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| squad917 |
Posted: Jul 27 2007, 10:22 PM
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Ok, this is my first story, so please bare with me if I have flaws and if I do, PLEASE message me or say em on here.
ALSO, this is TOTALLY fictional, I do know of a girl that's named alexis that attends IU, but this is not about her, I do not know if she is into zoo, hell i wish she was, she's gorgeous, but this is FICTIONAL. I just love the name Alexis and chose it as the name. Part I. Alexis was always a popular girl in high school. She has lighter brown hair with blonde highlights and being 5'7 and 130 lbs, skinny but still having that great tone for basketball. That 5'7 is comming from her legs that seem like they're endless, amazingly toned and just that 30-40 minute jogger's tan, just the perfect darkness. Having just about perfect 34 C breasts that just made all the guys in her classes ponder. She was the cheerleading captain during football season then ended up being an All-State point guard for her school's lady basketball team. And it's that being point guard that got her into college on a full ride scholarship to Indiana University where she is today. The school pushed hard for her to be in an athletics dorm but she wanted an apartment where she could have her alone time, play her music, heck, just what ever she wanted. It didn't really hurt that all the money her parents saved up, they gave to her. She wasn't one of those ditzes that used the money right up for a car or shopping spree, she put it in the bank, only pulling out money for the apartment and for food. So she got the apartment and everything was fine for the first few weeks. Practices were harsh, and though she had 3.7 GPA in high school, the classes were decently rough to her. She started to wear down quickly though. She kept up her grades with somewhat ease and was going to be on the starting five in a couple weeks verse Michigan, but she just started to miss things from home. She missed her parents and her mom's cooking. She could cook herself, she was actually a great cook, but something about her moms cooking was just perfect. She was missing hanging out with friends and.. well.. guys in general. She was focusing on school and basketball, like any freshman should do, but it was getting to her. She had sex only twice, but those two times were the week before school started when she did, she loved it entirely. Now she was missing it too. She played with herself every night, it sort of helped her go to sleep, but now it just kept her up and made her miss the crushing orgasms that she had with he boyfriend, now ex boyfriend. About a week into the "depression" stage, she called home and was talking to her mom about the past few weeks at school and lead into how she was just feeling homesick and lonely. "Alex, you know you can always come back and just drive to and from school, it's not THAT far." said her mom. "I know, it's just I want to try things on my own for once. I've been having a good time, it's just after about an hour getting to the apartment and doing my work, I just realize how empty it is" replied Alexis. Mom responded with a thinking 'hmm' then she thought of it; "Well you know we have Colt here, he seems to be missing you just as much as you're missing us. Why don't you move him into your aparment, it is a animal friendly complex isn't it?" "Really? Hmm, I never thought about that, but there is plenty of room, though the baby is huge" said Alex. Ok, maybe huge isn't the correct word. Now Colt is a full bred german shepard. He looks the part, but he is just a tad smaller than a great dane, making him above average size for a german shepard. The family never got him fixed because, one, they didn't have the money when they really wanted to do it, and two, they thought at some time they might want a pup or two. Over the weeked, Alex drove home and got him, and got a chuckle when she got back to the apartment. It was the first time he was out of his surroundings and he went crazy in the apartment. She finally got him to settle and got to work on her homework. Later that night she finally finished, curled up on the couch and poped in a movie. Colt come out of nowhere and jumped up onto the couch and layed down, somewhat startling Alexis just a bit from forgeting that he was used to laying on the furniture. She laughed her little cute laugh and gave him a couple pieces of popcorn then leaned down and kissed his nose. "Welp boy, I guess it's going to be just you and me for a while now" said Alex. Colt did his doggy smile and layed his big head on her lap. And the bonding began. --------------------------------------End Part I-------------------------------------------- If people wish for me to continue, just say so. This post has been edited by squad917 on Jul 27 2007, 10:25 PM |
| squad917 |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 12:21 AM
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Close to 50 views and no comments on how bad/good it was or no one that wants it to continue or doesn't want it to????? odd.. oh well
could someone please move this to the story section? pleeaase |
| Wolfhounder |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 02:29 AM
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Great start, keep it going!
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| BeastIsSexy |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 02:57 AM
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Keep it going, it looks like it could turn out to be a great story, and you have already set the plot up for some action.
