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| Posted by: lunalupo Sep 20 2007, 09:55 AM |
| Melissa, my wife and I have been married 15 years and we have an incredible sex life and sex drive. We have tried everything, or so I thought, until my sister-in-law came to stay with us for a weekend. Karen is 19 and very cute, but very tomboyish, the type that wears jeans and loose fitting shirts all the time and likes to play rough. She arrived on the Friday afternoon and immediately became great friends with our dog Boris. He is a shorthaired Setter and very friendly. He was all over Karen, slobbering his big tongue all over her face. We hardly heard a peep out of the both of them for the rest of the day. They spent it together running around our backyard, wrestling, and chasing each other. Our normal routine is dinner about 6 p.m., then shower before settling down for an evening in front of the idiot box. Quite often it is a porno. We have a fairly extensive collection showing all types of sex. With a visitor though we had to settle for the normal boring TV viewing and we told Karen she could choose whatever she wanted. She was happy with that, and went and had her bath ready to settle for the evening. It was when she came out again that the evening turned from boring to exciting. She came out wearing just a white nightshirt with a big teddy bear on the front. But it showed all her curves, of which there did not seem to be any during the day. The shirt was just see-through enough that you could tell she wasn't wearing a bra or panties. Her tits were the size of small grapefruits and her nipples were sticking out, not far or big, but obvious. Mel and I were sitting on the couch when she came out. I didn't realize it but I must have been staring pretty intensely, mouth open or something, because in the next moment I copped her elbow straight in the ribs. "Are you okay honey?" she asked sweetly and with a little grin. I smiled back at her, "Never better dear." I replied. "You're hopeless, you know?" "Yes, but can you blame me?" I asked weakly. Melissa just shook her head and looked back at Karen, who hadn't even noticed us. Her attention was elsewhere because Boris had just come into the room. Karen sat on the floor in front of the TV a few feet away from us and with her back to us. Boris took this as a signal for more play time and started trying to lick her face. Karen was trying to fend him off, but without any luck. She gave in and started to wrestle with him, which he loved. Then it happened. Boris managed to knock her over and twist her around, giving me a full view straight up her nightshirt. Because she was so distracted, it was a good long look, showing everything. A beautiful little slit with a little tuft of blonde pubic patch. A nice tight little butt with a light brown bum hole. She looked so good; my cock went to full erection within seconds. My pants were like a circus tent. The show continued for ages, Karen wasn't concerned in the least with covering up or protecting her virtue. As quick as a cat, Melissa gripped my cock and put her lips near my ear. "Don't you even think about it, you dirty old man! She's my sister." "Nothing like keeping it in the family" I replied. I looked at Mel's face and her cheeks were red and she had a glint in her eye. "Admit it, you're enjoying the view as much as I am." I knew I'd hit the nail on the head because she went back to watching Karen and Boris frolic, then slipped her hand in to my pants and started wanking on my cock. It was a beautiful show. Better than the TV. It started to get even better as the wrestling became more boisterous and we were given views of different angles. Not all long views, but lots of glimpses. On her hands and knees, in doggy style; legs splayed so that her pussy lips opened a bit. Even got a look down the front of her shirt at her titties, topped off with little pink nipples and cone-shaped aerolas. By this time I had my arm around Melissa, caressing her