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Damo
Posted: May 31 2007, 04:08 AM
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It was 5 am I just woke up and I planed on going for a swim today so I got up and had my breakfast then I grabed my snorkling gear and I drove down to the beach which was only 10 minutes away. When I got there I parked the car and went down to my favorite snorkling spot which was well away from the main beach just past to point on the right side there is a little beach area and about 50 meters out in the ocean there is a little island which is called Shark Island and when I finaly got to were it was I put on the snorkle and the flippers and jumped in. The water was abit cold but I know that I just have to keep swimming to warm up so I just keep going toward the island and as I was going I was looking at all the fish that I was passing over then I went down under the water for a closer look at them and I see a sting ray just under the sand I keep on gong and I see a large group of fish on my right there must have been about 40 of them. I was about half way to the island now and I warmed up already and the water was now about 10 meters deep now and more rocky so I get another big breath of air and go down all the way and I see about 10 fish just laying on the rocks they are about half a meter big each and I got really close but they did not move away they were black with white spots on them I stayed with them for about 40 seconds then I went back up for air I can hold my breath for 1:20 seconds which I think is not bad. I was at the island now so I got up onto it and looked around....still cant see anyone so I thought since I am here alone I want to do a lap of the island naked so I took of my shirt and my pants and I took off the mouht peace to the snorkle ok so now I just got on my flippers and goggles on and jump of the island and went to do my naked lap. This feels great I was thinking then I swam around the back of the island were the water was deepest faceing the open ocean I keep going for a little bit long and then I felt some thing bump my foot I stoped and had a look under the water I did not see anything then I felt another bump I looked strat away and saw a female great white.I saw she turned and came back straight at me I dared not swim back to the island cos I new that if she wanted me for breakfast I would be dead already as she got close she slowed down and then she stuck her nose into my crotch and now I was going threw the water backwards with a shark noseing my crotch and as scared as I was by this I started to get aroused and I was thinking maybe she wants to mate with me so I slowly and carefully I moved down her beautiful body and held on to her fins and placed my dick at her slit and to my amazment she let my dick slide inside her sand paper like skin is gently squeezing my dick as I start to f*** her with absolote passion then I needed air and she must have sensest it cos she rolled over and went to the surface I got a big breath of air and then she rolled over again so I was back under the water this is the greatest feeling I have ever felt be for. We were fucking like this for about 10 minutes but it felt more like half and hour and then we both cummed at the same time that was the best f*** I have ever had in my life. I kiss her underbelly as we swim threw the ocean then out of nowere a young male great white takes a hold of my arm with out cutting me with his razzer sharpe teeth and pulls me off her. Then he lets go of my arm and I slide down his body and hold on to his fins then I feel his clasper trying to enter my ass so I wrape my legs around his body so I am as close to him as I can get and then he hit the right spot and it went in a little at first then it took him 4 trust before all of his 12in clasper sank in all the way I could tell he was a very powerful great white and I was thinking that must have been his girl I was fucking and I robbed him of it so he was going to f*** me not that I minded tho cos I have always loved sharks. He must have also known when I needed air cos he did the same thing as the female and I was thankfull for that. My god he was a big boy I was grunting as he was trusting inside me every 3 seconds and after 8 minutes he cummed inside me with alot of force and it was spraying out into the ocean after I was full. I felt his dick slowly srink down and slide out of me. I gave him a big hug after that and then I let go of him but I had a big swim back to the island and as I was swimming back I felt him under me lifting me up so I was rideing on his back as he was takeing me back I was patting him all the way there and when we got back to the island I said my good by to him and then he swam of I was a little sad to watch him go. I put on my pants and shirt back on now and jumped back in the water to go back to the beach and then the female came back and with my right hand I held on to her dorsel fin and patted her as she took me back to the beach and when we got there I gave her a kiss and a hug and told her I will be back tomorow and after a little sign of aprovel she swam of and so I went home and was thinking I cant wait for tomorow. B)
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Posted: May 31 2007, 04:24 AM
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Wow, sharks are one of my favorit animals and your story has always been a fantasy of mine. Think I need a cold shower now, 10 vote from me.
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Posted: May 31 2007, 08:03 AM
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interesting story, though it could really use some linebreaks, paragraphs and whitespace. it is difficult to read in the current wall-of-text form.
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Posted: May 31 2007, 09:34 AM
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quite the fantasy! :)

Though yeah - needs some paragraphs.
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Posted: May 31 2007, 12:30 PM
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very good i think i will doa story later on ;)
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Posted: May 31 2007, 03:37 PM
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:P Yeah, nice story... have to agree on the paragrahs though
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Posted: May 31 2007, 05:18 PM
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A 10 for a wonderfully wrote story with beautiful detail.
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Posted: May 31 2007, 06:17 PM
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congratualtion
this makes dreams come true
(or at least it gives a try)
great story would be 10 points from me
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Posted: May 31 2007, 06:23 PM
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its very interesting :thinking:
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Posted: May 31 2007, 07:21 PM
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Nice to see you writing, Damo! Yes, the story's quite nice and there are a few details I greatly enjoyed in particular :)

Though I must note out that it makes the text far easier to read when you break it into paragraphs. Keep working and you'll find yourself even more satisfied with your writing - I did :)
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Posted: May 31 2007, 09:32 PM
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Wow great story thanks for writing it, having sex with a female shark is one of my greatest fantasies, Please write more on this subject. ;)

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Posted: May 31 2007, 10:29 PM
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very nice story. there seem to be more and more shark stories lately. not that i mind or anything. but i will agree on paragraphs and maybe some spell checking?
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Posted: Jun 1 2007, 12:09 AM
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Thanks guys and I will work on the linebreaks, paragraphs and whitespace in my next story thanks for telling me. :D And guys if you read this story please let me no what you think again many thanks B)
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Posted: Jun 2 2007, 03:23 AM
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I also just wanted to let you guys no the area I talk about in the story is in Sydney Cronulla and it really is my favorite snorkling spot :D
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Posted: Jun 15 2007, 02:59 AM
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A very different story, I hadn't ever thought about sharks like that before . Thanks for sharing :)
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