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Posted: Oct 18 2009, 03:58 AM
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If any of you remember my first little post here, I hope you like this. I've tried other writing to get better. I was actually hoping this story would be a very slow paced story that let's you get into the characters and their personality's unlike others I've written. Also I would like to note this story is not biographical. =P

Prologue

She laid on the couch naked, her chest against the cushions. Thoughts raced through her head of remorse, guilt and most of all pure satisfaction. A smile was on her face as she lazily spun a thread from the carpet with her finger. Her love walked in looking satisfied and accomplished. Laying on the floor next to her she crawled down and placed her head upon his chest, gracing it with a kiss.

Chapter 1

She awoke in a daze a little cold, looking around she barley noticed anything. A loving lick on the forehead reminded her where she was. Her love stood up and exited the room with a slight wag in his tail. He was a pretty big black lab having a shiny midnight coat with a white patch on his chest. Standing up she looked around the room, a large LCD TV was on one side with a decently sized cloth, comfy couch opposite. A beautiful window was near the door framing the beauty of the yard where a gentle snowfall was in view. She slowly walked to the bathroom, starting up a hot shower letting steam envelop the room. Looking in the mirror she brushed her near neon purple hair out of her gentle face letting her bright green eyes shine through, looking at herself she knew her figure was small but, it represented her quite well. She tended to be really shy and wasn't a very big talker, but you knew when she did for her voice filled the room as if it was a cold winter breeze.
Slowly she stepped into the warm water letting it engulf her body. Just as she found the Nirvana of warmth a sound caught her ear like the door being opened. A dark head popped it, it was her love wagging his tail as he walked in upon seeing her. She gave him a kiss and patted him on the head lovingly as he sat by the entrance to the shower waiting.

After fully cleaning herself and enjoying the warmth she dried herself and simply dropped the towel and kneeled down to her love. "Are you ready for breakfast Max?" The dog wagged his tail and kissed her on the lips affectionately then ran to the kitchen. Laughing a bit she gracefully followed him running her hand along the wall. Max let out a small bark. "Ok, ok calm down. I'll start cooking." She said with a smile. She got out the rice, beef, vegetables, eggs and spices and set them upon the counter. Setting a pan down on the burner she lit the stove and walked over to the window, watching as the snow drifted to the ground. A clank came from the living room. "Oh, that;s the mail, will you get it while I cook my love?" She patted Max on the head and he ran into the living room. She oiled the pan and put the vegetables in to steam while the beef cooked. Then threw the eggs in to cook with them and finally some already cooked rice. Sprinkling a little spice on top she heard her love walk in. "Oh, thank you Max! Our lunch will be done soon now, let us see...ah! my check is here....5,000 dollars signed to miss Mai Melosha, we can afford to live!" She said smiling and laughing. Mai kissed her love on the head and started dishing up their food. Humming as she walked into the living room with it, she set down the food and turned the TV on. Mai and Max sat together watching the news and eating their breakfast.

EDIT: I actually just became unsure about this but, should this be in stories or fantasy's?

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Posted: Oct 18 2009, 02:16 PM
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OOoooooooooo! You've piqued my interest, i love well written stories and thus far it's promising to be just that. Please continue

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Posted: Oct 18 2009, 08:21 PM
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Chapter 2

Mai lay lazily on the couch with her love; he slept quietly on her leg. Sitting quietly she contemplated what to do today. Looking around she noticed the bareness of her walls, the room needed something, a little bit of color maybe? She decided to go out and get some spray paint and a large canvas. If anything was going to decorate the walls of her house it might as well be something she made.

Standing up she started the short walk to her room, letting max sleep away. Approaching her dresser she looked inside, it was quite barren. She picked out a large purple sweater and black tank top and some comfortable jeans. Deciding not to wear any underwear she picked up her clothes and started to walk to the bathroom. Out of the corner of her eye Mai noticed a small butt plug sitting on the dresser. She bit her lip and looked away “Not today.” She spoke to herself.

In the bathroom she quietly dressed and snuck to the door. Picking up her shoes and putting them on. Laughing quietly as she watched Max sleep, she snuck outside. The gentle crunching of snow under her feet as she walked made Mai smile. Watching as the snow drifted down to earth, enjoying the peace. The store wasn’t too far only a few blocks.

WOOSH! The sliding doors slid open blowing her hair about. It was your average hardware store full of men and the smell of motor oil. She skipped over to the spray paint grabbing up the brightest colors she could find. Bright purple, green, blue, and pink, the best she could find. Walking around she grabbed up a large sheet of canvas and paid for the items at the counter.

Mai was walking home, thinking of what her painting will look like, the more she thought of it the more excited she got. Her thoughts kept running through her head until the turned to something else, her love. She thought of the night before when he mounted her and they mated long into the night. She kept imagining his long think penis and couldn’t stop dreaming of it, all his cum soaking her. She began to quicken her pace hoping to get home sooner and sooner because at this point she couldn’t stop her thoughts and the more they raced in her mind the hornier she got. Her body was practically aching for him.

Finally she was in the driveway; she kept walking towards the door, 5 more feet, 4, 3, 2, 1 Thud! She was at the door fiddling with the door knob. Her heart was pounding until she finally burst the door open. Bursting in she set her purchase on the ground, she began slowly walking to her mate who had just awoken on the couch. He stretched out and stood in front of her on the floor. She started kissing him, his warm tongue on her lips, entering her mouth, her tongue playing with his. Smiling him she petted him gently slowly working her way down the animal’s body.