breast, and my other hand dancing up and down her thigh, getting closer and closer to her pussy. Karen somehow rolled Boris over onto his back for a moment, and that's when I noticed that his cock was starting to extend out of its sheath. I was about to point this out to Mel, but before I could she got up out of the couch to leave the room. "Karen would you like a hot chocolate? I'm going to make a coffee. Dave come and help?" I was a bit surprised, but I followed her out to the kitchen thinking that maybe we were going to continue the petting in private. "My God, that was so hot, Dave!" "We didn't have to move." "Of course we did you idiot. We were getting far too carried away. I'm not screwing in front of my sister!" All of a sudden we heard Karen shout, "Boris, NO. Get off you stupid bugger. Boris NO!" Melissa and I quickly walked back into the family room to find Boris trying to mount Karen. She was on her knees, with Boris's weight forcing her down onto her elbows. The angle we were at, Karen couldn't see us but we had a perfect view of everything. Boris's big 8" cock was fully extended, with the tip just entering Karen's pussy. Karen was moving her ass around trying to avoid him, but she was exciting him more than deterring him. Melissa took a step toward them ready to intervene and rescue Karen, but I caught her arm and whispered to her. "No wait. Watch a minute." "Are you crazy. He'll kill her!" But it was too late anyway. Boris lunged again and sunk his cock full length into Karen's cunt. She screamed. "Boris, what're you doing? Oh you're hurting. Melissa…. Boris started fucking Karen at a steady pace. Melissa was frozen in place, biting her bottom lip, staring at the action in front of us and her nipples were sticking out like bullets. Karen's pussy started to squelch, so either Boris's pre-cum was flowing, or Karen was a little more comfortable. More like the latter because her face was more relaxed and the sounds from her had a little more excitement in them. "Boris, you've made me all wet and hot. OH! OHH! OHHH!" I got an idea, and quietly slipped away to get my two cameras, one a Polaroid. For the next couple of minutes I shot off a dozen shots. When I came back, Melissa was even more turned on. She was rubbing a breast with one hand and using the other to finger her clitoris. "Dave, I need your cock. Come on fuck me." Mel grabbed my hand to drag me into the bedroom, but I stopped her. "Sure, but only if you get on your hands and knees for some doggy style," I said. "Ok, let's go. Hurry." "No, now! Get on them now!" She looked at me stunned, then back at Boris and Karen. The timing couldn't have been better, Karen was starting to fuck back onto Boris' cock. All of a sudden Karen's voice got some urgency into it. "Oh, Boris what are you doing? What's happening? OHHH!" She then let out a long scream in orgasmic pleasure. Her first ever maybe? Melissa still had a hold of my hand squeezing it even harder, when she pulled me to the floor. "OK, but hurry get that cock into, I need it so bad." I've never seen her move so quick, but then I've never moved so quick either. I had my 8" up in her pussy before you could blink, and it only took a couple of strokes before Melissa started cumming. It felt like she was pissing on my balls, she was cumming so hard. I pumped her through another orgasm, when the main event stepped up a gear. Karen was going through another orgasm herself, I looked down to have a peek at her cunt, it looked soaked and shiny. Boris's cock was still pistoning in and out like a jackhammer, but I noticed that near the base of his cock, it had a big lump the size of a golf ball. Boris was trying with extra effort to push it into Karen and with another scream from Karen, he succeeded. Her pussy looked stretched to the limit. She had her mouth open and panting loudly, her eyes were shut tight. The sight was absolutely beautiful and I felt my nutsack start to tighten when the next chain of events began. Karen screamed