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| andoneandtwo |
Posted: May 26 2009, 06:20 PM
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this is my very first REAL post on forum!! also the first story ive ever written that wasnt to be graded haha, so hopefully i can least makea few smiles and maybe a little more. this story was inspired by my avatar, and is actually of him. ENJOY :wub:
I found myself in an athletic club locker room shower staring at the most beautiful male creature I have ever seen. I normally have much more control than this but I simply could not look away. He was about my height, around 5’10”, with beautiful dark grey fur on most of his body, with short, soft white fur along his firm chest, flat stomach, and generous groin. His eyes were a hauntingly gorgeous deep brown. I snapped out of my trance and realized he was watching me. We were both nude except the towel that was draped behind his back, which he was using the corner of to dry one of his tall furry round ears. He had a teasing smirk on his face and when he knew I was aware again he winked at me! It was then I realized we were alone, and I knew it would stay that way since I was pretty sure I was going to be the last in the locker room anyway. It was late when I had finished running and working out and I hadn’t heard him since he must have just finished the shower when I entered the locker room. His wink made me self conscious and I smiled shyly at him. He stood there with the same cute smirk and before I knew what I was doing, instinct had taken over. I walked purposely toward him as he gazed at me, his beautiful bushy tail swished in anticipation as I got close. My left hand came up and gently touched the left side of his flat, soft stomach, and I slowly walked around him, my hand sliding along his middle, my eyes lost in his. My left hand stayed on his tight abdomen while I walked behind him, he was still standing as he had started when my right hand slid up under his right arm and up along his chest. I stepped close behind him until I felt his more coarse tail on my growing manhood. As my right hand gently scratched the top of his chest, my left hand ventured further south until I was rubbing the warm fur above his cock, purposely teasing him. I lost more control and placed my face into his left shoulder, breathing in his wonderful clean smell. I hugged him into me, now he could feel my swelling cock with the bottom of his butt cheeks; his tail had mercifully swished out of the way and was slightly wrapped around behind me. He made a soft moan against my touch and finally moved. With his right hand he reached up and grasped my somewhat long, thick brown hair, his left traveled behind him and grasped my cock. My right hand slid down to his stomach as my left went down to the side of his shaft to the bottom base of his warm fuzzy balls, I still did not reach for his girth but I could feel him reacting well to me. He moistened his tongue and licked his left paw, then placed it back to the head of my cock and his anus, having wetted them, he grasped my growing penis and rubbed it against his warm butt hole. I couldn’t handle only teasing him any longer, knowing I was more skillful with my right hand, I slid that hand down to his hot cock while my left hand rubbed up his soft balls to replace the right on his belly. Out breathing intensified, while I stroked his now fully hard and slippery cock, he licked his left hand again and lubricated my meat even more. He then pushed my firm penis into his hot anus, I gripped his cock as he pushed back into me, sliding the whole length of me into him. I glided my mouth to the side of his neck, kissing him as he slowly slid me in and out of his sexy body. Before I realized what he was doing he had turned his head to mine to place his long tongue into my mouth. Delighted, I welcomed him by kissing him the best I could. My left hand reached down to fondle his balls while I resumed stroking him with my right. His right hand was still with my head while his left gripped my ass as I began to fuck him in earnest. He moaned and growled in pleasure as my length slid in and out of him in faster, stronger succession. I groaned into him while I squeezed him to me while fucking his ass harder and harder. It grew more and more intense until he breathed to me, “I want your cum inside me.” His voice was soft and gentle and beautiful and was too much, I felt myself explode inside of him harder than I ever had before as he pushed back to get me as deep as possible. My eyes were clenched shut and I was panting as I relished the feeling, when I opened my eyes again I could see him grinning at me, he had a wonderful, joyous smile. As much as I would have loved to stay like that, I couldn’t help but notice he hadn’t come and was still quite hard. Well, there was no way I could let it stay that way! I slowly pulled out of him and walked around in front of him, again he just watched me with those beautiful eyes. I knelt down and took as much of him as I could into my mouth. I could never comfortably suppress my gag reflex so I didn’t completely deep throat him, but I was always told I was skilled enough to easily get away with it. His warm, smooth shaft tasted wonderful and I lost myself as I worked his cock. He was extremely turned on from our experience and it didn’t take long before he came into my mouth. The hot gushing made me suck even harder, his was the only cum I could ever seriously declare as delicious, and I greedily worked and sucked out as much as I could get. After he was clearly finished I stood up and we kissed softly on the lips. Smiling to each other, we walked back to our lockers, both of us content not to say a word; conveniently his locker was right across the bench from mine. I had forgotten and ceased to care about taking my shower. I was in a glorious daze as we got dressed, I just sat on the bench and watched him, completely speechless from the fact of what happened. How could I be so lucky to have such an experience with someone as beautiful and perfect as him?! He chuckled down at me, reached into his pocket and grabbed a pen. After he had written his phone number on my hand he kissed me gently on the lips, and, grinning broadly, walked out of the locker room. I sat for another 20 minutes staring at the numbers on my hand, relishing over the memories, when the employee walked in and asked if everything was ok. She was used to me being there super late but normally didn’t have to wait on me to close. I told her everything was wonderful and walked out to my car and drove home, a huge smile on my face the whole way. To be continued? |
| Richmondtopman |
Posted: May 27 2009, 04:09 AM
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Ummmmmm..... WHEW!!!