Looks good without any flaws that i could see, spelling, grammer all checks out. You could be a good writer, so express yourself -Danielle Beast Is Sexy |
| squad917 |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 03:52 AM
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After two requests I'm continuing so here you go
Part II. Things got better for Alexis after that day. She seemed to have more energy and just seemed to be a bit more perky while out with friends and up for anything in practice. She stilll missed her mom's cooking but was getting used to cooking herself and she was finding that she could end up making things better than her mother. But, there was still one problem; sex. She found her way to a sex store and got herself toys. Anything she thought would be fun or interesting, she got. Rabbits, vibrators, dildos, finger massagers, anything, she bought atleast two of each but none were the same. It turned out she was a addict, not getting enough, and she often found herself thinking of being home and caught moist in classes. EVERY night she got home, got her lessons done, which she found to be becomming easier, then immediatly shut her blinds. She then went to her closet and moved over a door she made herself to hide her toys and make sure no one found them. She chuckled at herself because she had so much she had to determine what just to use. After a minute or two she finally decided on her favorite rabbit, laid it on the bed and walked to the side to her desk. As she slowly took her clothes off she caught herself in the mirror and watched herself as she teased her way down. First at the hips, then down as she removed her shorts and panties, then back up, brushing over her clit just once, sending a jolt up her spine. She then continued her hands up removing her top slowly then tracing her fingertips slowly along her bra line, loving her soft soft touch. While she enjoyed it, it just wasn't the same as another persons, it just wasn't the correct mindset. She watched herself as she ran her hands slowly and spread her now unfolding lips to admire the flower, and the little bud of her clit. Finally she walked and layed on her bed, letting her hands continue to roam. As she rubbed slowly over her clit she reaches down and grabs the rabbit she laid on the bed then teases the end of it slowly with her tongue to get it wet, thoguh she's already wet enough. She slowly teases the head down her front and turns on the vibrations as it crosses over her nipple then moves it down to her clit then slowly dips it into her then all the way. "MMM, damn I missed this" she laughed, knowing she just did it about four hours ago, right before her last class. "OoOo.. shi... " she moans as she starts to reach her first orgasm. "Ooooh DAAAMN" she screamed as she arches her back then lowers after the climax starts to fall. She then turns on the entire function of the rabbit, making it vibrate, the shaft turn, and the inner beads turn. She inhales slowly as she peaks again then she hears a noise. She shoots up and shudders while looking around, the rabbit still inside her spinning. Then she tought of it; Colt. She smiled and said "Settle down, Colt. Don't distract mommy" then layed back down and shut her eyes. As she continues, Colt hears her murmurs and decides to investigate. He peaked his head around the corner and sees Alexis squirming around and thrusting her hips to the rabbit as she pushes it in. He sat down and tilted his head in curiousity, beginning to sniff the air. Finally he picked up her scent, that sweet scent that smells like peaches. It was a thing that turned her ex on every time there was petting, or he ate her. But there was just that bit of it where Colt could tell it was her sex. His head moved to the other side as his penis slowly began to protrude through his sheath. He shook off his distraction and walk too the corner and began to lick his member, cleaning it off. After a few seconds, finally something hit Alexis, she noticed a noise over the vibration. She glanced down and seen Colt facing the other way, licking away on something. Colt heard her sit up then she got up, giving Alexis a full view of his now erect purple cock, being nice inches long when fully unsheated, she didn't know about the huge knot that's just bigger than a baseball still hiding under the sheat, the and just barely under two and a half inches thick. She was amazed by it, it was huge, and she still wasn't getting a full view. She found herself staring, admiring it, she arched her back as she started to ponder. Then she realized what she was thinking at and she stood up and ran to the bathroom and leaned over the sink and splashed cold water on herself. "How could you start thinking that? He's a freaking dog. A DOG for christ's sake. He probably wouldn't even know what to do to you. Wait, stop. You CAN'T think of that. It's jus... HES A DAMN DOG!!" she said, yelling at herself. She turned on the shower, still shaking her head. She felt for the water to get warm then jumped in. After a bit of just soaking she found herself running her fingertips over her slit, picturing Colt. She stopped herself quickly and turned the water down to make it cold. "You got to stop. He's a dog, you can't do anything. He couldn't do anything either. He couldn't pleasure you like a man. It's just not possible.... Is it?" She stood there, in the cold of the shower, now beginning to ponder. "Is it??" ------------------------------------End part II------------------------------------------ Again, if you want me to continue, just gotta ask. This post has been edited by squad917 on Jul 28 2007, 04:12 AM |
| dwyer9999 |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 05:53 AM
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Awesome work!!!
please continue :D :D :D :D :D |
| gracee |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 05:58 AM
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more pleasee... really quite good
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| skylance |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 05:59 AM
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Wow, this is really starting to get exciting, please, please, please continue.
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| Rhammi |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 06:48 AM
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hmmm... i like where this is going. please continue. its a pretty good story so far. would like to hear more.
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| squad917 |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 07:16 AM
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I guess it's going good lol. In response to asking, here's the third.