out, "Boris are you pissing in me?" and I knew that she was getting filled with doggy cum. That sent me over the top as I pumped what seemed like a gallon into Mel. Mel then started to groan and shake through the biggest orgasm I have ever seen her have. It was so intense that she fainted. As I was catching my breath I looked over to the star attraction. They were both locked together, tail to tail. Boris was facing us, Karen facing away. Boris was panting heavily but looked like he had a huge grin on his face, the lucky bugger. I could hear Karen whimpering and moaning quietly to herself, head down between her arms. I looked back to Melissa. She was still out like a light. Her legs were still spread and pussy open slightly. I could see my cum inside and around her opening. She looked gorgeous and angelic. I came to my decision. I was taking a huge risk but... I retrieved the Polaroid's and approached Karen, still on her hands and knees and locked to Boris. "Well you really enjoyed yourself there, didn't you?" "Dave!" She looked up startled. "Get him off me, please" Karen begged. "I don't think I can. There will be a lot of pain for both of you if I just pull him out. You have to just wait until it slips out by itself. The more you relax the quicker that will happen, I would imagine." "I am so ashamed, please, don't look Dave." "That's too bad, Karen, because I have some really bad news for you." "What are you talking about?" "You see Karen, from now on my little pet, you are going to do exactly as I say, when I say, no matter what it is. Understand?" She looked at me like I was crazy. But she knew exactly what I was talking about and started to resist. "No way! You keep away from me. I'll go to the cops.” "And exactly what will you tell them? That you fucked my dog? No I don't think so. I think you are going to be very happy with being my 'instructions'. And I am pretty sure you won't be saying anything to anyone, even your sister Melissa. You wouldn't want to see these posted on the Internet, now would you? Or how about if I left them lying around your school somewhere?" The look on her face when she saw the photos was priceless, and I knew I'd beaten her when her shoulders slumped and head went down. She had one last effort at resistance though. "You asshole, bastard!" I cut her off before she went too far. "Tut, tut. That's enough of that. You can show your respect for me later. It's time now to start your instructions." "What do you want? What do I have to do?" "Exactly what I tell you to do, no questions and no argument!" "Now, crawl over on your hands and knees to auntie. Go slow, so that your lover there doesn't get all excited again." "What for?" asked Karen. "That is your last chance! Next time you disobey I go straight over to the computer. I won't be saying another word to you and you won't know where you will see your picture next. Got it?" "Yes" "Right, start crawling. Right up between Mel's legs, but don't touch her." It took what seemed like ages to get there, but was only a minute or so, and it was not a moment too soon because Melissa was starting to stir and my cum was starting to dribble out. "Ok Karen, put your nose as close to Mel's pussy as you can, but don't touch. Let me hear you take a big sniff. Again. Beautiful isn't it? Now try your tongue, puppy dog." She whipped her head around at me and looked to argue, but I held my finger up and gave a stern look. That silenced her pretty quickly. I pointed down to the sloppy cunt in front of her face, then with a look of final resignation, bent down and licked Mel's labia. Just as she started, Boris slipped out of Karen and trotted off to his corner in the laundry. The licks were tentative, but after the first couple, she took to it with gusto, pushing her tongue into the hole as far as she could, sucking up all the juices. It wasn't until I noticed the small humping movements from Melissa that Karen was no longer cleaning up cum, but Melissa was juicing up again. I