:wub: Wow, 1&2!! That was your First story for the fun of it?!? Amazing... Too bad I've already given you a 10 for the day.... you definitely deserve another... a few more, actually! I was totally drawn into the story ....mmmm... wonderfully descriptive!!! THANKS a bunch for sharing!!!! :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: |
| southflorida |
Posted: May 27 2009, 01:46 PM
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Beaker's Dad Group: Moderator Group Posts: 31686 Member No.: 81810 Joined: 29-January 05
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moved to fantasy stories ;)
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| andoneandtwo |
Posted: May 27 2009, 05:45 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Member No.: 869895 Joined: 3-May 09
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aww thx so much for the comment richmond :wub:
and ty for puttin me in my place florida :P :D |
| durkha247 |
Posted: May 27 2009, 09:42 PM
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Ewww, gay animal sex, ha ha only kidding, good story any more in the pipe line?
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| andoneandtwo |
Posted: May 27 2009, 10:03 PM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Member No.: 869895 Joined: 3-May 09
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thx durkha :D i might keep goin if i get sum more replies :whistling:
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| SnowpawtheBlueFox |
Posted: May 27 2009, 11:31 PM
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Very nice murry story*drools at thought* i enjoyed it very much!!^^
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| andoneandtwo |
Posted: May 28 2009, 03:06 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Member No.: 869895 Joined: 3-May 09
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thanks much snowpaw :wub: , hopefully i get even more replies on part 2!!
Surprise in the Showers - part 2 The next few days were slightly hazy; after I had gotten home I wrote the number on the notepad next to my computer, and then took a hot shower, careful not to remove the phone number on my hand. All day through work, I day-dreamed of my experience the previous night, at times making it quite uncomfortable to be in front of other people. The day after that was very similar, although this time, when I got home, it suddenly occurred to me that I should call him! I obliged to the few day rule though, and since I had all day off tomorrow I waited until morning. The phone rang twice before I heard his wonderful voice, “Hello?” I found I couldn’t talk! But, I didn’t dare hang up, and I realized he somehow knew it was me when he spoke again, “Hmm, could this be who I think it is?” he asked teasingly. That broke the spell and I laughed nervously as I asked him how he knew it was me. “Lucky guess I suppose, hey since you called, I must have made a good impression the other night! Umm, I really have nothing planned today; perhaps we could have dinner and get to know each other?” “Well of course! I haven’t been able to stop thinking about you! I don’t have to work today either, when and where were you thinking of?” I knew I was talking fast but I couldn’t contain myself. “How about we meet at the gym around the same time we did before, and then we can carpool or u can follow me from there.” I don’t think I have ever suffered through a slower day! Torturously slow the sun floated across the sky until I couldn’t wait any longer, I called up a friend to play tennis with and went to the gym a few hours early. Luckily my bud wasn’t so free on time, he left before it got too late and I ran on a treadmill for a bit. I noticed mostly everyone was gone so I ran up to the locker rooms. No one was there, disappointed and slightly worried, I took off my clothes and hopped in the shower. I was purposely taking longer than usual, just loving the feel of the hot water on my face and trying not to dwell on thoughts of abandonment, when I suddenly felt 2 paws around my eyes, “Guess who.” At first super excited, I was now astonished, this wasn’t the same voice! I felt longer fur come up against the back of my body, perhaps I should have fought and tried to learn who this was, but it happened so fast and he didn’t feel threatening at all. He kept his left paw over my eyes and wrapped his right around my middle and pulled me tight to him, I felt his sheath with my butt cheeks and realized I didn’t even want to fight this one off, especially since I was so turned on from thinking of my other anonymous lover! I felt him flex behind me and his hot slippery rod found my hole, “do you want me to f—k you?” “Oh yes” I breathed. He chuckled and gave a swift thrust, pushing himself all the way into me, I gasped in surprise at the wondrous feeling. His left paw left my eyes and grabbed