, I didn’t care much about that right now. Instead, I looked at Massrié that laid down on the floor. I was soon on her side. It was getting dark outside, and I could feel that it was getting a bit colder, but not so much that I would begin freezing. Would you want to pet me again, love? She asked me. “I would love to”, I said whilst I began petting her neck. She laid on her side, and I soon began petting her belly with my other hand. She was so soft that it was like touching cotton. But I could still feel her powerfull muscles under her white skin. I started petting her with both my hands on her belly. Can’t you pet my rump a bit, honey? She asked me. As I began moving my hands to her nicely formed backside, she began lifting her tail. I knew that she wanted more of the pleasure that we had shared yesterday. I moved myself so I was close to her tail. Now I could see her pussy. I began petting her on her rump to tease her a little, but soon I began working my way to her pussy. But when I was just a few centimeters from her pussy, she screamed. Simon, watch out! I quikly turned my head and looked back, and I managed to see alot of black powder comming aginst me before I fall asleep. It’s true, I did just fall asleep without feeling any pain. Anyway, when I waked up the sun shone through the windows and the opening. I remebered yesterday’s happening directly, so I looked for anything special. But everything seemed to be like normal. At first. I was still in Massrié’s house, but Massrié herself was gone. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry for the short part, but as I have already said, I think it’s better to release new parts fast than making them long and release them with long timeperiods in-between. Hope you enjoyed this part, the next one is comming soon! |
| Ivan333 |
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It took so long for me 2 real all this together.
;) Awesome story can't wait for the next part :thinking: |
| Furdreamer |
Posted: Jul 18 2007, 10:16 PM
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:w00t: One good part after the other :clapping:
Thanks Swedish and I´m anxious of the next part. |
| utherpend |
Posted: Jul 19 2007, 01:08 AM
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Unusual to say the least but enjoyable. By all means write more of this story.
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| GrafikImage1 |
Posted: Jul 19 2007, 09:23 PM
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Can't wait for more :lol:
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| Swedishboy7 |
Posted: Jul 20 2007, 08:07 AM
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Disciple of the board Group: VIP Members Posts: 9444 Member No.: 536087 Joined: 7-July 07
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Thank you for all the great posts. Part 11 is on it's way! I promise that there will be more sex soon :)
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| iamhacker |
Posted: Jul 20 2007, 09:33 AM
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nice work, very intersting story. keep up the good work
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