don't think there was any stopping Karen now, her chin and mouth were glistening, and her face was full of lust. It was difficult to get Karen's attention, but when I did, I directed her lick Mel's clit. As she touched the clit, Mel's hands took hold of the back of Karen's head, directing Karen exactly where she wanted to be licked. Her eyes were still shut, breathing fast with her mouth open. It only took another couple of licks and Melissa was off again. "Oh Dave I'm cumming. Yes keep licking Unnhhh!!!" Then she squirted a couple of times straight into Karen's mouth. I let Karen have a few more licks, then I pulled her away. "You've done well. Go have a quick shower, clean yourself up then get yourself to bed. We'll continue your education later. Remember, you're mine now, obey me when I command, or else!" As she turned and walked away, with her head bowed, she didn't see the big smile on my face, I was just so pleased with myself. But then as she turned away from me I didn't see the big grin on her face either... END |
| Posted by: dragoneyes Sep 20 2007, 01:33 PM |
| Wonderful and exciting short story. Please don't let it really be the end. Thank You. |
| Posted by: fudrick2000 Sep 20 2007, 01:57 PM |
| thus far I haven't posted much but I do have to say this I know what I like and I say it! This is/was great and I want more!!!! |
| Posted by: dogman1313 Sep 20 2007, 02:20 PM |
| WOW that was a incrediable story. I was very impressed. Please continue with it. It was a great idea with many options and many different directions it can take. It gave me great satisfaction to read it along with a raging woody. Thanks for the story and the stiffy. |
| Posted by: Cockateer Sep 20 2007, 03:43 PM |
| Bravo! What a super hot story. More please. Thanks a lot. |
| Posted by: Mimi234 Sep 20 2007, 04:20 PM |
| Well written! You tied it nicely, but gave plenty of room for additions. Bravo! I'm looking forward to more.. - Mimi |
| Posted by: jetsons Sep 20 2007, 08:01 PM |
| After reading this on I can only hope that you will continue with it! Another one of your great submissions! Thanks for sharing this with us. Jetsons |
| Posted by: hiredhand Sep 20 2007, 08:12 PM |
| Well written! WOW that was a incrediable story. I just love the blackmail story line. More please. |
| Posted by: bkhicat Sep 21 2007, 12:28 AM |
| Whao whao whao |
| Posted by: PhybrOptk Sep 21 2007, 02:11 AM |
| Luna's my new hero..... but I bet we won't see you in "OPRAH'S" book club every story seems like it's better than the last... |
| Posted by: chlt43male Sep 21 2007, 03:43 AM |
| Have seen this story on The Kristen Archives before |
| Posted by: boneherthedogman Sep 21 2007, 05:19 AM |
| lunalupo, Wow what a short story, this one could be a real book length story. There are more things that could be done with both gals and the dog than imaginable. Great story, a ten for the post and a wow what a story. |
| Posted by: bigbopper27 Sep 21 2007, 06:58 AM |
| Another great story thanks luna! |
| Posted by: Darkmune Sep 21 2007, 10:00 AM |
| Damn Luna. can we please have a second chapter? maybe a third and fourth? please? |
| Posted by: thewllrgroup Sep 21 2007, 12:07 PM |
| Love the story and I triple it for another chapter. |
| Posted by: Raja_wolf Sep 22 2007, 05:23 AM |
| You have a very disturbing thing with rape there kid. |
| Posted by: lunalupo Sep 22 2007, 09:14 PM |
| Thank you for the great replies and votes. Love ya Lunalupo |
| Posted by: All4s Sep 23 2007, 06:05 AM |
| Luna, Terrific story, and if you continue it I can only imagine what wondrously evil ideas you have in mind. Keep up the great work! I have just begun posting my first story on BF myself, and it actually has the same camera blackmail theme involved in it as well. The idea is simply great, isn't it. So far I have posted two of three parts from a storyline I have written so far. I have more in mind though, but it takes time as I am sure you are well aware of. Apart from my "Primal Path" story I also have a couple of other solid ideas in mind, but want to focus on the first one with what free time I do have. |