Her hand was on his under belly rubbing itself on his sheath letting him know she was there. Wrapping her fingers around his shaft she began stroking it feeling the juices drip down her leg, her body aching for more. He began thrusting a bit as she stroked him, his penis began coming out of its sheath. Her hand had slowly moved back until it was behind his knot. He was thrusting furiously as she gripped his shaft. Until finally it happened, he slowed down and his juice flew out. Drenching her arm and leaving a big wet spot on her jeans. She smiled she loved making Max cum, knowing she pleased him.

She stood up and started taking her clothes off. Laying close the where her love sat she started kissing him again. “I love you Max.” She said as the dog kissed her lips again.

Note: I think I'm gonna post them all separate until the end then, I'm going to just put all the chapters in the first post.

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Posted: Oct 19 2009, 11:52 AM
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well you have a great story in the making and do hope you continue your story.

your going into details and decribing the settings well enough to let the story "paint a picture" for your readers. not sure much more to add other than "good start". ill vote a ten for you the give your story a 9 for how good it is (sorry for not giving out a 10 for it but im not one to just say something is good[7~9] when its only mediocre [4~7] ) still I hope you will continue this story it is very good

....................Nicklepony :clover:

ps when you said "I think I'm gonna post them all separate until the end then, I'm going to just put all the chapters in the first post."

dose that mean your just going to post chapters 3~??? all at once?

...I will let time tell what you mean by it :)
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Posted: Oct 19 2009, 03:37 PM
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Hee hee no I'm going to post all the chapters post by post separate as they are written then when I feel the story is complete I'm going to put all of the chapters into the first post for easy reading.

And thank you =]

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Posted: Oct 19 2009, 08:07 PM
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An very nice story I wait for continuing. :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:
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Posted: Oct 21 2009, 02:40 PM
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Very good fabled i'll be coming back to read more definately
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Posted: Oct 21 2009, 09:13 PM
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^_^ sounds like the making of a gr8 story ;) :please: :rock: write on :rock: TY a10
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Posted: Oct 23 2009, 11:00 AM
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Only an big BUMP. :blush:
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Posted: Nov 3 2009, 09:25 AM
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Long time no talk :)

Great story, didn't know you had that in you. You are full of surprises :P
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Posted: Nov 10 2009, 10:58 PM
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Hey rawrz, yeah, I may have a trick or two in my sleeve.

Chapter 3

Mai was locked in her loves kiss, his tongue and her one had become one in a dance of love. Before she could oven move her love had shown her what he wanted. His strong paw was gently scratching at her leg. Asking for permission to drive his penis deep into her, for permission to lick her juices. She smiled and parted her legs and he started nuzzling against her lips. His cold nose spreading hem apart as his warm tongue started licking up and down, causing her to moan under her breath. He started moving more toward the opening of her vagina, detecting the wetness coming from there. He started licking the juices up and found it tasted better inside and started trying to push his tongue further. Mai squirmed under the pure pleasure he was forcing her to feel. He brought his head up and pawed against her leg again showing her once again what he wanted.

Max watched as she stood up and shaking gently got onto her knees and pressed her hands against the floor to support her weight. Her supple, soft breast gently hanging down, her ass raised into the air, his to take. She smiled back at him calling his name. Giving him permission to mount his bitch, he wrapped his paws around her hips and digging in began to thrust at the opening. As soon as the tip of his penis found it’s mark he thrust himself inside from the pure joy and amazing feeling of her soft, moist, tight pussy.

Mai was riddled with anxiety as her love had mounted her. Thrusting at her and trying to find the opening, his claws digging into her hips causing them to cut, causing her to moan. She already had scars there from these practices and she was very proud of them. Suddenly a ripple of orgasmic pleasure went through her whole body, her love had thrust himself inside of her. She moaned as her love was pushing himself deeper in, as the size of his penis expanded in her, stretching her and as the knot grew interlocking them in this position of love. She was moaning his name as he was breathing against her ear even kissing her face occasionally. Her body was shaking back and forth from the force of her loves thrusts causing her breasts to rock and his penis to dive even further in, feeling his testicles smacking her ass and all of these things just turned her on even more. She could feel it coming her body was tensing and he was starting to thrust faster. She gripped onto her rug digging her nails into and it happened that wave of pure pleasure and relief came over here. All the build-up to this moment as her body pulsed and she could feel her love thrusting continue and it happened his sperm was pushed into her and she let out a loud moan of his name, coming again as he came inside her. She rested her breathing as her love rested upon her back. The two still intertwined in the lock of their love.

Max felt Mai's vagina start to squeeze his penis, he know he caused her an orgasm and the tightening of her already tight pussy drove him over the edge. His penis started pulsing and he drove his sperm into her and as he bagan to relax the pulsating happened again and Max let out a little more having another small orgasm. He rested upon Mai's back wishing he could tell her he loved her.

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Posted: Nov 10 2009, 11:23 PM
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Many thanks for your continuition. :blush:
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Posted: Nov 11 2009, 09:44 AM
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This girl is amazing :)
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