--- Part 4 ---


She finishes unbuttoning her shirt and cuddles against. We continue to watch the movie some, I did my best to not get to horny. Next thing I know she moves a little away and lays down next to me with her head in my lap. Now here I was having a beautiful girl with her shirt unbuttoned wearing a mini skirt and a red lace bra. It had been over a year since I had been this close with a girl. I start to get a little hard hoping she didn't realize it as I didn't want to get embarrassed. I am now full erect, and I feel her rub her head in my crotch a little. I felt the blood pulsing in my crotch. Next thing I know she looks up at me and says... Looks like someone is a little horny. I reply with, it is kinda hard not to be sitting here with a beautiful girl. She sits up and moves over so she is now straddling my lap.



--- Break Part 4---

For those of you who will read this before I get the next part done I am working on it, it will be up soon :)

--- Part 4 Continued ---


With her sitting on my lap I had the perfect view of her breast covered with that nice red lace bra while her shirt hung open. I reached up to try to slid her shirt off, she said to me. No, No , No... Not now it is only our first date. You will have to wait at least another date before you get anymore than this. Next thing I know she leans over and starts caressing my lips with her own. I return the favor kissing back. While we were kissing I felt a dogs nose go towards my crotch. I didn't even think about it I just kept on kissing her. The movie was finally over and it was getting late. She decided I should go home and we should meet again soon. I asked her how soon. She said she has the day off tomorrow and doesn't have to be to work until late the following day, so how about I come back same time tomorrow. We say our goodbyes and I leave for home.


-- End Part 4 ---

Sorry another suspense, planned to write more but don't have the time to completely finish it right now. Will try later tonight, if not tomorrow.

nothing wrong with starting out a little slow. Hope to read more soon. Thanks for sharing with us.

Dilligaff5

very good start! love the suspense of having to wait for the next post to see what happens, just don't make us wait too long! great buildup, patiently awaiting the next days events..... :)

Hell. I was just warming up and looking for the next segment.. and nothing.. It is like you waiting for your sat nite date....

I just read the first three parts. You are doing very well. It flows nicely and sounds natural. I am sitting on the edge of my chair wondering what is going to happen next. Will be watching for the next chapter. I also am a writer and I think you are doing great.

Wonderful start so far, you have us greedy readers begging for more. It's wonderfully easy to become addicted to a story line . . . .you'll have us all begging soon!

^_^ amazing start , please post the rest soon, I can' wait. Very nice so far, love the cliffhangers, very suspensfull.
you are good at this lol, can't wait for the rest, and mayby some others from you soon. thanks for the story so far though. - Dami

Great start, although the suspense is killing me :P . Cannot wait until you post more

Well I am sorry I haven't been able to post today, I have been finishing a couple of college classes which I took the finals today. If I can I will get it done a little later tonight, if not I will do my best to write it tomorrow.

Take your time, and know that your efforts are appreciated!

It is difficult to write a story after posting parts of it, cause you can't go back and change any of the details. But you are doing great!

Great beginning, with just the right level of suspense between postings. I have enjoyed the story so far. thank you for sharing

hell I loggd in looking for thenext part.. and .... more please....

I guess I'm a little confused...

I started out reading the story, then I read the part about you not wanting to continue unless you got replies.

so my question is this: is this a real story, a fantasy, or just a story?

Well because your post to me sounded rude I am going to put off writing the next part for another day.

I am sorry for everyone else who is watching this thread waiting for the next part. I will write the next part tomorrow if time permits. If you guys weren't being so nice and just him responding I wouldn't continue.