| Posted by: justme69 Sep 23 2007, 09:54 AM |
| wow loved it thank You for sharing 10 from me xx |
| Posted by: IcicleOnFire Sep 23 2007, 04:59 PM |
| Wonderful and beautiful story. Please continue! |
| Posted by: iluvthisforum Sep 23 2007, 06:15 PM |
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| Posted by: rocksalt2323 Sep 23 2007, 08:37 PM |
| Super hot story..... comes close to matching a fantasy I've had involving my petite sister-in-law and her puppy....... one of these days I'll get around to writing it as a submission......... thanks for arousing some creatiity... |
| Posted by: lunalupo Sep 25 2007, 06:32 AM |
| Thanks for the comments, votes, and support. That is what makes BF such a wonderful place. Lunalupo |
| Posted by: gregjet Sep 25 2007, 08:01 AM |
| great story. My kind of adventure |
| Posted by: noctambulist Sep 25 2007, 10:01 AM |
| I liked this story because of its brevity, but I'm not sure about the "THE END" at the end of it. It seems we're only at the beginning! I'd love to read more about the adventures of Karen & Boris, now that they're well acquainted with one another. I'd also like to be a fly on the wall when the poop hits the Westinghouse after Mel finds out what you had Karen do while she was enjoying her post-coital reveree. As we know she will, sooner or later... |
| Posted by: dogman1313 Sep 25 2007, 12:32 PM |
| I read this story on the Kristen Archives this weekend. I don't know whose story it really is. But if you borrowed it for a repost, thanks for taking the underage references out. |
| Posted by: poe_boy Sep 25 2007, 01:54 PM |
| Wow wonderful story would luv to read more... |
| Posted by: doggowar Sep 25 2007, 08:34 PM |
| Yet another nice tale Luna. How do you come up with so many different ideas? I struggle with just keeping one story going and you seem to have dozens! You rock dude |
| Posted by: lainakity Sep 25 2007, 09:11 PM |
| Oh I do hope you're going to add more honey Please?????? ~laina |
| Posted by: screemn4more Sep 26 2007, 03:06 AM |
| VERY, VERY NICE!!!! |
| Posted by: Cron Sep 26 2007, 05:22 AM |
| damn good story i loved everything about it...the way that mel little sister is a sexy little tomboy that got want was coming to her for teasing boris and the way that mel got turn on by watch everything happening to karen but i wonder was karen planning this from the first??? i cant wait for the next part 10 |
| Posted by: addicted1 Oct 31 2007, 12:07 PM |
| Luna you continually amaze me, hot story but it really needs at least one more chapter. |
| Posted by: truck2 Oct 31 2007, 06:49 PM |
| very hot story!!but there has to be more |
| Posted by: la head Nov 1 2007, 03:44 AM |
| thoroughly enjoyed! excellent story! keep it going, i dont' want it to end just yet |
| Posted by: petlover54 Nov 1 2007, 04:29 AM |
| Good Lord... I hope you DO plan on continuing this story, what possibilities for extending it. Loved the story, and easy 10 from me, thanks so much. Pet |
| Posted by: lunalupo Nov 19 2007, 05:42 AM |
| Thanks for the great comments, votes, and support. You are the ones who make posting rewarding. Lunalupo |
| Posted by: newdater Nov 19 2007, 05:55 AM |
| Really good story |
| Posted by: bigbopper27 Nov 19 2007, 06:00 AM |
| great story thanks for it, cant wait for another! |
| Posted by: Knotty_Sinner Nov 19 2007, 07:49 AM |
| Love the story, hope you continue it. |
| Posted by: Darchangel Nov 19 2007, 11:34 PM |
| very good story, please do add more. |
| Posted by: 2doggonecurious2 Nov 20 2007, 05:24 AM |
| enjoyed |
| Posted by: k9seekersUK Nov 20 2007, 11:33 AM |
| Short, sweet and sexy, just like young Karen in the story! Loved the story and thanks for posting it. |
| Posted by: Big Black Dog Nov 20 2007, 03:41 PM |
| Great story thanks for posting. Sara |
| Posted by: kassiopi69 Nov 20 2007, 05:58 PM |
| Great story, look forward to more |
