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| GvMeSomLps69 |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 05:29 AM
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Landi, I always enjoy your stories, and look forward to all additions! This colaberation with Raven is FANTASTIC!!! I can't wait to see how their weekend goes! Thank you both!! MUAH! :devil2:
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| newb2itall |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 06:28 AM
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Awsome, I love how you are both doing this, something different and different is good.
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| dragoneyes |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 06:41 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 768 Member No.: 278930 Joined: 9-May 06
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This is really getting interesting. I can't wait for your next installment. Thank You.
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| Angelos |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 07:56 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 10 Member No.: 428051 Joined: 28-January 07
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This is great I cant wait to read more!
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| ZERO-GRAVITY |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 08:16 AM
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I'm enjoying this!!! Please keep us informed on the weekend adenture...Here is a"ten" vote for you both as well...ZG :)
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| RavensBlood |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 06:25 PM
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Well I hope you all continue to read our work both done together and by ourselves and continue to enjoy every story.
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| landi |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 07:57 PM
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Lae started to pace a little as she stood there and stared at her clothes. There really wasn't much as she never had enough money to be etravagant. Three pair of jeans, maybe seven tops, four skirts that she made in Home Ec in High School, one nice dress, six pairs of socks, two sets of nylons, a weeks worth of undies, a pair of heels, a pair of shoes, a pair of sneakers, and two good bras.
"Maybe I should go buy some things instead of taking these old things." Lae mused to herself as she thought about the SuperWalMart that was open 24 hours Lae took a few more minutes and sat down letting her printer give her the red inked set of directions then she noticed another message. She clicked the box and opened the newest message. What animal do you really wish to spend time with and what breed? Lae almost drooled reading that comment. What breed.. this was more then she expected.. she had figured that he would just have one dog and that was it but here was the question.. what breed.. Well Akita seems nice or a Belgian Tervuren....or a Newfoundland or a German Shepard.. if that is what you own.. lil wannabe Lae decided that she would take her last pay check, get some new clothes and then repack before taking off in the morning for her new adventure. |
| RavensBlood |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 09:15 PM
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Westley looked up and opened the new reply from lae and began to type out his own.
I have all of those types and an idea has crossed my mind. Depending on how exotic of a weekend you wish this to be you could bring only a tooth brush and comb and leave all clothing and not wear any. I am it that is on this farm so it would be only the animals and I that saw you. Sitting back wondering what this woman looked like he began to day dream of the dogs and himself spending time with this woman. |
| scorpioblonde1 |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 10:13 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 23 Member No.: 457256 Joined: 11-March 07
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Love the collaborative writing style. Have written many like this before and each writer spurs the other to make the story better. Really enjoying this Thanks.
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| tumblebug |
Posted: Apr 14 2007, 11:11 PM
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Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 887 Member No.: 189436 Joined: 18-November 05
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Enjoy the story very much, the colaberation seems to be working very well, so keep it up "please". A-10 for each of you :P :P :P
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| landi |
Posted: Apr 15 2007, 01:43 AM
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actually it was just something that occured to Raven and we stuck to it |
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| landi |
Posted: Apr 15 2007, 03:04 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 516 Member No.: 328437 Joined: 10-August 06
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Lae had already left and made her quick shopping trip. She chose a nice knit dress that she planned on wearing as she made her drive to Westley's farm. A new packet of undies and a brand new expensive bra that truly fit her form.
She walked into the dark apartment and flipped the switch as she entered her bedroom. Lae smiled as she sat down to the blinking number. I have all of those types and an idea has crossed my mind. Depending on how exotic of a weekend you wish this to be you could bring only a tooth brush and comb and leave all clothing and not wear any. I am it that is on this farm so it would be only the animals and I that saw you. Lae frowned as she read the latest post, that was not what she expected and felt a little foolish for making an unnecessary trip. Yet there was so many things that she didn't know and felt that she should a least ask. Can you tell me more about yourself.. please, lil wannabe. PS is this weekend too early? I can leave Friday afternoon. |
| RavensBlood |
Posted: Apr 15 2007, 03:15 AM
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lol it just came to my mind after you helped push it in there by talking to me about this story and to be honest I wouldn't change it a single ounce love great to work with others in writing. Plus this is like my favorite writing couple sept we aren't husband and wife but something else lol. |
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| RavensBlood |
Posted: Apr 15 2007, 03:57 AM
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Westley opened the email as soon as he got it and put a finger to his lips asking himself "How do I describe myself?"
Sitting up he began to type. Well about myself I am 6' 3" and I have semi long shaggy black hair. I am muscled, but skinny muscled. I have dark blue eyes and no facial hair. I stay clean shaven on the face. I can usually be found in a white button up shirt, blue jeans, and socks and boots. And before you ask 8 inches. Most of the time you can find me with my faithful dog that looks like a white wolf that I named Rain. A long story on his name that one day I may tell you if you ask. And this weekend is fine I can have a room arranged for you by tonight's end. I will also tell you that on my farm there are 20 horses, 45 head of cattle, 10 goats, 15 sheep, 18 dogs of different breads, and around 24 chickens. Sending the email he stood up and walked outside to feed. Returning a few hours later he just slumped down in his chair not looking around at his surroundings. It was completely dark out now and his day was finally over. He knew he should check his email one last time, but wanted a few moments of rest. |
| funtime515 |
Posted: Apr 16 2007, 05:42 AM
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Veteran Group: Elite Members Posts: 954 Member No.: 18795 Joined: 21-April 04
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Both of you have done an excellent job carrying this plot along with intrigue and suspense. it is some exciting can hardly wait for the next episode. Keep it up A ten for both of you
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