Part III After about a half hour of cooling down, Alexis finally decided to get out. She dried off then wrapped a towel around herself and walked out to her work desk and sat in her comfortable chair, just relaxing. She did a spin to turn the chair to the TV and started to watch to see if her cousin won her game. As she waited for the sports to come on she slowly started to doze of. She started dreaming about, what else, playing with her toys. Well it didn't last long before she was dripping wet and squirming around in her chair as she slept. Then the squirming made the chair squeek as she moved, soon attracting the attention of Colt, who was relaxing by the heater. He slowly walked his way into the living room, almost sneaking along on his way to find out what the squeek was. Then he found it, Alex was still squirming her way around the chair. Finally she stopped and he edged his way in, following that familiar smell he was attracted to earlier. He finally reached the chair, and moved and rested his head between Alex's legs. He was intending just to rest it to the towel that was wrapped around her, but as he lowered his head it pulled it to the side, revealing her slightly unfolded pussy lips. There it was, that scent that he loved, right infront of him. He inched forward and inhaled deeply. It was right there. Finally, his tongue rolled from his mouth and pressed to her slit then he pulled back, loving the taste. That was it, he loved the smell and it even tasted like peaches. He began to lap slowly, Alex's juices began to drain and just keep flowing the more he licked. Then he made the mistake, he licked harder and faster, waking Alex up. She woke up finding Colt's head between her legs and this amazing feeling that she has never felt before completly shaking her body. Then she realized, it was Colt. "OH MY GOD, Colt!! Bad boy!! Shoo" she said as she pushed him away then took off to her bedroom. Colt just stood there, licking his chops and enjoying the last bit of those sweet sweet juices he was lapping up just seconds ago. "God I can't believe he did that" said Alex, pacing around her room. "But oh my god did that feel amazing, that roughness dragging over everything. That flicking on my clit, just, oh my. NO, he's a dog!! A bloody dog!! You can't enjoy that!!" she yelled at herself. Then she realized it. The more she though of it, the more those juices flowed from her. Then she sat down and put one finger to her clit and slammed more onto the chair. "Damn he did well" she said as she glanced back at the door. She then hopped up and the towl dropped and she walked to the door and looked out at Colt still siting in the same spot. She thought, "No, he's a dog. But he is really cute and I've never had anything like that before. Seems he loves me more than anyone." She looked down at her now completly unfolded pussy. Looking like a sort of rare flower. Amazingly beautiful and glistening from her juices and Colt's saliva. Then she said "I can't believe you're about to do this" then she whistled and went to her bed" Colt trotted his way in and scurried around the bed to both side then to Alex and sat infront of her. She couldn't help but smile at his cute expression while looking up with her then laid down with her legs dangling over the bed. She rubbed slowly over her pussy lips and jumped around from them still being tender and wanting more. She patted them and said "Come'ere boy, come on Colt." He slowly moved in, still confused as to why she pushed him away minutes before. He stuck his tongue out as he moved in then finally touched it to Alex's swollen clit. "Mmm baby, so so warm" moans Alex as she twitches around lightly. Colt, now convinced he can do it without getting in trouble, move in and went right at it, licking violently. Alex begins to squirm a bit and lets off cute high pitched squeels every time Colt's tongue dips into her. "Oh baby, keep going baby, that tongue is perfect Colt." moans Alex as she gets her first two orgasms. Twitching around more she pulls her legs up and wraps her arms around them, exposing her entrance to her pussy more and now her butt. Colt then moves down a bit and slaps his tongue around her ass, pushing and adding more pressure. Then Alex relaxes and pushes down some, allowing Colt's tongue to push just a bit into her tight ass. She squeels even more to this new feeling, running her hands up and brushing her fingertips slowly over her nipples then squeezes them. "Oh my god baby, I can't believe I waited so loNG AND didn't let you DO THis when you wanted" said Alex, her tone changing as Colt brings her to what seems is her 7th orgasm then she shudders roughly and screams loudly as a massive orgasm crushes every bit of her being, making her squirt her juices everywhere like a fountain for close to twelve striaght seconds, non stop. Alex then collapses and blacks out from the biggest orgasm ever to rock her body, and probably the body of any female. Alexis awoke an hour later with Colt laying down asleep on her feet. She looked around then stretched, feeling he now dry cum stretch over her skin with that super sticky feeling. She looked at her clock noting that it was indeed an hour then looks down to find herself still swollen, but not quite draining as much cum as she was, just now dripping. "Oh my god, forget the toys, Colt's getting a drink every night.. hell.. any time" she said, smiling then reached down, petting over Colt's side. Colt perked up and looked up at Alex, seemingly greatful for her being ok. "Hup hup," she said as she patted on the bed beside her. Colt roared up and landed on the bed, laying back down. She smile and turned to face him and drapes a leg over his lower back. "You know what, Colt? You're going to get to do that any time you want from now on" she said smiling. Colt seemed to smile back then pushed forward and lick over her smile, pushing his tongue to hers. Then her smile got bigger. "I know what you're thinking, and I'm thinkin it too. It's your turn, baby." ------------------------------------End Part III--------------------------------------------- Want me to continue.. just gotta ask This post has been edited by squad917 on Jul 28 2007, 07:38 AM |
| squad917 |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 05:55 PM
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i take it i'm done?
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| therock0007 |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 08:35 PM
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wow that was amazing u gotta carry on gd work kep it up
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| ganymede69 |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 08:47 PM
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This was fantastic... please keep going ! I want to know what comes next... :angel:
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| ditchrider |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 09:13 PM
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Great story, looking forward to more!!!
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| chubcat |
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 09:26 PM
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very nice story. Thanks for the great contribution
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