| Posted by: raj_4u4u Nov 21 2007, 12:24 AM |
| keep teaching her........ |
| Posted by: ltrbukcwby Nov 21 2007, 02:58 AM |
| I would love for this to happen! It would be an answer to a big fantasy. |
| Posted by: Oldsaltblock Nov 21 2007, 04:49 AM |
| Another very good, well written story. I totally enjoyed reading it and it put me at a place where I could see through your eyes. Thanks for another wonderful story. Too bad that it had to end with the first and only installment. A 10 for you. I'll be looking for more of your stories. |
| Posted by: malewithK9 Nov 21 2007, 06:47 PM |
| wow great story keep up the good work cant wait to find out what karen has to do next |
| Posted by: fbute Nov 21 2007, 11:53 PM |
| luna youve done it again top story await your next one as good as they get again |
| Posted by: masterslittlepuppygirl Nov 22 2007, 02:59 AM |
| What a great story! It has everything I live: dogs, women, and BDSM! |
| Posted by: meetin618 Nov 25 2007, 01:48 AM |
| Fantastic story.Hope there is more. |
| Posted by: sanukthai Nov 25 2007, 01:20 PM |
| Great story, is it going to have another part. It seems there is a few different twists and turns to take here |
| Posted by: chatman Nov 25 2007, 02:53 PM |
| very good |
| Posted by: hornytoad201 Nov 26 2007, 04:57 PM |
| GREAT STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE |
| Posted by: longing29 Nov 26 2007, 11:23 PM |
| another hot story!! Thanks for continuing to post these for us! |
| Posted by: rinthewolf Dec 4 2007, 05:33 AM |
| Excelent story. I have inlt 3 words to say to it. POST. MORE. NOW!!!!!!!!! you have to keep this story going. There is now way you can just end it when there is so much room for a sequal. Hell you could keep this going for YEARS if you do it right. and you are doing it all the right ways from where i'm standing. |
| Posted by: B3astking Dec 4 2007, 06:09 AM |
| very excited... very hot.... thanks for sharing with us 10 for u all |
| Posted by: tuskus Dec 9 2007, 01:39 AM |
| A great start it just has to continue 10/10 |
| Posted by: sensualsong Dec 13 2007, 03:48 AM |
| Damned that was hot! Only in my dreams would this ever happen to me! But I can still dream can't I? Wow, so hot! |
| Posted by: B3astking Dec 18 2007, 01:34 PM |
| wonderful... very nice story... thanks for sharing with us... |
| Posted by: dragonslove Dec 25 2007, 03:44 AM |
| bump.. |
| Posted by: lepruchaunman Dec 25 2007, 04:20 AM |
| wow. ever the amazingly insane crowd pleaser Luna. keep it up will definitely be waiting for more. |
| Posted by: Purpleprod Dec 25 2007, 01:25 PM |
| tj |
| Posted by: travlr Dec 25 2007, 01:53 PM |
| One of the best stories I've read in years! Cudos to you! |
| Posted by: codyguy Dec 25 2007, 04:56 PM |
| great story i wish there was more a big 10 knot vote from me |
| Posted by: Ms. Smexy Dec 25 2007, 10:13 PM |
| Another great one brought to us by Luna! ^^ |
| Posted by: outlaw42661 Dec 25 2007, 11:02 PM |
| A very good story, thank you for sharing. Waiting for next chapter, outlaw |
| Posted by: WolfGrey Dec 26 2007, 11:13 PM |
| Please say there is more! |
| Posted by: dragonslove Jan 5 2008, 03:21 AM |
| good story .. hugs hun thanks for sharing |
| Posted by: dash312003 Jan 7 2008, 04:32 PM |
| great story luna im with everyone else please continue |
| Posted by: bigbopper27 Jan 7 2008, 05:32 PM |
| luna you always have enjoyable stories t read thanks for sharing it keep it up! |
| Posted by: B3astking Jan 7 2008, 06:05 PM |
| great story... thanks for sharing |
| Posted by: ZERO-GRAVITY Jan 10 2008, 06:32 AM |
| Great story! I love a story with a happy ending, and as far as I could tell, everyone there was HAPPY!!! |
| Posted by: k9page Jan 10 2008, 07:15 AM |
| this was wonderful as usual luna, thank you. |
| Posted by: rhassenmayer Jan 10 2008, 07:30 AM |
| great story, loved it. thanks for sharing |
| Posted by: dercas Jan 10 2008, 07:42 AM |
| Nice start! Hope to read more!! Keep up the great work! |
| Posted by: dester Jan 10 2008, 02:57 PM |