my chest while he nibbled at my ear, licking it softly; hot water flowing over the both us the whole time. I kept my eyes closed anyway and reached my arms behind me, one grabbing his bushy tail, the other grabbing his leg near his tail hole. He was growing inside me with every thrust, and starting to grunt as well, when suddenly I heard a familiar soft laugh. My eyes snapped open in surprise, standing before me with a big smile on his face was the sexy animal I made love with in this very room only a few days ago! He started walking toward me saying, “Sorry if I am intruding, I assumed you wouldn’t mind if I brought him along.” I was still struck dumb, the beast behind me had stopped thrusting when I stopped replying and was simply waiting while inside me, chuckling the whole time, and my brain would not move. Dropping to his knees in front of me, my former lover instantly had my full erection in his muzzle, his tongue felt glorious. That snapped me out of it and pulling the canine behind me into my ass further with 1 hand, I reached down with the other and softly touched the soft white and black face around my cock. I felt the very large knot slapping against my hole, while at the same time the head of my cock slide in and out of a warm and very skilled throat, and I felt wonderful! The beast behind me began to growl a bit and give stronger thrusts, Mr. Beautiful in front of me cuddled in closer, moaning onto my meat, I was simply in ecstasy. Everything intensified! I felt I couldn’t hold on any longer, and right as I was just about to cum the wolf slammed up to his knot inside me and I felt his hot cum gushing inside me. If I had any chance on holding back before, I totally lost it then and came right into my other lover’s mouth; he pushed my cock deep in his throat and swallowed it all. I could feel panting behind me while I starred into the deep brown eyes below me. He stood up, running a nail along my stomach to my chest; he kissed me deep on the lips and whispered in my ear, “I would like you to meet Hutch. And I am Kayl.” To be continued? |
| Richmondtopman |
Posted: May 28 2009, 03:57 AM
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Ummmmmm... hehehe... WOW!!!
I'm kind of at a loss for words.... *pant, pant, pant* Everything that you write seems so right (no pun intended).... the wording... actions... phrasing... nuances... I don't know what you do for your 'day-job', but if writing isn't a huge part if it... well.. hehehe... don't know what I'd do! LoL 1&2 .... Another Excellent Addition to the Forum!!! :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock: I LOVE your writing... thoroughly enjoy it.... Mmmmmm.... Thanks for sharing your talent with us... WONDERFUL!!!! |
| SnowpawtheBlueFox |
Posted: May 28 2009, 04:08 AM
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*murrs and drools* yay for the next part. it was very hot and erotic. Thanks for posting and keep it coming
~snowpaw^^ |
| andoneandtwo |
Posted: May 28 2009, 04:20 AM
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Hardcore ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Member No.: 869895 Joined: 3-May 09
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awww richmond and snowpaw and sweetboypup and airman, u all spoil me! :inlove: with your support i think im going to have to start part 3 soon :w00t:
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| NiceHole |
Posted: May 28 2009, 09:16 AM
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*nods frantically* Uh huh, uh huh. You will...right? PLEASE? Oh my god that was so awesome. I dunno what to say, i think Mr. Rich said everything already. You mustn't stop! And you just introduced their names, too! I could actually see the dark grey/white guy (Sorry, made my own version of him in my head ^_^. Did you notice that you haven't told us the others' species yet? Or is that intentional so we can use our imaginations? In the words of Louis the XIV: Please, continue. NH. This post has been edited by NiceHole on May 28 2009, 09:18 AM |
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| Volly_1 |
Posted: May 28 2009, 09:56 AM
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Wow that was awesome dude
Im already reading yiffstories on another forum and comin back to see this wonderful story *hands up* and *clap* *clap* Hope to see part 3 soon :wub: Volly |
| beastlover91 |
Posted: May 28 2009, 10:32 PM
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Great story! Cant wait for part 3 :heart:
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| sweetboypup |
Posted: May 28 2009, 11:52 PM
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great story so far!! keep it up, you know how good it is by me cause i'd tell ya truthfully and honestly if anything needs to be changed, hope more comes out soon ;)
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