| Nice work so far, can't wait to see more! ty |
| Posted by: gordonguy24 Jan 11 2008, 02:33 AM |
| great story, thanks for posting and sharring with us all |
| Posted by: butch542000 Jan 11 2008, 03:33 AM |
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| Posted by: lunalupo Jan 27 2008, 03:19 AM |
| Thanks for the great comments and votes. Lunalupo |
| Posted by: calzane Nov 14 2008, 11:41 PM |
| great story - thanks for the post - write on |
| Posted by: namaste1897 Nov 15 2008, 06:49 AM |
| I enjoyed it too. |
| Posted by: majictongue Nov 15 2008, 03:27 PM |
| Great story. Two of my favorite things, k9 love and family love. |
| Posted by: seppa65 Nov 15 2008, 05:43 PM |
| Thank you very well done story! It is exciting me every time I read it. I realy hope you will continue with new story. Best regards Seppä65 |
| Posted by: klik53 Nov 16 2008, 08:28 AM |
| Thanks for an exciting short story!!Loved it 10 |
| Posted by: grayowl Nov 16 2008, 08:43 PM |
| Yes, a great story, I am wondering if you are going to write more of this or are you waiting for it to come out on another web site first??? |
| Posted by: Milkyboi Nov 17 2008, 01:18 AM |
| Damn Luna that was a hot story 10 from me |
| Posted by: creativeluver Nov 17 2008, 07:34 AM |
| very nice - please continue! |
| Posted by: qty1973 Dec 26 2008, 08:43 PM |
| not really into the g/g but this was pretty awesome! |
| Posted by: VeryKinkyMale Dec 26 2008, 09:32 PM |
| excellant story Luna. I eagerly await a continuation |
| Posted by: Kyla800 Dec 27 2008, 12:16 AM |
| Great story. |
| Posted by: lunalupo May 29 2009, 04:23 AM |
| Thank you for the great comments and votes. They are really appreciated. |
| Posted by: Cerebus May 29 2009, 05:34 AM |
| Very hot story! I loved it! |
| Posted by: iwont May 29 2009, 07:08 AM |
| Why not continuing the education??? |
| Posted by: bigbear-53 Jun 2 2009, 05:33 AM |
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| Posted by: tonydog78 Jun 2 2009, 11:47 PM |
| "Smoking HOT Story....thanks!!!! |
| Posted by: georgeandliz Jun 8 2009, 04:24 PM |
| Another great story, thanks you very much |
| Posted by: geeWally Jun 10 2009, 04:28 AM |
| Such a HOT story I had to read it again. Loved it even more the second time. Thanks for sharing that one and hope to read more. Another ten is cumming your way for sure. Thanks. |
| Posted by: simonfox Oct 8 2009, 03:05 PM |
| Wow what a great story and nice to see someone with a writing talent. That was really good and one of those fantasy stories you would love to come true |
| Posted by: zorgman Oct 8 2009, 04:46 PM |
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| Posted by: Curoso99 Oct 9 2009, 05:33 AM |
| Awesome story! Can't wait for part two! |
| Posted by: K9Keeper2 Oct 11 2009, 08:23 AM |
| That was so yummy that I had to act like Mel in the doorway. You have a talent sweet one. Lix |
| Posted by: rorylm Oct 11 2009, 02:16 PM |
| Nice story, thank you for posting it. rory |
| Posted by: devil7801 Oct 11 2009, 02:58 PM | ||
LOVED THE POST. THANK YOU. |
| Posted by: Centaurs Oct 11 2009, 04:05 PM |
| nice story. thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by: bearntuffy Oct 12 2009, 04:16 PM |
| Loved the story, Luna. |
| Posted by: Nikki6 Oct 12 2009, 08:23 PM |
| Very exciting story honey! |
| Posted by: Sexualexplorer Oct 13 2009, 01:49 AM |
| Great story lots of erotic options, please continue, very exciting. |
| Posted by: Sexysarah61 Oct 13 2009, 05:21 AM |
| Great story. I'd love more. |
| Posted by: aureliek9bitch Oct 13 2009, 06:16 AM |
| thanks for this story! I love it! Kiss Aurelie |
| Posted by: Texas Jack 58 Oct 13 2009, 10:01 PM |
| WOW!!! What a hot story!!!! Thanks so much for writing it and sharing with us. |
| Posted by: cashmanjim Oct 18 2009, 12:35 AM |
| Great story so far; but I'm looking forward to the nex installment! Thanks for the post 10/10 |
| Posted by: tonydog78 Oct 18 2009, 04:30 AM |
| A 10+++vote buddy ...Great Job Lunalupo |